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Topic Started: Jun 10 2012, 01:14 PM (720 Views)
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Jun 10 2012, 01:14 PM
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Nice little place - even if it was a surprise to come across a place such as this in such a secluded area that rarely saw visitors, at least - that's what he had heard from the couple that owned the ranch that Aaron was currently strolling around. But then again - considering the vast amount of pokemon eggs that were being kept here it was a good thing that there were next to no visitors, the last thing anyone wanted was to have any of these unique - and therefore possibly valuable - eggs to be stolen right?
Though he wouldn't even have been here if it hadn't been the little 'accident' that had resulted in both this white haired male and the blind Absol that accompanied him had earlier that day then they would have been on their way hours ago. But it was too late now right? It wasn't as if he could turn back time and redo it all - but no matter. It actually turned out that nearly breaking that old woman's arm was a good thing - now why would nearly breaking someone's arm be a good thing you ask? Well since that Absol of his did nearly cause an accident, in order to redeem himself Aaron had offered his help for however long it needed before he could leave.
So, for the last few hours that was what Aaron had been doing - while the elderly woman had gone inside in order to recover from her shock Aaron had been wandering the ranch grounds with his blind companion following his every move, handing out food to the pokemon that lived there and while doing so using the chance he had to observe the pokemon eggs that were stored safely within some of the more secure buildings that were scattered about the place.
So, leaving the last of the food for within the last container that remained - Aaron discarded the items in which he had been given in order to do his previous job before striding towards one of the nearest buildings that naturally required the least walking to. "Come on Absol - let's go take a look. See what's in there." Aaron spoke softly, lightly resting a hand upon the back of his companion before coming to the entrance of this pale bricked structure before silently opening the wooden barrier before them in order to step inside.
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Kira - The Lone Wanderer  General Info Basic Description Age: 18 Height: 6'2 Weight: 140lbs Hair Colour: Black Eye Color: Light Red Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x10  - Silk Scarf - x1  - Wiki Berries - x4  x1 - TM55 Scald Pokemon Ryuu - The Mischievous Shape Shifter  Specie: Zorua Name: Ryuu Type: Dark Nature: Mischievous / Brave Ability: Illusion Gender: Male Battle Points: 4 Info: A jokester in multiple forms, Despite other's of his specie only changing their form to avoid detection or harm by humans or pokemon, Ryuu would sooner use his shape shifting ability to play pranks on unsuspecting victims or cause as much trouble as he can depending on the situation in hand. Otherwise this small shape shifter focuses his tricks upon his unsuspecting master - the playful one to his master's generally serious nature. Moves: Dark Pulse, Scratch, Pursuit, Fury SwipesItalics - Work In Progress Marill - The Stubborn Mouse  Specie: Marill Name: N/A Type: Water Nature: Brave / Determined Ability: Thick Fat Gender: Male Battle Points: 1 Info: Despite its small size - don't underestimate this Marill, since this small water mouse will stand it's ground against most opponents despite their obvious size or strength advantages over him. Though this is mainly due to his stubbornness and determination, which in turn prevents Marill from backing down from a challenge unless there is something stopping him. Moves: Tackle, Defense Curl, Water Gun, RolloutItalics - Work In Progress Rika - The Gentle Giant  Specie: Tropius Name: Rika Type: Grass / Flying Nature: Docile / Shy Ability: Chlorophyll Gender: Female Battle Points: 2 Info: Despite the large size of this Tropius, Rika is more of a gentle giant who would sooner run away from any source of trouble rather than rush into a fight or start one - that and this Tropius would sooner prefer looking at flowers and fuss over her master. But then, what do you expect from a female pokemon that has a possible crush on her trainer? Gust, Razor Leaf, Stomp, Sweet Scent, Magical LeafItalics - Work In Progress
