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[God Creature] Sugiouraikami
Topic Started: May 17 2011, 10:56 PM (123 Views)
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Name: Sugiouraikami [ Lit: Awesome Lightning God]

Age: 300 Years old

Weight: Unimaginable

Height: 300 Meters long 30 Meters wide

Appearance: Sugi is a leviathan, a titan among titans, god amongst gods. He stands the longest of the God creatures of Zekiou. His body is full of sharp scales, that touching him would cause the limb of that human to just fall off. He’s blue all around, and has glowing blue eyes, with over a hundred teeth within his mouth. He has sharp whiskers that go across the side of his face, and spiny sharp spikes that go down his back. He has gilled spikes that go down his neck as well, he looks as if he has on a giant snake armor because when he gets angry the plates on his back turn up, and put him on the defense, his arms are like toothpicks compared to its body.

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Personality: He prides himself of being the true god of Zekiou, he looks down at everyone and respects no one that can’t prove themselves his equal. In order to get him to shut up, you must beat him in combat and there is only one man in history that has been able to silence his rage. In order to even get the time of day of this beast you must be on par with the power of a God. No other way, no choice about it. He refuses to show respect to lesser beings.

Power/Ability:
Scales sharp enough to cut upon contact.
Godly manipulation of Lightning.
His roar is capable of causing a Tsunami. [This is just with the force of the roar, think of how earthquakes do it from under water]
He is capable of spawning lightning around him with a flash of blue light through his eyes.

Strengths:
Excellent Chakra pool
Excellent Strength
Great Endurance
Intimidating

Weaknesses:
AB Horrible Speed [Can you imagine moving all that body?]
Very bad eye sight [Seeing as how normally creatures his size can see miles away, he can only see one hundred meters before things blur.]
Bad poison weakness +2
Horrible resistance to wind [He's the god of lightning, wind is one of the only things that get straight through to his under belly and can do AlOT of damage upon initial contact]
Arrogant

History: Sugi, The God of Lightning. This god calls himself the creator and claims that before him there was nothing, he claims to have brought himself and the creatures that walk this land with him, he claimed all as his, and was bound and determined to prove it. Before humans walked this land, he challenged all creatures that came before him, placed himself at the top of the pyramid amongst the lesser creatures.

He found himself to be near unstoppable and was determined to rule this plain with an electrified roar, and make the world break beneath his body. This was his motive, but one day something strange happened, a creature in which he had never seen before walked this land, claimed he was a human but Sugi could tell he was more than that, he could feel it within his spine this human had a little fight about him, and the human actually wanted to prove that.

This human was said to have went directly up to Sugi and challenged him to a one on one fight for the very land that Sugi claimed to be his own. Sugi wanted to know what he got in return, the human offered himself and all the chakra that came with him, but Sugi had to give up the same in return. Upon agreeing to these terms a circle like no other with four symbols upon it appeared under the two and the battle for this land had begun.

The two were said to have fought for three earth days, constantly neither holding back this human was indeed more than a human. He was a God himself, he like Sugi had the power to create, and the power to destroy, sugi acknowledged this. In the end Sugi was defeated, and he was sealed away. When Sugi asked what his power was gonna be used for the human replied. ”Your gonna help me create a village, there may not be humans amongst this land, but I feel like me more will appear and when they do, I want them to be able to find themselves a home”

With that the Night Country was separated from the mainland, and created and with the last of the man and this gods power a Jutsu like no other was cast upon the night country, creating eternal night upon the village and with that the man disappeared off the face of the earth, and now Sugis new adventure is now beginning…
Edited by Kagemaru, May 18 2011, 09:08 PM.
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Mew
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You have ranged accuracy as a weakness, yet he manipulates lighting. Wouldn't that fall under that area? o-o

Also, can you go into a bit for that wind weakness? Or describe it rather.

Those be my only two issues, and I'm good.
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Okay got rid of ranged accuracy, you were right on that one. Described the wind weakness.
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With those changes, this looks good enough to me.

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