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| Horrible Fanfic contest entries; Abandon sanity, all ye who enter here... | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 29 2006, 04:39 AM (498 Views) | |
| LuppyLuptonium | Apr 29 2006, 04:39 AM Post #1 |
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Fruitfucker Knows Best |
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| femmesimonbelmont | Apr 29 2006, 12:32 PM Post #2 |
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you know you love it.
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whoops, I'll post this over here, too. Entering the found-it portion of the contest with one of the more childhood raping entries I can remember finding. Explicity rating is definitely a five. Only thing it doesn't contain is violence and gore. Not safe for work or sanity |
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Mrs. Limburger : Crashing, and banging, all kinds of weird noises. Howling, moaning, frightful grunting, things falling out of closets, all over the place! Peter : Sounds like my weekend. -- The Real Ghostbusters, "The Hole in the Wall Gang" "Eat if you're hungry...punch if you're mad...and then... when you're wearing glasses, PRETEND TO BE INTELLIGENT!!" -- Masaru Hananakajima "Never has suicide been more appealing, until I realized how appealing murder would be." -- RTM | |
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| White Meteo | Apr 29 2006, 12:36 PM Post #3 |
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I'll post it here too so it doesn't get lost. The Teachings of Squirell Girl, part one. The Teachings of Squirell Girl, part two. now if you'll excuse me, I gotta go wash my brain with bleach. |
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| Robotech Master | Apr 29 2006, 09:37 PM Post #4 |
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Two hour warning, and alan, what's your AIM so we can hook up and dicuss who wins? |
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"Death is a primitive concept, I prefer to think of them as battling evil, in another dimension!" -Gary Gygax http://tv.zeroboy.net/springtime Check out Red (White Meteos) and I's livestream! | |
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| Robotech Master | Apr 29 2006, 10:14 PM Post #5 |
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The only thing that might block you from winning FSB, is that the story was more about Betty fucking a bunch of dogs then it was about Yuri. |
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"Death is a primitive concept, I prefer to think of them as battling evil, in another dimension!" -Gary Gygax http://tv.zeroboy.net/springtime Check out Red (White Meteos) and I's livestream! | |
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| LuppyLuptonium | Apr 29 2006, 10:23 PM Post #6 |
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did anyone else enter the write it contest? |
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| Cran | Apr 29 2006, 10:57 PM Post #7 |
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Roxas!
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I'm whipping up my story. It'll probably be a photo finish to get it posted on time, and I'm gonna have to kill myself when the contest is over, but... |
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"When the sun goes down, the stars come out like the ghosts of yesterday, So drink'em down, 'cause some things never change. Baby sing, get loud. We ain't gonna fuck around. When the sun goes down, let me hear you say...this is my town." ~Hollywood Undead, My Town It's been fun guys. Hasta. | |
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| Cran | Apr 29 2006, 11:50 PM Post #8 |
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Roxas!
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Finished. This story is based on the ending of Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories, so there be spoilers for it. Mostly Reverse Rebirth. This story contains the utter annahilation of childhood memories and memories currently in the making. Contains rape and beastiality. This counts as my first lemon, so I'm nervous, and I want to shoot myself for writing this, so I guess that makes me biased when I give this 4 or 4.5/5 on the ick rating. http://www.savefile.com/files/1675362 [Edit] Melodrama cut from post. |
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"When the sun goes down, the stars come out like the ghosts of yesterday, So drink'em down, 'cause some things never change. Baby sing, get loud. We ain't gonna fuck around. When the sun goes down, let me hear you say...this is my town." ~Hollywood Undead, My Town It's been fun guys. Hasta. | |
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| Alan Bates | Apr 30 2006, 12:00 AM Post #9 |
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I don't have AIM, I use MSN and yahoo and you should be able to reach me though those little buttons at the bottom iof this post. |
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| Zap Rowsdower | Apr 30 2006, 01:19 AM Post #10 |
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The artist formerly known as Randomlurker
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A Discword slash. Find it entry. |
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| LuppyLuptonium | Apr 30 2006, 01:25 AM Post #11 |
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changed the first post so the story that started this thread is back in it, only linked so there is no gay Penny Arcade inspired sex on the board, |
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| Alan Bates | Apr 30 2006, 01:33 AM Post #12 |
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The post links directly back to the post that it links from. |
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| LuppyLuptonium | Apr 30 2006, 02:55 AM Post #13 |
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fizixed |
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| Cyrus | Apr 30 2006, 09:08 AM Post #14 |
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Okay, I've been trying to avoid this for sanity's sake, but then... I just had to. This's a find-it entry. I give you... the Slave Bear of Care-a-Lot. Now then, I feel dirty just writing that. I'm gonna go do something nice. edit: This should seem pretty obvious, but I felt I should add it in. VERY NSFW! For the love of god! |
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| femmesimonbelmont | Apr 30 2006, 10:05 AM Post #15 |
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you know you love it.
