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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 1 2015, 11:53 PM (389 Views) | |
| Jo | Mar 1 2015, 11:53 PM Post #1 |
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Yeah, I feel it be time to ask now too. Mainly because I just sorta feel lost with them. Catherine's just ranting and Terri...I don't know. And Blink is really just drifting. I kinda hoped Blink would keep around the UIC scene a little longer but more people are pumped for an Ethan/Bloodbath match. Aside from Terri trying to get her singles match with Brittany I can't think of much there. Catherine's rants have become more company related for her feud with James but they're not very character developing.Is there anything people can suggest to help alter their course a little? Otherwise I don't know what the hell I'm gonna be doing after the PPV. Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Lita Maivia | Mar 2 2015, 12:27 AM Post #2 |
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Let me start by saying that I came back to FIW hating everyone associated with Steele Media. Harsh, right? Wow. That's terrible. Over time, I have come to... not hate Catherine. Is she my favorite character? No. But does she have potential to become one of my favorite characters? Yeah. I would say that she does have that potential. With Catherine, it comes down very simply to her feeling empty at times. When she goes on a rant, a lot of times she just seems very PMS-y. Like she's just ranting because she's in a pissy mood and wants everyone to know about it. I don't think I've really seen her rant about anything that I could go "Ok, I can see why she's pissed off about that." So, I think finding a story or feud that can give Catherine a reason for her rage would be ideal. I may have missed it because (as I said above) I wasn't a big fan of the Bad Girls when I came back, but it seems she's feuding with James because she just thinks decisions he's made are bad. But I get that a lot of people feel that way about James and that's why his wife is trying to rip the company from him. Also. I don't like when she says "ducking". Blink. Oh, Blink. I can't stand her. I totally get her, but I can't stand her. She's stupid. I don't say that to insult your writing because you write her perfectly the way she's meant to be written... which is lacking intelligence or common sense. She comes off like someone who's a bit slow in the head. Her desperation to make everyone around her happy goes overboard way more than it doesn't. She's like every bad quality about a super babyface rolled into one person. Terri's speech makes me want to jam pencils in my ears. She has the potential to be a fantastic heel, though. Because I really don't like her and I say that in a "she's a heel" way. Wow. Super harsh. I hope people realize just how long I have been working with Jo and how honest I've grown to be with him. He also knows that even if I dislike a character of his, I'm always willing to work with him if the story is workable and I'm available. Because above all else, Jo is passionate about what he writes and always puts in the effort. |
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| Cannonboy | Mar 2 2015, 12:36 AM Post #3 |
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Lita, I completely disagree with you about Blink. Maybe it's ebcasue I'm a prettyshy in real life, but it's refreshing to see someone so introverted be the star attractions of thier stable. The only thing I'll say is that ifeels like Terri is a half-formed Catherine. I want to see where she fits in with the Bad Girls, and I haven't quite gotten there yet. Catherine is dominant and Blink is submissive, but where does Terri fit in? |
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| Lita Maivia | Mar 2 2015, 12:45 AM Post #4 |
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If she were just shy or introverted, I wouldn't have a problem with her. The fact that she overly apologizes and tries to appease people who insult her or even beat her up (to be fair, I don't think this has happened in quite some time) seems like odd behavior for a shy or introverted person to do. I'd rather she go further into her shell and her friends (especially Catherine) to go off on the person who hurt her. |
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| Jo | Mar 2 2015, 12:46 AM Post #5 |
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That's it. Full rage quit. Just kidding.I like writing Catherine but do feel she rants a bit much these days. If it weren't for her interactions with Brittany I think she would've faded into obscurity by now. It would be kinda cool to keep her going so perhaps her first ever singles title can be a major one like the Dual Crown. ![]() Blink...yeah, I've seen views from her on both extremes. To me it's easy to be neutral toward her but once you get sucked in you're one way or the other with her. Those that hate her can hate her with a passion and those that like her can find her adorable. As seen hre. lol I like writing her because she's, what I would consider, the ultimate sell. The perfect counter to Catherine's "banned against new comers" style of approach. Terri is someone that I want to work on and get up to a point where she can become a viable threat. The only problem is I don't have the ideas there in how. But I'm sure something will come. I remember when Jason...um, Drake...um, guy who isn't here anymore said that his biggest complaint with my characters was that it was too hard to tell Catherine and Emily apart. So hopefully Terri and Catherine can separate a little from their personalities. I'd certainly like to shatter the image I've made on Steele Media characters. ![]() All in all, thank you kindly for the feedback. And ducking stays unless someone can suggest another placement for a swear word Catherine can use around Blink. lol Take any suggestions.Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Jo | Mar 2 2015, 12:48 AM Post #6 |
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This came after I posted and very quickly want to point I tried to set up something between Catherine and Neo when Blink was set to face him. Though...maybe it was just a minor comment in a promo. Sorry for double posting.Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Digitalwheelin | Mar 2 2015, 01:08 AM Post #7 |
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I've actually seen people like that IRL and, to a very minor extent, I used to be that way myself. Lol. So, that being said, I personally find that aspect of her kind of interesting because it gives me a view into how I used to be. LOL. I think Mark hit it on the head about Blink being submissive in contrast to Catherine's dominant demeanor. I think that strikes a good balance. It's not so much that Blink is slow, to me she's the furthest extreme of trying to appease everyone and not wanting to step on toes. Not sure if that's accurate or not, Jo, but that's what it seems like to me. That said, I agree with what Lita said about having some some legitimate reason for Catherine to channel her her rage so she doesn't seem so ranty. |
