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ZZZAP!
Topic Started: Feb 26 2006, 02:23 AM (3,749 Views)
Redheero
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Heh, I really do have a comic done. Just some family stuff came up and I wasn't able to get to my scanner.
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Alan Bates
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You need to work on your punchlines a little bit, Cevian. You don't exactly have a good pannel flow.
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Cevian
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I'm trying.
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LuppyLuptonium
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Heres the problem as I see it. One should never think of a comicbook as a book. Sure when it is compilwed and binded it will eventually be a book, but when writing and drwing, you should never think of it as such. Instead you should approach it on a page by pagev basis. Every pannel in every page should have meaning, but when it comes together, the pages should all express an idea on theitr own. with the next page picking up where the last page stopped never skippintg a beat.

For an example I will use megatokyo. Take a look at any chapter before 5. read the strips. notice how each strip works independantly on it's own. Now next chance you get, grab a volume from the manga section of walden, and look at the same chapter.

Like it or hate it, it flows good and works wonderfully in a book form. That is the way a comic should be done.
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TAADAA! And here it is folks! Finally I have the first strip for this comic without a name!!!


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Redheero
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:FIXED:

Look above.
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Alan Bates
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You need to work on your profile pictures but otherwise it's not bad. It looks a bit spotted though. Did you save it as a GIF?
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Cevian
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PNG is the way to go.
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Shadow776
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Looks good. Definitely use PNGs from now on, though. And it's 'cue', not 'que'. But now I'm just nitpicking. :P
Terra Drake,Oct 19 2005
11:12 PM
If I had a penny for every time I didn't have a penny, I'd tear apart the universe in a paradox.

And so long as the irresponsible explore unknown lands, we need never fear...

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We're the last descendants
In the line of valiant soldiers
We're mistreated angels
We're the blackbird nation, we're the chosen ones
We're the last descendants
We're the tribe of unsung glory
We're the fallen angels
When the time is right you shall be on my side


~ Blind Guardian, "Wait for an Answer"

~... Don't disappear... ~
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not bad, could use some shading...
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Redheero,Apr 13 2006
11:05 AM
TAADAA! And here it is folks! Finally I have the first strip for this comic without a name!!!

Why not just call it "ZZZAP!"?
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LuppyLuptonium,Apr 14 2006
03:01 AM
not bad, could use some shading...

I am soooooo not fricken shading in paint.


Drrr, i carnt spelz drrr.


That really does make me feel stupid though.


Anyways the first ones not a profile. Just a frontal shot.
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Cevian
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Nice new avvie.
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Redheero
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*sniff* I wish Sukasa wasn't a girl. Poor, poor Sukasa. Man if only the ending hadn't been so lame... (See rant in Avitar discussion thread)
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Rant read.

.//hack RULES!!!
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Any more progress?
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Bumping for Redheero...
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