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FIW Weekly Double Shot Feedback; April 14, 2015
Topic Started: Apr 14 2015, 11:35 PM (294 Views)
Steve
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Still waiting on a couple matches that will be edited in later. Short short results for now.

Fallout

Main Event
Non-Title Singles Match

Deacon DEATH © vs Catherine

Writer: Steve

Tag Team Match
Luck of the Draw Tag Team Tournament

Johnny Amazing & Mark Cannon vs Billy Walker & Nathaniel Alexander

Writer: Sid

Anarchy in the UK 2015 Promo
Writer: Jim

Billy Walker Segment
Writer: Dai

Singles Match
Non-Title Grudge Match

Erik Holland © vs Nemesis

Writer: Will

Johnny/Mark/Brittany Segment
Writers: Lita/Dan

Singles Match
Quincy Wilson vs Cody McGinnis

Writer: Bran

Tag Team Match
Grudge Match

4R (Johann Wolff & Gunther Hoffman) vs Scott Knight & Darian Gray

Writer: Steve

ReVolt

Main Event
Inter-Gender Tag Team Match

Neo Carner & Raine Cannon vs Rurik Krychek & Bisenshi Sakura

Writer: Seph

Roy Harlowe/Douglas Greater Segment
Writer: Seph

Luck of the Draw Tag Team Tournament
Semi-Finals

Mad Dawg & Shaun Wilson vs Some Kind of Monster & Anthony Royal

Writer: Sid

Silas/Butch/Darian Segment
Writers: Jim/cookingood (Matt)
Rise of a Legend 2016 Promo
Writer: Jim

Singles Match
Non-Title

Bloodbath McGrath © vs Mungrel

Writer: Sid

Inter-Gender Tag Team Match
Grudge Match

Brittany & Roy Harlowe vs Terri Golde & Pyotr Sadovsky

Writer: Lita

Quincy/Brittany Promo
Writers: Bran/Lita

Welcome to FIW Match
Singles Match

H@VOK vs Max Rowley

Writer: Jo
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Not a complete show, but it's the majority of it, so that's still good. I figured with the extra hands helping this week we'd have great results, but you never know in the e-fed world.

Gotta say though, what was up was a quality read. Very entertaining, and it great to see what is going on with everyone else.

I hope I wrote Raine/Sakura alright. I tried to spotlight them as best I could, I'm really unfamiliar with the characters, and I did the best I could with what was in their profiles and what I saw in the RP forums this week.

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Holland/Nemesis is in, and I had a computer issue earlier which completely shitcanned Mungrel/Bloodbath. I lost the whole damn thing and I'm really mad.

If anyone wants to take that over for me I'd appreciate it.
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Send the results to me.
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Holland vs Nemesis has been edited in. Sent results for Bloodbath vs Mungrel to Sid. Sorry for the inconvenience.
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I apologize for the inconvenience, too.

Edit: There is a gigantic botch in writing in Nemesis/Holland. It's been corrected and sent to the FIW Network.
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Done and sent in.
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Ok all the matches are in and corrected. BIG HUGE thank you to Sid for taking on yet another match. This guy is a friggin' beast with matches!

I figured getting the majority of the show up minus a couple matches was better than a completely late show. So sorry if people didn't like that but at least it gets us rolling for the next week and no RP days are missed.

After reading through the 4R vs Darian and Knight, I'd like to extend a apology to Knight. I didn't get much for you into that match. I'm really struggling with the short result format and I think what my problem is that I'm focusing on the short result rather than just putting together a quality match. Please do not take this as a slight to your ability as I do think you are a quality RP'er hence why I added you to the FSC contender match this week.

Other than this was an all together good show in my opinion. I hope everyone else thinks so as well.
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Well, now that the whole show is in I don't feel like an asshole for saying that I really liked my match. I couldn't have asked for a better debut given the circumstances. I liked that the RPs were paid attention to and the action was pretty dang decent. Didn't get the joke at the end with Hitchen and Moore, but whatevs.

It's nice to be back!
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Well, now that the whole show is in I don't feel like an asshole for saying that I really liked my match. I couldn't have asked for a better debut given the circumstances. I liked that the RPs were paid attention to and the action was pretty dang decent. Didn't get the joke at the end with Hitchen and Moore, but whatevs.

It's nice to be back!

I didn't get the joke either. You aren't alone. Very happy to have you back!
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Great show this week really interesting things going on. Rougarou and Gray is turning into something I'm really looking forward to. And the end of Fallout was an awesome way to tie in a few of the feuds that are floating around and to make up for the no-show in a way that didn't hurt anyone's momentum.