Suzume - The Blue Sparrow  General Info Basic Description Age: 16 Height: 5'1" Weight: 105 lbs Hair Colour: Blue Eye Colour: Green / Blue Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x 7  - Potion - x 4  - pokemon food - x20 Other Items Sketchbooks x 3, Pencils, multiple colours - x 35, Pens, multiple colours - x 20, Paints & Paintbrush Pokemon Nyx - The Firey Protector  Specie: Growlithe Name: Nyx Nature: Brave / Protective Ability: Intimidate Gender: Female Battle Points: 2 Info: Like other's of her specie, Nyx is very protective of her Mistress - though parhaps a little more so than anyone would expect of such a small pup. Though with good reason in regards to her master's health, since Suzume has been unwell much of her life Nyx has always felt compelled to be more protective than normal. Moves: Bite, Ember, Flame WheelItalics - Work In Progress Mika - The Electric Spark  Specie: Minun Name: Mika Nature: Jolly / Energetic Ability: Minus Gender: Male Battle Points: 0 Info: A jolly and rather energetic pokemon that always tries to cheer up those around it, not one to be sad for too long or allow others to be sad for any length of time. Though small in size this Minun has a big heart as it always tries to be kind towards others despite any bad treatment it may endure. Moves: Thunder Wave, Quick Attack, SparkItalics - Work In Progress Glameow - The Feisty Feline  Specie: Glameow Name: N/A Nature: Fierce / Determined Ability: Limber Gender: Female Battle Points: 0 Info: A fierce cat that won't easily be prevented from battling, if your one that is unfortunate enough to get in the way of this feline then it'll be almost impossible to get away unless your quick about it. Moves: Fake Out, Scratch, HypnosisItalics - Work In Progress
Aaron - The Quiet One  General Info Basic Description Age: 21 Height: 5'11" Weight: 140 lbs Hair Colour: Silver tinted with blue Eye Colour: Emerald Green Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x 7  - Potion - x 4 Pokemon Absol - The Blind Bandit  Specie: Adsol Name: N/A Nature: Careful / Curious Ability: Pressure Gender: Male Battle Points: 1 Info: Blind doesn't mean useless right? Just because this Absol has lost the use of it's sight does not make it inferior to any other pokemon, since it still has full use of it's hearing and sense of smell. It just takes longer for this particular Absol to get things done due to it's condition. Moves: Scratch, Quick Attack, Razor WindItalics - Work In Progress Spoiler: click to toggle [img][/img] Specie: Name: Nature: Ability: Gender: Battle Points: 0 Info:
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Jun 11 2012, 03:59 AM
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Right when he was in Pokemon Center at Oreah Town two days before that Z got his job request. That request was to get as much pokemon egg as he can get in a week. That`s why he left Oreah Town the next day and began his journey to the nearest pokemon ranch he could find. And from the information he gained before he left the town, he knew exactly where to go.
The journey took almost two day long until he finally reached the ranch just an hour before the sun was setting down. Arriving at that place, Z moved to a place where he could get a good view on that place while he hid himself too. After have a watch at the ranch for a while he finally able to map the place and also counted the number of people in the area.
Luckily for him, the ranch was quite far from the civilization area. That`s mean he could do something quite bold and created a ruckus without worrying for any people coming because of it. And that would allow him to use many plan for his thievery to collect some pokemon eggs.
With all of those information in his head, he decided that it was the time to think of which plan he gonna use and also the backup plan too. More over he still need to wait for everyone in the ranch to sleep first and that`s mean he better start moving in the midnight.
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Jun 12 2012, 03:13 AM
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How interesting - it was almost beyond believing that there could be so many pokemon eggs in one particular place, and so many of one kind too it seemed. But then again, Aaron had never spent long enough in a place such as this to even get a good look around. He'd always been gone by the next morning before the residents had woken, so being given the chance to stay around longer and have the time to take a better look around rather than keeping himself away from the general population.
But anyway, that was enough of looking around and observing the pokemon eggs that resided here - specially since it was already starting to become dark outside. So with a final look behind him upon reaching the door that led to the air outside, a flicker of a smile formed upon his features before pulling the door closed behind him and giving it a firm tug to ensure there was little chance of the wooden barrier from opening too easily.
So after having done this Aaron proceeded to place a gentle hand upon his weary companion that had materialized by his side before the strange pair finally dare head off in search of somewhere to rest for the night.