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| Jo | Mar 2 2015, 01:29 AM Post #8 |
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No, that is Blink. But at the same time I can see where Lita is coming from. If I recall correctly from another bit of feedback she gave a couple years back, some or most of it stems from her accepting the abuse she takes at the hands of Emily and just never learning from it. About the only change she's made there involves her becoming more frightened. EXCEPT...here. Which I'm surprised fell through the cracks around that time. lol Though at times I have teased a match between the two. ![]() Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| That Darn Seph | Mar 2 2015, 02:43 AM Post #9 |
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Neo vs Catherine would be a nice change of pace. :o I miss working with you, it was never a dull moment. And boy did I rack up the wins working with you xD |
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| Jo | Mar 2 2015, 03:33 AM Post #10 |
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*ahem* Catherine vs. Roy Catherine vs. Roy Catherine vs. Roy Catherine vs. Douglas That's...four wins for me right there. lol Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Jimmy Jimbo | Mar 2 2015, 07:23 AM Post #11 |
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Well... I'm really glad Lita dropped the hammer in here first because I didn't want to. ![]() I've often held my tongue re: the Bad Girls because I felt what I'd have to say wasn't very constructive. I do the best I can not to complain or have a negative opinion about something unless I have a solution in mind and I really don't have one. But, it's a feedback thread and if anyone had any issues with my characters I would want to hear them. So Jo, forgive me for going heel but I'm doing it out of respect for a fellow roleplayer. Not a fan. Never have been and I don't think I ever will be. I don't want to outright say that I "hate" Blink & Catherine, but I'm really turned off by them. Blink is just so... opposite of everything I enjoy about pro wrestling. She's the anti-pro wrestler. And maybe that concept is cute at first, but it's just aggravating to read after awhile. I think I read a roleplay awhile back where Emily beat Blink with a belt or some type of weapon, and I wanted to throw my phone through a wall because Blink just took it. I'm at a point now where I don't read Blink roleplays because I've just accepted that I don't get this character and I never will. Catherine I don't like because every week, it's the same thing. It's just one obscenity laced rant after another. Reading "fuck" every third word might be shocking and amusing the first few times you read her, but it gets old quick. There's also been times when Catherine's taken a sledgehammer to the fourth wall, mentioning writers, gimmicks, babyface & heel alignments, that really turns me off too. I don't want to be reminded what I'm reading is fake, I want to get lost in and enjoy the story I'm reading. I will say that I am enjoying the character development going on between Catherine & Brittany. It is nice to see Catherine start to let her guard down and show some vulnerability. I don't like being this critical, especially since I don't really have any solutions and because I've worked alongside Jo for... forever (and we've never really done anything together which is kinda weird [and I doubt we ever will after this :P]) and, in all honesty, I really respect his ability as a roleplayer (I mean, damn, I'm relevant today because of the work I did with one character - Jo's won so many titles with so many different characters. I'm kinda jealous honestly). So... that's that. Strongly dislike me if you must, but please don't hate me. |
[align=center] [/align][size0]Thanks, Lita! ![]() <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cc3300; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE ROUGAROU</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Rougarou" Silas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'6"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>296 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>The Bayou</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Led Zeppelin - 'When The Levee Breaks'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Methodical Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Sword of Damocles </option> <option> - Chokeslam </option> <option> - Bayou Leg Sweep </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Swamp Drop Brainbuster</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 1x Fighting Spirit Champion</option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Roleplay of the Year (Family Reunion)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Segment of the Year (The Rougarou Cometh)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Mr. GEIST/Deacon DEATH)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Newcomer of the Year</option> <option> - 2014 & 2015 FIW Manager of the Year (Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> </option> <option> Now do you believe in The Rougarou? </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cadetblue; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">#SWAGOLITION</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Condemned" Lucas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'4½"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>235 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Kandiyohi, Minnesota</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Black Sabbath - 'Hole in the Sky'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Athletic - Strong Style - Brawler</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Exploder Suplex </option> <option> - Powerbomb </option> <option> - German Suplex </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - The Manhattan Project</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - n/a </option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2015 FIW ReVolt Match of the Year (vs. Nemesis, 6/6/15)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Nemesis)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Babyface of the Year</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ The Rougarou)</option> <option> </option> <option> Just Give The Lunatic A Chance... </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: 14b8ff; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE MAN IN BLACK</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>Jim O'Brien </option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'7"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>290 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Grant's Lick, Kentucky</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Motörhead - 'Line in the Sand'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Strong Style Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Belly-to-Belly Suplex</option> <option> - Saito Suplex </option> <option> - Jackknife Powerbomb </option> <option> - Hells Bells-plex</option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Hells Bells</option> <option> - F-Bomb</option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 2x Fighting Spirit Champion </option> <option> - 1x co-holder of the FIW Tag Team Championships of the World (w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 1x Ultimate Endurance Champion</option> <option> - 1x Spirit Of Honour Champion</option> <option> - 3x Dual Crown Champion</option> <option> Other Cool Stuff: </option> <option> - 2015 FIW Hall of Fame inductee</option> <option> - 2004 TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2004 Feud Of The Year (w/ Silent Rage)</option> <option> - 2004 Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Genocide) <option> - 2005 1st Runner-Up, TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2005 Co-Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Anarchy In The UK)</option> <option> - 2008 & 2012 Lady Luck Tournament Champion </option> <option> - 2008 Grand Prix Tournament Champion</option> <option> - 2008 Match of the Year participant (vs. Liam Mortell vs. Kiyoshi Nakahata @ FIW Summer of Sin) </option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW Feud of the Year participant (vs. Ash Koopa)</option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW (Face/Heel/Tweener) Turn of the Year</option> <option> - 2009 ReVolt Match Of The Year participant (vs. Ethan Adams @ ReVolt Against The Champions X)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Tag Team Of The Year (The O'Brien Clan, w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Duo Of The Year (w/ Kendra O'Brien)</option> <option> - April 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - April 2012 Storyline of the Month ("Dirty Deeds...")</option> <option> - May 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - May 2012 Match of the Month participant (vs. Damien Holburn @ FIW Deadlock)</option> <option> - July 2012 Co-Match of the Month participant (vs. Mad Dawg @ FIW ReVolt (07/01/12)</option> <option> </option> <option> So yeah, Jim was awesome. :-D </option> </select></center> | |
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| Jo | Mar 2 2015, 08:32 AM Post #12 |
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I love you. I mean hate you. ... ... ... ... I love you. And we did work together. I'm pretty sure we did. Sadovsky vs. Jim O'Brien. With the press conference thingy?Again, I understand and accept the dislike. Not everyone is going to like what I write or really the characters that I write and I'm fine with that, as I'm sure everyone else is with their own characters. If I didn't want the feedback I wouldn't have asked and such. So no hard feelings there. Unfortunately, Blink may yet remain how she is for a while now. Which is funny because at the start she was very much the opposite. Yeah she still looked up to Emily as an idol, but she constantly got into fights with Catherine and even got rather egotistical her first title run. But there are certainly other aspects of Blink I would like to explore, which is why I've been leaving Emily out a lot more recently. Namely her huge respect for the industry and her adoration of sentai programming. One of her moves she named after a series she saw growing up (although made up, it actually came from an excerpt in Deadman Wonderland) so there are those other sides to her. As for Catherine's rants, I like that she goes over the top with F-words and mixing them into other words and seeing how many of them she can string along together. But I do feel that she's been ranting an awful lot lately and as I said before I sometimes use her rants as an outlet for things I felt needed improvement. Such as Bloodbath winning the UIC, or the sudden change in rules at the end of the Cybernetico. The past few years I always felt that if I had criticism of something, I could try and release it in a more constructive manner than just lashing out at people. Not just that but it's always been easier to write rants than full fledged RPs and honestly...I don't like where Catherine is right now. I like the feud between Catherine and James, it's just the stringing along part of it hasn't been the most fun because there isn't much I can add in plus the shortened RP times make it feel like I need to rush. Though as I've always pointed out; in a fed where mutilation, attempted murder, and drug abuse are either celebrated or swiftly overlooked...it's a little hard to take things seriously or even "real" here anyway. I don't know. Again, more things to consider I suppose. Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Jo | Mar 24 2015, 12:10 AM Post #13 |
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As stated, here are my bare bones plans for the Bad Girls over the next few months. Please let me know if I'm on the right track with them or not. Figured I'd do it this way instead of people telling me later that no, I screwed up. I done fucked it up worse. Blink...I don't know overall yet how this is going to affect her but I want to put her in a feud with Emily. As I've mentioned with a few I've been toying with such a notion. Terri...She will continue along her heel path, potentially becoming Emily 2.0. Without the whole cult following thing. But she will be a bitch, the kind of bitch that you could never see as a face. Like Million Dollar Man. Was he ever a face? Catherine...Can't promise she won't stop ranting but I will try and focus moreso on characters and matches. Unfortunately, at times, it may mean she'll have to (and sorry for the obscure reference to some) Grant Rice some people. But again I'll try and keep it in the context of character. I'd like her to continue on with Brittany as that brings out a new aspect of her that could lead...I don't know. But will be fun. Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Jimmy Jimbo | Mar 24 2015, 05:15 AM Post #14 |
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Sounds promising. I really did like yours & Lita's marathon with Brittany & Catherine. It's nice to see Catherine as more than a one dimensional hothead. Re: Million Dollar Man... Ted DiBiase was a face in Mid-South, Japan and early 80s WWF (might've still been WWWF at that point), but you said Million Dollar Man and as far as I know, Million Dollar man's never been face. God, the dumb crap I remember...
