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FIW Weekly Double Shot Supershow Feedback; August 18th, 2015
Topic Started: Aug 18 2015, 08:20 PM (245 Views)
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ReVolt

Ramsi Green Segment
Writer: Seph

Singles Match
H@VOK vs Nemesis
Referee: Domenic Dorsch
Writer: Sid

Terrie Golde Segment
Writer: Jo

Singles Match
Mistress Lilith Lovecraft vs Terri Golde
Referee: Kristy Arnold
Writer: The Other Steve

Darian Gray/Roy Harlowe Segment
Writer: Seph/Matt

Singles Match
Mad Dawg vs Cage Murdock
Referee: Lester Riggs
Writer: Steve

Catherine Neville Segment
Writer: Jo

Main Event
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Bloodbath McGrath © vs Neo Carner
Referee: Tony Clarke
Writer: Seph


Fallout

Dual Crown Championship Celebration Segment
Writers: Nate, Lita, & The Other Steve

Singles Match
Maxime Rowley vs Keith Williams
Referee: Logan Black
Writer: Seph

Pet/Blink Segment
Writer: Jo

Hellcat Tag Team Match
The Tea Party [size0]w/ Helena Handbasket vs Mercedes Blackwell & Pet
Referee: Mark Deveraux
Writer: Lita

Johnny Amazing, Honey & Samantha Segment
Writer: Jo

Singles Match
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Johnny Amazing vs Cody McGinnis ©
Referee: Richard Kelly
Writer: Nate

Havok Match Aftermath
Writer: Wight & Sid

Main Event
Singles Match

Mungrel vs Stephen J Eversol
Referee: Tony Clarke
Writer: Sid
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Show was pretty freakin' stellar from the skim over, read a few parts in depth and while it's fresh in my mind I'll lay it down here.

Nathan's celebration speech was awesome, very grade A heel stuff going on a long diatribe about what he's done and the talk of the journey gave some cement to his win. It's great to see people's hard work pay off and get to do it doing their own thing, Nathan's gold man, gold.

I am so glad the Spectre Girls aren't coming here. No offense to Jo, but those were like my least favorite of the Girls clans he's come up with. Pet though? She's gold and her hypersexual gimmick is right up my alley because who doesn't like smut? Honestly Momo isn't going to be gone, she's just going to be taking a much smaller role is all. So don't be sad to all the Momo fans out there.

Havok pinning Nemesis is a pretty big deal, didn't see it coming honestly. I shouldn't be surprised though, because Michael Madsen did appear on Havok's behalf. >_>

Yay! Terri is keeping momentum!

Cody just got beat by Amazazing! :o What ever could this mean for the FSC division!!?

Keith Williams was a blast to write for this week, hands down I gotta give it to Kyle who RP'd like a champ last week and is showing no signs of ring rust at all. I'm fortunate enough to be working with him and hope you guys enjoy the stuff me and him get to come up with in our RPs.

Cage beating Mad Dawg was a shock to me, I tried my hardest to show a different side of Cage this week, make him seem more vulnerable, that and I came up with the Ramsi storyline on the fly to give Cage some added depth and rebound from losing at SoS. The win is a huge boon for Cage as Mad Dawg in my eyes is one of FIW's biggest threats whether or not if he's Face or Heel, you beat Mad Dawg, that's like like a big deal.

Neo vs Bloodbath was fun to write, hope I made Bloodbath look good, I tried to make him continue looking beastly after his dominate victory over Mad Dawg at SOS, so dusty finish in my opinion protects him and makes Neo look underhanded in the process too. I chose a Champagne Bottle as a weapon because it was classy, that is all. Bloodbath is a huge win for Neo I gotta say, Bloodbath is perhaps in my eyes being booked to look like the most dangerous guy FIW has on it's roster, and it fits him perfectly. I'm a big fan of the character.

All and all the show was great and think we're on quite a roll!
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Card will be up shortly. Swore I had PM'd it to myself at work but I was wrong. Now I will have to try and remember what I had down for it.
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I have to say I was pretty pleased with the show results all around. Certainly nothing I'd argue with. The Coulter Crew showing up in, like, every match kept me thinking "oh no, now so-and-so's gonna win" but each time I was pleasantly surprised. I was especially terrified when they showed up during my match, this dreading sense of "I JUST got done RPing against them" came over me, but instead it served as a great reminder of the ongoing feud between Nemesis and Alexander.

I was honestly surprised I won the match. Sid's RP was more clever than most people might catch. But maybe that subtlety was its downfall. I'm still glad nemesis looked like a monster. Also glad Havok got to show up at the end of McGinnis' match. All the RPs between him and Amazing this week and no mention of the number one contender!

On one hand I'm glad the spectres aren't coming to FiW because as the promos this week showcased, this could very easily be The Joe Show, but at the same time they're probably my favorite Steele media peeps.

