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| FIW Weekly Double Shot Supershow Feedback; July 28th, 2015 | |
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| Steve | Jul 28 2015, 12:28 PM Post #1 |
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ReVolt Brittany & Mercedes Segment Writers: Bleak & Lita Hellcat Championship Kim Coulter © vs Brittany Referee: Mark Deveaux Writer: Lita Mungrel Segment Writer: Mun Singles Match “Immaculate” Jimmy Steel vs “The Portrait” Darian Gray Referee: Lester Riggs Writer: Seph Mungrel Segment Writer: Mun Singles Match Johnny Amazing vs Cage Murdock Referee: Tony Clarke Writer: Seph Mungrel Interview Segment Writer: Mun Main Event Fighting Spirit Championship Quincy Wilson © vs Cody McGinnis Referee: Domenic Dorsch Writer: Sid Avila/Jack Manson Segment Writer: Sid Fallout Jack Manson/Neo Carner Segment ft. Madison Manson Writers: Seph & Steve Singles Match Maxime Rowley vs Nemesis Referee: Richard Kelly Writer: Sid Mercedes Blackwell/Terri Golde Segment Writer: Jo Jack Manson/Ethan Adams Segment ft. Madison Manson Writer: Steve Hellcat Six Pack Challenge Mercedes vs Pet vs Terri vs Helena vs Momo vs Tormenta Referee: Kristy Arnold Writer: Lita Mungrel Segment Writer: Mun Singles Match H@VOK vs Roy Harlowe Referee: Logan Black Writer: Sid Main Event Tag Team Match *Leader Board Points at Stake* The Blood Diamonds (Bloodbath McGrath & Nathaniel Alexander) vs Mad Dawg & Stephen J Eversol Referee: Tony Clarke Writer: Mun Summer of Sin Announcement ft. Ethan Adams Writer: Steve WOW....I think this is probably the earliest the show has ever gone up. Huge thanks goes out to this weeks writers and every writer that contributes to these shows going up on time. This weeks show was jammed packed with segments and action and in my opinion was a great lead in to Summer of Sin. Speaking of which the card will be posted shortly. |
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| Willie | Jul 28 2015, 03:10 PM Post #2 |
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I guess I got my wires crossed and thought I was getting some segments prepared with Pain for the next show. That's my fault. I will help Pain sell the match through us RPing Maybe a segment before our match too, I have some ideas.Will get a chance to read the entire show shortly. |
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| That Darn Seph | Jul 28 2015, 06:36 PM Post #3 |
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Huh, I lost all of my matches. Didn't even know Momo was in a match, missed that. Sorry to everybody involved. Good show, very beefy and thick. Lots of drama, love Brittany segment to start the show, the Nathaniel showing with Kim Coulter, was a solid promo. The rest of the show was great, I had a fun time RPing with Wight, Lita and the gang, good times, good times. :o I'm really looking forward to Summer Of Sin, this is like another Wrestlemania level PPV, we're on a roll man! EDIT: My God, just saw the graphics, and I gotta say, they're fucking AMAZING. Lita continues to prove she is the best in the business at this graphic nonsense and that I should just give up and retire and let her absorb my talent through osmosis.
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| Minister Wighty | Jul 28 2015, 09:40 PM Post #4 |
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Best PPV graphics, hands down. I would say that I was surprised I won, because I think Seph took the edge in RPs, but after reading the segment with Darian Gray I'm glad it turned out like it did. Havok losing would've made him look really awful and set Roy up for an obvious loss to transfer heat to the returning portrait. However, with Roy losing from his injuries, it means he has a healthy excuse if he loses and looks meteoric if he wins, getting mucho heat. Good call, management. I liked my match. I'm glad havok wasn't to brutal but I'm also glad he didn't pull any punches. Lots of little touches that I appreciated. Enjoyed the Manson/Carner segment. Go Jack! Great show, glad its up so early. Thanks, everyone! |
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| Jimmy Jimbo | Jul 29 2015, 02:22 AM Post #5 |
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Just wanted to pop in and say, holy hell, those graphics are amazing. Tremendous job as always, Lits.
