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| Say hi to the bad guy/Quincy Wilson Feedback | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 13 2015, 02:25 PM (94 Views) | |
| Quincy | Apr 13 2015, 02:25 PM Post #1 |
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THE BADDEST SOB IN FIW
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Okay so I could use some feedback on Quincy Wilson the last time I got some feedback was Marc's post deadlock roster feedback and it was largely positive. I want to make sure things are still positive. So feel free to say nice or mean things!!!! Say hi to the bad guy |
<center> </option><center><select style="font-family: Tekton Pro; font-size: 10pt; background-color:000; font-weight: bold; color:fff"> <option style="color:fff">FIW Bad Boy</option> <option>NAME:Quincy Ramone Wilson</option> <option>HEIGHT: 6'5</option> <option>WEIGHT: 266 lbs</option> <option>HOMETOWN:Miami, Florida</option> <option>THEME SONG:Crown Jay-Z <option>WRESTLING STYLE:BADASS</option> <option>FINISHERS:</option> <option>-The Black Out</option> <option>-Spike Pile Driver</option> <option>SIGNATURE MOVES:</option> <option>-The Bank Breaker</option> <option>- Big Deposit</option> <option>-Curtain Call</option> <option>QUOTE: Bad Boys just KTFO the competition!</option> <option>QUOTE: I'm The Last of Real Bad Guys</option> | |
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| That Darn Seph | Apr 14 2015, 01:09 AM Post #2 |
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I like that you've toned done the outrageous stuff and are focusing on making Quincy have this mystique that nobody else in FIW has. He's got his entourage, he's got the high life lifestyle, he tries to buy people. That's all awesome man. Keep it up. |
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| Quincy | Apr 14 2015, 04:14 AM Post #3 |
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Yeah for so long Quincy was so much like Shaun Wilson or whomever he was being compared too so I've tried to continue to do things that people don't do I hope that's okay with everyone. |
<center> </option><center><select style="font-family: Tekton Pro; font-size: 10pt; background-color:000; font-weight: bold; color:fff"> <option style="color:fff">FIW Bad Boy</option> <option>NAME:Quincy Ramone Wilson</option> <option>HEIGHT: 6'5</option> <option>WEIGHT: 266 lbs</option> <option>HOMETOWN:Miami, Florida</option> <option>THEME SONG:Crown Jay-Z <option>WRESTLING STYLE:BADASS</option> <option>FINISHERS:</option> <option>-The Black Out</option> <option>-Spike Pile Driver</option> <option>SIGNATURE MOVES:</option> <option>-The Bank Breaker</option> <option>- Big Deposit</option> <option>-Curtain Call</option> <option>QUOTE: Bad Boys just KTFO the competition!</option> <option>QUOTE: I'm The Last of Real Bad Guys</option> | |
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| Steve | Apr 15 2015, 11:36 PM Post #4 |
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Ok so some of this will be my own feedback and some of it will be collected from behind the scenes feedback I've gotten from my 'advisers' in response to your survey. Somethings I personally get hung up on with you as an RP'er are simple mistakes such as spelling. I won't beat up grammar too much as that could just be a character trait. But for example last week in your RP you kept using off instead of...of. Another one was you kept calling Toby...Bostick instead of Bostock. Like I said they are just small things. The other thing that tends to put me off are how you take Quincy too far to the extreme sometimes. The dream RP is the first thing that springs to mind for me. I get that Quincy lives the high life and is a bad guy but sometimes I just feel like you are over doing it. The final thing from my stand point is how one minute you are giving to charity, doing some sort of public service, befriending faces, ect.....it comes across very wishy washy. Which also leads me to seeing out storylines to their finish. It was my understanding that the whole Mad Dawg thing was supposed to continue but it seems like it has just fallen by the wayside. From when I first encountered you at your FIW debut, you have come leaps and bounds and you are doing a good job. Those are just some of the things that stick out to me. Now onto some of the feedback I've collected from the 'back office' crew.
Just remember that feedback is a case by case basis. While you'll see points in her from different people's aspects. There were also arguments against some of these aspect such as the inconsistency and how it really could just be the trait of a true heel to flip and flop with each situation. I think all in all, Quincy would benefit from some slight evolution. Such as pulling away from the race card which I would agree is a well he goes to far too often. Other than that I'd work on polishing up your RP's mainly, usage of punctuation and proof reading for spelling mistakes. With all that said I hope that those that shared their feedback don't mind me quoting them word for word in this public forum. I hope this helps you continue to improve a character that I believe has come leaps and bounds since you began here in FIW. |
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