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| Steve | Apr 7 2015, 06:11 PM Post #1 |
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[align=center]ReVolt & Fallout Logos - Lita Jack Manson Teaser Music – Steve ReVolt Ethan Adams/Jack Manson Opening Segment Writer: Steve Bisenshi Sakura & Jade vs Some Kind of Monster & Anthony Royal Writer: Sid Jack Manson/Ethan Adams/Bo-Jack Segment Writer: Steve 4R Segment Writer: Marc Mad Dawg & Shaun Wilson vs Mungrel & Cody McGinnis Writer: Steve Rise of a Legend 2016 Promo – Jim Kendra & Jim O’Brien/Madison Lee/Jack Manson Segment Writers: Jim, Lita, & Steve Johnny Amazing & Mark Cannon vs Quincy Wilson & Max Rowley Writer: Lita Fallout Darian Gray/Butch Babineaux Segment Writer: Jim Scott Knight & Terri Golde vs Darian Gray & Brittany/4R Attack Writer: Steve Madison Lee after match Segment Writer: Lita Douglas Greater/Roy Harlowe Segment Writer: Seph Gino L. Janos Segment Writer: Skell Nemisis & Blink vs Bloodbath McGrath & Erik Holland Writer: Sid Deacon DEATH Segment Writer: Kyle Billy Walker & Nathaniel Alexander vs Roy Harlowe & Douglas Greater Writer: Steve[/align] |
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| That Darn Seph | Apr 7 2015, 10:30 PM Post #2 |
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The High Elevation Sensation!
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Show was awesome, although Neo being announced as not being in the show on account of being too wrecked didn't make it on the show like I asked. And with Gino's promo just makes it sound like he's just being a fat ass at home. Oh well. Guess I'll have to to sell it some other way.Gotta say it's an absolute dream the show is up in the afternoon the day it's due. That hasn't been done in like ever I think. Kudos to our new overlord and all those who helped out. I actually intended when I got off work today to lay the hammer down and help out with anything that needed doing, as I ended up getting home earlier than I thought I would. But hey, first week went off beautifully! Good job! |
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| Jo | Apr 7 2015, 10:31 PM Post #3 |
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I'm just going to say this once in a feedback forum then never bring it up again. I HATE the FIW Network name. Just saying. *Deep breath* Not much to say on my own front other than Blink paints her nails whatever colour Emily tells her to. That and I didn't mind the short results. Loads of promos I see. That's good. And yes, Sadovsky is (hairy) back. Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Lita Maivia | Apr 7 2015, 10:35 PM Post #4 |
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So, how many characters does that take you up to now, Jo? FIW needs its own network just to fit all your people on the shows.
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| Jo | Apr 7 2015, 10:39 PM Post #5 |
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It's cold outside. Plus it snowed again today, so I've got plenty of time to establish characters. Also it's just four, Spectre Girls are heading out to their new home either today or later this week. Plus Sadovsky never left, at least not by my word. Look, he's been my avatar this whole time! ![]() Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| That Darn Seph | Apr 7 2015, 10:44 PM Post #6 |
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Did the Spectre Girls leave because of Darian Gray's Specter Slash Running Big Boot?:o That means Jo and I have the same amount of characters on the board at the same time. As we're both at 4...counting the other 3 I play on another site. That's 7 total for me x___x |
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| Quincy | Apr 7 2015, 10:55 PM Post #7 |
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Good to have the show up on Tuesday afternoon if this keeps up I'll fight anyone whose against a 5 day RP period.... Sad to see Quincy lose but the match played our precisely how I expected it too so it was perfect. |
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| Steve | Apr 7 2015, 11:06 PM Post #8 |
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Like I said before....come up with something better and I'll change it. I suppose FiB isn't horrible but I'm not completely sold. *deep breath* ![]() Ok so the show was very segment heavy which I enjoyed very much. Probably because a bunch of the promos involved my characters. That and I liked the idea of all these former characters showing up to be part of the new management.I have to say that this new short result format is going to take some getting used to. I really felt like I was rushing the matches and felt like they were total suckfest. Sorry to those that got the suckfests. On a side note and I've already said this to Dai....Billy Walker is a bitch to write in matches. Anyway...very good first showing but with that said I really hope that more writers step up on a weekly basis. I know we are operating on short results but still cranking out nearly half the show (including segments) took it's toll on me which probably shows most in the Mad Dawg/Shaun Wilson vs Mungrel/Cody McGinnis match. The more that contribute the smoother these shows go and the more on time shows we have. Huge thank you to Lita and Sid for match writing this week and all of those who contributed segments to fill out the shows. Edit: Sorry to Seph for forgetting the mention of Neo being out this week. There was so much going on this week I'm really surprised it's all I missed or at least I hope. |
