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Cevian - Rock Light: RPG Hero; Because I said I would
Topic Started: Mar 24 2006, 01:27 AM (448 Views)
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3/23/06
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4/10/06
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4/14/06
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4/17/06
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4/22/06
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4/29/06
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4/16/06
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1st comic: You left out the F in From in the third pannel. Nice joke, though.

2nd comic: Doesn't seem like anything is happening. There's no real joke nor is there anything moving the plot forward

3rd comic: Nice idea, decent punchline, but I would have combined the first two pannels and added an extra pannel of the bluring effect

4th comic: Weird. It's a bit too random. It feels like there's a hjoke that I just don't get here. Nothing is set up well. I'd also recommend against using plain white backgrounds like you did in the first pannel.

5th comic: I don't get it.

6th comic: Very nicely done.

7th comic: Not a very funny punchline, otherwise nice dialog.

8th: Decent enough, but the attack needs a lot more flair to it. it just doesn't look impressive enough

9th: fair effort, but lacking something. I'm not exactly sure what.
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Redheero
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Gack! Number them I keep losing my place!
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Comic one edited.

Adding extra blurr...
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Redheero,Mar 23 2006
08:42 PM
Gack! Number them I keep losing my place!

Umm... RH, the images are numbered, as can be seen by the file name in the links. "0001.png" to "0009.png". Follow that and it shouldn't be too much trouble... :/
Terra Drake,Oct 19 2005
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If I had a penny for every time I didn't have a penny, I'd tear apart the universe in a paradox.

And so long as the irresponsible explore unknown lands, we need never fear...

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We're the last descendants
In the line of valiant soldiers
We're mistreated angels
We're the blackbird nation, we're the chosen ones
We're the last descendants
We're the tribe of unsung glory
We're the fallen angels
When the time is right you shall be on my side


~ Blind Guardian, "Wait for an Answer"

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Shadow776,Mar 24 2006
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Redheero,Mar 23 2006
08:42 PM
Gack! Number them I keep losing my place!

Umm... RH, the images are numbered, as can be seen by the file name in the links. "0001.png" to "0009.png". Follow that and it shouldn't be too much trouble... :/

Err, yeah, but numbering is still only polite, err. Thats my excuse and I'm sticking to it.
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Let me help you out.
The First Comic

The Second Comic

The Third Comic

Not the Fourth Comic

The Fourth Comic

The Number after the Fourth Comic

The Sixth comic

Comic number 7

The second to last comic

The last of the bunch

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Redheero
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Heh, I've always wondered how you can turn links into other words, how do you do that?
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Note: for the following example, replace { and } with [ and ]

{url=http://s4.invisionfree.com/Captain_SNES/index.php?showtopic=1180&st=0&#entry9715240}Insert text here{/url}

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Thanks :lol:

Thats gonna help me out a lot!
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Cevian
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3rd Comic edited.
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Up above the 'enter your post' box, there's a button labeled "http://". Click that, and it's self-explanatory...

Also, interesting, Cevian... I'm not sure where you're going with it, but not bad.
Live and learn - or die and teach by example.
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Thanks.
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pretty interesting stuff, but there's a lot your not taking advantage of. like menus!
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menus?
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yeah. RPG menues. Wehn I read it I thought one would pop up and freak out rock. none did. I also thought he would have been freaked out by the strange floating text. he wasn't. I'm just saying that in an RPG world with RPG mechanics there's a lot you can make fun of.
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Rock gets his Menu later, this was just the intro battle.

He wasn't paying attebtion to the floating text, yet.
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Updates:

No new comics, but I edited the 1st panel of comic # 0004 so it's better
than basic white.

View it here: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0004.png

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I'll work on improving the Pwnage attack next.
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Updates:

I combined the old comics #8 and #9 into a double length comic and edited the Pwnage to look better.

I made a new comic to replace the assimilated comic #9.

The comics:
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Update:

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Comic 10!!!

So... Much... Text...

Word... Helped... With... Spellcheacking...
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