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[align=center] [/align][size0]Thanks, Lita! ![]() <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cc3300; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE ROUGAROU</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Rougarou" Silas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'6"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>296 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>The Bayou</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Led Zeppelin - 'When The Levee Breaks'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Methodical Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Sword of Damocles </option> <option> - Chokeslam </option> <option> - Bayou Leg Sweep </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Swamp Drop Brainbuster</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 1x Fighting Spirit Champion</option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Roleplay of the Year (Family Reunion)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Segment of the Year (The Rougarou Cometh)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Mr. GEIST/Deacon DEATH)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Newcomer of the Year</option> <option> - 2014 & 2015 FIW Manager of the Year (Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> </option> <option> Now do you believe in The Rougarou? </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cadetblue; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">#SWAGOLITION</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Condemned" Lucas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'4½"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>235 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Kandiyohi, Minnesota</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Black Sabbath - 'Hole in the Sky'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Athletic - Strong Style - Brawler</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Exploder Suplex </option> <option> - Powerbomb </option> <option> - German Suplex </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - The Manhattan Project</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - n/a </option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2015 FIW ReVolt Match of the Year (vs. Nemesis, 6/6/15)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Nemesis)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Babyface of the Year</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ The Rougarou)</option> <option> </option> <option> Just Give The Lunatic A Chance... </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: 14b8ff; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE MAN IN BLACK</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>Jim O'Brien </option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'7"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>290 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Grant's Lick, Kentucky</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Motörhead - 'Line in the Sand'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Strong Style Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Belly-to-Belly Suplex</option> <option> - Saito Suplex </option> <option> - Jackknife Powerbomb </option> <option> - Hells Bells-plex</option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Hells Bells</option> <option> - F-Bomb</option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 2x Fighting Spirit Champion </option> <option> - 1x co-holder of the FIW Tag Team Championships of the World (w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 1x Ultimate Endurance Champion</option> <option> - 1x Spirit Of Honour Champion</option> <option> - 3x Dual Crown Champion</option> <option> Other Cool Stuff: </option> <option> - 2015 FIW Hall of Fame inductee</option> <option> - 2004 TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2004 Feud Of The Year (w/ Silent Rage)</option> <option> - 2004 Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Genocide) <option> - 2005 1st Runner-Up, TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2005 Co-Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Anarchy In The UK)</option> <option> - 2008 & 2012 Lady Luck Tournament Champion </option> <option> - 2008 Grand Prix Tournament Champion</option> <option> - 2008 Match of the Year participant (vs. Liam Mortell vs. Kiyoshi Nakahata @ FIW Summer of Sin) </option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW Feud of the Year participant (vs. Ash Koopa)</option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW (Face/Heel/Tweener) Turn of the Year</option> <option> - 2009 ReVolt Match Of The Year participant (vs. Ethan Adams @ ReVolt Against The Champions X)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Tag Team Of The Year (The O'Brien Clan, w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Duo Of The Year (w/ Kendra O'Brien)</option> <option> - April 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - April 2012 Storyline of the Month ("Dirty Deeds...")</option> <option> - May 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - May 2012 Match of the Month participant (vs. Damien Holburn @ FIW Deadlock)</option> <option> - July 2012 Co-Match of the Month participant (vs. Mad Dawg @ FIW ReVolt (07/01/12)</option> <option> </option> <option> So yeah, Jim was awesome. :-D </option> </select></center> | |
