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Siobhán Feedback; Everyone else is doing it!
Topic Started: May 18 2015, 03:41 AM (109 Views)
Skell
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Can be tough with just one (well two counting her short bit in the group RP this week...) post... but any feedback on the new character is welcome.

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http://z4.invisionfree.com/FIWII/index.php?showtopic=20069
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That Darn Seph
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Mya is Quincy's girlfriend, everyone knows that, why wouldn't Tobeh, the best interviewer?

It's a solid RP, although her not knowing anything about her enemies or partners really shows she has no interest in the wrestling aspect of being apart of FIW, I mean, I've seen it countless times where people throw the "I don't know much about them" card and it really grinds the momentum of the topic to a halt in interest when people are like "they got something or another, I dunno, don't really care to invest any time in my opponents to know what they're all about." I always find building characters who give the opponent some kind of credibility so it allows the win to be more meaningful. I mean if she doesn't care, why should we?

I'm sure the character will develop over time, she is very interesting, I like the monarchy set up, reminds me of a certain King....King of Crowns of some kind. :P Make her like the Red Queen. "OFF WITH YOUR HEAD!"
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I took the "Quincy's whatever" a different way, Seph. She's actually Quincy's fiancee but he blatantly cheats on her so much that nobody really knows what the hell is going on there.

Siobhán is a bit rough around the edges, but that's to be expected for a brand new character. I feel like this RP did a better job of introducing her than the first one you did in the Roster Meeting thread. This one sets her up as some entitled snob whereas the prior one she just seemed catty in before learning more about her as a person... or whatever she is.
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Figure I'll just update this with the 3 new rps :P

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Postmatch Decree, Siobhán 2 - http://z4.invisionfree.com/FIWII/index.php?showtopic=20086
Her Highness and Tobeh, SO'R 3 - http://z4.invisionfree.com/FIWII/index.php?showtopic=20147

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Revolt/Fallout
It's Late, I'm Tired, SOR4 - http://z4.invisionfree.com/FIWII/index.php?showtopic=20194

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