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[align=center] [/align][size0]Thanks, Lita! ![]() <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cc3300; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE ROUGAROU</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Rougarou" Silas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'6"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>296 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>The Bayou</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Led Zeppelin - 'When The Levee Breaks'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Methodical Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Sword of Damocles </option> <option> - Chokeslam </option> <option> - Bayou Leg Sweep </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Swamp Drop Brainbuster</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 1x Fighting Spirit Champion</option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Roleplay of the Year (Family Reunion)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Segment of the Year (The Rougarou Cometh)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Mr. GEIST/Deacon DEATH)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Newcomer of the Year</option> <option> - 2014 & 2015 FIW Manager of the Year (Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> </option> <option> Now do you believe in The Rougarou? </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cadetblue; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">#SWAGOLITION</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Condemned" Lucas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'4½"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>235 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Kandiyohi, Minnesota</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Black Sabbath - 'Hole in the Sky'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Athletic - Strong Style - Brawler</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Exploder Suplex </option> <option> - Powerbomb </option> <option> - German Suplex </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - The Manhattan Project</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - n/a </option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2015 FIW ReVolt Match of the Year (vs. Nemesis, 6/6/15)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Nemesis)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Babyface of the Year</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ The Rougarou)</option> <option> </option> <option> Just Give The Lunatic A Chance... </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: 14b8ff; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE MAN IN BLACK</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>Jim O'Brien </option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'7"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>290 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Grant's Lick, Kentucky</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Motörhead - 'Line in the Sand'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Strong Style Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Belly-to-Belly Suplex</option> <option> - Saito Suplex </option> <option> - Jackknife Powerbomb </option> <option> - Hells Bells-plex</option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Hells Bells</option> <option> - F-Bomb</option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 2x Fighting Spirit Champion </option> <option> - 1x co-holder of the FIW Tag Team Championships of the World (w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 1x Ultimate Endurance Champion</option> <option> - 1x Spirit Of Honour Champion</option> <option> - 3x Dual Crown Champion</option> <option> Other Cool Stuff: </option> <option> - 2015 FIW Hall of Fame inductee</option> <option> - 2004 TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2004 Feud Of The Year (w/ Silent Rage)</option> <option> - 2004 Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Genocide) <option> - 2005 1st Runner-Up, TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2005 Co-Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Anarchy In The UK)</option> <option> - 2008 & 2012 Lady Luck Tournament Champion </option> <option> - 2008 Grand Prix Tournament Champion</option> <option> - 2008 Match of the Year participant (vs. Liam Mortell vs. Kiyoshi Nakahata @ FIW Summer of Sin) </option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW Feud of the Year participant (vs. Ash Koopa)</option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW (Face/Heel/Tweener) Turn of the Year</option> <option> - 2009 ReVolt Match Of The Year participant (vs. Ethan Adams @ ReVolt Against The Champions X)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Tag Team Of The Year (The O'Brien Clan, w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Duo Of The Year (w/ Kendra O'Brien)</option> <option> - April 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - April 2012 Storyline of the Month ("Dirty Deeds...")</option> <option> - May 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - May 2012 Match of the Month participant (vs. Damien Holburn @ FIW Deadlock)</option> <option> - July 2012 Co-Match of the Month participant (vs. Mad Dawg @ FIW ReVolt (07/01/12)</option> <option> </option> <option> So yeah, Jim was awesome. :-D </option> </select></center> | |
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| That Darn Seph | Mar 24 2015, 08:51 AM Post #15 |
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Blink vs Emily? YES! YES!! YESS!!! YEEEESSS!!!