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| That Darn Seph | Jul 29 2015, 02:49 AM Post #6 |
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| Lita Maivia | Jul 29 2015, 03:19 AM Post #7 |
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Firstly, thanks for the feedback on the graphics. I always like hearing whether or not people like them. ![]() I've had so much fun working with Bleak since he came back. Both Eversol and Mercedes are great characters and I'm glad that I have characters are constantly able to interact with them. The Brittany/Mercedes friendship is one of the few things I never really got to do last time in the Hellcats division. Jaime and Lesbiana were friends but there was always a brewing rivalry between them. Brittany and Mercedes get to play legit friends and that's a lot of fun. Then of course there's Kim who's involved with both Eversol and Mercedes in very different ways. The Kim/Mercedes feud has been on a slow boil for a while and I'm really enjoying watching that heat up. It was kind of cool getting to do Kim vs. Brittany even if it only happens once ever. It was a cool storyline idea for a number of reasons, the biggest one being that aforementioned friendship between Brittany and Mercedes in conjunction with that aforementioned feud between Kim and Mercedes. I had a lot of fun writing this, especially with Nathaniel Alexander involved. I hope Nate was OK with everything I had him do in this. Nathaniel is one of my favorite characters in FIW at the moment and I really like the dynamic he and Kim have when they're working together. Plus it was fun getting to dig up some Nathaniel/Johnny heat again. Also, I got to put Kim back on the mic and I always like having her verbally bury the division. I was surprised Steve made it a title match, but I think all things considered it was for the best that Kim cheated yet again to survive with her belt. The finish to Darian vs. Steel was fantastic. It made Steel look great without damaging Darian one bit, and it also wasn't some super shady finish. Steel got to hit a move off someone who wasn't touched beforehand yet everyone was so protected. Brilliant. The interview segment was Nate's idea and I had a lot of fun with. As I said, I love when Nathaniel and Kim are together and I always have so much fun with Kim on the mic. I liked that Cage vs. Johnny was so short. It made sense to not really let it get going before Nathaniel ruins it because that puts so much more heat on Nathaniel. Johnny and Cage (Johnny Cage, heh) had a great first match together so I sort of see this as something that a lot of fans would be anxious to see round two for but Nathaniel interrupts it before it gets going. What a douche. Loved the Mungrel segments. Damn, why couldn't I be one of those fans he felt up? Shocked to see Cody win the FSC. Not a knock on T or his work but I really loved seeing Quincy with that title. But I did have a lot of fun RPing with T last week and this week with the whole Johnny/Cody friendship or whatever the hell it is they have. Are they heading towards a feud? Pain is an unpredictable asshole. The Jack Manson and Neo Carner segment was fantastic. Steve sent it to me but I literally had nothing to add. He and Seph had wrote it perfectly for what it needed to accomplish. I am really looking forward to the Jack/Neo match at Summer of Sin. I miss Skell. I feel like he's been missing. Can someone please find him? Nemesis was great as always and I am loving the build to another Nemesis/Nathaniel confrontation.Great stuff between Terri and Mercedes. Terri is a great bitch and Mercedes is just awesome. I can hear and see her stuff actually playing out. The Hellcats Six-Pack Challenge was a lot of fun to write. I hope everyone is happy with how I wrote their characters. I know some of you weren't able to get anything up for them and that's OK this week as we were really just building to something for Summer of Sin and I wanted all the girls to at least get some spotlight since the match wasn't going to have a winner. I think the build for Darian and Roy is one of my favorite things building for Summer of Sin. I've been a fan of Darian Gray ever since he showed up the first time so I'm glad to see him back and so heavily involved in something. Of course I'm a Roy Harlowe fan