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The fan-critique thread; For the P-chan'sand Mark Moores around
Topic Started: Sep 11 2006, 09:02 PM (814 Views)
Algasir
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It can't be as bad as that one hentai I saw.

Wait...yeah it can. :P
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Alphawolf55
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Just Jon,Sep 14 2006
02:45 AM
Alphawolf55,Sep 13 2006
06:53 PM
BTW: Am I the only one who haas not only read up but has kept up to date on it?

Yes. Because it sucks. You want us to keep reading something that has so little chance of raising from the ashes of terrible?

And besides, I just... Ugh. Seeing childhood heroes urinating on things and one another and then enjoying it and then so many other fluids... SOme I don't think the human body MAKES.

Oh, and the Mega-whang.

Are you talking about the N-fans or the hentai?

Because I'm talking about N-fans, but that comment strangely fits both..
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I dare you to look at this and not smile at least a little.
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Just Jon
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Because it's a running theme over there. "How can we make something so awful people not only stop reading this, but feel the need to warn off others? Also, how can I get off on it?" Really, reading between the lines becomes crazy.
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Alan Bates
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Found this and thought I'd share it in case anybody was intrested. it's not the best MST and it's FAR from the best fic, but it's not often you run across Captain N lemons (porn fics for those of you not into the lingo).

Of course, it's probably a GOOD thing you don't run into them often. Still the whole thing is somewhat ammusing.

http://www.geocities.com/mysterysciencefre...dex/cavern.html
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demener
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Intresting site. As for the lemon... o_0

They're probably all just as awful as that huh.
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femmesimonbelmont
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Alan-- that was pretty funny...
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Nothing's as funny as the "stinger" line from that fic though...
Mrs. Limburger : Crashing, and banging, all kinds of weird noises. Howling, moaning, frightful grunting, things falling out of closets, all over the place!

Peter : Sounds like my weekend.
-- The Real Ghostbusters, "The Hole in the Wall Gang"

"Eat if you're hungry...punch if you're mad...and then... when you're wearing glasses, PRETEND TO BE INTELLIGENT!!" -- Masaru Hananakajima

"Never has suicide been more appealing, until I realized how appealing murder would be." -- RTM
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Alan Bates
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Another Captain N fic.

This one is highly inacurate and quite toungue in cheek, but I think that's where it's charm comes from.

I didn't much care for the ending though.

http://vggtsworld.ta-host.com/stories/multi/captain_n.htm
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femmesimonbelmont
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That was interesting.

and you're right; the ending did suck.
Mrs. Limburger : Crashing, and banging, all kinds of weird noises. Howling, moaning, frightful grunting, things falling out of closets, all over the place!

Peter : Sounds like my weekend.
-- The Real Ghostbusters, "The Hole in the Wall Gang"

"Eat if you're hungry...punch if you're mad...and then... when you're wearing glasses, PRETEND TO BE INTELLIGENT!!" -- Masaru Hananakajima

"Never has suicide been more appealing, until I realized how appealing murder would be." -- RTM
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This felt like the propper place to vent this. I am ressurecting this thread to allow people to critique things they are fans of. I personally am a fan of the entire entertainment industry.

I think I figured ourt what the hell is wrong with 30 Rock and The Class.

These are two decent shows that seem to be mostly funny, well written, and so on. I like the style and texture of the writing... But there is not enough of it. 30 Rock seems to devote too much of it's time to pauses. Pauses are great for drama and building siuspense, but 30 Rock seems to be using them to make up for time. I just watched last weeks episode where Tina Fey's character is set up with a lesbien. It was a good effort, but really could have been 10 minutes shorter without cutting any diolog.

Then There is the class. The class has a problem with establishing shots. This is caused vbecause the Class follows what was an entire class of third graders after they end up meeting again several years later. This is a surprisingly good concept. It works well on screen. The only problem is when they switch groups they do a straight establishing shot. then after 2 or three beats get to the funny. Also they do pause after the jokes that arn't so good and keep going on the ones that are.

When I wriite to an audience I think I am going forabout the same atention span of a 10 year old kid. There is a reason for this. 10 year olds have buy minds. They are constantly thinking of the latest cartton, theiir card game, whatever sportts they play, playing with their friends.

Children have a very short attention span and are very hard to keep interested in something for more than 20 seconds.

Now I know you are all wondering why I am bringing up this metaphor about as much as you were wondering earlier why I would post this here instead of the Brain Rot thread.

The point is these two shows are doing things that make the viewer lose attention long enough to take away from some really funny moments. This is in turn hurting them and deteriorating their respective products as a whole.
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Um, thanks for the post, Luppy, and the thoughtful insights, but this thread is intended specifically for critique of fan creations, hopefully mostly captain N or captain SNES related.
Mrs. Limburger : Crashing, and banging, all kinds of weird noises. Howling, moaning, frightful grunting, things falling out of closets, all over the place!

Peter : Sounds like my weekend.
-- The Real Ghostbusters, "The Hole in the Wall Gang"

"Eat if you're hungry...punch if you're mad...and then... when you're wearing glasses, PRETEND TO BE INTELLIGENT!!" -- Masaru Hananakajima

"Never has suicide been more appealing, until I realized how appealing murder would be." -- RTM
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I appologise, I wanted to start psychoanalising the entirety of the entertainmenrt industry, saw this thread, and I liked the name...
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