That about sums it up. Good job to everyone getting the show up in a timely fashion!

EDIT: Oh yeah! EVERSOL. I happen to think the middle initial J is pretty snazzy. The character has basically lost all charisma in dropping it.
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06:47 PM
EDIT: Oh yeah! EVERSOL. I happen to think the middle initial J is pretty snazzy. The character has basically lost all charisma in dropping it.

Whoa, really? I was going to have him drop it cause it came off too "heel-ish" to me. I was going to give him a nickname to fit with the other Coulter Crew members. He WAS "Aristocratic Assassin" back in NGIW, but I didn't think that one fit anymore either.
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Yay! Terri and Pet are liked!

One of the big reasons Spectre Girls are coming in a support role was what was mentioned. I think I've got enough here as is. Um...also they aren't really FIW. They're more Wight's gals so anytime he decides open something up...

Matches were a fun read. Unless I missed it, I didn't see anything from Lilith this week which sucked. Thought it might've been interesting to see those personalities clash. Though now I take it Chip doesn't like any of my Hellcats. lol

Yay! Pet got a powerbomb! But then got powerbombed. Sigh and shakes head. She'll get it. It was a fun week though what with Pet and Mercedes' double doing there. :)

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BleakInfinity,Aug 18 2015
08:13 PM
Minister Wighty,Aug 18 2015
06:47 PM
EDIT: Oh yeah! EVERSOL. I happen to think the middle initial J is pretty snazzy. The character has basically lost all charisma in dropping it.

Whoa, really? I was going to have him drop it cause it came off too "heel-ish" to me. I was going to give him a nickname to fit with the other Coulter Crew members. He WAS "Aristocratic Assassin" back in NGIW, but I didn't think that one fit anymore either.

The joke here is that my name is (as seen in my e-mail address, on my YouTube channel, and on my book covers) Eric J. Chucci. Its probably actually a smart change for the character.
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Well played, sir. :P Also, I appreciate the feedback, thanks.
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Awesome show this week! It's insane to me how much Alexander was involved in this week's show. Lol. I had a lot of fun with the stuff I was personally involved with, though. With that said, on to the feedback!

ReVolt

Ramsi Green Segment

I like the way the Ramsi/Cage stuff started when Ramsi appeared out of nowhere after coming back from injury. This segment was a good way to push that forward and reminded me of some WWE segments where they had a guy banned from the building only for said person to come back later in the show and wreak havoc on his opponent. I half expected that to happen here; which could have been cool. It'll be interesting to see where this goes, though.

H@VOK vs Nemesis

This was a really cool match and I liked the inclusion of Nathaniel and Kim walking down the aisle toward the ring to distract Nemesis. When Sid came up with that idea, I thought it would be a good way to push the feud with Alexander a bit more. The line of commentary at the end from Chip was awesome "our new king and queen of FIW were simply watching over the common folk of their land!"

Terri Golde Segment

Although this segment for the show was short, it was still really good in the way it told a good story with only "images" as it were. This was an awesome bit from Jo and it'll be cool to see how things progress with Terri seemingly insulating herself from the rest of the Hellcats based on what we saw in this segment.

Mistress Lilith Lovecraft vs Terri Golde

This was an awesome match from The Other Steve. As I've mentioned before; I like the way Chip is portrayed as a more vulgar Jerry Lawler during the Hellcat matches. The match itself was nicely paced and I liked the ground game moves that Lilith incorporated into the match. It kinda seemed to have an MMA influence, which is funny because I also added the same thing in the Johnny/Cody match. Overall, this was a great match and a really fun read.

Darian Gray/Roy Harlowe Segment

Wow, first Darian takes the physical edge against Roy and now he's taking the mental edge. This segment was awesome. The Darian/Roy feud has been a lot of fun to follow and this only adds to that. I still say Alexander and Darian need to have some interaction at some point. And if I've never actually said that before; I'm saying it now. :P Their personalities and methods of tearing down an opponent are seemingly identical, if only reversed.

Mad Dawg vs Cage Murdock

This was a great match and I like how Lester's crooked ways were used fairly heavily in Cage's favor. That was a really nice touch and the match overall was awesome. It also showcased Mad Dawg's brute strength as well, which was really good.

Catherine Neville Segment

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Ha! I like the way this progressed the story with Catherine and Terri. Sounds like Catherine had it right in that Terri is seemingly becoming more and more paranoid. This was a really good segment from Jo.

Bloodbath McGrath © vs Neo Carner

This match felt like it went by really fast, but it was awesome and I like how not only the Bloodbath/Mad Dawg feud was given time to shine, but also the heel tactics of the Revenants were given time to shine as well. The finish with Neo hitting Bloodbath with the champagne bottle was a great way to show Neo's heel tactics.