if one of my characters is dating him! This should be fun. I completely agree with Wight that Havok losing after what happened to Roy earlier would have been pretty bad so I'm glad that didn't happen. The main-event was super entertaining, thanks in large part to Mungrel on commentary. I love how we got teased with Nathaniel/Eversol as well as Bloodbath/Mad Dawg so that you're still dying to see more from both of these rivalries. And I loved that Johnny got to be involved in a main-event closing segment! And that Mungrel seems to be a fan! That's some high praise! I liked Ethan's moment of power to close the show. I've always loved Ethan and so it's already good to see him actually doing something. And he was large and in charge. I'm super excited for Summer of Sin after this show. Good job, team! |
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| That Darn Seph | Jul 29 2015, 03:51 AM Post #8 |
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| Jo | Jul 29 2015, 04:55 AM Post #9 |
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I found the six pack to be a rather fun read, even if I didn't RP directly for it. Now I'm not so upset I didn't as I kinda liked working Terri some and the back and forth bits with Brittany and Mercedes. Speaking of, thanks for doing them with me. ![]() As I am eager to begin writing I'll leave off for now with saying; yay! Early show! Like surprisingly early, could've read this before going to bed if I didn't need to be somewhere in the evening. Also, Roxie's not coming here. It was a comedy bit. ![]() Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Digitalwheelin | Jul 29 2015, 05:59 AM Post #10 |
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Holy crap, this show was jam packed! It was the perfect go-home show for SoS. As everyone has said, the graphics for the PPV look amazing, but it's Lita's graphic work so that's not exactly uncommon. Lol. I had a lot of fun reading it and I'm DEFINITELY looking forward to SoS with everything that's brewing now. But, with that said, on to the feedback! ReVolt Brittany & Mercedes Segment I like that the show opened up with a segment this time around. This was a cool segment to set up for the opening match and still incorporate the heat between Mercedes and Kim. I like the way things have played out so far in that when Mercedes isn't directly in front of Kim, Kim thinks "out of sight, out of mind" but the anger toward Kim is all-consuming for Mercedes 24/7. Really cool segment from Lita and The Other Steve. Kim Coulter © vs. Brittany A really fun match to read and I really liked the inclusion of Nathaniel Alexander at ringside helping Kim. The heel tactics he and Kim were using, including leaving the ring the second Johnny and Mercedes came in was awesome. I really like when Nathaniel is portrayed as that chicken-shit heel. I'm glad this was the start of reigniting things between Alexander and Johnny as well. Mungrel Segment This was a short, but effective segment from Mun for Mungrel. It got me interested to see how it would play out and just what he was up to. "Immaculate” Jimmy Steel vs. “The Portrait” Darian Gray Darian Gray matches are always a lot of fun to read and write, and this was no exception to the reading part. Good stuff from Seph and I liked the finish with Darian, once again, using the portrait on Roy's face and writing in blood to set up for SoS.
Leave it to Chip Martin to say something like that. Lol. Nathaniel Interview Segment I came up with the idea for this segment after I saw Sid's RP with Desmond Crowley. I didn't get a chance to respond to it before deadline, so I wanted to have something for Sid to use for the Nemesis/Alexander stuff to kick into gear. I like the stuff Lita added to it with the Hellcats title match for SoS and the bit about Nemesis as well. I think it set things up nicely for all of that and also further put over the heel heat for both Nathaniel and Kim. Mungrel Segment Well…what was it?! Don't leave it hanging like that!! Lol, this was an interesting bit of a segment. I like how it almost felt like a security camera recording like you'd see in those cop shows or something. Lol. I like how this continued the intrigue and interest from the previous segment as well. Johnny Amazing vs. Cage Murdock Boy, Nathaniel is really determined to make his presence known, isn't he? First the Kim/Brittany match and now this. Lol. But it's only right considering Johnny tried to beat him up for no reason. *shifty eyes* This was a really cool match and a lot of fun to read. Just like with Darian Gray, matches with Johnny Amazing are always fun to read and write. I love that Chip Martin is overwhelmingly rooting for Nathaniel too. Lol. Mungrel Interview Segment Ya know, it's funny; I think this segment left a lot more questions to be answered than the previous two. Lol! I like the increased presence for Mungrel in this show compared