Enjoyed my matches as well, very interested in how this partnership with Shaun Wilson is going to go considering half of The Summit is one of our opponents. And 4R Vs. Beauty & the Beast was a damn good match. Can agree it would've been nice to see more involvement from Knight but yeah I am with you on the fine line of writing short results as opposed to concentrating on the quality and trying to give some shine.

All in all fun show this week and onto next week...and here's credits!

Wait...oh yeah I don't do that anymore... ;) :D
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Mad Dawg's Accomplishments

Dual Crown Champion
(2/12/16 - 9/24/16)

2X FIW Undisputed International Champion
(1/29/12 - 5/27/12)
(10/13/15 - 1/8/16)

Finisher of the Year 2011 - The Mauler
(Runner-Up) Feud of the Year 2011
(Runner-Up) Heel of the Year 2011
Storyline of the Month (Apr '11, June '11, Sept '11, Nov. '11, June '12)
Match of the Month (Feb. '12, June '12)

"Big Bad" Bobby Sanchez' Accomplishments

FIW Undisputed International Championship
(5/12/13 - 9/1/13)

2012 FIW Grand Prix Champion

Storyline of the Month (May '12)
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I just realized I made a flub in the final segment of the show. I for some reason thought Abel was tag champ with Deacon when it's really Gilgamesh. Sorry about that. :P *disappears to fix*
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Finally finished, and I enjoyed the show. No apologies needed, btw. I've previously written matches, and for a while was the go-to guy for tag matches, so I understand the difficulty in getting the spotlight all around. I didn't feel slighted or anything. Worst case, we fuel a future issue with Knight and Gray.
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I hope people liked the Legend and Anarchy ads okay. They weren't much, but I thought I'd throw them together and keep them in people's minds.

I was good with Monster's match, it was just about the right length. Monster's been pretty fun to roleplay the past couple weeks and I got some interesting ideas for him. He's not going to be a full time character or make a title run anytime soon, but he's going to at least be a little more visible over the next few weeks than he has been in the past.

I'm going to make an effort to go through more of the show and post more feedback, but I can't promise anything. I'm going to a wedding on Saturday that's out of state, so I'm not going to be on the board much this weekend. FYI to Steve, I know I've got something planned for this coming ReVolt to work on but it'll probably be Monday night when I work on it and turn it in.