Fallout

Dual Crown Championship Celebration Segment
This segment was a lot of fun to write with Lita and The Other Steve. Lita and I had talked an RP for the show and The Other Steve and I got the idea to use that to further the storyline with Alexander and Eversol. Then Steve asked if we could get a segment for the show together and this was the final product. I think it turned out awesome and it was a great way to get the feud burning even more.

Maxime Rowley vs Keith Williams

This match was awesome for a couple of reasons. One, I feel like Keith and Max have the same sort of personality as one another in a lot of ways, and two, the writing for the match itself was great. It was a really fun read and fast pacing and technical style from both Keith and Max made it a very quick read too.

Pet/Blink Segment

Hmm, I wonder how Mercedes would react to Pet saying she'd turn on her seemingly at the drop of a hat. Unless she just said that to keep Blink on her toes just then. Either way, this was a good showing for Pet kinda reverting back to her joking ways and messing with people.

The Tea Party [size0]w/ Helena Handbasket vs Mercedes Blackwell & Pet

I like the way Pet is still portrayed as someone who's still learning the ropes and looking to Mercedes for encouragement. The heel tactics from the Tea Party in this match were a nice touch as well. Boy, Nathaniel and Kim were all over this show! Lol. The interference with them costing Pet and Mercedes the victory was a nice touch and I liked the way that all worked out.

Johnny Amazing, Honey & Samantha Segment

Lol! Honey just can't seem to have her moment with Johnny. I really liked this segment furthering the storyline with Honey having a crush on Johnny. That whole angle has been fun to see and it'll be cool to see where it goes from here. How long will it take before Johnny takes notice? Lol.

Johnny Amazing vs Cody McGinnis ©/Havok Match Aftermath

I had a lot of fun writing this match. I came up with the idea for the part in the beginning before the bell rang just as a way to incorporate stuff from both Lita's and T's RP's for this match cause I thought it would be cool to see it play out and possibly help with the storyline going on there. Hopefully both Lita and T liked what I came up with for this match. The aftermath for it involving Havok was really cool as well. It'll be interesting to watch that play out as things progress.

Mungrel vs Stephen J Eversol

This match was awesome and, surprise, surprise, Nathaniel made his presence known yet again in this show. Lol. I really like that Eversol still looked really good and really strong despite having lost this match to Mungrel. And Mungrel seemingly being upset that he didn't win cleanly was a nice touch too. It's gonna be really fun to continue that feud with Alexander and Eversol coming out of this match.
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Yay! Background stuff. This isn't feedback, mostly just background details to the segments. Sorry.

Thanks for the feedback. :) I did want to keep the Terri segment short because for one I was running out of time to write more and two I just wanted to set up the coming scenario. But with all these run ins during Mercedes' matches and Kim building up her own following as well as the trio of friends and Tea Party...is it any wonder Terri would also want some added protection? Though yeah, she is growing a little paranoid. :)

Catherine's segment almost wasn't going to happen. I wasn't too happy with how the last Terri RP ended since the whole argument there was going to be over the restraining order. But I used the time between my work breaks to ponder it out properly and figured it could work this way. Plus I just wanted to further push the fact that Catherine could very well be the next to join Kim's camp. Mostly because of the match idea Lita thought up:
Kim Coulter © [size0]w/Catherine vs Mercedes Blackwell [size0]w/Brittany

I enjoyed writing the Pet/Blink segment mostly because I enjoy writing Pet with anyone. Though I did have to edit Pet's initial joke about what Blink did to Mercedes after Brittany's party. Let me just say it still involved a roofie. Would Pet actually turn on Mercedes somewhere down the road? Most likely not, though I too am curious over Mercedes' thoughts on that. lol Aw, and I just noticed a coding error. Sigh...

I don't think Johnny will ever notice Honey. But I obviously still like writing that scenario. I just imagine it getting to the point where Honey begins camping outside of Johnny's place only to smile at him every time he passes by. So yeah, by the end of this I see the cops getting involved. :P

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First off, I want to apologize for not leaving detailed feedback this week but the weekend was pretty grueling with it being my son's birthday weekend, cars breaking down and tons of other crazy stuff in between that it just left me not really feeling like writing a ton of feedback.

I did read the whole show though and thoroughly enjoyed it. It was segment heavy which is always a good thing, in my opinion and they were all very entertaining. I like what's happening with Catherine trying to join Kim's ranks and Terri now becoming more aggressive to get noticed so I hope that came across in the match that I wrote for her.

The segment I wrote with Nate and Lita was a lot of fun. Especially being able to do some throwback to NGIW where the whole story line between the three characters really started. I asked Nate what he thought about Eversol coming out to "Line in the Sand" (BLS' old music) (Sorry Jim lol) and luckily he liked it. It fits with Eversol sort of struggling now between his old self and trying to still do the right thing.