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*FOL* Cy, that was HILARIOUS. "DO YOU LIKE PIZZA?! I LIKE PIZZA!" |
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Mrs. Limburger : Crashing, and banging, all kinds of weird noises. Howling, moaning, frightful grunting, things falling out of closets, all over the place! Peter : Sounds like my weekend. -- The Real Ghostbusters, "The Hole in the Wall Gang" "Eat if you're hungry...punch if you're mad...and then... when you're wearing glasses, PRETEND TO BE INTELLIGENT!!" -- Masaru Hananakajima "Never has suicide been more appealing, until I realized how appealing murder would be." -- RTM | |
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| Robotech Master | May 1 2006, 09:09 PM Post #16 |
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... I think that wins. |
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"Death is a primitive concept, I prefer to think of them as battling evil, in another dimension!" -Gary Gygax http://tv.zeroboy.net/springtime Check out Red (White Meteos) and I's livestream! | |
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| Robotech Master | May 2 2006, 08:51 PM Post #17 |
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Ok, my offical vote is that Cy wins the Find It! and that Cran wins the Write It! Cy's story had just the right amount of stupidity, horror, and just plain old redicilousness in order to make a truely bad fic. Cran and Luppy were really really close. I really just went with cran because his was slightly longer. FSB had the worst overall story, but I couldn't read all of it due to it's massive length, and what I did read only contained minor bits of yuri, and was mostly about Betty fucking dogs. That sentence is my sentence to hell. Hahaha. I love puns. So Alan, your thoughts/votes? |
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"Death is a primitive concept, I prefer to think of them as battling evil, in another dimension!" -Gary Gygax http://tv.zeroboy.net/springtime Check out Red (White Meteos) and I's livestream! | |
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| Alan Bates | May 3 2006, 01:15 AM Post #18 |
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Sorry. I'm sick at the moment and haven't brought myself to read Cyrus's yet. I'll get back to you. |
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| Robotech Master | May 3 2006, 01:42 AM Post #19 |
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Damn, that sucks. Don't worry about it, and just do it as soon as you're able. |
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"Death is a primitive concept, I prefer to think of them as battling evil, in another dimension!" -Gary Gygax http://tv.zeroboy.net/springtime Check out Red (White Meteos) and I's livestream! | |
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| Alan Bates | May 3 2006, 11:28 PM Post #20 |
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Okay. The coments from ... me. Luppy's fic: Too obviously a parody or troll fic, and actually some what amusing. femmesimonbelmont's fic: Too long and suprsiningly boring considering the subject matter. It also starts with character profiles. I hate it when fics do that. Red's fic: Read it before. What's horrible. Just kinda so-so and almost kinda-sorta in-character, maybe, if you qunit a little. Cran's fic: Decent (or bad) depending on your point of view, but when I went to download it to read again, it wouldn't work for me. Still, it seemed like it was trying a tad too hard for the shock value. Jewthulhu's fic: Almost well written but the ending seemed like it was tacked on from another story. There's no real cohession to the story. It feels like two seperate ones tacked together. Cyrus's fic hit paydirt. It was actually well written (from a technical standpoint if not form a story one) and it actually flet like the writters was dead serious about what they were doing. |
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