I think this past week we had 35 threads and 80 replies in the roleplay forum? Holy crap, that might be a record for one ReVolt. No wonder the board's been dead since the show got posted, everyone's exhausted. :P Good showing guys. The weeks where we had single digit threads in the roleplay forum, they weren't THAT long ago so it's great so see our roleplay forum so active. Especially since you consider we had a couple no-shows and notable characters either having the week off or just being used for segments. So good job guys. :)
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<option style="color:black">THE ROUGAROU</option>
<option> Name: </option>
<option>"The Rougarou" Silas Bergeron</option>
<option>Height:</option>
<option>6'6"</option>
<option>Weight:</option>
<option>296 lbs.</option>
<option>Hometown:</option>
<option>The Bayou</option>
<option>Entrance Music:</option>
<option>Led Zeppelin - 'When The Levee Breaks'</option>
<option>Wrestling Style:</option>
<option>Methodical Powerhouse</option>
<option>Signature Moves:</option>
<option> - Sword of Damocles </option>
<option> - Chokeslam </option>
<option> - Bayou Leg Sweep </option>
<option>Finishing Moves:</option>
<option> - Swamp Drop Brainbuster</option>
<option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option>
<option>Title History:</option>
<option> - 1x Fighting Spirit Champion</option>
<option>Other Cool Stuff:</option>
<option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Roleplay of the Year (Family Reunion)</option>
<option> - 2014 FIW Segment of the Year (The Rougarou Cometh)</option>
<option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Mr. GEIST/Deacon DEATH)</option>
<option> - 2014 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ Butch Babineaux)</option>
<option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Newcomer of the Year</option>
<option> - 2014 & 2015 FIW Manager of the Year (Butch Babineaux)</option>
<option> </option>
<option> Now do you believe in The Rougarou? </option>
</select></center>
<center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cadetblue; font-weight: bold; color:black">
<option style="color:black">#SWAGOLITION</option>
<option> Name: </option>
<option>"The Condemned" Lucas Bergeron</option>
<option>Height:</option>
<option>6'4½"</option>
<option>Weight:</option>
<option>235 lbs.</option>
<option>Hometown:</option>
<option>Kandiyohi, Minnesota</option>
<option>Entrance Music:</option>
<option>Black Sabbath - 'Hole in the Sky'</option>
<option>Wrestling Style:</option>
<option>Athletic - Strong Style - Brawler</option>
<option>Signature Moves:</option>
<option> - Exploder Suplex </option>
<option> - Powerbomb </option>
<option> - German Suplex </option>
<option>Finishing Moves:</option>
<option> - The Manhattan Project</option>
<option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option>
<option>Title History:</option>
<option> - n/a </option>
<option>Other Cool Stuff:</option>
<option> - 2015 FIW ReVolt Match of the Year (vs. Nemesis, 6/6/15)</option>
<option> - 2015 FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Nemesis)</option>
<option> - 2015 FIW Babyface of the Year</option>
<option> - 2015 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ The Rougarou)</option>
<option> </option>
<option> Just Give The Lunatic A Chance... </option>
</select></center>
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<option style="color:black">THE MAN IN BLACK</option>
<option> Name: </option>
<option>Jim O'Brien </option>
<option>Height:</option>
<option>6'7"</option>
<option>Weight:</option>
<option>290 lbs.</option>
<option>Hometown:</option>
<option>Grant's Lick, Kentucky</option>
<option>Entrance Music:</option>
<option>Motörhead - 'Line in the Sand'</option>
<option>Wrestling Style:</option>
<option>Strong Style Powerhouse</option>
<option>Signature Moves:</option>
<option> - Belly-to-Belly Suplex</option>
<option> - Saito Suplex </option>
<option> - Jackknife Powerbomb </option>
<option> - Hells Bells-plex</option>
<option>Finishing Moves:</option>
<option> - Hells Bells</option>
<option> - F-Bomb</option>
<option>Title History:</option>
<option> - 2x Fighting Spirit Champion </option>
<option> - 1x co-holder of the FIW Tag Team Championships of the World (w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option>
<option> - 1x Ultimate Endurance Champion</option>
<option> - 1x Spirit Of Honour Champion</option>
<option> - 3x Dual Crown Champion</option>
<option> Other Cool Stuff: </option>
<option> - 2015 FIW Hall of Fame inductee</option>
<option> - 2004 TNT Superstar Of The Year</option>
<option> - 2004 Feud Of The Year (w/ Silent Rage)</option>
<option> - 2004 Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Genocide)
<option> - 2005 1st Runner-Up, TNT Superstar Of The Year</option>
<option> - 2005 Co-Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Anarchy In The UK)</option>
<option> - 2008 & 2012 Lady Luck Tournament Champion </option>
<option> - 2008 Grand Prix Tournament Champion</option>
<option> - 2008 Match of the Year participant (vs. Liam Mortell vs. Kiyoshi Nakahata @ FIW Summer of Sin) </option>
<option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW Feud of the Year participant (vs. Ash Koopa)</option>
<option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW (Face/Heel/Tweener) Turn of the Year</option>
<option> - 2009 ReVolt Match Of The Year participant (vs. Ethan Adams @ ReVolt Against The Champions X)</option>
<option> - 2009 FIW Tag Team Of The Year (The O'Brien Clan, w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option>
<option> - 2009 FIW Duo Of The Year (w/ Kendra O'Brien)</option>
<option> - April 2012 Superstar of the Month</option>
<option> - April 2012 Storyline of the Month ("Dirty Deeds...")</option>
<option> - May 2012 Superstar of the Month</option>
<option> - May 2012 Match of the Month participant (vs. Damien Holburn @ FIW Deadlock)</option>
<option> - July 2012 Co-Match of the Month participant (vs. Mad Dawg @ FIW ReVolt (07/01/12)</option>
<option> </option>
<option> So yeah, Jim was awesome. :-D </option>
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Maybe they're all just wondering how Roy got spanked on the cheek. >_> The cheek on his face of course.

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I keep forgetting...thank you to all those who have taken the time to judge. Your input has certainly helped a lot with tough decisions. Remember, judging is open to all. The guidelines can be seen here.
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Sorry for the delay in feedback; I've been kinda busy IRL. Also, apologies if the feedback I have all sounds the same but I genuinely enjoyed the entire show, though. Great work from everyone involved in putting it together. Here's more detailed feedback, though:

H@VOK vs Max Rowley

I'm glad to see Wight coming back into e-fedding again. It was always fun to see what he would come up with for his characters. I don't think I ever got to see Havok in the first place so I'm definitely looking forward to seeing that. This match was awesome. I think it flowed really well and it was really well-written. Cool to see Havok pick up the win on that too.

Quincy/Brittany Promo

I really like the story revolving around Brittany, Quincy, Johnny, and Mark. Bran, Lita, and Dan have done a great job at propelling that whole story forward and I really liked this promo from Bran and Lita. Awesome stuff from both of ya here.