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| Jo | Apr 7 2015, 11:08 PM Post #9 |
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Just gonna throw this out there then...FIW Suckfest. Give it the five second pause and see if it grows on you. ![]() Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Lita Maivia | Apr 7 2015, 11:22 PM Post #10 |
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And get sued by Steele Media for stealing its show names? No way! |
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| That Darn Seph | Apr 7 2015, 11:28 PM Post #11 |
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Yeah, it's no biggie that the Neo mention wasn't on there. I mean, I refrained from doing a segment with Neo this week to help sell that DEATH is a force to be reckon with, I'll just sell it twice as hard next week. The match lengths were fine, I mean, we don't all need a novel to read. We all just wanna know if we won/lost and/or did anything cool. |
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| Mars | Apr 7 2015, 11:43 PM Post #12 |
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SADOVSKY!!!!! that is all |
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| Lita Maivia | Apr 8 2015, 12:02 AM Post #13 |
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ReVolt & Fallout Logos - Lita Incredible! That Lita is pretty awesome. -_- Ethan Adams/Jack Manson Opening Segment - Steve Great stuff to set the stage of FIW's new day. I quite like segments opening the shows. It makes them feel a bit more legit. I know WWE's tend to go on too long and people just want matches, but I think they can be very beneficial if there's something worth discussing and of course we needed to start the show by revealing the new man in power and announce that changes are coming. Bisenshi Sakura & Jade vs Some Kind of Monster & Anthony Royal - Sid It's a shame that Jade seems to have vanished on us. I thought she could be a big part of the Hellcat Division with her mean streak. It was pretty awesome seeing Some Kind of Monster in the ring again. It was so cool when he was in the crazy tag match a while back and this was just as cool too. Sucks that Sakura lost, but I kind of saw it coming when Jade no showed and Dai had trouble coming up with something for her to say. Hopefully Anthony Royal hasn't left us. 4R Segment - Marc I'm glad to see 4R is sticking around and will start becoming a legit group rather than the JOB Squad. Mad Dawg & Shaun Wilson vs Mungrel & Cody McGinnis - Steve I gotta say. I love the dynamic of Mad Dawg and Shaun Wilson as a tag team. There is so much just waiting to blow up in there. It makes it intense reading their matches and just waiting for it to explode like a powder keg. Sad face that Mungrel and Cody lost, but Mad Dawg and Shaun were great this week. Rise of a Legend 2016 Promo – Jim This was amazing. We're really selling Legend like our Wrestlemania and doing a damn good job of it. I got excited just reading this promo. Fingers crossed that Johnny and Brittany play big roles in this event. Kendra & Jim O’Brien/Madison Lee/Jack Manson Segment - Jim, Lita, & Steve So much fun! When I pitched to Steve that Madison come back at Manson's wife, I didn't think it would really fly. But I love the idea. It's just so perfectly unexpected that Manson and Madison would tie the knot. I knew that Jim O'Brien had to be present when it was revealed. Thanks to Jim for doing what he could for this. I know it was tough getting time. Johnny Amazing & Mark Cannon vs Quincy Wilson & Max Rowley - Lita I wrote this match this morning while I was at work (before work actually started, mind you!) so I didn't really get a lot of time to study the character's movelists and stuff. So I apologize if nobody really got to do anything fantastic. I hope Dan is OK with how Mark was portrayed. I love the whole Mark in the middle of the Quincy and Johnny thing. It makes it such an unpredictable environment which is great because Mark himself is unpredictable. Darian Gray/Butch Babineaux Segment - Jim This was great. I really love seeing Darian get more vocal and active in the storylines. Him opening up Fallout and attacking Butch was FANTASTIC! I had to get Brittany out there to help Butch up because it's Butch! And that's Brittany's friend's uncle! Scott Knight & Terri Golde vs Darian Gray & Brittany/4R Attack - Steve I pitched to Steve turning this into a segment to further Terri vs. Brittany since Knight and Darian were unable to RP. Steve had the brilliant idea of using 4R! I love seeing 4R look good and hope that this is just the beginning for them. This was the perfect opportunity to bring Madison into it and I'm excited to see what Jo and I can continue to do with this angle. Douglas Greater/Roy Harlowe Segment - Seph Even though I am now a Roy Harlowe superfan, I still love Douglas Greater. This was a really good segment and I didn't trust Doug not one bit! Gino L. Janos Segment - Skell Some good laughs here. I thought the "Call me Mr. Janos / Call me Gino" bit was going to go on throughout the whole promo with him bouncing back and forth. Lol. Nemesis & Blink vs Bloodbath McGrath & Erik Holland - Sid I was kind of surprised to see Blink get the win in this. McGrath and Holland is a gold mine, but I guess they'd be a lot like Mad Dawg and Shaun Wilson forced to team together. Nemesis and Blink is a head-scratcher duo, but I like that there was some unexpected partnerships doing well in this. Deacon DEATH Segment - Kyle I love the confidence that Death is able to have in his promos that doesn't come off as squashing the roster. He makes a fantastic villain within FIW and I would love to see the House grow with some more members handled by other characters on the roster. I think it could really elevate some characters. Billy Walker & Nathaniel Alexander vs Roy Harlowe & Douglas Greater - Steve Douglas Greater is a stupid head. I knew he was going to betray Roy. I think everyone knew it but Roy and that's why it's such a classic wrestling angle. Though, it did give Billy and Nathaniel a victory and I can't say that's a bad thing. Kim's crew could take the tag titles! Yay! |
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| That Darn Seph | Apr 8 2015, 12:10 AM Post #14 |
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Can we all just praise how awesome Lita is and how legit she makes us with her graphics? Praise Lita, for she is the Brock Lesnar of graphics. *graphic city chant starts* |
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| Jo | Apr 8 2015, 12:24 AM Post #15 |
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Oh hush you. But yeah, Nemesis and Blink is a bit of a noodle scratcher. But again the whole concept was for the teams to be random. A little upset I couldn't do more in with the party thread other than Blink arriving, I had plans there for that. But work kept happening and I was so tired by the end of the week and then had family stuff the rest of the time. But I, um, really liked the RP I wrote. lol Actually I did and hope it didn't hurt the feud too much by having Emily know nothing about Brittany. Her care right now is only on Blink's career, because of the two she's the title maker.Party on. Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Triadred | Apr 8 2015, 02:12 AM Post #16 |
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Bloodbath lost, and I'm not bummed at all because he's make believe. Somebody had to lose, and it might as well have been me since I didn't pour in the same amount of effort as everyone else did. I was on vacation and probably should have said so since I wasn't able to commit myself to role playing like I usually can. Trips to visit family really play havoc with RP habits. But at the same time it's okay that Bloodbath and Erik Holland are loose because now we can get into defending our own titles. I kind of felt like chasing the tag team titles would have been a big distraction after such an epic match with Ethan Adams... even more so now that I've read that is was (maybe) Ethan's last. Freeing Bloodbath up to focus on the UIC and how important his win at ROAL was makes more sense than putting it all on the back burner for sake of a lofty strange bed fellows tag team title chase. The "can they hate each other and still get along" schtick has always been a comedy act and has never truly been taken seriously. I feel like Erik and Bloodbath playing perfect strangers would have taken away from Steve's grand finale at ROAL when he wrote, "That big of a win over a name like Ethan Adams will only cement Bloodbath as one of the most dangerous Undisputed International Champions of all time!" So good call! I am behind the match outcome one-hundred and ten percent. Sure, Erik and Bloodbath would be a tag team goldmine. Just not right now. |
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| Cannonboy | Apr 8 2015, 02:23 AM Post #17 |
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I'll expand later, but I have to say I thought the show was very smooth and polished. Really enjoyed it. |
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| Mad Dawg | Apr 8 2015, 03:15 AM Post #18 |
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Thought it was a pretty well done show and cool seeing the early post time. Like the new graphics and themes added in, Lita's always been boss. Thought it was awesome seeing those backwoods assholes 4R tearing things up in the tag match. Definitely helps their presence after I pretty much had them toiling as bottom feeders. I know I put out the promo kind of announcing them being tired of being at the bottom and overlooked so it was pretty sweet seeing them act on it later on in the night. Cool to see Mad Dawg and Shaun pick up the win. It'll definitely create an interesting dynamic with the heat between Mad Dawg and the Summit. Speaking of "The Heat", I've got to get him back to being involved as he kind of turned and went to manage The Summit but I never was able to do very much with him because of time constraints. Now that I've got a little more time to work on him though I should be able to get him much more involved in Summit business. Matches were pretty good, only gripe I had would be that I'd like to see one or two more finishers or signatures and a couple near falls in to at least give the losers a bit more shine to work with. I'll probably throw in a hand this week, I know I'm going out of town this week but I should be able to do something.
