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| Redheero | Mar 21 2006, 11:01 PM Post #441 |
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Heh, I really do have a comic done. Just some family stuff came up and I wasn't able to get to my scanner. |
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| Alan Bates | Mar 21 2006, 11:03 PM Post #442 |
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You need to work on your punchlines a little bit, Cevian. You don't exactly have a good pannel flow. |
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| Cevian | Mar 22 2006, 01:55 AM Post #443 |
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I'm trying. |
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| LuppyLuptonium | Mar 22 2006, 04:48 AM Post #444 |
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Heres the problem as I see it. One should never think of a comicbook as a book. Sure when it is compilwed and binded it will eventually be a book, but when writing and drwing, you should never think of it as such. Instead you should approach it on a page by pagev basis. Every pannel in every page should have meaning, but when it comes together, the pages should all express an idea on theitr own. with the next page picking up where the last page stopped never skippintg a beat. For an example I will use megatokyo. Take a look at any chapter before 5. read the strips. notice how each strip works independantly on it's own. Now next chance you get, grab a volume from the manga section of walden, and look at the same chapter. Like it or hate it, it flows good and works wonderfully in a book form. That is the way a comic should be done. |
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| Redheero | Apr 13 2006, 06:05 PM Post #445 |
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TAADAA! And here it is folks! Finally I have the first strip for this comic without a name!!!![]() ![]() |
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| Redheero | Apr 13 2006, 06:16 PM Post #446 |
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:FIXED: Look above. |
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| Alan Bates | Apr 13 2006, 11:28 PM Post #447 |
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You need to work on your profile pictures but otherwise it's not bad. It looks a bit spotted though. Did you save it as a GIF? |
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| Cevian | Apr 14 2006, 12:50 AM Post #448 |
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PNG is the way to go. |
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| Shadow776 | Apr 14 2006, 01:56 AM Post #449 |
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Looks good. Definitely use PNGs from now on, though. And it's 'cue', not 'que'. But now I'm just nitpicking.
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And so long as the irresponsible explore unknown lands, we need never fear... ~~~~ We're the last descendants In the line of valiant soldiers We're mistreated angels We're the blackbird nation, we're the chosen ones We're the last descendants We're the tribe of unsung glory We're the fallen angels When the time is right you shall be on my side ~ Blind Guardian, "Wait for an Answer" ~... Don't disappear... ~ | |
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| LuppyLuptonium | Apr 14 2006, 03:01 AM Post #450 |
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not bad, could use some shading... |
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| Alan Bates | Apr 14 2006, 03:08 AM Post #451 |
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Why not just call it "ZZZAP!"? |
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| Redheero | Apr 14 2006, 05:39 AM Post #452 |
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I am soooooo not fricken shading in paint. Drrr, i carnt spelz drrr. That really does make me feel stupid though. Anyways the first ones not a profile. Just a frontal shot. |
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| Cevian | Apr 14 2006, 05:51 AM Post #453 |
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Nice new avvie. |
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| Redheero | Apr 14 2006, 05:57 AM Post #454 |
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*sniff* I wish Sukasa wasn't a girl. Poor, poor Sukasa. Man if only the ending hadn't been so lame... (See rant in Avitar discussion thread) |
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| Cevian | Apr 14 2006, 06:07 AM Post #455 |
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Rant read. .//hack RULES!!! |
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| LuppyLuptonium | Apr 27 2006, 02:26 AM Post #456 |
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Any more progress? |
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| Cevian | May 27 2006, 01:27 PM Post #457 |
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Bumping for Redheero... |
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