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Say hi to the bad guy/Quincy Wilson Feedback
Topic Started: Apr 13 2015, 02:25 PM (94 Views)
Quincy
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THE BADDEST SOB IN FIW
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Okay so I could use some feedback on Quincy Wilson the last time I got some feedback was Marc's post deadlock roster feedback and it was largely positive. I want to make sure things are still positive. So feel free to say nice or mean things!!!!

Say hi to the bad guy
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<option style="color:fff">FIW Bad Boy</option>


<option>NAME:Quincy Ramone Wilson</option>

<option>HEIGHT: 6'5</option>

<option>WEIGHT: 266 lbs</option>

<option>HOMETOWN:Miami, Florida</option>

<option>THEME SONG:Crown Jay-Z

<option>WRESTLING STYLE:BADASS</option>

<option>FINISHERS:</option>
<option>-The Black Out</option>
<option>-Spike Pile Driver</option>

<option>SIGNATURE MOVES:</option>
<option>-The Bank Breaker</option>
<option>- Big Deposit</option>
<option>-Curtain Call</option>

<option>QUOTE: Bad Boys just KTFO the competition!</option>
<option>QUOTE: I'm The Last of Real Bad Guys</option>
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That Darn Seph
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The High Elevation Sensation!
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I like that you've toned done the outrageous stuff and are focusing on making Quincy have this mystique that nobody else in FIW has. He's got his entourage, he's got the high life lifestyle, he tries to buy people. That's all awesome man.

Keep it up.
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Quincy
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THE BADDEST SOB IN FIW
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Yeah for so long Quincy was so much like Shaun Wilson or whomever he was being compared too so I've tried to continue to do things that people don't do I hope that's okay with everyone.
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<center><select style="font-family: Tekton Pro; font-size: 10pt; background-color:000; font-weight: bold; color:fff">
<option style="color:fff">FIW Bad Boy</option>


<option>NAME:Quincy Ramone Wilson</option>

<option>HEIGHT: 6'5</option>

<option>WEIGHT: 266 lbs</option>

<option>HOMETOWN:Miami, Florida</option>

<option>THEME SONG:Crown Jay-Z

<option>WRESTLING STYLE:BADASS</option>

<option>FINISHERS:</option>
<option>-The Black Out</option>
<option>-Spike Pile Driver</option>

<option>SIGNATURE MOVES:</option>
<option>-The Bank Breaker</option>
<option>- Big Deposit</option>
<option>-Curtain Call</option>

<option>QUOTE: Bad Boys just KTFO the competition!</option>
<option>QUOTE: I'm The Last of Real Bad Guys</option>
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Steve
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Legend
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Ok so some of this will be my own feedback and some of it will be collected from behind the scenes feedback I've gotten from my 'advisers' in response to your survey.

Somethings I personally get hung up on with you as an RP'er are simple mistakes such as spelling. I won't beat up grammar too much as that could just be a character trait. But for example last week in your RP you kept using off instead of...of. Another one was you kept calling Toby...Bostick instead of Bostock. Like I said they are just small things.

The other thing that tends to put me off are how you take Quincy too far to the extreme sometimes. The dream RP is the first thing that springs to mind for me. I get that Quincy lives the high life and is a bad guy but sometimes I just feel like you are over doing it.

The final thing from my stand point is how one minute you are giving to charity, doing some sort of public service, befriending faces, ect.....it comes across very wishy washy. Which also leads me to seeing out storylines to their finish. It was my understanding that the whole Mad Dawg thing was supposed to continue but it seems like it has just fallen by the wayside.

From when I first encountered you at your FIW debut, you have come leaps and bounds and you are doing a good job. Those are just some of the things that stick out to me. Now onto some of the feedback I've collected from the 'back office' crew.

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One issue I see though is that while it's cool he's willing to work with new people, it's kind of counterproductive to him moving up the card. If he keeps working with all the new people near the bottom, it gives him a big fish in a small pond feel to him. When he should be rubbing elbows with the upper card.


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Consistency is really the only thing that is missing from turning Quincy into a main attraction on the roster.


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He flip-flops way too much that it is almost never established who or what Quincy truly is and he always tries to move onto something else before he's fully finished with the track he's currently on. He constantly makes himself to be a bad guy and he does horrible things but then he's turning around and giving money to underprivileged kids and giving speeches to cheering fans. It's like when he's supposed to be face he can't help but still do heel things like cheat on and beat his girlfriend and never show remorse and when he's heel he can't help but try to be buddy-buddy with various faces and try to be perceived as a role model and pillar to the black community.


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- Bran seriously needs to become friends with the comma and period buttons on his keyboard.
- He really does need to stop milking the race card, it is getting old.


Just remember that feedback is a case by case basis. While you'll see points in her from different people's aspects. There were also arguments against some of these aspect such as the inconsistency and how it really could just be the trait of a true heel to flip and flop with each situation. I think all in all, Quincy would benefit from some slight evolution. Such as pulling away from the race card which I would agree is a well he goes to far too often. Other than that I'd work on polishing up your RP's mainly, usage of punctuation and proof reading for spelling mistakes.

With all that said I hope that those that shared their feedback don't mind me quoting them word for word in this public forum. I hope this helps you continue to improve a character that I believe has come leaps and bounds since you began here in FIW.
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