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| Cevian - Rock Light: RPG Hero; Because I said I would | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 24 2006, 01:27 AM (446 Views) | |
| Cevian | Mar 24 2006, 01:27 AM Post #1 |
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3/23/06 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0001.png http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0002.png http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0003.png http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0004.png http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0005.png http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0006.png http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0007.png http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0008.png 4/10/06 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0009.png 4/14/06 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0010.png 4/17/06 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0011.png 4/19/06 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0012.png 4/20/06 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0013.png 4/22/06 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0014.png http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0015.png 4/29/06 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0016.png 4/30/06 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0017.png ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Fillers 4/16/06 http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevi...ic/Easter06.gif |
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| Alan Bates | Mar 24 2006, 01:39 AM Post #2 |
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1st comic: You left out the F in From in the third pannel. Nice joke, though. 2nd comic: Doesn't seem like anything is happening. There's no real joke nor is there anything moving the plot forward 3rd comic: Nice idea, decent punchline, but I would have combined the first two pannels and added an extra pannel of the bluring effect 4th comic: Weird. It's a bit too random. It feels like there's a hjoke that I just don't get here. Nothing is set up well. I'd also recommend against using plain white backgrounds like you did in the first pannel. 5th comic: I don't get it. 6th comic: Very nicely done. 7th comic: Not a very funny punchline, otherwise nice dialog. 8th: Decent enough, but the attack needs a lot more flair to it. it just doesn't look impressive enough 9th: fair effort, but lacking something. I'm not exactly sure what. |
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| Redheero | Mar 24 2006, 01:42 AM Post #3 |
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Gack! Number them I keep losing my place! |
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| Cevian | Mar 24 2006, 01:43 AM Post #4 |
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Comic one edited. Adding extra blurr... |
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| Shadow776 | Mar 24 2006, 01:48 AM Post #5 |
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Umm... RH, the images are numbered, as can be seen by the file name in the links. "0001.png" to "0009.png". Follow that and it shouldn't be too much trouble...
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And so long as the irresponsible explore unknown lands, we need never fear... ~~~~ We're the last descendants In the line of valiant soldiers We're mistreated angels We're the blackbird nation, we're the chosen ones We're the last descendants We're the tribe of unsung glory We're the fallen angels When the time is right you shall be on my side ~ Blind Guardian, "Wait for an Answer" ~... Don't disappear... ~ | |
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| Redheero | Mar 24 2006, 01:49 AM Post #6 |
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Err, yeah, but numbering is still only polite, err. Thats my excuse and I'm sticking to it. |
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| Alan Bates | Mar 24 2006, 01:57 AM Post #7 |
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Let me help you out. The First Comic The Second Comic The Third Comic Not the Fourth Comic The Fourth Comic The Number after the Fourth Comic The Sixth comic Comic number 7 The second to last comic The last of the bunch |
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| Redheero | Mar 24 2006, 01:58 AM Post #8 |
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Heh, I've always wondered how you can turn links into other words, how do you do that? |
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| Alan Bates | Mar 24 2006, 01:59 AM Post #9 |
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Note: for the following example, replace { and } with [ and ] {url=http://s4.invisionfree.com/Captain_SNES/index.php?showtopic=1180&st=0&#entry9715240}Insert text here{/url} |
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| Redheero | Mar 24 2006, 02:04 AM Post #10 |
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Thanks :lol: Thats gonna help me out a lot! |
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| Cevian | Mar 24 2006, 02:10 AM Post #11 |
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3rd Comic edited. |
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| mordain | Mar 24 2006, 03:47 AM Post #12 |
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Up above the 'enter your post' box, there's a button labeled "http://". Click that, and it's self-explanatory... Also, interesting, Cevian... I'm not sure where you're going with it, but not bad. |
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| Cevian | Mar 24 2006, 03:54 AM Post #13 |
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Thanks. |
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| White Meteo | Mar 24 2006, 07:25 AM Post #14 |
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pretty interesting stuff, but there's a lot your not taking advantage of. like menus! |
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| Cevian | Mar 24 2006, 07:26 AM Post #15 |
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menus? |
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| White Meteo | Mar 24 2006, 07:28 AM Post #16 |
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yeah. RPG menues. Wehn I read it I thought one would pop up and freak out rock. none did. I also thought he would have been freaked out by the strange floating text. he wasn't. I'm just saying that in an RPG world with RPG mechanics there's a lot you can make fun of. |
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| Cevian | Mar 24 2006, 07:31 AM Post #17 |
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Rock gets his Menu later, this was just the intro battle. He wasn't paying attebtion to the floating text, yet. |
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| Cevian | Apr 10 2006, 06:09 AM Post #18 |
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Updates: No new comics, but I edited the 1st panel of comic # 0004 so it's better than basic white. View it here: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0004.png ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'll work on improving the Pwnage attack next. |
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| Cevian | Apr 11 2006, 04:15 AM Post #19 |
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Updates: I combined the old comics #8 and #9 into a double length comic and edited the Pwnage to look better. I made a new comic to replace the assimilated comic #9. The comics: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0008.png http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0009.png |
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| Cevian | Apr 14 2006, 06:01 AM Post #20 |
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Update: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y271/Cevian/Comic/0010.png Comic 10!!! So... Much... Text... Word... Helped... With... Spellcheacking... |
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