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| ReVolt Against the Champions XXV Feedback; September 8, 2015 | |
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| Steve | Sep 8 2015, 11:59 PM Post #1 |
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Tag Team Match The Bayou Wrecking Crew (Lucas Bergeron & Anastasia Grimm) vs Tommy Hale & LaTonya Jackson Referees: Lester Riggs Writer: Steve ReVoltron Writer: Jonny (Doom) Aftermatch Writer: Jim Spencer Chamberlain meets Depicting Sorrow Segment Writer: Seph & Matt Singles Match Cabellera Contra Retiro Cage Murdock vs Ramsi Greene Referee: Richard Kelly Writer: Seph Maddox Blade/Q-Ball Segment Writers: Jay (Maddox) & Mark (Q-Ball) FIW Tag Team Championship Triple Threat Match Fourth Reich © vs The McConnaigh Brothers vs Depicting Sorrow (Darian Gray & Roy Harlowe) Referee: Logan Black Writer: Atom Catherine Neville Segment Writer: Jo Singles Match Nemesis vs Psycho Dragon Referee: Richard Kelly Writer: Sid Spencer Chamberlain meets Stephen Eversol Segment Writer: Seph & The Other Steve Mad Dawg/Julie Segment Writer: Marc Hellcat Singles Match Grudge Match Camila Martinez vs Terri Golde Referee: Kristy Arnold Writer: The Other Steve Spencer Chamberlain meets Havok Segment Writers: Seph & Wight Singles Match Mad Dawg vs Quincy Wilson Referee: Tony Clarke Writer: The Other Steve Pet/Blink Segment Writer: Jo Fighting Spirit Championship Street Fight Cody McGinnis © vs H@VOK Referee: Domenic Dorsch Writer: Sid Spencer Chamberlain meets Maddox Blade Segment Writers: Seph & Jay (Maddox) Blessed & Forsaken Lethal Lottery Ladder Match Qualifier Triple Threat Match Nightmare vs Keith Williams vs Stephen Eversol Referee: Lester Riggs Writer: Nate Spencer Chamberlain meets Neo Carner Segment Writer: Seph Undisputed International Championship Bloodbath McGrath © vs Neo Carner Referee: Richard Kelly Writer: Seph Hellcat Championship Kim Coulter © vs Mercedes Blackwell Referee: Mark Deveraux Writer: Lita Main Event FIW Dual Crown Championship Nathaniel Alexander © vs Mungrel Referee: Tony Clarke Writer: Sid My time online is running short. I had to post the show with short results for the tag match. Hopefully, Atom will be able to get that match in with a bit more justice for the participants soon. |
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| That Darn Seph | Sep 9 2015, 12:31 AM Post #2 |
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Gotta say, this is the happiest I've been with results in awhile. Sure I won all my matches, and I sure do like to bitch a lot but I feel like this has all lead to this momentous occasion. I feel humbled and honored to be both the UIC and Tag Team Champion. It's a great day to be alive and I thank everyone involved, whether it be my opponents, my fellow writers, my fellow staff (same thing xD) and all the members here. It's great, and I hope to do some cool stuff as champion to add to their legacy. As for the show itself. I had a blast writing for Bloodbath again, and I wanted to make him look like a no nonsense monster, with a little show boating thrown in to stick it to Mad Dawg. I tried to do my best with the ending, make it as dusty as possible so everyone looks their best. Hope I didn't step on anyone's toes. Shame the Tag Match isn't in yet, but I can't deny it, I'm happy to see the results. I think the victory goes in large part thanks to Matt who has been knocking them out of the park as Darian, he's become one of my favorite wrestlers and I can't wait to see how he acts with some gold around his waist. Really, really dug the opening match. Thought it was a great way to get this new story ahead. Although I'm not a fan of them losing the match in the fashion they did. I mean, good for Lucas for kicking another man in the ball's, but throwing away the match? Lucas needs a win dammit! I can't even recall the last time he won. SPOOKY SCARY SKELETONS.The Nemesis/Psycho Dragon match was hard to judge, it really, really, really was. It was so close in my opinion. I hope Psycho Dragon takes the loss in stride and keeps on inflicting fear. Good for Terri winning, she's been languishing for awhile and a win over the young upstart could be a shot in the arm she needs. Although I can see Camila coming back from this in a big way and dishing out some sweet revenge. Congrats to Havok, who quite possibly had one of my favorite Spencer segments this week. The Spencer segments were all done a day or two before the show, and I am honored and happy the turn out it got. I hope everyone likes them, I tried to do something different. Congrats to Keith Williams who pulled out the big stops this week and delivered a hardcore harsh ass promo that was laced with venom. I'm excited to see where he goes with this, I think it'll be a prime opportunity for Keith to mix it up with some of the others on the roster, really get his fingers sticky. Stunned Kim and Mercedes ended the way it went. Was hoping for a clear contest, but here's hoping that B&F gives a decisive victory. Big kudos to Lita who has made the Hellcat Division her pet project and has done WONDERS for it. Mungrel vs Nathaniel had me scratching my head, lots of dusty finishes on this show and this one was the one to end the show. RATC always leaves more questions than answers. I love it. IF I missed anything it's because I haven't read it yet, I'll try to get to it later. EDIT: I hope everyone liked Ramsi vs Cage. Sad to see Ramsi go, but I just couldn't figure out anything to do with him and Cage was obviously the Shawn Michaels out of the duo so I went with him. |
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| Minister Wighty | Sep 9 2015, 04:03 AM Post #3 |
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I would like to pretend I'm going to go back and read more show, but... I'm not. *shrugs* Its been a rough few weeks mentally. I meant to write a promo for 10/31 and that just wouldn't happen. I liked the way my match was written. I think if the ending had been written any other way I might've been unhappy, but Sidewinder knocked it out of the park. I'm excited to RP with havok. Might try to write a promo. I uh... can't say I get why poor Mungrel keeps getting the short end of the stick. I need to judge more, I guess. Poor Mun. I wuv him. Sorry, mate. A win's a win? I had fun writing the promo with seph. Good to see Lucas storyline building tension. That's what I got. Good work getting the show up on time, and thanks to all the writers for their efforts. |
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| Maddox Blade | Sep 9 2015, 06:53 AM Post #4 |