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Kira - The Lone Wanderer  General Info Basic Description Age: 18 Height: 6'2 Weight: 140lbs Hair Colour: Black Eye Color: Light Red Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x10  - Silk Scarf - x1  - Wiki Berries - x4  x1 - TM55 Scald Pokemon Ryuu - The Mischievous Shape Shifter  Specie: Zorua Name: Ryuu Type: Dark Nature: Mischievous / Brave Ability: Illusion Gender: Male Battle Points: 4 Info: A jokester in multiple forms, Despite other's of his specie only changing their form to avoid detection or harm by humans or pokemon, Ryuu would sooner use his shape shifting ability to play pranks on unsuspecting victims or cause as much trouble as he can depending on the situation in hand. Otherwise this small shape shifter focuses his tricks upon his unsuspecting master - the playful one to his master's generally serious nature. Moves: Dark Pulse, Scratch, Pursuit, Fury SwipesItalics - Work In Progress Marill - The Stubborn Mouse  Specie: Marill Name: N/A Type: Water Nature: Brave / Determined Ability: Thick Fat Gender: Male Battle Points: 1 Info: Despite its small size - don't underestimate this Marill, since this small water mouse will stand it's ground against most opponents despite their obvious size or strength advantages over him. Though this is mainly due to his stubbornness and determination, which in turn prevents Marill from backing down from a challenge unless there is something stopping him. Moves: Tackle, Defense Curl, Water Gun, RolloutItalics - Work In Progress Rika - The Gentle Giant  Specie: Tropius Name: Rika Type: Grass / Flying Nature: Docile / Shy Ability: Chlorophyll Gender: Female Battle Points: 2 Info: Despite the large size of this Tropius, Rika is more of a gentle giant who would sooner run away from any source of trouble rather than rush into a fight or start one - that and this Tropius would sooner prefer looking at flowers and fuss over her master. But then, what do you expect from a female pokemon that has a possible crush on her trainer? Gust, Razor Leaf, Stomp, Sweet Scent, Magical LeafItalics - Work In Progress
Suzume - The Blue Sparrow  General Info Basic Description Age: 16 Height: 5'1" Weight: 105 lbs Hair Colour: Blue Eye Colour: Green / Blue Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x 7  - Potion - x 4  - pokemon food - x20 Other Items Sketchbooks x 3, Pencils, multiple colours - x 35, Pens, multiple colours - x 20, Paints & Paintbrush Pokemon Nyx - The Firey Protector  Specie: Growlithe Name: Nyx Nature: Brave / Protective Ability: Intimidate Gender: Female Battle Points: 2 Info: Like other's of her specie, Nyx is very protective of her Mistress - though parhaps a little more so than anyone would expect of such a small pup. Though with good reason in regards to her master's health, since Suzume has been unwell much of her life Nyx has always felt compelled to be more protective than normal. Moves: Bite, Ember, Flame WheelItalics - Work In Progress Mika - The Electric Spark  Specie: Minun Name: Mika Nature: Jolly / Energetic Ability: Minus Gender: Male Battle Points: 0 Info: A jolly and rather energetic pokemon that always tries to cheer up those around it, not one to be sad for too long or allow others to be sad for any length of time. Though small in size this Minun has a big heart as it always tries to be kind towards others despite any bad treatment it may endure. Moves: Thunder Wave, Quick Attack, SparkItalics - Work In Progress Glameow - The Feisty Feline  Specie: Glameow Name: N/A Nature: Fierce / Determined Ability: Limber Gender: Female Battle Points: 0 Info: A fierce cat that won't easily be prevented from battling, if your one that is unfortunate enough to get in the way of this feline then it'll be almost impossible to get away unless your quick about it. Moves: Fake Out, Scratch, HypnosisItalics - Work In Progress
Aaron - The Quiet One  General Info Basic Description Age: 21 Height: 5'11" Weight: 140 lbs Hair Colour: Silver tinted with blue Eye Colour: Emerald Green Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x 7  - Potion - x 4 Pokemon Absol - The Blind Bandit  Specie: Adsol Name: N/A Nature: Careful / Curious Ability: Pressure Gender: Male Battle Points: 1 Info: Blind doesn't mean useless right? Just because this Absol has lost the use of it's sight does not make it inferior to any other pokemon, since it still has full use of it's hearing and sense of smell. It just takes longer for this particular Absol to get things done due to it's condition. Moves: Scratch, Quick Attack, Razor WindItalics - Work In Progress Spoiler: click to toggle [img][/img] Specie: Name: Nature: Ability: Gender: Battle Points: 0 Info:
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Jun 12 2012, 06:45 AM
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It was very late in the night when Z decided that it was finally the right time for him to make his move. The night was so beautiful and bright with lots of star and the moon was in its full form. With that kind of light there would not be any problem for Z to see the surrounding area but it was also a problem for him since it would be hard to hid himself in that kind of light. Well, that`s not to troublesome for him since he did not care if he was seen or not as long as he got the eggs first.
Walking his way slowly and as hid as possible to the barn where he seen the eggs were waiting for him, Z was cautiously looking around to check is there any people around or not. As he approached the building his right hand was holding one of his pokeball so in case of emergency situation he wont waste any time for looking it first.
Reaching the building, Z gone directly to the door then tried to open it but it was locked. Well of course it was locked, no one stupid enough to keep lots of pokemon eggs inside unlocked building, that was so stupid. But it was in his calculation as he quickly called the pokemon inside his pokeball in his hand out for action, "Come out Murkrow, it`s your turn now".
