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| Summer of Sin Feedback; August 11, 2015 | |
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| Mad Dawg | Aug 12 2015, 06:28 AM Post #26 |
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I haven't gotten a chance to really get online today so I've only had a chance to skim through a little bit of the show so I'll have more in-depth thoughts later on when I get to read everything in full. Anyways, thanks for the decision to write off the Tag Title match, I'm still pissed at myself for accidentally closing the window on the Post Preview. I was patting myself on the back all day Sunday for getting all three RP's in and then it felt like a dagger through the heart when I realized the 4R RP didn't ever post... Steel Vs. Havok - I had my fingers crossed and hoping for the win but I honestly felt like Wighty had this so I wasn't overly surprised when Havok won. I can definitely say it was a fun series even though I can agree we lost a little bit of steam towards the end, but still enjoyed it and wight deserves it. UIC match - I'm not going to lie that I was quite a bit disappointed on this. Not really in the loss, I did think I had a good shot but I knew it was pretty up in the air on who would win. It was more or less a really hot lead in with the pre-match brawl but then it ended in a complete whimper and was pretty much over before I knew it. I don't know, I was just thinking with it getting postponed off Anarchy and having an extra two months to build to I was just really hoping these two would get to put on a bloody and violent match. We kinda got it with the starting brawl but afterwards it was just very underwhelming. I'll have more tomorrow when I get a chance to look at the show as a whole.
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| That Darn Seph | Aug 12 2015, 07:24 AM Post #27 |
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My bad Marc, I take full responsibility. I took the match at the last minute and hadn't much juice left in the tank after writing Neo vs Jack and that's the best I could do, my apologies. |
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| Jo | Aug 12 2015, 10:46 AM Post #28 |
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Have I still been writing them in an unrealistic light? Honestly, that's not something I'm picking up on there. But maybe it's just me. I mean Catherine's suffering trying to keep her family afloat, Blink just feels lost in the world, Terri is slowly growing insane, and Pet is just Pet doing wacky stuff because she can. Ever since I got off the feedback thread back in May...I believe, I've been trying to focus them in a more realistic light and that's really all I've been hearing. That they're more believable as people now. This is troubling news, most troubling indeed. Now I don't know what the hell people think. I guess next RP I can just write Catherine paying bills and taking Blink to soccer practice? But aside from that, I've already mentioned several times how I'd like my characters booked. Catherine going for the Dual Crown. Blink in the FSC, Terri and Pet in Hellcat action, and Sadovsky just chilling to mix things up every so often. Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Triadred | Aug 12 2015, 01:33 PM Post #29 |
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Mad Dawg... our feud will have its day in the sun, even if we have to write it ourselves. Thanks to all who provided feedback for both the matches my characters were involved in and my characters themselves. I do tend to favor one character over the other from time to time, so I can't argue that point. All I can say, and maybe some will agree, is that I'm often more motivated with ideas for one over the other from week to week. It happens. I'm not a professional writer. I don't know all the rules for character development. Assistance would be appreciated. I try hard not to make a habit of deadline bombing, as the frustrated victims often like to call it... but I can't say I'm the only one. Often is the case where I check and see what's happening the day of the deadline and about half a dozen role plays seem to have shown up. I personally don't have a problem with it, but I can see why some people do, so I will limit the deadline bombing... although I can't recall if I've ever done this weeks in a row. Certainly not last week! I haven't had a chance to read through the entire show. To be perfectly honest, I'm not much in the mood for a lot these days. I think I'm on the cusp of depression given all the recent bad things that have happened to me, one being almost fatal. I don't say this because I want scores of sympathy from the masses, but because I respect this community and would like to keep its members informed of what's going on with the writer behind one of the communities favorite characters, which I truly do appreciate. You guys make me glow with modesty! |
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| Steve | Aug 12 2015, 02:09 PM Post #30 |
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Wight I'd be happy to have you help in any capacity you wish to be involved. With that I am interested in adding a couple of people to the advising staff and it would be nice to have a couple more judges for weekly RP's. If anyone would like to take on either of these roles contact me by PM. |
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| Lita Maivia | Aug 12 2015, 05:46 PM Post #31 |
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Lita and Wighty reunited after all this time? Heck yeah!