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Introduction to Revolt Against the Champions XXV: Most people might say, “Where’s the excitement?” but I say that this is to me how the start of a wrestling show should be. I’m glad that there wasn’t an opening of someone coming out to talk about things as you normally see in some wrestling shows RL and in some efeds. This is what an introduction to a show is supposed to be. I found this to be well written. At the end, prior to the opening match, the energy seemed to go down just a tad. “Sounds like a good idea partner” might be the reason for this loss of energy in my opinion. It might not be. I can’t put my finger on exactly why I feel that the energy of the introduction went down. Also remember this is just one guy’s opinion here. Also…first time reading results that have taken place since my arrival as well. My rating: 8/10 Tag Match: The Bayou Wrecking Crew (Lucas Bergeron & Anastasia Grimm) vs Tommy Hale & LaTonya Jackson Referees: Lester Riggs CM: ”I’ve got a craving for chocolate and I think LaTonya could cure that craving. She’s got ass for days.” This right here is my favorite line from this match. It’s perfect. The theme song for LaTonya Jackson makes this even better. It’s great to be able to start laughing before the match even starts for me. During the introduction of the Bayou Wrecking Crew, something did confuse me a bit. At one point, the team is announced and then they are announced once again. I was wondering if this was intended or if it was just a oops factor? Of course these two paragraphs are based on the writing part of it…not the match itself. If this was an oops, no one is perfect. If it was intended, I think it makes it funny because this team hasn’t made it to the ring and the announcer here is like “hurry up” in his head to me which makes it funny. So, I’m torn between oops and the impatient announcer in my mind here. I actually hope that that was intended. Brings a little character to the announcer rather than just words on the screen. As the match starts, I enjoy the writing regarding the technical wrestling description to the match. That’s not always easy to do. Some can and some just can’t. I am pleased with this having been in wrestling a couple years myself. It’s dead on. Then, there’s a tag and we have yet another Chip comment. At this point I’ve laughed twice. Great start. Hopefully no one takes me for a perv for laughing at this or agreeing with Chip here. Woohoo! But, I do like that there is space between the perv comments. I tend to get annoyed when it’s overdone, but this is great spacing. The “technical difficulties” started getting my attention after that and it took a lot for me not to just read fast as I could to try and figure it out. But, I like that rather than get too much into that issue right away the details of the match came back. Then, not missing a beat during the technical difficulties was well written. I at first thought I’m going to lose interest in the match, but never did. Regardless of lights going out, I was still into it. Then…ouch. I didn’t see it happen on a video. I didn’t have it happen to me…but ouch. MY balls hurt. That’s good writing when you can make someone OOC feel like they just got kicked in the gonads. The after match was intriguing and whatever storyline is going on right now with this…major kudos guys. MY rating: 10/10…so well written. SPENCER CHAMBERLAIN/DEPICTING SORROW SEGMENT ‘Spencer can't help but find himself in a fit of amusement as he conceals his laughter as he nods his head in response of Darian. Spencer can't help but find himself in a fit of amusement as he conceals his laughter as he nods his head in response of Darian.’ This would be the only thing I’d point out. Minor oops. I am happy to see that we didn’t go to a match right away or another segment with some mystery going on. The roller coaster of emotion was well played here. I love how the IC of Darian plays here. It was pretty interesting to see Spencer Chamberlain character not let it really affect him, too. He stayed calm and collected. Didn’t come across that Darian offends him at all or doesn’t offend him. He just goes about his business. Darian was pretty awesome as well here. I like how he stayed IC with it. The egostical flare comes to play and as I read this made me both like and hate the Darian character. Like because this seems to be well thought out character and you seem to know how you want to react to things. The hate toward Darian comes with that: people don’t like boasters thing. That’s where the hate comes in. I don’t hate the character at all. So this segment was great placement for the results OOC as well as a good segment to follow what took place. The segment in my opinion ended well, too. I like it. Don’t get caught up on my rating for the segment guys. Usually when it’s not a segment with mystery a 7 is probably the highest I give and you guys got it with this. MY rating: 8/10 combined for placement and segment Singles Match Cabellera Contra Retiro Cage Murdock vs Ramsi Greene Referee: Richard Kelly What really got me here was after all the crazy fighting going on, the writer of this match includes Ramsi wiping off the collected sweat from around his mouth. That helped in making this match feel more real. This match was intriguing that it is hair vs career. I like that this is the first real feud match of the night and comes early. After a match with a great ending twist, a great after match segment, followed by a calmer segment…this match comes next. Again, that’s great placement. It’s never easy to place segments in here and there with matches. I really do like how this was written as well. Now, as for the hair getting cut and the career ending, that was a nice twist to the end of the match. I like how this was brought out. I don’t know if Ramsi was just having to leave for RL issues, or otherwise. I don’t know if the handler wasn’t wanting to use Ramsi anymore. Or if this was just part of the plot that will continue later. If it’s an end to a storyline or feud, great end. If this is a to be continued in time plot awesome, I can’t wait to see what happens. Must have been an interesting feud. Honestly don’t mind my rating here. The only thing that might have brought it down a bit was that I seemed to speed up my reading a bit because it was so fast at first. That’s literally how I get on the freeway and pull off from a stop light or stop sign. I love it when I drive, just not when I’m trying to read. Don’t take that the wrong way because whoever wrote this match really did a good job on it. I did start slowing down a bit and with a match/feud like this I understand why you went guns blazing right away. MY Rating: 7/10 Seeing as my segment with Q-Ball is next in the results I’m going to break here but there is more to come. I’m not done and will write the review of the whole show. |
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| Maddox Blade | Sep 9 2015, 08:06 AM Post #5 |