The flying pokemon was leaving its pokeball and popped out right beside its trainer, "Murkrow...", but stupidly, that pokemon yelled quite loud. "Shut up you idiot", Z quickly told it to shut its mouth while looking around to check if someone heard Murkrow and came to that place. But after a while, he did not saw anyone coming and it looks like no one heard it.
After that he face the pokemon and said, "Use your beak to break the lock, but o it as quiet as possible". Murkrow heard that and started using peck to break the door lock as quiet as possible. But well, even though it was trying it best, it was impossible to shut the sound of its beak clinging against a metal and someone with good ears would surely hear that kind of sound.
But looks like no one heard that sound fast enough to prevent Murkrow from breaking the door lock. "Good...", with the lock was not preventing Z from entering the barn, he and his pokemon entered the barn and started collecting the eggs.
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Jun 13 2012, 11:35 AM
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What the . . ? What was that? Sounded like some form of bird - but it sure was both loud and sounded quite close. But what the heck, there was bound to be some birds that prefered to move about their domain under the cover of darkness - it wasn;t as if there was anything wrong with that right? Though - even this small and comforting thought did nothing to relax the blind Absol that up until a few seconds earlier had been sleeping peacefull but was now upon it's feet and standing statue still at the 'entrance' of the small structure that served as the sleeping quarter's for itself and it's companion.
Anyway, even if that cry had been of just another of the many wild night birds it seemed strangely close to civilization. Which often considering their nightly huntings made it stranger still - but about to dismiss this thought and return to it's sleep until the morning came the white disaster pokemon froze once more. It's sensitive hearing picking up on the sound of some object clanging against metal. Now that was something that couldn't be ignored - considering that this was something that could only happen in a place such as this.
So after done a quick search and locating Aaron did the white pokemon begin to make it's attempts at waking the human, actually resorting to placing it's head somewhere in the region of where it believed the male's head to be. "Ab - sol" it spoke, although quiet it was loud enough for it's intention and instantly waking Aaron.
"Absol? what wrongs?" Aaron spoke, somewhat groggy from being woken so suddenly and attempting to sit then stand up due to the Absol's repeated nudging to follow it. So despite his sleep being interrupted Aaron was unfortunately in no position to argue as a sigh escaped him and just following his agitated companion. "alright - wait up will you. What got into you . . . . . " he questioned, though soon going silent as the pair came to the large buildings where the multitude of eggs were kept.
Edited by Reiki, Jun 13 2012, 11:35 AM.
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Kira - The Lone Wanderer  General Info Basic Description Age: 18 Height: 6'2 Weight: 140lbs Hair Colour: Black Eye Color: Light Red Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x10  - Silk Scarf - x1  - Wiki Berries - x4  x1 - TM55 Scald Pokemon Ryuu - The Mischievous Shape Shifter  Specie: Zorua Name: Ryuu Type: Dark Nature: Mischievous / Brave Ability: Illusion Gender: Male Battle Points: 4 Info: A jokester in multiple forms, Despite other's of his specie only changing their form to avoid detection or harm by humans or pokemon, Ryuu would sooner use his shape shifting ability to play pranks on unsuspecting victims or cause as much trouble as he can depending on the situation in hand. Otherwise this small shape shifter focuses his tricks upon his unsuspecting master - the playful one to his master's generally serious nature. Moves: Dark Pulse, Scratch, Pursuit, Fury SwipesItalics - Work In Progress Marill - The Stubborn Mouse  Specie: Marill Name: N/A Type: Water Nature: Brave / Determined Ability: Thick Fat Gender: Male Battle Points: 1 Info: Despite its small size - don't underestimate this Marill, since this small water mouse will stand it's ground against most opponents despite their obvious size or strength advantages over him. Though this is mainly due to his stubbornness and determination, which in turn prevents Marill from backing down from a challenge unless there is something stopping him. Moves: Tackle, Defense Curl, Water Gun, RolloutItalics - Work In Progress Rika - The Gentle Giant  Specie: Tropius Name: Rika Type: Grass / Flying Nature: Docile / Shy Ability: Chlorophyll Gender: Female Battle Points: 2 Info: Despite the large size of this Tropius, Rika is more of a gentle giant who would sooner run away from any source of trouble rather than rush into a fight or start one - that and this Tropius would sooner prefer looking at flowers and fuss over her master. But then, what do you expect from a female pokemon that has a possible crush on her trainer? Gust, Razor Leaf, Stomp, Sweet Scent, Magical LeafItalics - Work In Progress
