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Hayato Mori [DONE]
Topic Started: Sep 18 2011, 07:42 PM (156 Views)
Akashi
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Name: Hayato Mori

Age: 15

Date of birth: May 12

Appearance:

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Weight: 52 kg

Height: 153cm

Blood type: O

Personality:

Hayato can be known as a scary and quiet character. He's sometimes rude if you try to tick him off. Also, he can pull out pranks for those who he despise on just for the heck of it. Also, he can REALLY lose his temper if you bother him too much But however, he acknowledge others for their strength and intelligence during a battle, as for he would like to learn more about them. But however, despite often being shown with his playful smile, Kichirou can be sometimes seemingly apathetic to the suffering of others. But however, he cares little for others, and simply considers people to be "toys" or "tools" he can sacrifice in order to get what he wants. But, Kichirou can sometimes care for his team (Depending on who's on his team). Also, Kichirou usually laughs like Ushishishi. and so on. Last but not lease. the only thing he'd truly care about is his family, and friends, but nothing else more than that. But then again, he can be a Mr. Know-it-all and can be a little cocky at some cost.

Likes:

Friends: Friends are one thing. To Hayato, friends can be like a family to him.

Training: Nothing says like Training to become stronger!

Having Fun: Having fun with friends is the most important thing in life.. well to Hayato



Dislikes:

Crowds: As said before, Hayato is a quiet type, so there's a chance he wouldn't "Fit in the crowd".

A friend losing a life: Friends are like family to Hayato, which he truly cares about.

Popular kids: Hayato sees kids who are popular, "selfish idiots".

Fighting Style: He's normally a hand to hand fighting style/Melee, but he's mostly a Karate type (If those are the same thing)

Weaknesses:

Sakura: Like cherry blossom trees, Hayato can have an allergic reaction

Accepting Defeat: To Hayato, being defeated is like losing something he truly cares about.

Mist Flames: Hayato can be confused very easily by Illusions.

Flame: Storm

History:

Hayato was born as a quiet, well mannered boy. He used to be someone some people like, due for his behavior. All though back then, he was still a little trickster. He never was really the talkative type. He can be innocent by his looks, but deep down he has a dark side. However, his parents would lock him up in his room for a day as a punishment, which really didn't effect Hayato. In fact, he'd always sneak out from the window, as his parents never even bothered trying to check on him, thinking that Hayato would actually stay in his room. But then again, after those years, Hayato was really born as a nasty child. However, he made a little few friends because of that behavior. so then on, he continued to do nasty pranks, which he was gaining more and more friends. But however, after two years later, he lost a gallon of friends due for his tricks being a little overboard. Soon, Hayato began to think of why he was born this way, and how he can change it. So then, at the age of eleven, he decided to talk to his parents about his behavior. Soon, after another year, Hayato was known as a quiet person, but scary a little at the same time. But then, he gained a little bit of new friends, which was good, but then again after, he still would use some people as little toys to get what he wants. But out of all those years, he's a really good friend, and will do whatever it takes to get what he wants, besides using people. But all though, it was a habit of using people to Hayato, which wasn't really known of why.


Roleplay Sample:

Hayato was in bed, sighing. He was looking up at the ceiling. He was wearing a black short sleeved shirt that's blank, with black shorts with two pockets, and including black sneakers. People would call him emo just because he wears black a lot, but it's really because Hayato's favorite color is black. But still, he wouldn't mind at all, in fact. It didn't really matter if Hayato's emo or not. But, he can't get the horrible image out of his head. Hayato kept on sighing in bed. Ugh.. no matter how much I try, I still can't get that crappy image out of my head... I think I need some fresh air or something. Maybe that should at least get that image out of my mind. He thought, as he decided to sit up, grunting. He can already feel his back craking as he sat up. He turned to the right side of his bed. He got up from his bed, stretching. He looked around his small room, blinking for a moment. He shook his head, then walked towards the door. But, he looked back at the black alarm clock that read, "8:30 AM", which meant Hayato's late to school. He didn't care if he was gonna be late or not. "Well... I guess I'm gonna skip school for now. Before I get bullied as usual." He mumbled, as he pulled the door opened, then walked out on the hallway. Finally, he slammed the door on his way out, mumbling. Another day.. another day in hell.

Other: I can do better... but sadly I'm totally busy >_<
Edited by Akashi, Sep 18 2011, 10:09 PM.
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Kyra

Eh your writing of your Personality and History is really rough, read it out loud and look over it again. Character is kinda a mary-sue...Dead Parents/Orphan at young age and taking care of himself/Bullied and misunderstood, pretty cliche.

If your busy I understand why it is the way it is - I will accept it though, but I would like to see some edits sometime to at least Personality and History, its a pretty rough read no offense.
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Akashi
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Ehh.. knew you'd say that. >_< but anyway, fixed
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Kyra

You could of kept your parents dying, but have some kind of link to why they would of been assassinated. It looks much better I think. So you finished completely now or would you like to continue editing and what not?
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Akashi
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Nah @The parents dying. I used that WAY too much on other RP sites >_<. But yes, I'm done.
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Kyra

xD

Alrighty; You are accepted - Don't forget to check the Shoutbox out ;)
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