Brittany & Roy Harlowe vs Terri Golde & Pyotr Sadovsky

This match was definitely a fun read. I liked the pacing of the match with Roy coming in for the save just in the nick of time. The bit with him hurling all over Terri was a hilarious visual too. Lol. I really enjoyed reading this match.

Bloodbath McGrath vs Mungrel

Nice, short match between two characters that I'm definitely a fan of. Looks like none of Kim Coulter's boys managed to eke out a win this week. That actually gives me some ideas for RP's for the upcoming week. This was a fun, easy read cause of the length.

Rise of a Legend 2016 Promo

Just like I said before, I really like how we have "advertisements" for future events on the shows now. It really gives them a realistic feel.

Silas/Butch/Darian Segment

Really cool segment from Jim and Matt. I've always said I really like the Darian Gray character and it was cool to see how he plays off of Butch and Silas in this segment. Definitely enjoyed this segment.

Mad Dawg & Shaun Wilson vs Some Kind of Monster & Anthony Royal

Another short, sweet match. Sometimes it's hard (in my opinion) to get a feel for the pace of a match, but in this case it was really easy even though it was a short match. It seemed like everyone was represented evenly in the match, which I'm sure can be difficult when it's a short match. Good stuff overall, though.

Roy Harlowe/Douglas Greater Segment

This was a great segment from Seph. Greater definitely seems like the "kick a guy when he's down" type and this segment definitely proved it. Also, I can't help but feel for Roy in wanting ot get away from Douglas. I mean, taking 88% of his earnings as a wrestler! Geez, talk about highway robbery! Lol.

Neo Carner & Raine Cannon vs Rurik Krychek & Bisenshi Sakura

"He's a cure for the common wrestler!" Lol, that line in the commentary for this match was hilarious. I really enjoyed this match that capped off Revolt. "Neo was becoming a punching bag but instead of punches he was getting kicks, go figure." That line made me laugh too. Overall, this was a really fun read. Great job from Seph on this match.

4R (Johann Wolff & Gunther Hoffman) vs Scott Knight & Darian Gray

This was a good opening match for Fallout. Things got underway really quickly and seemed to keep that pace the whole way through. I really like both Scott Knight and Darian Gray, so it would have been cool to see them take the win but this was a good match nonetheless, though.

Quincy Wilson vs Cody McGinnis

Good to see Cody getting the W in this match. This match wasn't as short as some of the others before it but it was still relatively short. Nonetheless, it was a fun read and easy to visualize as well.

Johnny/Mark/Brittany Segment

'Nother good segment from Dan and Lita here. I half expected that last line in the promo from Mark as soon as Johnny said "We're not a cute tag team." Lol.

Erik Holland vs Nemesis

I noticed a few coding issues in this match but beyond that this was a fun match to read. I'm not sure if I've said before, but I'm a fan of Erik Holland. I think the only thing this match was missing was a bit of commentary to space it out a bit, but the action was awesome and I liked that it had that quick pace with the constant pinfall attempts.

Billy Walker Segment

I actually nearly missed this segment cause I thought it was part of the ensuing AiUK advertisement. Lol. This segment was short and sweet like a few other things on the show here. I had a lot of fun with the RP's this week with Dai and Lita, especially when Billy would throw the aforementioned (in the promo) Dual Crown shot in Nathaniel's face.

Anarchy in the UK 2015 Promo

This was a cool-looking promo for AiUK. I like the inclusion of the Zac Brown Band song. Good stuff.

Johnny Amazing & Mark Cannon vs Billy Walker & Nathaniel Alexander

Awesome match from Sid. I liked the commentary with Chip being wholeheartedly on the side of Nathaniel and Billy. The exchange between he and Jonathan where Chip tells him they're pros and keep their shit out of the ring exactly that was a great way to set the tone for their interaction. The match itself was great and Nathaniel was written well. I think the loss for Nathaniel and Billy is gonna work perfectly for upcoming RP's.

Deacon DEATH vs Catherine

This match seems to have gotten out of hand really quickly! Lol. The aftermath with everybody involved was awesome and played well into the feuds that are currently going on. I wasn't expecting Nathaniel to jump into the fray but it was great to see how all of it worked out, though.
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:) Thank you for feedback on my match Nathan! I appreciate it, makes me feel like I wrote something and somebody actually read it. I appreciate it when my work is appreciated. ^_^
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When don't I like the show?

I think a lot of exciting things are happening. I love the energy around the show that's been here for weeks. :) It feels like the old days. Great matches and interesting segments all around.
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