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| That Darn Seph | Aug 12 2015, 06:06 PM Post #32 |
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And then they threw in Seph and made him apart of Creative Team again. Obviously Steve isn't of sound mind. <3 |
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| Steve | Aug 12 2015, 06:38 PM Post #33 |
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| That Darn Seph | Aug 12 2015, 06:41 PM Post #34 |
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YOU KNOW IT! EDIT: Alright, I asked around and nobody knows. Who the deuce are the two other guys? I only recognize Cage. XD |
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| Steve | Aug 12 2015, 07:51 PM Post #35 |
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Roy &Ramsi. Faces might not be recognizable cut onto Zach's face though. Edit: All adviser spots are filled. I've added three new advisers in Seph, The Other Steve, & Nate. Door is still open for anyone that would like to judge. |
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| That Darn Seph | Aug 12 2015, 08:19 PM Post #36 |
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God, without their hair they could have been anybody. XD I honestly thought Ramsi was "The Wrestler" that TLK was using a couple years ago, he used some Dr. Who guy and that looked just like him. I was about to say xD |
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| Lita Maivia | Aug 12 2015, 09:40 PM Post #37 |
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How cute is Roy in that picture? Adorable! |
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| Xtreme Kitten | Aug 13 2015, 12:38 AM Post #38 |
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Okay - so haven't read anything of the show yet... well except the result of the main event because I love spoilers, so no feedback as of yet. Just felt like saying that while for the first half or more of the rp cycle I was down with the flu (I pretty much only got out of bed to go to work and infect as many colleagues as possible) which is why I missed out on that group rp bar thing, but that was only this cycle. Now for every other time I leave it late to rp. It really is deliberate but it has nothing to do with getting one over on the other people involved, I post them last minute because that's when I have them. These days I just so rarely find inspiration to write unless I have that ticking clock, that need to get something up, nothing nefarious or sinister just a lack of any creativity without that added pressure. Now for interacting more with others, thats just plumb unlikely. Mungrel is set up as a self contained character that generally has everything he could want, his only real want (other than all the golds) is to have a good match and I find it doesn't really lend itself to interacting that much with other characters. Yes I'm the writer, I could change it but that's not going to happen because most of the time I enjoy what I'm doing. If this results in losing, meh. If it means that Mungrel becomes a character without a story (something I think is incredibly possible) meh again. So now off to read something on the show so I can leave actual feedback. |
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| Lita Maivia | Aug 13 2015, 12:45 AM Post #39 |
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You've got me super interested in Mungrel vs. Johnny Amazing. I had no idea it was even an interest of Mungrel's. |
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| Steve | Aug 13 2015, 12:49 AM Post #40 |
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It wasn't so much interacting with others than it was giving them something to work off of. If you post your RP's with a minute remaining to deadline they have absolutely no chance to react to what you said. That is what I was referring to. |
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| Xtreme Kitten | Aug 13 2015, 01:04 AM Post #41 |
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So there isn't that deadline bomb thingy anymore? Okay then yeah, I'm a dick. Unlikely to change though since like I said without that ticking clock don't really get much from the ol' gray matter as far as what to write and despite my misunderstanding I stand by what I wrote as far as interacting goes. Anyway Read the main event, it worked well made both characters look decent before the dirty finish. I'm a little concerned about Mungrel zeroing in on the leg like that since it seemed to a bit malicious which he really only seems to feel for one wrestler, but maybe I'm reading it wrong or something I wrote pointed him going in that direction. Congrats to Nate on the victory may he have a reign greater than Mungrel's three (which shouldn't be difficult he sucks at being champion). |
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| That Darn Seph | Aug 13 2015, 04:02 AM Post #42 |
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Is that one wrestler Neo? *swoons* |
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| Xtreme Kitten | Aug 13 2015, 04:19 AM Post #43 |
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Whoops forgot about Neo... okay make it two. For those wondering the other one would be Dragon, he really hates Dragon so much so that he never ever brings it up. |
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| That Darn Seph | Aug 13 2015, 05:36 AM Post #44 |
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Neo hates dragon too. |
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| Digitalwheelin | Aug 14 2015, 05:19 AM Post #45 |