Thank God I am not the only one who realized this. I can't say how many times I've struggled writing him because the style he's modeled after just won't work with certain people's styles. ALso the fact that he doesn't strike or actual moves and consists of a ton of transitional holds, I can't say how many times I've sat staring at a page trying to figure out what he would do next when he's on offense. Probably explains why I subconsciously found myself putting him in a deal of tag matches and multimans so he could have his shining moments but he wouldn't have to be playing defense 90% of the time. |
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| Digitalwheelin | Apr 8 2015, 03:27 AM Post #19 |
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Yeah, I have to echo what Dan said; the show really felt smooth and polished. As far as the layout, I like the fact the show was split up using line breaks as opposed to one long post as before. The "advertisement" toward the end of Revolt for ROAL 2016 made the whole thing seem all the more realistic to me as well and I really liked that bit. I will say, the graphics kinda left a bit to be desired for me... what?! Totally kidding, Lita is a graphics master, she knows it and we all know it too. Both title graphics on the shows were awesome. Personally, I think the Revolt one is my favorite, and that arena set-up pic is really cool too.As for the show, it was awesome to see that not only Jack Manson and Madison Lee have both returned but also Jim and Kendra O'Brien. I HAVE to have Nathaniel make a comment about "the old guard of FIW" making a return, just like he made a big deal of when he first arrived. I think the show had a lot faster pace with the short results, but that's definitely not a bad thing at all. The Nathaniel & Billy Walker vs Greater I also really liked the opening match of Fallout with Darian's promo before the match. I'm quickly becoming a big fan of Darian's, as I've mentioned before, so it was cool to see that from him in that match and seeing a bit of character development with that short promo and the attack on Butch. The Johnny Amazing & Mark Cannon vs Max Rowley and Quincy Wilson match was awesome. I like how this all came together stemming from the Cannon/Amazing feud, specifically the promos and stuff involving Quincy and Brittany talking about Mark and Johnny. Everything sort of mixed well here in this match. Overall, all the matches were awesome and I really like the way this show turned out. I'm definitely looking forward to the next! |
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| Steve | Apr 8 2015, 03:37 AM Post #20 |
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I had actually already planned the attack and wrote it before I saw your segment. So really I thought it all worked out perfectly. At least it felt like we were on the same wave length of what to do to re-establish them as a force to be |
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| That Darn Seph | Apr 8 2015, 03:50 AM Post #21 |
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A force to be retconned with would be making them Russian
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| Steve | Apr 8 2015, 03:55 AM Post #22 |
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Yeah yeah poke your fun. I figured out the spelling finally. LOL |
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| Mad Dawg | Apr 8 2015, 04:05 AM Post #23 |
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I honestly thought it was a pun like he meant ret-conned like when they redo shit in a comic book.
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| Jo | Apr 8 2015, 04:31 AM Post #24 |
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I'll have you know that's my bit. Thank you very much. Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| That Darn Seph | Apr 8 2015, 04:59 AM Post #25 |
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What are you talking about Jo? Blink never died. |
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