to usual. Quincy Wilson © vs. Cody McGinnis Wow, wasn't expecting Cody to win this match, I thought it would be Quincy winning and then lead to maybe a triple-threat or something. It was cool to see Cody get the win in this. I'm a fan of his as well as Quincy, though, so it would have been cool either way to see either one of them win. It'll be interesting to see what happens at SoS when Cody faces Erik for the title. Avila/Jack Manson Segment Another really short, but effective segment. I like how the segments for this show almost seemed like those ones you'd see on WWE TV where they show some short, 5 to 10-second deal just before cutting to commercial. It makes them feel more realistic that way at least in this case with their brevity on this show. Fallout Jack Manson/Neo Carner Segment ft. Madison Manson Wow, these segments with Jack Manson and Neo Carner keep getting more intense with each one. This was no exception and it was awesome. It reminded me of an old-school Attitude Era segment in WWE. That's not a bad thing by any means; I thought it was really cool and continued to add more heel heat to Neo's character. And again, it reminded me of a movie villain with Neo's word choice here; like some psychotic but methodical villain. Like a combination of Kevin Spacey's character in Se7en and maybe a slightly toned down version of the Joker or something. Lol. Maxime Rowley vs Nemesis This match was a good one despite its length. It really made Nemesis look like a monster on the loose and looking for blood. Like Jonathan said, Nathaniel may end up regretting poking the bear named Nemesis. Lol. This was a good match and I'm definitely looking forward to pushing this story forward with Nathaniel and Nemesis. Mercedes Blackwell/Terri Golde Segment I really liked this segment with Mercedes and Terri. It almost paints Terri in sort of a jealous way or something and Mercedes knows something is up and doesn't hold back in denying Terri what she wants with Pet, whatever that may be. Good stuff from both The Other Steve and Jo with this segment. Also, I could easily see someone like Kim using this to her advantage in talking about Mercedes being teacher to Pet and Pet not doing well; except it'll be a way to prove Mercedes doesn't stand a chance with her. Kim is enough of a bitch to suggest something like that. Lol. The bit at the end with Roxie suddenly appearing was a nice touch too. Jack Manson/Ethan Adams Segment ft. Madison Manson Steve passed the book from himself to…himself?! Lol. This was a good, short segment if only for the sake of continuity and to show Ethan taking over to transition to his involvement in the ME this week. I think with Madison being hospitalized, the match between Neo and Jack is gonna have that extra bit of emotion that I think will make it even better than it already seems it will be. I'm definitely looking forward to that. Mercedes vs Pet vs Terri vs Helena vs Momo vs Tormenta This match was awesome and I think it showcased everybody well enough. The ending was really cool to get things brewing further between Mercedes and Kim. I agree with Lita that it's been awesome to see the slow burn between those two characters and it'll definitely be interesting to see where it goes. I like how Kim and Nathaniel seemingly had the same idea in ruining a match that was set to decide their fate in a lot of ways. Mungrel Segment I like the way each segment built up from the previous one and then we finally got the "punch line" so to speak at the end in the main event match. Overall, all the segments were cool and the last two before the big surprise in the ME were fun to read. H@VOK vs Roy Harlowe Short, quick match between these two and I like the way it turned out. It was really well-written and, though short, it had a lot of good action in it. I think the fact that Roy went into it injured pretty much ensured that he was going to be on the losing end of this one. Overall, it was a really good match. 4R Segment This segment sorta showed up after refreshing the show while I was reading. So, here's the feedback on that. This segment does a damn good job of putting over how vile and hateful 4R can be and showing just how violent they can be too. This was yet another short, but effective segment, which there were a lot of in this show. Good stuff from Marc here. I'm looking forward to seeing how the Summit retaliate at SoS. The Blood Diamonds (Bloodbath McGrath & Nathaniel Alexander) vs Mad Dawg & Stephen J Eversol Admittedly, I had to jump to this match FIRST just because I was super eager to see how things were gonna play out. I had somewhat of an idea, but I wasn't totally sure, though. This was a great match and I like the fact that Cage and Johnny interfered for retribution for Nathaniel messing up their match. Lol. The inclusion of Mungrel on commentary was a nice touch as well, since this match directly affected him at SoS.
