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Thief and Partner (Freestyle first capture)
Topic Started: Nov 24 2010, 03:08 PM (448 Views)
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"Allright!"

The little boy came out of the store like an arrow, with some candies and bread for the lunch. His adventure started three days ago, but he don't caught any pokemon yet. Well, at least he don't stop eating to go search for one. He run to a point a little further from the city itself, and sat near a tree to eat.

Alan eat fast, but still actually feeling the taste of the food. He stood there eating for like 30 minutes, when he stopped and yawned, happy. He check the pokeball (The ONLY one that he have, empty by the way) on his belt, then looked at the rest of the lunch. Some candies, one bread, an Eevee...

...Wait a second. What the--

"Hey!" He stood up quickly "That's mine! Don't go eating other people's stuff!"

The Eevee ignored the screaming completely, finishing eating the bread, and only then looking at the boy and...Laughing

"eveeveveee" The little fox rolled in the ground, laughing at the face of the boy

"...Ok, you little thief, you asked for it" Alan just jumped at the pokemon, but the Eevee was much faster, and just went running, avoiding the kid and laughing, or whatever Eevees do when they're amused. The little fox annoyed the boy for a little, and then quickly went running away to the trees near

"Oh, c'mom! this isn't fair!" Sonny, obviously, went after the Eevee "Come out and fight like a pokemon!"

The boy quickly got lost, even if the area wasn't so big. His sense of direction was aways poor. After 15 minutes, he crashed in a tree and fell in the ground, with a defeated sigh

"Dammit..." He muttered, sitting angry "Damn, that little thief got away....Well, at least I maybe can find a interesting pokemon around here and..." A small sound distracted him, coming from the right. A little pokemon cry.

"Uh?" Blinked him, standing up. He followed the sound for some minutes, and peeked over a brush when he felt like he was close enough.

"Ele!" Grumbled something, before a zapping sound was heard and a pained cry came in sequence. Sonny frowned, taking some leaves away and looking to the area clearly.

There was a Elekid sitting there in some rock, munching on something like it was some kind of leader. A Machop was sitting with it's legs crossed by his side, scratching it's chin. And on front of them...

"Aha" mused Sonny, looking to the little eevee. It was shaking, for some reason...

"Ele..." Mused the Elekid, standing up and walking to the fox. The Eevee growled something in response, and the Elekid frowned, kicking it away.

"Vee!" Cried the fox; it's little body offered little resistance, so the Evolution Pokemon was easily sent flying away and crashed in a tree. The Machop giggled.

"Ma! Chop!" Said him. Slowly, the eevee stood up, glaring at him with so much intensity that the fighting type moved, unconfortable for a moment. But when the Elekid hissed warningly at the fox, it bowed it's head and ran away. The other two high-fived, laughing and started to move; Sonny saw them picking up some berries that were laying on a organized pile, and...Some bread? Wait, that was HIS bread, the one he tought that eevee had snatched! Hell, if he wasn't gonna eat it, why bring it to these two?

"This isn't going to keep like this" Grumbled Sonny, backing away slowly. He made a large curve around the clearing and ran to the direction he saw the Eevee running before. He had some answers to get.




She was alone. Finally, alone again. The little brown fox ran for some meters, but it wasn't really easy; that kick got her paralized, and she was sure that that damn Elekid noticed, just didn't cared. She walked slowly, making her way through the woods for some time, before falling down with a relieved sigh in a hole poorly dug up on the earth beneath a tree. It was basically a kind of "nest" that she managed to keep some time ago. It was the first thing she saw when she was born in that place, with no one around, except some other bugs. She lived there for some years, and learnt how things rolled in that place: The strongest weren't afraid of hurt the weak to get what they want. The sad part? She was the first one to say that she wasn't having any of that crap as soon as she started to quizz herself what was happening. Then she got pimpslapped a little for some days, until she gave up.

"Vee" Mused her, closing her eyes.

"Why do you keep staying here?" Came a voice. The fox opened it's eyes immediatelly, turning back to see that boy in red coat looking at her. He wasn't looking amused, but wasn't specially angry.

"Ve?" Asked her, raising an eyebrow. She knew he couldn't understand, but the question was implicit.

"Why don't you go away?" Asked Sonny again, frowning "I don't think you like to get kicked around by the walking charger back there." Said him "Or maybe you like? What, you love him or wh--"

He was met with a Sand Attack straight on his eyes, followed by a Headbutt that sent him on the ground, without air. Sonny heard a menacing growl and a pressure on his chest and saw the eevee growling at him with fangs exposed.

"What?? Then you're just staying here because you're stupid?" Asked him as soon as he recovered his breath.

The Evolution Pokemon looked at him for some time, before jumping back on the ground and walking to her hole again. She picked up something with her mouth and layed it on the ground, glaring at Sonny.The boy sat and blinked, looking at what was in front of him...