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[align=left]MADDOX BLADE/Q-BALL SEGMENT As a new guy to FIW, I’m going to give myself a pat on the back and say, ‘It’s okay buddy’. I really hate that I didn’t have a chance to read a few results. Labor Day, work, and my own business together really didn’t give me a chance to really get up to speed. I basically botched Chip. The commentary became pretty dull due to that and now that I know, segments with commentary in the future will be much better and more fun to write. Thank you Steve for book Q-Ball v Maddox Blade as well. I really do love working with Q-Ball. We do tend to point out typos and have our haha moments when it comes to each other. All fun and games. We tend to feed off each other. I’ve worked with the guy in other feds and it’s just downright fun to do. Also excited for the future of this new comer storyline and how it comes out, and spoiler alert says we’re not working alone so really excited with that. I liked how Q-Ball really used the tough guy feel to this segment to balance the Maddox Blade character. All and all a fair segment and remembering my rating scale for segments that don’t really include a mystery. MY rating: 4/10 FIW Tag Team Championship Triple Threat Match Fourth Reich © vs The McConnaigh Brothers vs Depicting Sorrow (Darian Gray & Roy Harlowe) Referee: Logan Black ***FULL MATCH COMING SOON*** All three teams battle their hearts out and 4R attempt to keep the belts with many under handed tactics. That is until Roy Harlowe with much demanding by Darian Gray takes the low road with some dirty deeds much to his dismay. This allows Darian to snag the pinfall over Owen and secure the victory for his team. Winners: and NEW FIW TAG TEAM CHAMPIONS....DEPICTING SORROW Seeing how this match is coming soon, my actual review of the match will come then. But, congrats to Depicting Sorrow on winning those titles. Interview…Hutchen with Catherine Neville After a tag team championship match, this being a special show…I like that this came next even though I have yet to read the full match prior to this. You don’t get to see this type of stuff very often in RL. RL shows are just always more concerned with what’s going on there unless it’s like an injury or something or an update on someone’s status. That’s why I like efed results. There’s more imagination to things and everything…everything is creative. That said…. We ended that first match with some intense, raging emotion that was like holy shit. We get back to some more emotion going on, but this time…yeow. When I read, I tend to put myself in the shoes of the character feeling that emotion. That helps me get a better feeling of the character and how they must feel. This is like…man. It’s like bringing me low, but in a good way. Exactly what this situation is meant to do IC. The only, only thing I was disappointed with for this segment, the Hellcat championship wasn’t right after it. Most people don’t put this much effort into an interview segment for results. They save it for a RP. That’s why I like that this was put in the results rather than a RP. It made it so much better and the interview was well written. My rating on this is so high just due to the emotion involved in it. It’s a somewhat calm setting, but what is really turning inside Catherine Neville’s head? I am going to be following this because it’s got me wondering how things play out. MY rating: 8/10 Singles Match Nemesis vs Psycho Dragon Referee: Richard Kelly Just perfect lol. I went from damn, I feel for this character to getting a spooky match. If that doesn’t give someone the chills, I don’t know what does when it comes to efedding. I would have liked to see this match be a little longer. As one that used to write matches a bit, I am biased because I do like to see the “1-2-3”. I like seeing some kick outs, sometimes some mock pins if permitted as well. But, the match was written well. I was also hoping to see some ring entrance stuff for this. Especially with it being a couple of scarier guys out there I like to see some theatrics going on and some fun pyrotechnics. So with the entrances not there, the score would be going lower for me. These reviews are always my opinion only. Remember also I’m used to seeing the numbers signaling some counts or a couple kick outs before the actual victory is there. Also, I have yet to actually read the layout of who wrote what posted by Steve. I’ll be looking at that after I do my entire review. I like not knowing who wrote the matches until after I review it. MY rating: 5/10 (Remember the reason the rating went down “entrances” “used to seeing numbers”) SPENCER/EVERSOL SEGMENT I’m liking that Seph is really getting into his new character early. This segment helps in making Spencer seem more alive in that he’s actually grabbing a plate of food and I’m liking the interactions going on with this. It’s going to be interesting to see where Seph goes with this character. I like how Eversol gets Spencer’s attention here rather than the other way around. Spencer is just walking around the backstage going about his own business and saying hey to the roster. Reading this I think it was a good idea IC that Spencer wasn’t approaching Eversol instead. Could have turned out way different. I like this. Of course segments don’t get as high ratings as the matches guys, but nice. MY rating: 5/10 For tonight, that’s going to be it for me because I need to get some sleep. Just so people know, just because it says I’m on doesn’t mean I’m actually at the puter or on the phone. I like to try to keep myself logged on with efeds if possible. So, don’t think I’m just sitting here doing nothing but staring at the screen lol.[/align] |
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| BleakInfinity | Sep 9 2015, 04:13 PM Post #6 |
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Crazy show this week with lots to get to. This week was a little hard for me as I feel a little drained so my feedback isn't as detailed as I'd like it to be. I love where this story line involving Lucas and Psycho Dragon is going. The images used remind me of how dark Bray Wyatt really should be on TV. The aftermath with Lucas running to the truck seems very "shoot-ish" so I'm a fan of it and these two are going to have an amazing feud. Good stuff. All Spencer segments were really interesting, I was glad Seph approached me with the idea of doing one with Eversol. It was fun to do and I'm interested in seeing where his character goes now. Sucks to see Ramsi go, but now that Seph brought in Spencer, it makes sense that Ramsi is gone. Interesting to see the titles change hands. The tag division definitely needs a shakeup and needs new life breathed into it. Not to mention it just needs more teams. This new Roy/Darian team will be interesting with two guys who have that tension. The Catherine segment was cool as it gave us an insight into why she's siding with Kim and the struggle with feeding her daughter. It puts a cool spin on the story line where she's not really turning but just doing what she has to do. I liked it. I'll be honest, I was dragging like crazy to do my matches this week so I hope they came out decently but it was a real struggle to get through them with the long weekend and just a bunch of personal BS at the moment. I liked the win that Terri got and like where Jo