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A'den Vo'trer; The ranger of the woods
Topic Started: Jan 11 2011, 04:32 PM (319 Views)
DukeAtreides

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Character name: A'den Vo'trer (Translation: The eyes from above)
Gender: Male
Race: Wood Elven
Eye color: Blue
Occupation: Hunter (Looking to open a guild or a shop)
Height: 4 foot 9 inches
Weight: 112 lbs
Distinguishing features: Pointed elven ears, short height


Equipment
 

A'den's bow
Crafted from the Lorien trees of his homeland A'den's bow is perfect size for his height, the bow string crafted from a fine elvish twine making it nearly impossible to break. The bow is detailed by various blue markings.
Iron arrows
Crafted from spruce wood of Elderbridge, these arrows are easily enough to be snapped within two fingers but deadly enough to kill with a velocity.
A'den's robes
Crafted from a fine linen, the close speak both comfort and elegance
Satchel
The satchel contains survival tools such as a loaf of bread, drinking pouch and a small knife for skinning.


Strengths
 

Marksman: Extremely dexterous with his bow, A'den can shoot a target over great distances.
Tracking: With the eyes of an eagle and the ears of a fox A'den is especially adept at tracking enemies and animals.
Horsemanship: Although A'den has not seen a horse in sometime since the leaving of his homeland, he is an exceptional horseman and a great shot from horseback.
Agility: Being small, and light footed A'den is quick on his feet.


Weaknesses
 

Height: Being naturally small allows A'den to be thrown around easily in fights.
Close quarters: Being a talented archer A'den has not had much time spent around blades making him a poor fighter when in close quarters combat.
Magic: A'den has not had much time to spend devoting to religion or the Arcane arts making him useless in the field of Magic.
Past Injuries: Although an excellent climber, as a child he stumbled and broke a leg. The bone was set, but it was never quite the same. He moves slightly slower, and has a slight limp.
Opinions: is opposed to death as it pertains to sentient beings. He will not kill unless it is absolutely necessary. This squeamishness has made him somewhat of a disgrace in the eyes of some. However, this weakness does not pertain to anything that came out of the Parenthas Portal.


Goals
 

A'den's goals include opening a new guild fit for archers and hunters of Tarinor and seeking out justice in ridding of the Daemon spawn which constantly flood the land! Also, he hopes to maybe open a fletchery shop one day
Edited by DukeAtreides, Jan 11 2011, 06:50 PM.
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Alaster
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Expand.
Refer to the biography template. (That is the bare minimum of what we require in any one biography.)
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Seprak

You seem a little tall for a wood elf. ^-^
Edited by Seprak, Jan 11 2011, 04:37 PM.
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DukeAtreides

Bump, redone
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Seprak

Looks good ;)
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Lucas
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You can't start with weapons, so as long as you get rid of those you're good. Also, add 50 gold.

It would also be preferable if you added a more obvious weakness, but I suppose you're semi balanced as is. ;P
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Lucas
Jan 11 2011, 05:09 PM
You can't start with weapons, so as long as you get rid of those you're good. Also, add 50 gold.

It would also be preferable if you added a more obvious weakness, but I suppose you're semi balanced as is. ;P
If you look at the accepted biographies lucas everyone has at least one weapon.
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Weapons are fine so long as they are not extensive. (By the means of power or crafting. i.e. a GOLDEN sword over one of iron.. or a Bow made from The Tree of Life or somethin', over a bow made from a regular oak..)
Lucas, something for you to knock out of your general moderating abilities:

Try not to be overly.. direct.. about the rules. Some rules can be bend to an extent.
The item rule is one. Obviously you can have more than just the norm if your background permits it-- and of course you can have a wooden bowl or somethin' minor you know? A dagger and bow would be one of those things to permit. Like I said it won't be a God's Bow or a God's Shank or anything..
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DukeAtreides

So is this biography accepted then? My bow is just a simple Elven design, like no other bow. Except the blue lines <3
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Alaster
Jan 11 2011, 05:22 PM
Weapons are fine so long as they are not extensive. (By the means of power or crafting. i.e. a GOLDEN sword over one of iron.. or a Bow made from The Tree of Life or somethin', over a bow made from a regular oak..)
Lucas, something for you to knock out of your general moderating abilities:

Try not to be overly.. direct.. about the rules. Some rules can be bend to an extent.
The item rule is one. Obviously you can have more than just the norm if your background permits it-- and of course you can have a wooden bowl or somethin' minor you know? A dagger and bow would be one of those things to permit. Like I said it won't be a God's Bow or a God's Shank or anything..
I'm not personally against having a basic weapon or anything, but Alex said it, and what Alex says goes.

Ask him about it.
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