"A piece of egg?" Asked him, frowning confused. It was brown with white strips, just like most Eevee eggs were "Ok...So you were born here." Said him slowly. The eevee noded. "These guys were already here?" Asked him. Negative shake. "...You are trying to defend your home?" Asked him, puzzled. The Eevee let out a small sigh and shruged; she had tried before, but now it was of no use "You're doing a pretty bad job, then" Said Sonny, receiving another glare. "Oh, come! What.....hm..." He started to think. damn, if only he could understand... "...You TRIED to defend and it didn't worked...Ok...But..."

The eevee raised and eyebrow. He was getting closer "But this IS your home, after all?" A small agreeing growl and the Eevee let herself lay on the ground, tired. "Ok, I get it. But sometimes you have to move on, you know." Said him "Can't stay here forever, just waiting for a miracle to happen." He was ignored.

"I know you're listening to me." Said him, being ignored again. They stared at each other for some time, then Sonny stood up.

"Ok!" Said him, angry "If you're too coward to do something, ok with me" Said him, turning back. The Eevee raised her head and growled. Coward? Did that little boy know just how many crap she had been through?

"Don't grow at me" Said him, looking back "You just gave up and stuff. I know that there's low chance, but if you can't keep on running..." He shruged "Well, ok. Just lay there and let life pass by" He vanished in a brush them. The Eevee layed there again. What....What a bunch of crap.

"ve" yawned her, moving back to to the hole. She looked back once, before shaking her head and laying there to get some sleep.




"Hey, loosers." Came a voice. The two bros raised their heads to the boy that was standing on their clearing, glaring at them.

"Kid?" Asked the electric type, raising an eyebrow.

"Lemme say this straight for you." Said Sonny "You two are JERKS and don't belong here" Said him "Now, get out from these woods and never come back" He crossed his arms. The two pokemon looked at each other.

Then they laughed their asses off; to the point where the Elekid fell to the ground, waving in Sonny's direction and saying something to Machop. The fighting type nodded, still laughing and grinned to the boy.

Before Sonny could understand anything, the fighting type leaped on the air in his direction, spinning and extending a foot, hitting Sonny on the face with a Rolling Kick and sending the boy straight to the ground.

"Aw, damnit" Mused him. He picked up a rock and threw it at Machop, which just punched the thing away, but then received a kick to the chest for taking his eyes out of Sonny. It took a step back and grabbed the boy's leg, grumbling.

"Uh-oh...This is gonna suck" Mused Sonny.

Then he was Seismic Tossed; he yelled as he flew through the clearing straight to a tree. He extended his arms to don't crash face-first on the trunk and fell to the ground with a "thud".

From a bush, a pair of eyes was looking at him. It kept like this all the way; Sonny trying to get some damage on the two and being tossed around. An hour later, the Machop was starting to get bored and thinking about just snapping that boy's neck...When it turned back and backed off, painting, with his face battered. He ran away, and the fighting type sighed, sitting down. FINALLY.

The eyes on the bush vanished.




Sonny sit down, laying on a tree with a sigh. It was hurting. Eeeeeverything was hurting. Damn, that guy punched him hard...

"I need a better plan" Mused him. He closed his eyes for a moment, thinking. after some minutes, he felt something flurry on his leg and opened them, seeing the Eevee from before.

"What do you want now?" Asked him with a sigh. The little fox hesitated, before jumping on his lap then on his arm, licking a specially nasty brush on the boys face. Sonny blinked.

"Wha? What was that for...? I tought you didn't liked me?" Asked him. The eevee shrughed; maybe that boy was annoying and stupid - it took stupidity to take on a pokemon like that, no weapons, no tricks - But...He was one of the first decent beings she had ever met. She barked in a apological way.

"...Uh...Apology accepted" Said Sonny, smilling and patting her head "Now...Do you have a plan? I really need to get these two out of--" The Eevee's tail slapped him on the neck as she rolled her eyes "wah! What??" Asked him, angry. The fox jumped on theground, biting his jeans and pulling. Sonny blinked, standing up and following the fox. Soon, they were out of the woods.

"I'm not leaving yet" Said him, looking to the Eevee "What about you and the ones who live there?" She shook her head to him; she was the only one who was left there, all the others had took his tip and went away some weeks before. Sonny raised his eyebrows.

"...What about you, then?" He asked. They stared at each other for some moments, then the Eevee finally yelped something, walking around him.

"...Wanna come with me?" Asked Sonny, smilling. The fox nodded, and the boy picked her up "Thanks. It was only fear of leaving alone?" Asked him, receiving a reluctant nod. "Ok, I get it...Well, then we're on our way" said him, smiling. The Eevee jumped on his shoulder "What about a name? You're a girl, right...I know, do you like "Levy"?" Asked him. The eevee tought about it for some time, then barked happy. Levy? Perfect!

"Then we're out of here! We're partners now." Said him, starting to walk with his new companion on his shoulder.
Edited by Sonny, Jun 2 2011, 08:41 AM.
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For future reference, use "quotation marks" for when people speak rather than -hyphans-. It makes it easier to tell when someone's talking.

Also, I know English isn't your first language (to which I applaud you for being able to learn it, as it's such a difficult language) but maybe look over the past tense of words. You used 'get' rather than 'got' quite a bit, as well as 'see' rather than 'saw' etc etc etc.
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