is taking the character right now. She needed that "re-set", so to speak. The Mad Dawg vs Quincy match was still fun to write even with me feeling so out of it as I like putting some MMA spots in anything where these two fight. I liked the ending that Steve booked with Kim and Bloodbath costing Mad Dawg the match. I just knew there'd be more to that story later on haha. The Pet/Blink segment was certainly interesting. I hope there's more to that story later on. Haha. Nate did a great job on the triple threat and it's amazing considering he's done a triple threat two weeks in a row. He always makes sure each competitor gets their shit in, so I appreciate that. The ending was neat in building up the tension between Alexander and Eversol with Eversol not noticing what had happened to Kim. It can also keep the feud with The Revenants and the former BLS guys going while they also feud with one another. Of course since Bloodbath interfered in Mad Dawg's match, I expected we'd see him in the UIC match as well. It's interesting to see Neo win the UIC but I'll be entertained by whatever feud comes from it. The Hellcat title match was pretty much how I pictured it going, both competitors looked good and hell Kim took Mercedes' finish so yay. Lita and I had talked about extending the Mercedes/Kim feud further so I more or less knew what would happen but the Catherine spot was a total surprise, but a good one. Catherine vs. Mercedes is going to be fun this week. And the Kim/Mercedes feud can keep adding layers to it. After Eversol felt he was screwed it was cool to see the ending where he basically screwed Mungrel by accident and therefore pissed everyone off. It'll be an interesting week of RPs this week. All in all this week was a really good show. I didn't get to read everything as deeply as I wanted and I might put a bit more feedback later on but wanted to post my initial thoughts sooner rather than later. |
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| Lita Maivia | Sep 9 2015, 08:39 PM Post #7 |
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Show Introduction Writer: Seph I loved seeing this back! Seph did a great job with this and I really appreciate the "Where is Johnny?" sign. I wish I could have gotten him on this show somewhere but I just didn't have the time. Sad face. Tag Team Match The Bayou Wrecking Crew (Lucas Bergeron & Anastasia Grimm) vs Tommy Hale & LaTonya Jackson Writer: Steve ReVoltron Writer: Jonny (Doom) Aftermatch Writer: Jim This was an incredible match considering half the ring had jobbers in it. Steve made the jobbers look good (I'm guessing at Jim's request?) and they actually got a win! That's great for our enhancement talent. I was surprised to see Brittany's music played to distract Lucas. I'm curious if that was Jim's idea or Jonny's. Regardless, this match was full of so much excitement from the action to the interruptions to the aftermath where Lucas was insane! Great stuff, guys. Spencer Chamberlain Segments Writer: Seph Spencer Chamberlain is kind of creepy. Is he supposed to be creepy? He's like Hannibal Lecter nice. I loved the Depicting Sorrow one where Roy commented that he seemed nice. Lol. But nothing will top the encounter with Havok. That was gold. I really want to see more of these two characters just randomly running into each other. Singles Match Cabellera Contra Retiro Cage Murdock vs Ramsi Greene Writer: Seph Blah! Ramsi should have knocked Cage out and cut his hair anyway. That's the only comment I have on this match. I wanted Cage to lose just so he'd get his hair cut off. ![]() Maddox Blade/Q-Ball Segment Writers: Jay (Maddox) & Mark (Q-Ball) A great introduction to our new characters. I'm hoping this pans out to a great feud. I personally favor Maddox off the bat because I'm a shallow person that likes attractive characters immediately. Lol. FIW Tag Team Championship Triple Threat Match Fourth Reich © vs The McConnaigh Brothers vs Depicting Sorrow (Darian Gray & Roy Harlowe) Writer: Atom I really hope we get this full match soon because I'd like to know what dirty deeds Roy did to win this match. I'm thrilled to see Depicting Sorrow with the belts because I've always enjoyed Darian Gray and of course I'm a big Roy Harlowe fan. I think they'll have a great dynamic as a tag team and I look forward to our tag division booming. Catherine Neville Segment Writer: Jo Good stuff from Jo that was necessary at this point for Catherine. I liked that Jo was quick to establish that Catherine is not going heel because that would be a horrible move for this character that has evolved so much over such a short amount of time. Turning her heel now would ruin so much good story she's told recently. Singles Match Nemesis vs Psycho Dragon Writer: Sid A good match here. I'm happy to see Nemesis picking up wins because I've always liked Nemesis, but Psycho Dragon is a great new addition to the roster. Here's hoping he can rebound. Mad Dawg/Julie Segment Writer: Marc Wha? Are Mad Dawg and Julie going to hook up? Hellcat Singles Match Grudge Match Camila Martinez vs Terri Golde Writer: The Other Steve I was curious to see who would win this one. Since I was out of town over the weekend, I never got the chance to check out the RPs heading into this match. Interesting to see Camila's first loss and I'm glad Terri stole it rather than just won it. As established as Terri is, I think taking shortcuts is definitely better for her than getting hard-fought victories. It shows that she sees herself above putting in the hard work for victories that she feels she just deserves to be handed. Singles Match Mad Dawg vs Quincy Wilson Writer: The Other Steve I am stunned that Quincy took this one. That's not a knock on Bran's skill level at all because I know Bran can bring it when he wants to bring it. I just haven't been around to read the RPs and Bran has seemed distracted as of late. Plus, Marc has been so on his game lately. So this was a surprising finish. I'm glad that it was due to Kim and Bloodbath at ringside, though. That's a good way for Mad Dawg to go down if he has to. Pet/Blink Segment Writer: Jo Are these two really becoming a tag team? Because I don't see that working out at all. Lol. Fighting Spirit Championship Street Fight Cody McGinnis © vs H@VOK Writer: Sid I knew it was only a matter of time before Havok took the belt. Sucks for T but Wight has been on fire with Havok lately. Here's hoping the FSC has found a home for more than a few weeks. Here's also hoping that T can find something to get excited about here in FIW because I'm missing Cody of NGIW fame. He feels so muted here. What's going on? It makes sense that Quincy would immediately attack after the match. I'm glad to see Quincy lining himself up for a shot. Blessed & Forsaken Lethal Lottery Ladder Match Qualifier Triple Threat Match Nightmare vs Keith Williams vs Stephen Eversol Writer: Nate Whoo! Kim got up close and personal with the greatest mustache in FIW! Well, I'm sure she didn't like