Suzume - The Blue Sparrow  General Info Basic Description Age: 16 Height: 5'1" Weight: 105 lbs Hair Colour: Blue Eye Colour: Green / Blue Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x 7  - Potion - x 4  - pokemon food - x20 Other Items Sketchbooks x 3, Pencils, multiple colours - x 35, Pens, multiple colours - x 20, Paints & Paintbrush Pokemon Nyx - The Firey Protector  Specie: Growlithe Name: Nyx Nature: Brave / Protective Ability: Intimidate Gender: Female Battle Points: 2 Info: Like other's of her specie, Nyx is very protective of her Mistress - though parhaps a little more so than anyone would expect of such a small pup. Though with good reason in regards to her master's health, since Suzume has been unwell much of her life Nyx has always felt compelled to be more protective than normal. Moves: Bite, Ember, Flame WheelItalics - Work In Progress Mika - The Electric Spark  Specie: Minun Name: Mika Nature: Jolly / Energetic Ability: Minus Gender: Male Battle Points: 0 Info: A jolly and rather energetic pokemon that always tries to cheer up those around it, not one to be sad for too long or allow others to be sad for any length of time. Though small in size this Minun has a big heart as it always tries to be kind towards others despite any bad treatment it may endure. Moves: Thunder Wave, Quick Attack, SparkItalics - Work In Progress Glameow - The Feisty Feline  Specie: Glameow Name: N/A Nature: Fierce / Determined Ability: Limber Gender: Female Battle Points: 0 Info: A fierce cat that won't easily be prevented from battling, if your one that is unfortunate enough to get in the way of this feline then it'll be almost impossible to get away unless your quick about it. Moves: Fake Out, Scratch, HypnosisItalics - Work In Progress
Aaron - The Quiet One  General Info Basic Description Age: 21 Height: 5'11" Weight: 140 lbs Hair Colour: Silver tinted with blue Eye Colour: Emerald Green Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x 7  - Potion - x 4 Pokemon Absol - The Blind Bandit  Specie: Adsol Name: N/A Nature: Careful / Curious Ability: Pressure Gender: Male Battle Points: 1 Info: Blind doesn't mean useless right? Just because this Absol has lost the use of it's sight does not make it inferior to any other pokemon, since it still has full use of it's hearing and sense of smell. It just takes longer for this particular Absol to get things done due to it's condition. Moves: Scratch, Quick Attack, Razor WindItalics - Work In Progress Spoiler: click to toggle [img][/img] Specie: Name: Nature: Ability: Gender: Battle Points: 0 Info:
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Jun 14 2012, 05:17 AM
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Entering the barn, Z saw lots of pokemon eggs waiting fro him to grab them all. Seeing that, he could not help but to smile. But before he did anything to those eggs, he told Murkrow to go to outside, "Go out Murkrow and watch if anyone coming". After having told by its trainer, Murkrow flew out and then landed on the roof to have a look at the surrounding area.
With Murkrow outside doing its job, Z started his own job to collect the eggs. He brought out the sack he had for the eggs and started to collect each one of those eggs. One by one, he picked the egg while also had a look on it too. Well, even though it was his mission to collect those eggs for the employer, he also would check if there is a rare egg for him to keep. A rare egg means that quite a good pokemon will hatched from it and a good pokemon is good for his team.
"Hey.... this one is a rare one", Z said those words to himself as he found a pitch black pokemon egg after grabbing a few eggs and put them inside the sack. But before he could have a better look on that egg, his Murkrow shouted to tell him that there`s something coming, "Murkrow...".
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Jun 14 2012, 05:37 AM
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(( Blaze, can you use punctuation inside the quotation marks? I understand that in other countries it is correct to do so outside, but it makes your posts difficult and boring to read for me. Also, please start a new line for dialogue.
Instead of writing like this,
he told Murkrow to go to outside, "Go out Murkrow and watch if anyone coming". After having told by its trainer, Murkrow flew out and then landed on the roof to have a look at the surrounding area.
Can you please do it like this?
he told Murkrow to go to outside, "Go out, Murkrow, and watch if anyone is coming." After having told by its trainer, Murkrow flew out and then landed on the roof to have a look at the surrounding area. ))
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Jun 14 2012, 05:01 PM
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***Well, I guess I wont do as you told me Nichole. The reason mostly because it`s my writing style and it will be hard to change while I still using that kind of writing in other site.
Secondly, just as you said before, there`s no exact rule for how we write our post. Even why we use past tense is just because it makes many people easier to read.
And lastly, I`m joining this site and doing RP here not for you, it`s for my own pleasure. So, I don`t give a damn either you bored reading my post or not. You always had an option not to read it if you bored.
