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Seph Feedback
Topic Started: Jul 6 2015, 10:57 PM (115 Views)
That Darn Seph
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So I wanna see if I have a gift for assigning random personalities to referees, I tried to drum up as much interest as I could for the match between a referee and a former Dual Crown Champion, I dunno, I wanted to do something original and different, and hopefully memorable.
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That Darn Seph,Jul 6 2015
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Lester's Iliad

So I wanna see if I have a gift for assigning random personalities to referees, I tried to drum up as much interest as I could for the match between a referee and a former Dual Crown Champion, I dunno, I wanted to do something original and different, and hopefully memorable.

Well I'm mostly offended because I wore nearly that exact suit to work today, and I'm totally not a sleazy used car salesman!

I liked the RP well enough, though. It didn't do much to convince me that a guy 15 years removed from indy darling status could give Neo a run for him money, but rather it somehow got me pumped to see how narrowly Lester would escape death by.

I like Neo. I dunno. :wub:

EDIT: I guess if I was to level one criticism, it would be that there are a lot of "your"s rather than "you're"s, which is pretty darn minor if you ask me!
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Yeah, I appreciate the feedback and that's the thought process I felt everyone was going to have in this match. So thank you very much for your feedback, I will repay you with a sig whenever you become more active :P
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Anyone care to feed the monkey on my back?
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I keep WANTING to give you feedback when you ask for it? But I don't know that I'm equipped to. With most of your characters, I'm actually a big fan. Roy, Cage, Douglas Greater, Spencer... to a lesser extent, but still. He's decent. All I ever wanna say there is "keep up the good work".

Then there's Neo Carner.

I... just don't like Neo Carner. He does stuff sometimes that I really dig, like that whole home invasion thing in the apartment building or whatever. I liked that RP. But that's the exception and not the rule. I don't wanna go TOO deep into, like, a list of grievances or something because A) I don't wanna seem like I'm trying to shit on you and B) PLENTY OF OTHER PEOPLE (I'm lookin' at you, Lita) LOVE Neo Carner. So I dunno, maybe I'm just smoking drugs. But here's a basic overview.

1) Neo is all over the place. One minute he's a disgusting, slimy, cowardly heel... the next he's the charismatic anti-hero like Chris Jericho after he jumped ship into WWE and the fans wouldn't stop cheering him. Then in the next he's a brutal fucking mastermind who has all the pins in all the right places and everyone under his thumb. It just makes the character feel like "whatever fits the context of the situation with THESE specific catch phrases" and not as much like a coherent, singular entity. That's not to say Neo CAN'T get hardcore over a big match, or he CAN'T goof around if he's got a serious gimmick going, but it's less shades of different emotions inside one 'main' emotion, and more... like, different from RP to RP.
2) Sometimes I have no idea what the fuck he's talking about. This may just be an Ultimate Warrior thing that I'm not getting because I can't read his vocal inflection. I know last week had some strong shades of that (I mentioned it in one of my responses, after all) but, like, in general. You do this with him every now and then and I'm left staring at the screen, confused.

I thought I was gonna have three or four points but that was basically it. I hope I didn't offend you and I hope that helps? Not that I think you need it. You have plenty of fans 'round these parts.
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Honestly I've never been a fan of the cowardly thing, it sort of got stuck on Neo when he became DC and others have written him as such. I tend not to include it as Neo has existed for twelve years and is a very much living, breathing entity. As a face he always faced all challenges and never backed down from anything. I get heels are supposed to be chicken shit sometimes, but i dunno, never been a fan of it with Neo. He is always changing and not staying to one style. That and I'm bipolar, so yeah... I feel differently all the time. I try to convey a consistent theme with most of my characters but with Neo I feel he is my vent that allows me to be myself.

That and I get faded and write stupid shit sometimes. Not everything I write is great.
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