LMAO! That was hilarious and the parts where the tennis balls were used was awesome. THAT'S what those Mungrel segments were leading to! Lol. Summer of Sin Announcement ft. Ethan Adams Nice set up for the matches at SoS. I liked the way Ethan threw out the Fatal Fourway for SoS with Nathaniel, Stephen, Johnny and Cage and how Nathaniel reacted to it. And having Chip jump the gun in thinking he eliminated Cage and Johnny was a nice touch as well. I've said this to The Other Steve and Lita before, but I'll say it here; I honestly never expected for Alexander to be put in a position to possibly be a contender for the DC title, let alone be in the main event scene at all. So, it's been awesome to have the feud going on with Alexander and Eversol this whole time with it. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how things unfold at SoS. |
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| BleakInfinity | Jul 29 2015, 06:21 AM Post #11 |
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First off, just as everyone has been saying, the graphics for Summer of Sin look amazing so awesome job to Lita on that. The playing cards are really cool and Kim being the Queen and H@vok being the Joker were the little things I liked about them. I really liked writing the segment with Lita for Brittany and Mercedes. I wanted to make sure that Mercedes showed concern for Brittany going out there alone against Kim and her boys. I thought it was important to really show their friendship growing and then Lita allowed Mercedes to do the run-in with Johnny so I really appreciate that. The Kim vs Brittany match was really cool and helped to re-ignite the Johnny vs. Nathaniel rivalry and bring back up the Mercedes vs. Kim rivalry. I like that Kim keeps away from the rest of the division while she has all of these women who are fighting among each other. When she finally gets beat for the title it's going to be a big deal. Though it's weird my characters want to beat her and help her too. Darian Gray spelling out SOS with the blood was a really cool ending and it gets my hyped for his match with Roy. It's gonna be brutal. Can't wait. Kim/Nathaniel segment was funny. Nathaniel is such an asshole. He's like the Kevin Owens of FIW where he has feuds with everyone right now. I mean seriously, who isn't he feuding with? I was pretty surprised to see Cody get the win myself but it's cool to have a new title holder in Cody/Pain and this should create some cool new rivalries. I'm also excited to see the Wilson brothers as a team against 4R. Speaking of 4R their segment was pretty creepy and chilling. Good stuff Well if anything was going to get Jack to fight Neo it was hurting Madison. That segment was good in showing Jack finally cave and it brought a good amount of heat for Neo. I like that Steve established his love for Madison and Lita did that as well so the moment had a ton of impact. I really liked the segment Jo did for Terri and Mercedes. He sent me the segment but I only changed a few things and added the end of it. It was really well written and I like that it adds another rivalry and another person on the list of people who hate the Mercedes/Brittany/Pet trio. The RP threat between Mercedes and Pet was a ton of fun too and it helped us to understand Pet a little more and see the friendship between her and Mercedes grow some more as well. The Hellcat match was a ton of fun to read. Lita did a good job of letting each Hellcat show off their moves a bit and then when it turned into total chaos was great too with Kim being the catalyst. I like that Mercedes is such a hot head that can't focus when Kim's in her presence. That's being written really well. Roy losing the match made sense after he had just had his busted open and he still garnered sympathy as has been said. All while giving H@vok a win heading into SOS. The Mungrel segments were really funny and entertaining. Giving the fans tennis balls and handing out tickets to SOS was awesome. I enjoyed them and having him on commentary while the other men in the ring are fighting to get a shot at his title was a nice touch. That main event was really awesome and a great way to keep the tension going between all involved. I told Nate all week I had no idea what would happen and never saw this coming. I'm really excited for this cycle, being able to RP for a potential DC match is crazy to me but it's really great seeing Eversol being in that position, especially with great characters like Murdock, Nate and Johnny. This was a really great go-home show before the PPV. Great job to everyone who wrote this week and especially to Mun and Lita for taking the final two matches. I was a little burnt out from writing 3 matches last week so the little break was much appreciated. |
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| Willie | Jul 29 2015, 02:23 PM Post #12 |