But thanks anyway for the concern.***
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Jun 14 2012, 07:06 PM
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(Blaze, really, you're just being rude for no reason.)
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Jun 15 2012, 01:40 AM
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- uhhh, Blaze? if you actually read Nichole's request THOROUGHLY you would see that she made no reference to an exact rule in regards to punctuation or how everyone specifically writes out their post.
this is actually what she requested -
Blaze, can you use punctuation inside the quotation marks? I understand that in other countries it is correct to do so outside, but it makes your posts difficult and boring to read for me. Also, please start a new line for dialogue.
So maybe wouldn't hurt to be a little more polite? and make an effort to read what people write more carefully? Specially when people are actually trying to give you friendly suggestions / requests. Because until then i have no interest in continuing this particular RP - since i'm sure can find other things to do.
Edited by Reiki, Jun 15 2012, 02:12 AM.
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Kira - The Lone Wanderer  General Info Basic Description Age: 18 Height: 6'2 Weight: 140lbs Hair Colour: Black Eye Color: Light Red Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x10  - Silk Scarf - x1  - Wiki Berries - x4  x1 - TM55 Scald Pokemon Ryuu - The Mischievous Shape Shifter  Specie: Zorua Name: Ryuu Type: Dark Nature: Mischievous / Brave Ability: Illusion Gender: Male Battle Points: 4 Info: A jokester in multiple forms, Despite other's of his specie only changing their form to avoid detection or harm by humans or pokemon, Ryuu would sooner use his shape shifting ability to play pranks on unsuspecting victims or cause as much trouble as he can depending on the situation in hand. Otherwise this small shape shifter focuses his tricks upon his unsuspecting master - the playful one to his master's generally serious nature. Moves: Dark Pulse, Scratch, Pursuit, Fury SwipesItalics - Work In Progress Marill - The Stubborn Mouse  Specie: Marill Name: N/A Type: Water Nature: Brave / Determined Ability: Thick Fat Gender: Male Battle Points: 1 Info: Despite its small size - don't underestimate this Marill, since this small water mouse will stand it's ground against most opponents despite their obvious size or strength advantages over him. Though this is mainly due to his stubbornness and determination, which in turn prevents Marill from backing down from a challenge unless there is something stopping him. Moves: Tackle, Defense Curl, Water Gun, RolloutItalics - Work In Progress Rika - The Gentle Giant  Specie: Tropius Name: Rika Type: Grass / Flying Nature: Docile / Shy Ability: Chlorophyll Gender: Female Battle Points: 2 Info: Despite the large size of this Tropius, Rika is more of a gentle giant who would sooner run away from any source of trouble rather than rush into a fight or start one - that and this Tropius would sooner prefer looking at flowers and fuss over her master. But then, what do you expect from a female pokemon that has a possible crush on her trainer? Gust, Razor Leaf, Stomp, Sweet Scent, Magical LeafItalics - Work In Progress
Suzume - The Blue Sparrow  General Info Basic Description Age: 16 Height: 5'1" Weight: 105 lbs Hair Colour: Blue Eye Colour: Green / Blue Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x 7  - Potion - x 4  - pokemon food - x20 Other Items Sketchbooks x 3, Pencils, multiple colours - x 35, Pens, multiple colours - x 20, Paints & Paintbrush Pokemon Nyx - The Firey Protector  Specie: Growlithe Name: Nyx Nature: Brave / Protective Ability: Intimidate Gender: Female Battle Points: 2 Info: Like other's of her specie, Nyx is very protective of her Mistress - though parhaps a little more so than anyone would expect of such a small pup. Though with good reason in regards to her master's health, since Suzume has been unwell much of her life Nyx has always felt compelled to be more protective than normal. Moves: Bite, Ember, Flame WheelItalics - Work In Progress Mika - The Electric Spark  Specie: Minun Name: Mika Nature: Jolly / Energetic Ability: Minus Gender: Male Battle Points: 0 Info: A jolly and rather energetic pokemon that always tries to cheer up those around it, not one to be sad for too long or allow others to be sad for any length of time. Though small in size this Minun has a big heart as it always tries to be kind towards others despite any bad treatment it may endure. Moves: Thunder Wave, Quick Attack, SparkItalics - Work In Progress Glameow - The Feisty Feline  Specie: Glameow Name: N/A Nature: Fierce / Determined Ability: Limber Gender: Female Battle Points: 0 Info: A fierce cat that won't easily be prevented from battling, if your one that is unfortunate enough to get in the way of this feline then it'll be almost impossible to get away unless your quick about it. Moves: Fake Out, Scratch, HypnosisItalics - Work In Progress
Aaron - The Quiet One  General Info Basic Description Age: 21 Height: 5'11" Weight: 140 lbs Hair Colour: Silver tinted with blue Eye Colour: Emerald Green Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x 7  - Potion - x 4 Pokemon Absol - The Blind Bandit  Specie: Adsol Name: N/A Nature: Careful / Curious Ability: Pressure Gender: Male Battle Points: 1 Info: Blind doesn't mean useless right? Just because this Absol has lost the use of it's sight does not make it inferior to any other pokemon, since it still has full use of it's hearing and sense of smell. It just takes longer for this particular Absol to get things done due to it's condition. Moves: Scratch, Quick Attack, Razor WindItalics - Work In Progress Spoiler: click to toggle [img][/img] Specie: Name: Nature: Ability: Gender: Battle Points: 0 Info:
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Jun 15 2012, 03:33 AM
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***Well I understand if I`m rude, but I dont think I did it for no reason.