it but I loved it! Haha. I love seeing Keith win the match because, let's face it, I am in love with Keith Williams. Sucks for Eversol because I'm a huge fan of his as well (and he's the client of my character!) but I just can't say no to that Keith Williams. This was a great way to finish the match too. I loved the confusion with Eversol thinking that Nathaniel was trying to screw him and that led to his downfall. This Eversol/Nathaniel rivalry is my favorite thing in FIW right now. Undisputed International Championship Bloodbath McGrath © vs Neo Carner Writer: Seph I'm stunned that Bloodbath has lost the UIC. He was such a good champion and I was enjoying the interactions that Adam and I were able to have between him and Kim as time allowed. I do have to admit that I'm finding Neo a lot more enjoyable since the Revenants started and he's spending a little time out of the DC scene at the moment. So I think this is a good move for Neo and Seph is of course deserving of a title reign because he's being doing such a good job with his characters. Is Neo going to become the next Seth Rollins and win the DC while holding the UIC? That's funny because I always pictured Seth Rollins when Neo had long hair. Lol. I'm not thrilled to see Bloodbath lose the title but I'm happy with how he lost it, at least. It still gives Bloodbath plenty to continue on with. Here's hoping Mad Dawg continues to get near the UIC, though. I think Marc deserves that belt. Hellcat Championship Kim Coulter © vs Mercedes Blackwell Writer: Lita We knew weeks before this match that I wouldn't be in town the weekend of RATC so Bleak and I made the decision to prolong this feud beyond RATC. I'm having such a good time working an actual storyline with someone rather than just random matches being thrown together every week to see if something develops. Mercedes is such a great character and Bleak has been absolutely killing it with Mercedes. I'm impressed with his ability to play her as a likable but still tough character. He's doing Lita better than I ever did! Haha. Main Event FIW Dual Crown Championship Nathaniel Alexander © vs Mungrel Writer: Sid I loved how much chaos Eversol caused in this match. He looked like such a loose cannon and I think that was perfect for the character at this point. I love that all the possible manipulation is starting to wear on him and he's absolutely paranoid that everyone is out to get him. Having him go after Nathaniel was great because I love playing up that tension there. The stuff was Mungrel is good because it keeps him involved and I really am enjoying the Mungrel character. He's probably the only main-event character that has consistently kept my attention since I came back here. Mun just plays him so well and like Nate he always seems to be able to roll with the punches that make the character easy to like. |
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| Steve | Sep 9 2015, 09:40 PM Post #8 |
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I was actually just told to have a random wrestlers music start playing and thought Brittany would be a nice touch. |
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| Maddox Blade | Sep 10 2015, 05:21 PM Post #9 |
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As I said more reviews were coming and here are some more. MAD DAWG/JULIE SEGMENT This was a good segment to have as a start of something. What it will be, we’re not sure at this point. I’m doing these reviews as I read the results. It shows that there has been something that apparently Mad Dawg finally just said enough is enough at some point and took a matter into his own hands. I like to see those types of storylines in which someone steps up and acts. Whether they are outside the storyline or that it was planned all along. RL, I know that if I am in a room and a lady comes into the room and I’m getting high, she’s going to get a made up song. Or, my fiancé…then she’d be in trouble. Not gonna lie lol. But, here with Julie taking the blunt out of Mad Dawg’s hand and the look he gave her made it funny. I at first was thinking she better not throw that out. Then when she took the drags I was like, yesssssss. And, I started going…”close the door”. I thought it was a simple, good segment that really made me hope that these two are going to eventually hook up. MY rating: 5/10 Hellcat Singles Match Grudge Match Camila Martinez vs Terri Golde Referee: Kristy Arnold As a smoker myself I was nodding my head in agreement with Camila arguing with the security here in the beginning. The commentary at first reminded me of Jerry Lawler and his fascination with the WWE divas, so I was thinking I was going to read “Puppies” but I’m glad that I didn’t read “puppies”. That’s very overdone and for me it eventually got annoying. You would not believe how many feds use Jerry Lawler and JR for their commentators. When I joined FIW, I was glad not to see JR and Jerry Lawler as commentators. So I was glad that “puppies” didn’t come out here prior to the match. At the start of the this match I was cringing at the chops and I said “Watch the boobs, ladies.” Reason being in my training, we didn’t have separation. Guys and ladies trained together regularly. Long story short learning to do a chop on a lady came with a lot of boob slapping, then face smacking to follow. Thank goodness it was never taken personal, but I sure learned how to do a knife edge chop quick. But that’s what went through my mind when I saw the start. *Cringe, Cringe* “Watch the boobs, ladies”. I also liked how quick there was a cover attempt. It’s wrestling. Grudge matches are supposed to be this way. Try to get over and gain victory asap. It’s a fight and bragging rights come with it. The fact that the managers are mentioned here without some interference going on is great. People tend to forget that they are there or don’t mention them outside of some sort of action taken by the manager. So that was a nice thing to see being written into this match. This match was written very well. The perv comments of Chip mixed well with showing the athleticism of the competitors. It can be tough to write a female match and make it look like that’s what it is. In no way does that mean anything derogative. I have often seen match writers make a match like this either perverse or not enough sensuality to the ladies. It shows both the attention to grace of the woman as well as the athletic ability of a woman. I liked how this match was written. At the end with the tights, grudge match says it all and with something like that, this grudge isn’t over yet. MY rating: 7/10 SPENCER CHAMBERLAIN/HAVOK SEGMENT First, I saw “the bathroom, Spencer….” Before I read on, knowing I did a segment with him, first thing came to mind…”I hope he washed his hands.” Then, “whew. He’s washing his hands.” Then Havok comes in. OMG I died laughing. I saw “this isn’t my spaceship.” Then asking about a blue porta potty with Christmas lights on top and I lost it. I’m