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| Skell | Mar 24 2015, 03:33 PM Post #16 |
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Ted as the Million Dollar Man was never a face. (well when he came back doing legends stuff he was kind of a face but that's more of a nostalgia pop.) He retired from the ring shortly after Wrestlemania 9 and became a heel manager for a little while before going to WCW to do the manager thing as the mone behind the NWO for a bit.... at some point there he did eventually turn face but for obvious reasons he wasn't the Million Dollar Man at that point. |
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| Jo | Apr 14 2015, 04:36 AM Post #17 |
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Alrighty, so made a change to Terri thus far at least. Made her more schemey and a little more bitchy with her reasons for hating Brittany a little clearer. Maybe. Hopefully. So before I continue on with her on that path...thoughts? ![]() Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Jo | May 16 2015, 03:30 AM Post #18 |
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Alrighty then, so along with Terri becoming a little more bitchy, I feel Catherine's become a lot calmer now. Look! No wet spot! I mean rants. Hell, I don't think she's even really swore in a few weeks. I'm still trying to think of a catalyst for Blink and Emily to begin parting ways so if anyone has suggestions there... It can't just be an overnight realization by this point since by now Emily has gone as far as nearly breaking Blink's arm and fighting with Catherine over and over and yet the little Bad Girl is still devoted. Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| That Darn Seph | May 16 2015, 08:19 PM Post #19 |
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I'm actually liking this more human side of Catherine, it's so refreshing and it makes her a lot more likeable for relate-able reasons. Blink vs Emily has so much going for it, you can dig from your archive of past incidents and pick. Honestly, the moment the trigger is pulled, it's ON like Donkey Kong. |
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| Jimmy Jimbo | May 16 2015, 08:51 PM Post #20 |
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Where has THIS Catherine been? I've done a 180 on her, hell, when I roleplay judged Deacon/Catherine for the belt a few weeks back I picked Catherine to win. She just feels more human now, more natural. I really think that you have a legit shot at winning the DC. Sorry I don't have much to add for every one else but I really wanted to say how much a fan I am of Catherine now. |
[align=center] [/align][size0]Thanks, Lita! ![]() <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cc3300; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE ROUGAROU</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Rougarou" Silas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'6"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>296 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>The Bayou</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Led Zeppelin - 'When The Levee Breaks'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Methodical Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Sword of Damocles </option> <option> - Chokeslam </option> <option> - Bayou Leg Sweep </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Swamp Drop Brainbuster</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 1x Fighting Spirit Champion</option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Roleplay of the Year (Family Reunion)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Segment of the Year (The Rougarou Cometh)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Mr. GEIST/Deacon DEATH)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Newcomer of the Year</option> <option> - 2014 & 2015 FIW Manager of the Year (Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> </option> <option> Now do you believe in The Rougarou? </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cadetblue; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">#SWAGOLITION</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Condemned" Lucas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'4½"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>235 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Kandiyohi, Minnesota</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Black Sabbath - 'Hole in the Sky'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Athletic - Strong Style - Brawler</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Exploder Suplex </option> <option> - Powerbomb </option> <option> - German Suplex </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - The Manhattan Project</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - n/a </option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2015 FIW ReVolt Match of the Year (vs. Nemesis, 6/6/15)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Nemesis)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Babyface of the Year</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ The Rougarou)</option> <option> </option> <option> Just Give The Lunatic A Chance... </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: 14b8ff; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE MAN IN BLACK</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>Jim O'Brien </option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'7"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>290 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Grant's Lick, Kentucky</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Motörhead - 'Line in the Sand'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Strong Style Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Belly-to-Belly Suplex</option> <option> - Saito Suplex </option> <option> - Jackknife Powerbomb </option> <option> - Hells Bells-plex</option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Hells Bells</option> <option> - F-Bomb</option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 2x Fighting Spirit Champion </option> <option> - 1x co-holder of the FIW Tag Team Championships of the World (w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 1x Ultimate Endurance Champion</option> <option> - 1x Spirit Of Honour Champion</option> <option> - 3x Dual Crown Champion</option> <option> Other Cool Stuff: </option> <option> - 2015 FIW Hall of Fame inductee</option> <option> - 2004 TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2004 Feud Of The Year (w/ Silent Rage)</option> <option> - 2004 Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Genocide) <option> - 2005 1st Runner-Up, TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2005 Co-Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Anarchy In The UK)</option> <option> - 2008 & 2012 Lady Luck Tournament Champion </option> <option> - 2008 Grand Prix Tournament Champion</option> <option> - 2008 Match of the Year participant (vs. Liam Mortell vs. Kiyoshi Nakahata @ FIW Summer of Sin) </option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW Feud of the Year participant (vs. Ash Koopa)</option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW (Face/Heel/Tweener) Turn of the Year</option> <option> - 2009 ReVolt Match Of The Year participant (vs. Ethan Adams @ ReVolt Against The Champions X)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Tag Team Of The Year (The O'Brien Clan, w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Duo Of The Year (w/ Kendra O'Brien)</option> <option> - April 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - April 2012 Storyline of the Month ("Dirty Deeds...")</option> <option> - May 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - May 2012 Match of the Month participant (vs. Damien Holburn @ FIW Deadlock)</option> <option> - July 2012 Co-Match of the Month participant (vs. Mad Dawg @ FIW ReVolt (07/01/12)</option> <option> </option> <option> So yeah, Jim was awesome. :-D </option> </select></center> | |
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| Mad Dawg | May 16 2015, 09:20 PM Post #21 |
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Catherine - Definitely the best she's ever been and she's only continued to get better. I can say she has as much of a realistic shot as everyone else to win the DC. Terri - I feel like she's improved as well with her being a little more sneaky and conniving. It's definitely set her apart from the others which is good because it prevents her from being lumped in with the rest of the group. Blink - She's pretty much Blink as she's always been. As far as what would be the catalyst for Blink and Emily, actually aside from killing someone Blink cared about, I really don't know. Blink never reacts to anything, she's been screwed over, beaten, degraded, her friends degraded and beaten and rarely is there ever an actual reaction. So yeah...kill the wife. Pet - Still getting used to her but I do have to say she seems like Lilith #2. Even right down to the "Walkies". I'm not sure if maybe that's who she is just under a different name but it just seems like she has a thousand parallels with Lilith. |
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| Jo | May 16 2015, 11:12 PM Post #22 |
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Thanks for the feedback, glad everyone is enjoying the change in Catherine's attitude. Although, obviously, a lot of that goes to Lita with Brittany. I like writing Terri her new way too as it does set her apart from the others right down to the fact she would step over them to get what she wants. Again, will put some thought on the Blink/Emily situation. Of course always looking for assistance not just OOC but IC as well. Except killing Ariel. I've...um, had some bad history in killing off characters. ![]() Pet being Lilith#2? Not entirely. Lilith did it because she felt she had no choice, that it was just her fate in life and that fate couldn't be altered. A side effect of having her mind erased. Pet does it because...she enjoys it. Clearly, as pointed out in the last RP with her removing the leash off her collar, she can leave it anytime she wants and that's one thing I want to stress here; Kat is not Spice. Pet isn't held against her will or here to do Kat's bidding. In fact, Kat has no bidding here as she's just here to make sure Anya isn't. So in that she's a submissive she's sort of like Lilith but in everything else...no. ![]() Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Jo | Nov 9 2015, 01:33 AM Post #23 |
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It's been a while so I figured I'd pick this up again, kind of a "am I still on a good enough track". Reading through the comments I kind of took a mixed reaction on Blink so I kinda-sorta kept her where she was with a few minor tweaks, probably just enough to keep her sane with Pet. Funny thing is about Blink, she was heel for a tiny bit. Proof! She kinda went a little crazy during her first title reign. I think Catherine's changed a fair bit since last time. I don't know if she should continue licking Kim's boots or pause every once and a while to curse her. Still, how do people feel about a submissive Catherine? Terri's growing paranoia has been fun. I know there were some mixed feelings on her in September, so hopefully I've put her back on a good bad track. And Pet, I'm curious what people think about her because she's undergone so many changes since her debut. I'm sure at times I've gone a little overboard with her and I've tried to pull it back some when I notice it, so it'll be nice to know what people think. ![]() --edit-- Also, if anyone could, I'd appreciate feedback on Honey and/or Samantha as well. ![]() Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Minister Wighty | Nov 9 2015, 05:45 AM Post #24 |
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After having talked it over with a couple of people I decided I'd post my feedback here. Perhaps it's not wanted because it's going to be negative, but I often see the accolades these characters have gotten and I feel like I'm taking crazy pills. Outside of giving feedback to the fedhead, I keep my mouth shut. Perhaps constructive criticism would help the matter. Perhaps not. We shall see. I'll start off by saying that I in no way have anything negative to say against you as a WRITER. You have a firm grasp of these characters you've created and 85% of the time you write them to a perfect T. They're clearly very delicately constructed and have a very strong, rich internal life that you pay attention to and make use of when writing out their words and actions. I will never criticize your ability to write because you and I both know that I don't believe you're a bad writer. That being said... Blink - OBVIOUSLY I missed something in my absence. Last time I saw Blink she had just gotten married and was in a good place. I liked that, because I like Blink as a person. I want good things for her. I come back and... that's all gone to shit. On one hand I like that she's had even more character growth. She's less Fluttershy than she was before. I like