And for Reiki, you can stop posting if you want. It`s not in y position to tell you to agree with me. Every people has their own way of thinking. As for what you call friendly suggestion, It is a suggestion indeed but I dont think it as friendly. What I see is that she want me to post in the way that makes her enjoy to read it. And I already stated my reason why I cant follow her suggestion if you read it more carefully. Well I can try to change but I guess its useless since I will surely going back to how I enjoy writing the most and it will makes her bored again.***
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Jun 15 2012, 01:49 PM
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ooc//
What's the most blaringly obvious part of this whole thing we're not mentioning is that Nichole is an Admin of this site- it's her job to run things and do exactly what she just did, which was having you role play a certain way to make it better for the site as a whole. Role playing involves multiple people and if all you care about is yourself, that's horribly selfish and no one will want to role play with you. But when a staff member of a forum asks you to change your formatting for a role play and your response is "I don`t give a damn" then not only are you being selfish, but also rude.
So with this sucky attitude you've got going on right now for no good reason whatsoever, it will end with nobody wanting to role play with you and/or betting kicked off the site. And then it doesn't matter how you want to type replies because you won't have anything to reply to.
I say all this because Nichole was being very polite and you reacted terribly. If I had kept my staff position here, your ass would be suspended.
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Jun 15 2012, 03:26 PM
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(( I'm not even going to respond to any of this, really in lue of not being rude myself.
But I will add one more point; I'm the one who will eventually have to read this thread to approve whatever it is you and Reiki want, so therefore how you write in regards to me being able to read it does matter. ))
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Jun 15 2012, 06:54 PM
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**Well, someone need to take their own medicine.
Just as I wrote before Nichole. You can choose not to read my thread at all, there`re other admin who will grade instead of you.
And for Luno, it`s true that she is and admin. But as far as I know there`re other admins too. Also, just like I wrote before, she`s not polite at all. You say I`m selfish. yes I`m selfish and I can say the same for Nichole and you too.
For your information, she already grade my solo thread before and she did not say any words at all about how must I write my post. So, why now? and I did not hear any complain from the other admin or other RPer too. It`s not like she`s the one I`m RPing with.
And you, Luno and Reiki, starte complaining cause I`m being rude towards Nichole and both of you said that she`s friendly and polite. Well, I dunno about you two way seeing things and I dont care about that either.
But well, from this incident I can say that it`s not my place to be here. So I better leave this place for all of you to enjoy staying in this site.
One last thing from me, is that if there`s no rules stating `something`, even an admin dont have any reason or the right to say anything regarding that `something`. That`s being rude and selfish.**
Good Bye and enjoy your stay here, if you all can do that since I cant. HB
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Jun 15 2012, 07:23 PM
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(( ... Riiiiight.
Please leave, then, because honestly you weren't providing much to the site. ))
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Jun 15 2012, 07:33 PM
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1 bp to Nichole, Luno, and Helblaze Approved release of jerk RPer.
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Jun 15 2012, 09:32 PM
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Jun 15 2012, 10:19 PM
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(( Reiki, I feel bad because your role play ended so suddenly.
I know that not much happened, but I'm giving your Absol one BP for your troubles. ))
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Jun 16 2012, 06:56 AM
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* it's alright - to be fair the whole thing that were doing was a bit well . . . . . . LAME. I was already starting to get bored of it despite the whole not much happening part.