Lita again wrote a great Hellcat match that was entertaining and developed the feud between Mercedes and Kim even further. I love that it's exploring Mean Girl territory with Kim throwing Mercedes' clothes into the crowd. That was great. Then Mercedes' temper costing her the match and another friend getting injured at the hands of the Tea Party were all awesome details.

Sid did a great job in the ME as well with having Nathaniel come out and distract Eversol. It only makes sense given the fact that Eversol ruined his (live sex?) celebration. Munrgel being upset at the type of win was neat to see, and makes Alexander enemy number one to so many people. It actually gives me a ton more to work with from the loss and of course Alexander can continue coming his habit of wreaking havoc on the rest of the roster.

Great show everyone!
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Cars breaking down? I didn't know we could use excuses like that. Okay, um...a crow was flying over the road when I was coming home from work. That's my excuse for something. But I'm just being a smart ass if you meant your car. :P My excuse for that? Crow. And muffin button.

Anyway, you did good on the Hellcat match. I was thinking it would be a problem with Honey and Samantha acting so gung ho in their support of Terri, given their recent standings of her, but actually it works better like this since they wouldn't do that to her face. So bravo in knowing my characters better than me. lol I'll also say that I'm glad to see Lilith having been given some near falls for herself and a fair bit of momentum. I was afraid that with her absence the entire match would be one sided and as I've stated before I don't like those scenarios one way or the other.

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Yay! Reference gotten!
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Random cars breaking down really depress me. :P
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Very fun show this week, I can say I enjoyed it all around. Been a little while since I gave a detailed feedback so here goes...

Ramsi/Cage Opening Sequence - Very cool way to open the show and interested in seeing how this turns out with Cage taking over RTI.

Havok Vs. Nemesis - Had some interesting developments with Kim & Nathaniel making an appearance, wondering where that is going to go. Cool seeing Havok continue to roll on after SoS.

Terri Segment - Not gonna lie, was slightly confused on what this means but I'm sure it'll make more sense later on.

Lilith Vs. Terri - Good back and forth action and congrats to Terri on chalking up the win.

Roy/Darian segment - Really liked this segment and I see this turning into a real interesting story with Roy being forced to be Darian's bitch servant.

Mad Dawg Vs. The Other Guy They Call Cage - I really enjoyed this one especially with Lester screwing Mad Dawg at every opportunity.

Catherine segment - Curious where the Kim and Catherine thing is heading to but it's always great to see Catherine getting back into things.

Marshmallow Bloodbath McGrath Vs. Neo - Really fun match to read an loved the use of the champagne bottle. Also awesome to see the McGrath/Mad Dawg feud progressing after SoS, I was a little worried that it was going to be over at the PPV with Mad Dawg going down in that fashion. I do want to say I feel a lot better about the SoS match an even more so with the Mad Dawg/McGrath bit in this match.

Nathaniel Championship speech - Really enjoyed this segment with everyone involved being awesome at working their parts to perfection. I am definitely really looking forward to the possibility of Eversol and Alexander for the title.

Keith Williams Vs. Rowley - Of course great to see Keith back in action especially after all the calls for him to return over the past ten months. He definitely came back in full form in tis one tonight.

Pet/Blink - Wow things definitely got a little weird in this one. I was completely confused for a few trying to figure out who Holly was.

Tea Party Vs. Pet & Mercedes - Interesting match and nice win for TP. Nice touch with Kim digging in at Mercedes and tossing her things into the crowd. I can't wait to see Kim really get it from Mercedes.

Amazing Vs. McGinnis - Solid match between these two and Johnny picked up a valuable victory in this one. And of course Havok and pies were awesome.

Mungrel Vs. Eversol - Great main event and great to see Mungrel getting right back on track.


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Dual Crown Champion
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2X FIW Undisputed International Champion
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(10/13/15 - 1/8/16)

Finisher of the Year 2011 - The Mauler
(Runner-Up) Feud of the Year 2011
(Runner-Up) Heel of the Year 2011
Storyline of the Month (Apr '11, June '11, Sept '11, Nov. '11, June '12)
Match of the Month (Feb. '12, June '12)

"Big Bad" Bobby Sanchez' Accomplishments

FIW Undisputed International Championship
(5/12/13 - 9/1/13)

2012 FIW Grand Prix Champion

Storyline of the Month (May '12)
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It's great to be back. I'm still trying to get into KW form, but I'm in a different place in life now. When I initially brought in DEATH and hopped back into RPing, it was to get out some creativity and deal with my friend's passing. Using Keith I'm hoping to explore a more carefree, if not more crude and humor filled state of mind.

I really enjoyed the match with Keith and Max. Can't really offer any suggestions other than noticing a few typos, etc. But that happens anyways despite combing over things.

Looking forward to teaming with Ryan and having a lot of fun and nostalgic times with our characters. And it's nice to see more fresh faces appearing in the tag-team division.
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