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Topic Started: Apr 24 2008, 12:44 PM (1,226 Views)
Sumomo
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Now that all characters of the main cast have been taken, I was asked by some other members if they could still somehow take part in our RP. BNB's always happy to accept new roleplayers, that's why the staff came up with the following solution:

Everyone who wants to take part in the RP but doesn't have the chance to rp a main character can now apply for a supporting character. At the moment we only accept student characters, because we want to keep the teachers as universal characters (=characters every RPer can rp) for the time being. Please keep in mind that the character you create will not be allowed to take part in the competition (which means that your character will be a bit like Mio and Nao). In case your character's going to have a relationship with a main character, you have to talk with the main chara's RPer first before mentioning the relationship in your application.

How to apply:

Reply to this post (=submit your app. in this thread) and use the following form

Name, Age:

Do you play an instrument? If yes, which one and for how long?:

How often will you be able to role-play?:

Character Name:

Which school does your character attend (Ueno, Toho, Senzoku, Seiso)?:

Instrument your character plays:

Character Description
- physical appearance (e.g. hair color/cut, glasses?, height, etc.)
- character traits
- relationships

Sample RP (>=10 lines):
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Ayume Sakura
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Name, Age: Samantha, 16 yrs old

Do you play an instrument? If yes, which one and for how long?: flute for three years in elementary school, organ for 7 years

How often will you be able to role-play?: about three times a week. Sometime more

Character Name: (井上歩)Inoue Ayume.

Which school does your character attend (Ueno, Toho, Senzoku, Seiso)?: Seiso

Instrument your character plays: Violin

Character Description
- physical appearance (e.g. hair color/cut, glasses?, height, etc.)

This sixteen year old girl is 5'7 ft tall and weights 47kg. Ayume has dark and straight hair, which she inherited from her mother and the same dark brown eyes as her dad. Her hair is shoulder length. She is a fair skinned girl with a cute smile, or so she thinks.

Her figure looks alot like her mother's, slim and slight. She has a very friendly look, which may be because she likes to make friends. Ayume has a birthmark on the back of her body, although its not a big one - only the size of her fist - she never did like it and had never showed it to anyone before. She is usually seen in a blouse and mini skirt if she is not in her uniform.

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- Character traits

Ayume is brave, she dares to do many things that other people won't even dare to imagine. She is also helpful, whenever someone asks for her help she does her best to help them out. She is a smart girl. She can memorize things faster than most people due to her photographic memory. She doesn't boast about herself often. Ayume likes to learn new things. She makes friends easily but she is often seen alone, especially when she is out exploring. She is not very good at sports but doesn't mind it much because she prefers to read and use her brains more.

Music has been her hobby ever since the age of 5 when her mother bought the very first violin she owned. Determined to prove that she could do well, she studied music and soon entered the music department of Seiso Academy.

She always does her best to try to keep her temper to herself because if she lost it, terrible things are sure to follow. Ayume once broke her elder brother's hand just because he made her angry by throwing all her dolls away. She has a liking for exploring; she developed that since she joined an elementary boarding school. The main thing that Ayume likes to explore is the huge school ground and other places that she has never seen before. Ayume also likes to read, according to her mother, she was able to read before she was even able to walk, though she still thinks that it is highly impossible that she could read before she learned to walk.

Ayume likes to make friends as well, she is very friendly and is usually able to make new friends instantly, but sometimes she ends up making enemies instead of friends. She does not mind helping her friends out and is usually very loyal to them. She also enjoys playing her violin, an instrument she loved to play ever since she got her first one.

- Relationships

Ayume comes from a rich family. She is the first daughter of the Inoue family. She was born to Sachiko and Ren on September the 7th. She has four other siblings, her older brothers, Tsubasa (5 years older) and Tadase (1 year older) and her younger sisters, Kaoruko and Sumireko (twins, a year younger). The Sakura family owns a few of the largest vacation spots and resorts in the country. They have been passing down the business from generation to generation.

Sachiko and Ren are the head of the family, Ayume have deep respect for them. It was Sachiko that bought Ayume her first violin and then Ren sent her to some violin classes that were near their area.

Tsubasa is Ayume's annoying brother. In her opinion, he is evil enough to get into jail without having to do anything. Since he is always pranking her, she tries her best to stay out of this way. Ayume does not dislike him but she prefers to be left alone. Tadase is Ayume's favourite brother, he always helps her out in studies and also when she learned to play the violin. He was always there to give moral support and Ayume is really happy to have him by her side.

Kaoruko and Sumireko are the youngest in the family, Kaoruko being the oldest and Sumireko the youngest. They are identical twins that like to go everywhere together. The twins are extremely hard to tell apart, unless of course if someone have been with them for a long time. Ayume is very close with the twins since they are girls and also because they share Ayume's habit of exploring, their curiosity always brings them to unique places. The three of them sometimes go exploring together, especially when they were in the same boarding school.


Sample RP (>=10 lines): 'Finally a little time to relax' Ayume thought, it has been a tiring day and still it was only late afternoon. She walked outside wanting to relax near some flowers. "It would be lovely to play my violin out here" she thought happily.

Reaching out into the open, she was surprised to find it completely empty. "That’s weird, where is everyone?" she wondered. "It is not even dark yet and nobody is here." Deciding not to bother about it, she headed toward the nearby garden. She sat down and took out her violin from the case. She placed it gentle on her shoulder and begun to play a slow and peaceful tune. It was wonderful to play her violin in the outdoor; she really enjoys playing while looking at the beautiful scenery.

By the time she stopped playing, it was already half past 5. She needed to leave for another violin lesson in an hour's time. She quickly packed her stuff and headed out of the school gate. "I should have checked the time!" she thought. "How could I be so careless?"

Edited. Its only one character, Inoue Ayume. I think the profile is already okay.

Admins' comment:

"The Sakura family owns a few of the largest vacation spots and resorts in the country. They have been passing down the business from generation to generation."

You forgot to change "Sakura family" to "Inoue family" here ^^ But there's also a problem with the new name: Inoue Koji is already a character in the roleplay...x_X
Two other mistakes with verb conjugations:

"Sachiko and Ren are the head of the family, Ayume have deep respect for them."
"The twins are extremely hard to tell apart, unless of course if someone have been with them for a long time."


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