that she takes charge of things sometimes... SOMEtimes... but the personality she's developing beyond that is... super dark at the edges. Dark in ways that I don't really care for. She's mean sometimes. Almost pointlessly so. My apologies for continuing to reference My Little Pony, but it reminds me of the episode Putting Your Hoof Down. Except there are no Rarities and Pinkie Pies in Blink's life to bring her back from the edge. I haven't given up on her yet. But I'm scared. Catherine - I've had a love/hate relationship with Catherine over the years that firmly settled into 'cold distaste', but that's for personal reasons I'd rather not get into. Suffice it to say I appreciate the character growth under Kim's heel and the dropping of any and all various annoying verbal tics. Terri - I loathe pretty much all characters who are extraordinary assholes for seemingly no reason and are immune to comeuppance. In TV, movies, books, comics, video games, and e-feds. Terri Golde is this person. Now, when I say I 'loathe' these people it's not in the way that you 'love to hate' them, where you like them, but still ultimately want to see them fail. I think the closest to that I've ever had was Joffrey from Game of Thrones. I'm told that's not really an emotion I possess; I usually just HATE people and want to see them fail. Like... John Cena is that for me, I think. Jon Snow, as well. Terri Golde, Vickie Guerrero, and the Wicked Witch on Once Upon A Time, on the other hand... these are characters that just plain I hate. I don't want to see them fail because that means I'd still have to SEE them. I wish they didn't exist. They make me not want to do stuff involved in that media anymore, and aside from their presence I LIKE that media. I have nothing constructive to say about this character because I don't think you can save her in my eyes. It's better just to get rid of her and bring in someone who doesn't make me want to donate money to your rival political party in your name in a very public manner. Pet - Pet was interesting when she had the whole 'can't trust her; full of shit' gimmick. That was curious and seemed like it was going to be fun. Now she's... Harley Quinn reduced to the base component of one aspect of her personality. She does whatever she wants whenever she wants, consequences be damned. If she doesn't get her way, she throws a fit. She's like an adult Angelica Pickles. I don't care for this, but it's not to the point of Terri yet. I just have a healthy distaste for the character. She's openly manipulative, self-centered, self-interested and loud about it. I suppose in that way she's kind of like Tidus from Final Fantasy X. I feel like this is just another pit stop on the train of character development, though. Perhaps the next stop will lead us to someone I like more, but... given the way this whole thing is going I doubt it. Now, how could you make the character "better"? Uhhh... humanize her a little, I guess. Right now she feels like an elemental force of caprice without all the pomp and circumstance that would usually surround a character like that. She's no fun to read (although I'm sure she's fun to write) and she's no fun to interact with. There's literally nothing redeeming about her as a person. I guess maybe one might feel sorry for her... or be willing to hang around her until she proves too untrustworthy or whatever... but it's like assembling a super hero team that consists of Spider-man, Thor, Doctor Strange, and Sabretooth. One of those things is not like the other, as in eventually one of those guys is gonna rape/kill somebody and anyone who says they didn't see it coming is just lying to themselves. My advice would be to give her an actual compass of morality. Or if she has one, make it more obvious/widen it. Characters like Deadpool and Lobo work and are popular because even though they're fucking assholes, there's lines they won't cross, people they will fight for, and stuff that they hold dear. I will admit I may have missed that, but it's not something I get from Pet. Everything, EVERYTHING is temporary to her. And if that's, like, a defense mechanism? Or something that is only true because Pet says it is? Then we, the READERS need to know otherwise. Honey Rydell - I've said it before, but I like Honey. She reminds me of Eve pre-brainwashing. For this reason I am scared to get attached to her. Keep up the good work? Samantha - I keep thinking she's the interviewer Samantha and thus forget to care about her character development. What little I've retained echoes my thoughts on Honey. Overall - As has happened in the past, your characters' biggest drawback is that they're either fucking untouchable or made to be abused. You set up these epic villains, but you don't set them up for anyone else but your own stories to defeat them. That's not how wrestling works. That's not how being a heel works. YES, in e-feds especially the heel gets to win a lot. But every now and then they need to be taken down a peg or two to keep up the perpetual heat gain/loss that wrestling IS. Even if your characters lose matches... lose BIG matches... their "scars" are invisible or purposely hidden (like Terri at the moment) until they can come back out looking like the shining goddesses you want them to be again. The victor has nothing to gain but a notch in their win/loss record and/or maybe a title, and the character doesn't deepen any. This doesn't mean 'drop a fucking house on your bad guys/burn them all down and kill them'. Moderation, man. It's the same with battering your face characters. I know everyone likes an underdog but it seems like any time Catherine and her family AREN'T being attacked by ninja assassins or people trying to kill her baby? She's a heel. Moderation, dude. You gotta pace that shit out. Shades of gray. The Iron Fist AND the Velvet Glove in even measure. Lastly... and maybe this is super personal and other people on here don't get it/care/whatever, but I KNOW and LOVE people in the BDSM community. Eight times out of ten you portray the fucking WORST of those communities. That shit rubs me the wrong way a lot. Like, it's an entry fee I pay to even read your stuff. "Very important parts of your friends' cultures are going to be put on carnival sideshow here." I get that you wanna show us people from different walks of life, from different cultures, but... like... most of those people are shitty fucking users and it doesn't do ANY credit to those walks of life. Squicks me out, I guess is what I'm saying. Hope that helps? |
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| Jo | Nov 9 2015, 11:57 AM Post #25 |
