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Neo Carner feedback; :O
Topic Started: Mar 1 2015, 10:46 PM (206 Views)
That Darn Seph
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I think I did this once for Neo when he first started in FIW like five years ago. :o Now I return! So what does everyone think of the Dual Crown Champion? Anything I could do better? Anything I do too much? What can I do to improve?
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Cut his hair.
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It adds to his Messiah Complex though. He is the King of Crowns :o

Also I saw you said some stuff about Neo in other topics >.> So I know you're not being stingy with feedback.

Maybe the day Neo gets his just desserts he'll lose his hair?

Or....

Johnny Amazing vs Neo Carner, Hair vs Hair Match for the DC :o
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I was thinking Neo Carner vs. Rurik Krychek. Is there any way we can get them both to lose?

Another option is Nathaniel vs. Carner and during the feud Kim has Nathaniel beat him up and hold him down for her to cut off his hair.

I don't really have any feedback, though. I mean, you're the Dual Crown and a pretty dominant one. What kind of feedback is there to give someone like that? Keep doing you.
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T.T I dunno, maybe I wanna hear what everyone thinks of Neo. I mean, I get he's an asshole but you kinda have to be when you're heel. I'm not trying to be the likeable heel, I'm trying to be the 2003 HHH heel that is just a despicable person.
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The little banter between Emily andf Neo was fun. If that counts as feedback. :P Though I keep forgetting...who won with the last word? Hm...too hard to remember. :P

Pressuring you to move into a heel position was fun too. Remember that? Saying how it would be so awesome if Neo turned on Blink at her wedding? That was also fun, Meadowlark Lemon. lol

But yeah. as far as Blink and Neo, he's been pretty much the obnoxious heel type. I don't know, I think he's been doing alright. :) Hopefully this helps some, not the best on feedback giving. lol

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Turning heel on Blink at her wedding was my idea and you know it!

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That Darn Seph,Mar 1 2015
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I'm not trying to be the likeable heel, I'm trying to be the 2003 HHH heel that is just a despicable person.

I think that's definitely coming across in the stuff you've done that I've seen. Admittedly, I don't think I can be a whole lot of help in terms of feedback because I'm one of the newbs and I haven't been here long. But I will say I think that aspect of his heel side is definitely coming across, exactly like HHH in 2003. Neo and Nathaniel have quite a lot in common in that sense. Lol.

But yeah, it's like Lita said, you're the Dual Crown champ and a really dominant champ at that, so it's kinda hard to give feedback when you're clearly doing everything right as far as that goes.
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Is that your way of saying we should form FIW's version of The Two Man Power Trip? >.>
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Is that your way of saying we should form FIW's version of The Two Man Power Trip? >.>

That'd be awesome. I think they would take the phrase "drunk with power" to a whole other level.
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Turning heel on Blink at her wedding was my idea and you know it!

True, as I just spent the past twenty minutes sifting through my PMs to see (Damn I can't wait til my back gets better :P) but I peer pressured you into doing it as you questioned it at first. :P Eventually.

Also, as I told you before, if they're going for a short haired Joker for Suicide Squad (though I can't see why not) then we're getting a short haired Neo. :D Either that or Blink will be revealing something about Neo's past. Maybe a quick visit to the Dallas Buyers Club is in order? Hmmmmmmmm??? lol

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Oh my God....Drunk With Power sounds like the best Tag Team name ever. Especially since it's like a rub in the face of what's currently going on. Ethan got his steroid scandal, and Mungrel is a recovering alcoholic. It writes itself. BRILLIANT!

Sounds like a good idea waiting to be done!

Oh Jo, you'd find a way to give yourself some credit for it wouldn't you? Yeah, I questioned my own ideas then I came to the realization that I was a genius. Then like forever later I hit you up and said I was gonna do it and if it was still cool. :P It happened at YOUR character's wedding, so of course you get partial credit, like 2%...1% maybe >.> lol jk.

Also, you know I can ruin that whole Dallas Buyers Club thing really easily don't you? That isn't really a good threat :P
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Who is he? For super cereal? :P

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Steele Media is looking for a new Bad Girl. They're looking to cancel those ho's.


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>_> Jared Leto cut his hair and beard for his role of the Joker...
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I wouldn't say I like Neo.

But that's because Neo to me is a horrible human being. So, he's doing his job.

I get the 2003 HHH inspiration. Only thing he's really missing is a four-man stable and I could see it perfectly.

But, like I said elsewhere, while your work with him invokes such imagery, it doesn't feel like you're roleplaying Neo roleplaying HHH. Neo is his own man.

A horrible, horrible man.
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So I'm not Dual Crown Champion anymore, you guys can be brutally honest and not keep saying I am where I am because I got something.

Tell me feedback on any of my characters here. :)
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Thanks guys, your kind words were really descriptive and help out a lot. >____>;
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The fuck am I gonna tell you to do? You just had the Dual Crown!

Youi're cool, man. Neo's a total dick with the credibility to back it up. The world is his (and your) oyster. You're definitely clickin', bro.

But if you're not happy with our feedback, just hit up RoughKut and get bitched at for your roleplays being overly-coded. It happened to me a few years back. :P
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I did ask for my other characters to have their backs fed. XD
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Bo-Jack > Neo Carner
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Remember Remember, Neo beat Bo-Jack once, Bo-Jack beat Neo once. Rubber match has yet to happen.
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Do we need a rubber match? I mean Bo beat Neo when it counted and took the UIC.
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Oh yeah, you beat me for the belt. But I still defended Neo's belt and made Bobo tap out.

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