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Sorry for the late feedback here. It's been kinda rough finding time to read the show in full so I could write up my feedback. BUT, with that said, here it is. PPV Graphics As I mentioned when they first went up, the graphics for SOS looked amazing. But that's to be expected coming from Lita. Lol. The Summer of Sin title graphic in particular is awesome to me. Cage Murdock vs Stephen Eversol vs Nathaniel Alexander vs Johnny Amazing I honestly wasn't expecting Nathaniel to win this at all. Like I had mentioned before; I was fully convinced Stephen Eversol was gonna be taking the win and facing Mungrel. I really like the way it ended with a sort of continuation to the Alexander/Eversol feud. That's been a lot of fun to play out recently and I'm definitely looking forward to more with that. Also
That was hilarious and The El Paso Executioner sounds awesome. Lol. Cody McGinnis © vs Erik Holland This is another match that was a lot of fun to read. I enjoyed the RP''s that T put up for this. I really like the way he portrays the Cody McGinnis character, and Cody is one of my favorite characters. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what T comes up with next for Cody. And hopefully it won't be long before Will comes back with Erik Holland cause I really liked that character as well. Honey & Samantha Segment I thought this was a good segment, and I also like the way things are playing out with Honey crushing on Johnny. That exchange with Honey almost looking really sad toward the end about her ex-girlfriend added that bit of realism to her too. Good stuff from Jo. 4R © vs The Summit It sucks that this match had to get canceled, but I like the way the whole thing was handled and I don't think it took anything away from any of the participants in the match. In fact, I agree with Seph that it makes them look tougher coming out of that angle. Here's hoping something comes from that. Pet Segment I'm really starting to become a big fan of Pet's and this segment really helped that too. It almost seems like Kat and others around Pet are trying to take away every lifeline that Pet seems to have. First it was with Mercedes and now it's with Momo. Unless I'm reading into things too much, but it does seem that way, which could be a cool thing to see play out. "The Portrait" Darian Gray vs Roy Harlowe Hopefully Seph and Matt liked this match. I tried to inject a lot of intensity into it and just show how much they each wanted to get at each other's throats. And the more brutal each spot got, the more intense things got. Personally, I was rooting for Roy to win it. Not because I don't like Darian; I've said it before multiple times, I'm a huge Darian fan. But, I thought psychologically, it woulda made more sense for Roy to win it looking like the triumphant babyface beating the antagonizing heel who's been making his life a living hell for a while now. Nathaniel Alexander & Kim Coulter Interview Lita came to me with this idea and said it may or may not be used, depending if Nathaniel won the four-way or not. I was up for the idea regardless and it was a lot of fun to write. One of the important things for this was to keep the possibility open for Kim and Eversol to continue to interact, so we went with the option that would, at the very least, cause some sort of friction but still keep that pairing intact. I liked the way it came out and it also put over Nathaniel as well, so it was good. H@VOK vs "Immaculate" Jimmy Steel It was awesome seeing this series come to a great end with this match. It was a quick, short read but it was really good, and a lot of fun to read. It was cool to see H@vok get the win on this one; though I would have been just as happy if Jimmy had taken it.
The writing for that part made me laugh. It was a simple image, but the way it was worded was great. Lol. Catherine Segment Hmm…Catherine doesn't sound all that convincing to me about being upset that the win over Mungrel was "tainted" as Alanya put it. Lol. Unless she's not trying to be convincing and is just "meh" about it? I'm not sure. Regardless, though, this was a good segment from Jo with Alanya and Catherine. Bloodbath McGrath © vs Mad Dawg The RP's that were posted for this match were awesome because they showcased that hatred that Mad Dawg and Bloodbath both have for one another. And the match itself also added to that even with the distraction from Kim Coulter in the middle of the match. It'll be really interesting to see how Mad Dawg reacts to the loss given that interference. Kim Coulter © vs Winner of Gauntlet I can imagine this match must have been hell to write. Lol. I think it came out awesome and I like the fact that Mercedes was the last one in against Kim so it can push that feud further. I'm definitely interested in seeing where it goes from here. Jack Manson vs Neo Carner I was talking to Seph as he was writing this and he said it was pretty violent. I can definitely see that now and the appearance of Keith Williams was really cool as well. Admittedly, I don't remember Keith Williams because I don't think I was here when he was around, so it's gonna be fun to get to see him from here forward. Rise of a Legend Advertisement I played the music for this as I scrolled through the pics and then got to the "Bank of America" part as the music started to pick up, and finally the end with "The Legend Continues." It actually made it that much more fun to see it with the music. Lol. Good stuff with this. Mysterious Light Segment
WHY?! Lol. This was a really interesting bit and I liked the imagery of the beam of light coming out from the curtain with the silhouette appearing in front of it. That was really cool. I'm definitely interested to see the big reveal of who this is. Mungrel © vs Winner of Fatal Four Way As I said before, I was definitely surprised when Nathaniel won the four-way and even more shocked to see him win the DC. This match turned out awesome and it was a lot of fun to read. I legitimately thought Eversol would be the one taking it. The RP's we all put up were a lot of fun to do leading up to this. Big thanks for putting Alexander in this position. It's funny that Lita mentioned I come up with ideas whether Alexander loses or not, because that's exactly what I did in this case. I had a Plan A if he won, and Plan B if he didn't. I think I'd even mentioned it to Seph at one point. Lol. |
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