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| Bernardo | Apr 24 2009, 02:47 AM Post #1 |
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Alright, Since like recently i had just joined [XE] as my clan community. So i have decided to make a map to celebrate my warm welcome. Hope you guy will like it, And of course, This map could be use in any online clan battle! So, Enjoy. EDIT : Please don't forget to leave your rate, comments or feedbacks for this map to me! Thanks yet again. Here's the screenshot preview : ![]() Credits : - Bernardo (Original) - TOP_PRO & Xiphirx (Shadows) Download : http://ifile.it/jts3ny6 |
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| hippQ | Apr 24 2009, 04:38 AM Post #2 |
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I like youre bigger maps xD But the design is a bit boring. Always grey and so on ![]() Shadows looks good :rolleyes: :rolleyes: |
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| Bernardo | Apr 24 2009, 05:08 AM Post #3 |
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Boring? What makes you think it's boring? Other then design? Maybe i might possible to do some changes? Heehee... Please leave some details to me. So i might possible to take down your request? ![]() EDIT : Please let a rate for this map! Thanks.
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| hippQ | Apr 24 2009, 05:12 AM Post #4 |
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I mean the color. Too grey like dm_arena |
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| Bernardo | Apr 24 2009, 05:16 AM Post #5 |
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Yes, This map is something similar to the map (dm_arena) that i have made. But yet, I have re-edited the tiles, added better shadows and better waypoint for this map! So ya, Hope you will like it! And please rate, Thanks.
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| zzrezz | Apr 24 2009, 05:20 AM Post #6 |
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Christopher+Robert... <3
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try putting rewards at the end of dead ends.. nobody likes to get to a dead end with nothin out of it :\ annndddd.... try ading noob traps.. like.. long narrow hallways to go down.. straight trough big ass blocks of space... but otherwise.. ni ni ni nice job ![]() good ans fancy.. but fancy is to be expected from most of yo maps
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| Bernardo | Apr 24 2009, 05:22 AM Post #7 |
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Sorry? I don't really get what you mean? Maybe a better details? Hmmm... :rolleyes: |
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| xXxSpectre@ | Apr 24 2009, 10:23 AM Post #8 |
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Good job with the shadows, but in my opinion it just looks like an extremely simplifed version of de_inferno. There seems to be four buildings and no actual context for the players. Not bad tiles, but try filling in the blank space between the pathways. Right now it seems just kind of like a maze of corridors. |
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| Bernardo | Apr 24 2009, 12:01 PM Post #9 |
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Thanks xXxSpectre@ for your advise! I might do some changes tomorrow morning? (Timezone: 8.00) Heehee... Cause currently it's 12.01 AM here now! (Request will be taken!)
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| Immortal- | Apr 24 2009, 01:32 PM Post #10 |
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maybe you should call this dm_arena2 to make it sound more appropriate, since the tiles and layout was kinda similar to it. just a suggestion though, low priority on this. but in both ways, good job again! |
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| hippQ | Apr 24 2009, 01:36 PM Post #11 |
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Yes thats a good idea. |
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| muhu | Apr 24 2009, 01:37 PM Post #12 |
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I prefer dm_arena to be honest. |
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| hippQ | Apr 24 2009, 01:48 PM Post #13 |
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Ive never played this map to be honest. |
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| Bernardo | Apr 24 2009, 09:36 PM Post #14 |
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Alright, Currently i'm still working on the roof as requested by xXxSpectre@. (As I might need some help with it! xXxSpectre@, Do you have any idea?) Hmmm... As for the name, I will still stick with this name i guess! And hippQ, You should try it out first and know how good can be. Trust me!
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| TOP_PRO | Apr 24 2009, 09:50 PM Post #15 |
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HEY bernardo, welcome to the creed. you tile amazingly and now you got the hang of planning the map out. NOW here's the thing, people are telling you to add more excitement to the map. what this means is that you see how 85% of your map is black space and grey shadowed halls? That repetition is making the map boring, once you play in it, youre gonna get lost easily because everything looks almost identical. Here's a good piece of advice, for your maps, instead of thinking of a map as a Box with corridors in it. Try imagining a real world environment (Like you did with prison camp :D) in fact, prison camp is the perfect example of how you should keep making maps. Prison camp had many exciting tiles and barricades that were different from one another and made the environment look more "real". hope you got that, good job
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