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| Tweet Topic Started: May 17 2011, 11:40 AM (154 Views) | |
| Seishin | May 17 2011, 11:40 AM Post #1 |
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*note: Kage told me to put this up so he could get it out of the way.* Name: Hajimari (AKA Haji, or Maji) Age: As old as he can be. Weight: 8000 lbs. Height: 10' at it's shoulders, 40' long from the tip of it's tail to the tip of it's nose. Appearance: When looking at Haji, the thing that sticks out the most is that he is a giant cat. He has raven black scales, that shine silver when light touches them, making it appear as though he has dancing tiger stripes. His mane is dark brown, with strands of green. His eyes are bright gold, with the black of the eye appearing on the outside, and the colored part appearing in the center in the form of a shapeless golden cloud that resemples a solar eclipse, which focuses into a slit when angered. His paws end in foot long bone white claws that are sharp as hell, and he has what looks like kelp growing from his back like a horse's mane flowing down to his 3 tails which twist together as if rope creating a single tail. His chakra is white. Personality: Haji is kind to his friends, and unmerciful to his enemies. He's fierce, yet the epitome of honor. He's like a zen-like samurai, humble until pissed, and than deadly until calm. In respect to Tsubame, he sees the kid as an infant who was given a bomb. Not yet mature enough to handle his power, and Haji treats Tsubame as if he were his father. Guiding him towards the path of honor, and on occasion reinforces Tsubame's habit of never stopping, especially in combat! Haji likes very few things, animals, nature, challenges, and honor. His list of dislikes is vast, people looking directly into his eyes, people talking back to him, dishonor, weaklings, discourtesy, and people in general. He's kind of stuck up, and has the mentality of a god... because he is one. He believes that he deserves to be worshiped, and that everybody should kneel down and smooch on his scaly feet. Power/Ability: Haji was known as a god of Nature. Kind to his friends, yet deadly and unforgiving to his enemies. Following is a short list of his main abilities.
Strengths: - Excellent Speed - Awareness (Excellent) - Excellent Agility - Tactical Genius (Excellent) Weaknesses: - Honor Bound (Absolutely Horrible): If he can be tricked into giving his word, there's potentially nothing that he won't do. - Sensitive Hearing (Absolutely Horrible): His hearing is too good, being effected much more severely by sound. Sound based attacks effect him, even if he were to wear earplugs, and normal conversation is painful (like a headache). - Elemental Resistance: Raiton (Absolutely Horrible): His scales conduct electricity like nothing else. - Impudent (Absolutely Horrible): Haji doesn't think before he speaks, and he always speaks his mind. History: Hajimaji is a god creature, personifying nature. Born out of the ground itself, and blessed with dominion over it. He is a creature of honor, prestige, and virtue. Yet at the end of the day he's still equivalent to a god, and as such believes that he is deserving of reverence. His past is riddled with mystery, and questions to which there are no answers. But let's start at the beginning. He was born when a sliver of the world's core broke off, and the earth gave it life. Wind blew over it, giving it breath, and Hajimaji was born. He rose from the earth, and took providence over it. Giving life to the forests of Zekiou and the animals within with one mighty roar. The wind from that roar still flows to this day, giving life to the creations of this world. Millennia past and outsiders came, seeking to take his land and his power. Haji refused, and with alot of effort was able to force the beings out. A war soon broke out among the god creatures and the gods. The final blow landed, and the winds ceased, the air grew could, and a rift openned that brought new beings to the world. As this rift opened it transformed Haji into a wandering spirit and slammed him into a young boy's face. This young boy's name is Ikuzuyo Tsubame. A seal formed over his left arm, for some reason, trapping the god within him. The two are now intertwined, there fates shared. Will a friendship, or a hatred grow between them? Edited by Seishin, May 18 2011, 08:54 AM.
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| Kagemaru | May 17 2011, 12:05 PM Post #2 |
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Shodaime
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So i'm just gonna tell you. I like this! Your title was messed up so i'm gonna state it here, YOU are the Jinchuuriki, the being inside of you is a god creature. Not that big a deal, but just sayin for futures sake yes? History, and personality. I love them both appearance could use just a bit more in my opinion but meh. I'm gonna leave this up for 24 hours for people to look at and get a good feel for what the app is supposed to look like before I accept it. That and give the other two admins a look see as well. |
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| Seishin | May 17 2011, 12:34 PM Post #3 |
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Gotcha. *points and winks* Added more fluff to the appearance, and FIRST!! Oh and thanks for looking over this Kage. ^^ |
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| Kagemaru | May 17 2011, 07:02 PM Post #4 |
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Shodaime
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So after going through it with Ice and Enki we believe that Gods should have one element. And Honestly i'd stick to the forest theme you've got here ^^ But its up to you. Just to make them a bit less hax. |
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| Mew | May 17 2011, 11:45 PM Post #5 |
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Apocs Smex Slave
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Yep yep on the one element thing. Also, for an AH weakness in Sensitive Hearing, be aware that every loud noise is going to cripple him o-o I'm going to expect that if a tag goes off near him, his ears start to bleed and hes in blinding pain. They way you have it listed makes it sound like it would only bother him like a fly would to a horse. Needs to be a bit worse then that to classify as AH -nodsnods- |
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| BlackMage | May 18 2011, 05:47 AM Post #6 |
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Elemental Bending Champion
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No problem, Imma talk to Kage about the power thing on MSN, but I'm taking out the wind power for now. I'm debating between keeping the fire power and the wood power. |
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| Seishin | May 18 2011, 05:49 AM Post #7 |
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Sorry for that. BM and I share the same computer, and i forgot to log out of him. Did the wind thingy, and changed sensitive hearing to stealth. Edited by Seishin, May 18 2011, 05:54 AM.
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| Kagemaru | May 18 2011, 08:34 AM Post #8 |
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Shodaime
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Stealth isn't a weakness for this thing considering how big he is Tsu :/ That and Stealth is capped at bad as a weakness. I like your ability. Just fix the stealth weakness and this will get accepted sir. ^^ |
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| Kagemaru | May 18 2011, 08:59 AM Post #9 |
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Shodaime
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Okay a God that is bad against sound. EPIC!!!! Approved |
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Your title was messed up so i'm gonna state it here, YOU are the Jinchuuriki, the being inside of you is a god creature. Not that big a deal, but just sayin for futures sake yes? 
1:34 AM Jul 11