one of those easily amused, and had to actually get up from the computer and go outside to have a cigarette. I laughed for a few minutes while I smoked my cigarette because of that. I probably should’ve waited on the cigarette because I came back and read again from the start of this segment. The fact that Havok feels out-weirded here at the end made it even better. I love that last line. “Nobody out-weirds Havok.” MY rating: 6/10 Singles Match Mad Dawg vs Quincy Wilson Referee: Tony Clarke First thing I said to myself when I saw this match was next… “Wonder if Julie is coming out, too.” As the match went on, this right here is the time where Kim Coulter comes out. It takes a lot for a storyline to make you hate a character. You have to do it well. With Kim Coulter, this has now happened for me. Actually makes me want to create a female character of my own. Might let my fiancé make one if I find that I have some time to RP for that character lol. But, it didn’t take my attention away from the match itself. And, as Kim Coulter started messing with Mad Dawg I started hoping to see Mad Dawg win this match. Damn that Kim Coulter. LOL The match itself was well written and the distraction from Kim making a difference in the result was a nice touch. At the end I did say that: “Damn that Kim Coulter.” MY Rating: 7/10 |
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| Jimmy Jimbo | Sep 10 2015, 06:11 PM Post #10 |
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[align=center] [/align][size0]Thanks, Lita! ![]() <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cc3300; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE ROUGAROU</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Rougarou" Silas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'6"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>296 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>The Bayou</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Led Zeppelin - 'When The Levee Breaks'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Methodical Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Sword of Damocles </option> <option> - Chokeslam </option> <option> - Bayou Leg Sweep </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Swamp Drop Brainbuster</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 1x Fighting Spirit Champion</option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Roleplay of the Year (Family Reunion)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Segment of the Year (The Rougarou Cometh)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Mr. GEIST/Deacon DEATH)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Newcomer of the Year</option> <option> - 2014 & 2015 FIW Manager of the Year (Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> </option> <option> Now do you believe in The Rougarou? </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cadetblue; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">#SWAGOLITION</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Condemned" Lucas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'4½"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>235 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Kandiyohi, Minnesota</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Black Sabbath - 'Hole in the Sky'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Athletic - Strong Style - Brawler</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Exploder Suplex </option> <option> - Powerbomb </option> <option> - German Suplex </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - The Manhattan Project</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - n/a </option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2015 FIW ReVolt Match of the Year (vs. Nemesis, 6/6/15)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Nemesis)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Babyface of the Year</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ The Rougarou)</option> <option> </option> <option> Just Give The Lunatic A Chance... </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: 14b8ff; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE MAN IN BLACK</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>Jim O'Brien </option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'7"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>290 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Grant's Lick, Kentucky</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Motörhead - 'Line in the Sand'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Strong Style Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Belly-to-Belly Suplex</option> <option> - Saito Suplex </option> <option> - Jackknife Powerbomb </option> <option> - Hells Bells-plex</option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Hells Bells</option> <option> - F-Bomb</option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 2x Fighting Spirit Champion </option> <option> - 1x co-holder of the FIW Tag Team Championships of the World (w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 1x Ultimate Endurance Champion</option> <option> - 1x Spirit Of Honour Champion</option> <option> - 3x Dual Crown Champion</option> <option> Other Cool Stuff: </option> <option> - 2015 FIW Hall of Fame inductee</option> <option> - 2004 TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2004 Feud Of The Year (w/ Silent Rage)</option> <option> - 2004 Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Genocide) <option> - 2005 1st Runner-Up, TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2005 Co-Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Anarchy In The UK)</option> <option> - 2008 & 2012 Lady Luck Tournament Champion </option> <option> - 2008 Grand Prix Tournament Champion</option> <option> - 2008 Match of the Year participant (vs. Liam Mortell vs. Kiyoshi Nakahata @ FIW Summer of Sin) </option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW Feud of the Year participant (vs. Ash Koopa)</option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW (Face/Heel/Tweener) Turn of the Year</option> <option> - 2009 ReVolt Match Of The Year participant (vs. Ethan Adams @ ReVolt Against The Champions X)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Tag Team Of The Year (The O'Brien Clan, w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Duo Of The Year (w/ Kendra O'Brien)</option> <option> - April 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - April 2012 Storyline of the Month ("Dirty Deeds...")</option> <option> - May 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - May 2012 Match of the Month participant (vs. Damien Holburn @ FIW Deadlock)</option> <option> - July 2012 Co-Match of the Month participant (vs. Mad Dawg @ FIW ReVolt (07/01/12)</option> <option> </option> <option> So yeah, Jim was awesome. :-D </option> </select></center> | |
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| That Darn Seph | Sep 10 2015, 08:39 PM Post #11 |