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First off, GREAT job Lita on the PPV graphics. Another stellar job. Summer of Sin did a fantastic job taking shape here. The Kim/Brittany match was awesome. I loved the dirty as fuck win and how it suddenly turned all around on Kim, and that she's become the Big Boss of the Hellcat division. If you guys hadn't noticed I'm dropping Tormenta for the time being, but it's more fun right now being an observer and watching all these great RPers go at each other. I think she's just as much an asshole as Nathaniel. Darian Gray bloodying Roy was awesome. That match is going to be great. Really shocked to see Cody win the FSC! I thought Quincy was doing a great job as champion but that's the nature of the division. Erik's getting another rematch, sounds like. And Falls Count Anywhere means it's going to be crazy. Really excited to be working with Pain again. Neo Carner just fucked up. All I'll say about him vs. Manson. He just fucked up. The fatal four way to determine Mun's contender is another example of solid, solid booking on Lita and Steve's part. This arc IMO has been one of the strongest booked parts of FIW in its long history. I feel that everyone right now is where they deserve to be on the card and at the same time, everybody feels like they could move up at a moment's notice. We've really hit a good spot in FIW and I think Summer of Sin is going to show that. |
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| That Darn Seph | Jul 29 2015, 08:05 PM Post #13 |
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Gotta say I'm torn between the Cody/Quincy match. I love Cody, wish him all the best but I felt like Quincy should have lost it at a PPV not a regular ReVolt/Fallout show. At least give him his rematch at the PPV, could have been a blockbuster. Quincy is a tremendous talent and I doubt he'll be without gold for very long. |
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| Steve | Jul 29 2015, 09:27 PM Post #14 |
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It was a tough call but I think it leads to some potential interesting situations revolving around the FSC. |
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| Mad Dawg | Jul 29 2015, 11:14 PM Post #15 |
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Incredible show this week and talk about jam-packed, I added in three 4R segments last night and had a hell of a time trying to find a spot. So great job with everyone on that front as it made the show insanely loaded and perfect for the go-home. Have to also say the writers have been amazing lately and this week was certainly no different. Nice surprise seeing Jimmy Steel pick up the victory over Gray. I was worried how my RP's turned out this week, not very fun having to sit outside of a McDonald's in my car with a laptop so I can use their Wi-Fi and post my stuff. Thankfully, I'm back on now...it would've driven me crazy going another week under those conditions. I can echo Lita on the ending as it did an excellent job in the protection department and cool that Havok got a win as well so they both go into SoS with momentum. Satisfied with the result in the Fallout main event, real fun read and definitely raises the intrigue in both of the individual feuds with the non-finish. Wanna thank Bran for the green light on the 4R segments also. It's something we had discussed about a month ago so it was cool getting to execute it all. Liking the feedback so far I've seen on it, I was worried how it would be perceived and if I had stretched the suspension of disbelief too much so it's awesome that it got the right kind of heat. I'll probably give a more detailed feedback later on tonight but just wanted to get a few things out for now. Can't wait til SoS. ^_^ |
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| Jo | Jul 29 2015, 11:52 PM Post #16 |
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I had to go an entire month once about a couple years ago. Lost my provider in my place so I had to traverse down to the community centre some mornings and sit out in the back catching up with things, download videos to watch, that sorta thing. It was...interesting. lol Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Minister Wighty | Jul 30 2015, 02:07 AM Post #17 |
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I concepted the character of Graver and posted his first few RPs through Lita or the public library. I feel your pain. |
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| That Darn Seph | Jul 30 2015, 07:30 AM Post #18 |
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| Steve | Jul 30 2015, 02:27 PM Post #19 |
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Nemesis was great as always and I am loving the build to another Nemesis/Nathaniel confrontation.











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