-hugs Nichole- then thank you!-
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Kira - The Lone Wanderer  General Info Basic Description Age: 18 Height: 6'2 Weight: 140lbs Hair Colour: Black Eye Color: Light Red Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x10  - Silk Scarf - x1  - Wiki Berries - x4  x1 - TM55 Scald Pokemon Ryuu - The Mischievous Shape Shifter  Specie: Zorua Name: Ryuu Type: Dark Nature: Mischievous / Brave Ability: Illusion Gender: Male Battle Points: 4 Info: A jokester in multiple forms, Despite other's of his specie only changing their form to avoid detection or harm by humans or pokemon, Ryuu would sooner use his shape shifting ability to play pranks on unsuspecting victims or cause as much trouble as he can depending on the situation in hand. Otherwise this small shape shifter focuses his tricks upon his unsuspecting master - the playful one to his master's generally serious nature. Moves: Dark Pulse, Scratch, Pursuit, Fury SwipesItalics - Work In Progress Marill - The Stubborn Mouse  Specie: Marill Name: N/A Type: Water Nature: Brave / Determined Ability: Thick Fat Gender: Male Battle Points: 1 Info: Despite its small size - don't underestimate this Marill, since this small water mouse will stand it's ground against most opponents despite their obvious size or strength advantages over him. Though this is mainly due to his stubbornness and determination, which in turn prevents Marill from backing down from a challenge unless there is something stopping him. Moves: Tackle, Defense Curl, Water Gun, RolloutItalics - Work In Progress Rika - The Gentle Giant  Specie: Tropius Name: Rika Type: Grass / Flying Nature: Docile / Shy Ability: Chlorophyll Gender: Female Battle Points: 2 Info: Despite the large size of this Tropius, Rika is more of a gentle giant who would sooner run away from any source of trouble rather than rush into a fight or start one - that and this Tropius would sooner prefer looking at flowers and fuss over her master. But then, what do you expect from a female pokemon that has a possible crush on her trainer? Gust, Razor Leaf, Stomp, Sweet Scent, Magical LeafItalics - Work In Progress
Suzume - The Blue Sparrow  General Info Basic Description Age: 16 Height: 5'1" Weight: 105 lbs Hair Colour: Blue Eye Colour: Green / Blue Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x 7  - Potion - x 4  - pokemon food - x20 Other Items Sketchbooks x 3, Pencils, multiple colours - x 35, Pens, multiple colours - x 20, Paints & Paintbrush Pokemon Nyx - The Firey Protector  Specie: Growlithe Name: Nyx Nature: Brave / Protective Ability: Intimidate Gender: Female Battle Points: 2 Info: Like other's of her specie, Nyx is very protective of her Mistress - though parhaps a little more so than anyone would expect of such a small pup. Though with good reason in regards to her master's health, since Suzume has been unwell much of her life Nyx has always felt compelled to be more protective than normal. Moves: Bite, Ember, Flame WheelItalics - Work In Progress Mika - The Electric Spark  Specie: Minun Name: Mika Nature: Jolly / Energetic Ability: Minus Gender: Male Battle Points: 0 Info: A jolly and rather energetic pokemon that always tries to cheer up those around it, not one to be sad for too long or allow others to be sad for any length of time. Though small in size this Minun has a big heart as it always tries to be kind towards others despite any bad treatment it may endure. Moves: Thunder Wave, Quick Attack, SparkItalics - Work In Progress Glameow - The Feisty Feline  Specie: Glameow Name: N/A Nature: Fierce / Determined Ability: Limber Gender: Female Battle Points: 0 Info: A fierce cat that won't easily be prevented from battling, if your one that is unfortunate enough to get in the way of this feline then it'll be almost impossible to get away unless your quick about it. Moves: Fake Out, Scratch, HypnosisItalics - Work In Progress
Aaron - The Quiet One  General Info Basic Description Age: 21 Height: 5'11" Weight: 140 lbs Hair Colour: Silver tinted with blue Eye Colour: Emerald Green Full ProfileMoney Original Amount: 500 AD Amount Earned: 0 AD Total: 500 AD
Inventory Pokemon Items  - pokeball - x 7  - Potion - x 4 Pokemon Absol - The Blind Bandit  Specie: Adsol Name: N/A Nature: Careful / Curious Ability: Pressure Gender: Male Battle Points: 1 Info: Blind doesn't mean useless right? Just because this Absol has lost the use of it's sight does not make it inferior to any other pokemon, since it still has full use of it's hearing and sense of smell. It just takes longer for this particular Absol to get things done due to it's condition. Moves: Scratch, Quick Attack, Razor WindItalics - Work In Progress Spoiler: click to toggle [img][/img] Specie: Name: Nature: Ability: Gender: Battle Points: 0 Info:
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Jun 16 2012, 07:12 AM
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