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| Maddox Blade | Sep 10 2015, 09:19 PM Post #12 |
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PET/BLINK SEGMENT Woohoo! Okay. What guy does not like this? A woman kissing another? Yeah, turned this into a naughty segment for real. However, that being said, it drew my attention away from everything else in the segment. But, the kiss was supposed to be the highlight. I like the reaction Blink gets after it. I like to picture that face. Can I get in between that? Just asking. LOL My rating: 5/10 Fighting Spirit Championship Street Fight Cody McGinnis © vs H@VOK Referee: Domenic Dorsch Here we come to another championship match. I like how the segment prior to this match is a championship match. The Fighting Spirit Championship sort of reminds me that the Intercontinental title in WWE is based on those who really work hard and it’s pretty prestigious in its own right. I hated when Luke Harper had it. I’m glad he didn’t hold it long. I just felt he didn’t make that title very prestigious. When it comes to the match itself, I saw Havok’s name and I was just like…this is going to be interesting. And it was. It held my attention. I love the present at the beginning. The surprise...? The cartwheel flying hip attack. Basically I picture this as a bunch of right and left butt cheeks in the face of Cody McGinnis. I was hoping that Havok would have asked McGinnis, “Do you know why you’re on the ground? Cause you can smell it.” But, placing the mask on McGinnis and then continuing on was a nice touch and I enjoyed the match. I laughed a few times at the commentary and the actions taken by Havok. Congrats to Havok on winning that belt and I look forward reading your stuff and seeing segments from you in the future. The end of this match was also good because the former Fighting Spirit Champion comes into play and looks like a good feud is beginning to brew there. My rating: 8/10… SPENCER CHAMBERLAIN/MADDOX BLADE SEGMENT This was actually interesting to do. I like the “money/women” questions. I like how Spencer ends the encounter with a deeper question. I really am liking Spencer’s activity with his character early. Being this is part of my segment going on as well, it’s going to be fun to watch how things progress with not just myself and Q-Ball, but to see how Spencer fits in with Maddox. Both clearly have their values set on different things. It’ll be fun to see what takes place in the future with Spencer Chamberlain because Seph is playing this character pretty well and I like it. MY rating: 5/10 Blessed & Forsaken Lethal Lottery Ladder Match Qualifier Triple Threat Match Nightmare vs Keith Williams vs Stephen Eversol Referee: Lester Riggs The thing I don’t about triple threats is writing them. It’s sometimes difficult to include each person or group of teams equally. The writer of this match did a great job keeping everyone equally involved in this match. I have to feel for Nightmare because it sucks being the one that wasn’t pinned or the one that didn’t tap and even more not being the one that made the cover or scored the victory. I did like this match and I was into it. There were just enough covers that it was good and that it portrayed a triple threat, but didn’t go overboard. Nice balance there. Sometimes it really does suck when there are way too many covers and counts. I have actually been known to turn the channel when there are too many cover attempts with kick outs for my taste. So I like the balance in the writing here toward that and including each man pretty equally in the match so that one person wasn’t out of the loop half the time. Then Kim comes to play. As I mentioned earlier, I have come to want to boo her. LOL that’s what I did. I booed. Then, I imagined when my mom yelled at me and a few friends one day for doing something stupid. So, I booed again. LOL I do like how Kim Coulter really is that feeling of grrrrrrrr. It makes for a great character and I imagine fun to work with. My Rating: 7/10 SPENCER CHAMBERLAIN/NEO SEGMENT Again, another segment with Spencer Chamberlain. The first thing I thought was “What’s this guy looking for in his teeth? Spinach? Chicken? Did he kiss Kim Coulter?” Just kidding on that last one. But this was interesting. I liked how Neo automatically assumes that the donation is going to come out of his pocket. It brings back some thoughts to Neo’s mind and makes Neo question Spencer’s intensions. My Rating: 5/10 Undisputed International Championship Bloodbath McGrath © vs Neo Carner Referee: Richard Kelly I like how this match has Neo in it following his segment with Spencer. That’s a great placement for the results. I can only imagine Neo coming to the ring somewhat perhaps still annoyed with Spencer and his mind not completely on the match. But, I’m glad that it doesn’t really show that in this match because Spencer is a new guy. Neo is going for a championship, a new guy shouldn’t affect a challenger for a title when it comes to their mindset. The match was pretty good. I like the details and description given in the match. I like the abrupt start to the match as well, because that pow right in the kisser was pretty nice. I love the taunting going on in the ring. I love the little mockeries. Congrats to Neo on the victory. MY rating: 8/10 Hellcat Championship Kim Coulter © vs Mercedes Blackwell Referee: Mark Deveraux So this is when we say let the booing commence. That’s exactly what I did when Kim Coulter came out. That’s what I did when Kim Coulter was in control. That’s what I did. I booed Kim. This character was created so well and is played so well through these results as I really didn’t have time to look at the RPs thoroughly due to the weekend and the busy schedule this last week. Aside from that this match was nice. I liked it. It was nice not having a segment between the two championship matches. Sometimes segment-match-segment-match gets old after a bit and nice to have two of something whether it’s match-match or segment-segment to change things up in the results a bit. So I like that this happened right away. I went from booing a heel style victory by Neo to continued booing and that’s good. Then….MORE BOOOOOOOO!!!! Catherine Neville. I went from feeling for Catherine to almost making me put her and Kim in the same boat of dislike. This ending made me want to see Mercedes eventually take that belt from Kim while stomping Catherine’s face in. LOL I am definitely going to following this story with Kim Coulter and Catherine Neville and Mercedes. You’ve got my interest for sure and I look forward to seeing what takes place from here. And the battle after this match…I loved that. MY rating: 8/10 Main Event FIW Dual Crown Championship Nathaniel Alexander © vs Mungrel Referee: Tony Clarke The only thing I was hoping to see was a very small scene as the two were making their way through the hallway before the match for a second during the