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First off; fuck you! Wait, is that how I began the response to the History project review? Hm, need a new opener... Alright, naked blond walks into a bar with a two pound salami under one arm and a duck under the other. That's good, right? Anyway, not upset. This is actually lighter than the history project one. I mean no one's yelling at you yet. lol I will say the feedback was good, although I will be asking for examples. Not in the "Where's the proof?" kind of way but more "it's things like this you need to work on" and such. Such as Blink's "darker side" coming out. That's something I honestly can't see. But again, the process of feedback is looking for outside opinions and clearly that's something I haven't come across in my writings. Now, I'm going to try and explain on my front how I try and come across with the characters, hopefully work on something here. Blink: Remember the last time you saw her she was indeed being pushed around by Emily and protected by Catherine for years. Inside of a month she lost her home, her "inspirational trainer", and her best friend. She's on her own now and doesn't have her compass pointing her in whatever direction she needs to go. There's Pet, but her compass is spinning nonstop. But again, with her maybe you can show some examples where I may have messed her personality up some. ![]() Catherine: Cruz was never a ninja! If that's who you meant. Probably not, but figured I'd point it out anyway if he's still stalking around. How many ReVolts has Max missed now? Um...I kinda like where she is now too. I will say it's a lot harder to write her now. Not because there's not much swearing, but because Lita can bring in Kim and say "Bitch, I didn't say you could say that." lol Though I am curious over the personal reasons. If they're causing you to be less than thrilled with the character then I'd love to hear them. Maybe PM me if you'd rather keep it private?Terri: Unfortunately, Terri's sticking around and she does have her downfall; that being her mass paranoia that's caused her to up security at the manor and send Honey & Samantha to do hallway patrols during shows. Her whole reason for not really selling to losing is again stemmed from her paranoia. She doesn't record her losses because in her mind she's "perfection", she's above the other Hellcats. For her to come out and say "I lost" would be a chip in the armour she's trying to create for herself. That's all. Pet: Part of the reason I dropped the whole lying aspect for Pet was because if it was still going on today you can't honestly say that you wouldn't be thinking "Okay, stop."There are still some truths that she won't tell, like her life before meeting Kat. Part of Pet's personality, the no consequences one, comes from a part of Prince's personality as told by Kevin Smith. To me Pet is the type of person who would ask for a camel because it's 3am in Minnesota and then not understand why it can't be done. At the top of her career I tried to push out the fact that she's been away from the world for close to seven years and just basically has a "fuck it" attitude about everything. Except when she's informed to stop. Such in the case of Brittany and Mercedes, especially most recently. Doesn't mean she stops entirely, however. That's basically Pet. I've had thoughts of making her a more serious, down to earth style person but I'm trying to stem away from those "Hey, look at me" style drama moments. If history has taught me anything it's that these are not well received. So typically characters are run on a week by week basis where I try and give them direction but not too much out of fear of people saying that I'm running my own storylines again. One thing I know would help would certainly be more outside interactions. I know that kinda sounds like I'm shifting the blame and for that I apologize, but it does kinda suck to go into party threads and have my characters continuously ignored. I understand if people don't like my characters, but not liking them isn't going to help change them. If I'm left to my own devices then characters are going to continue on their own merry way. Case in point; Honey was supposed to be a bitch. In fact, it still kind of says that in her profile. Lita said that it's a shame and I developed Honey differently in working her with Johnny. Eve and Vi are another prime example. Eve developed because of her interactions with Vi. Roxie and Jaime, Pet and Mercedes... I know this is probably sounding like bitching, although as I said before I have a hard time seeing things from other peoples perspectives, but if there's one thing I've been trying to stress in each of my feedback threads it's that I want to work with other people. I want my characters to develop based off of interactions with other people. Catherine calmed down and split up the Bad Girls because she was hanging out with Brittany. I've been in the game long enough to say "I've done enough of my own with characters" now I just want to work with people. Winning titles, winning matches, I try to look beyond those. I mean yeah, okay, I'll still get upset over a loss here or there like anyone else. But Wight, you of all people should know how I've improved in taking them. Lastly, just as with you, if I portray the worst in the BDSM community, then I apologize. I try not to delve too much into it here because I know it might turn a few people away. Although I do invite you, if you've the time, to read some of the blogs I've written from the perspective of Kat. There's stories there you can probably skim over, especially the ones from years and years ago I didn't even proof read before posting up, even some news about events and such, but everything else...again if you've the time. Thank you for the feedback and reading, if you've read all of this, sorry if some areas came off sour. My intention wasn't to challenge your views but describe where I'm trying to come from. Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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Mainly because I just sorta feel lost with them. Catherine's just ranting and Terri...I don't know. And Blink is really just drifting. I kinda hoped Blink would keep around the UIC scene a little longer but more people are pumped for an Ethan/Bloodbath match. Aside from Terri trying to get her singles match with Brittany I can't think of much there. Catherine's rants have become more company related for her feud with James but they're not very character developing.












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