commentary, then like switch back to comments at ringside showing the announcer’s table…perhaps like the writing of a little video of what took place to bring about the Championship match if that was possible…then the video would fade and all the sudden the entrance theme would begin. It’s tough being a new guy and having not been able to read up first before I read the results here to make sure I could feel just as much excitement for this match as everyone else that had been around to see whatever took place. The match was written great. I mean this is probably the only thing that made me hope for that video or what not prior to the match between the previous Hellcat Championship. But it didn’t hurt the rating any at all. It was written well. Because I am not very informed on what’s going on regarding these two or the situation surrounding them I can’t really say too much more. I hope that’s okay with everyone that I’m not going too much into this. I probably couldn’t give a review on this right now to give it justice being the Dual Crown Championship. So I will just close this with my rating. But I do like the Eversol twist to the main event for sure. MY rating: 10/10 This was a great show guys. Just so people know I don't give anything higher than 8/10 for segments. So basically if you got a 8/10 for a segment from me it's still like saying you got a 10/10...But great show. Lots of interesting things going down guys. I'm intrigued. Great match writers. Great play of characters and lots of storms brewing is good to see. |
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| DoomDragon | Sep 10 2015, 10:20 PM Post #13 |
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Hey, we're just that damn good. LOL Being one out of two 10's is awesome in my book. |
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| Lita Maivia | Sep 10 2015, 10:29 PM Post #14 |
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| Jo | Sep 10 2015, 10:49 PM Post #15 |
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Yay! Feedbacking the feedback. Should come up with a logo and theme for this at some point... On with a ton of flash and flare with no substance. ![]() Just, um, warning to new people and I suppose others, if you see Pet heavy in a promo then chances are it's sexual in some way. Because she likes to push people to that point. I'm glad Catherine's interview got the reaction that it did. I wanted to point out that she's not turning heel, but she's clearly going to be doing heel things. Like I said before, I kinda see the situation as being like the HBK/JBL one and we all know it ended with a super kick. Just...gonna leave it at that.I think that's it. Wow, didn't do much this week. Sigh. Oh well. If I missed something, I'm sorry. Kind of a spur of the moment deal here. Party on, Joe. ~eat snacky smores~ |
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| Jimmy Jimbo | Sep 11 2015, 12:53 PM Post #16 |
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First I'll say thank you for the positive feedback for what Steve, Jonny and I put together this week. I was very happy with the match Steve wrote. I wasn't expecting his portion to be as long as it was, he really didn't have to write as much as he did but I'm very thankful for it. Doom's distraction was ehhhhhxcellent.[/Mr.Burns] I was anticipating this distraction for awhile and I'm so, so happy with it (I'm probably the only person here who gets excited about their character getting embarrassed or verbally destroyed ). And as for my part, which was Hale's attempted pinfall until Luke walked out of the truck - I know Seph said Luke should've won, and he probably should've, but Luke was mad. He was really, really mad and I figured that dick punting and powerbombing a guy on his head only seconds after such an emotionally damaging video showed on the big screen would've been accurate. As for Luke charging the production truck - I just hate how on Raw there'll be a match between wrestlers A and B and the music for wrestler C, A's rival, cues up for no reason and the distraction costs wrestler A the match and the reaction is always the same - 'that damn bloody wrestler C!' No! Blame the guy in the truck for playing it, he's the real jerk here! So take that pet peeve into account along with watching some Nitros between Bash at the Beach 96 and Hog Wild 96 where the nWo was attacking everybody in sight and invading the production truck and how that was treated, and that's where the influence for Lucas going to the truck came from. One last note I'll add on this segment - I LOVED Brittany's music playing and Lucas immediately starts fixing his hair. Great attention to detail. I got a good laugh out of that.As for a few other things... Ramsi/Cage was pretty good. I liked Cage's entrance, not sure if it tops the Anarchy one with Ramsi driving a Hummer while (I think) Cage had a bazooka. But an entertaining read and I'm excited to see where Murdock goes from here. I liked the Spencer segments. One issue I have with Spencer though is that I'm having a very difficult time believing that a character repped by Tom Cruise is 6'4" I think the Spencer/Havok segment was my favorite of them all though, for essentially the same reasons Jason stated earlier.Mad Dawg/Quincy was good too. I get mad reading Dawg's entrance though, because every time I do I think "Man, Absolute Zero was supposed to be Lucas' entrance. " because when I was developing the character, that's what I had pegged for his entrance. Then one week on ReVolt I read The Black Avenger (aka Mad Dawg) using it and I just groaned. Oh well. Maybe in another fed someday. But anyway, liked the hard hitting action, Commentary had a couple funny lines ("Don't call me Michael in a southern accent" or something like that, but I do take issue with the line about how bad the Steelers offensive line is - it has improved by leaps and bounds since Mike Munchak became the offensive line coach. And even though they lost last night, DeAngelo Williams got some huge holes opened up for him. But at least there wasn't anything about how old the Steelers are, God that would've made me punch a hole in my monitor, I got so sick of people saying that).I also really, really enjoyed the roleplays from Psycho Dragon and Nemesis this past week and liked their match as well. I thought Dragon won the roleplay battle but not by much, because Sid just churns out quality work every week. I'll be intersted to see if Dragon & Nemesis' paths cross again down the road. I especially liked Wight's roleplay with Havok and am glad to see the character pick up some gold, he's consistently been one of my favorite characters to read. Wight does such a great job balancing comedy and menace with Havok. I'll make an effort to look through the rest of the show. Congrats to the new champs and I'm excited to see what we put together for next week.
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[align=center] [/align][size0]Thanks, Lita! ![]() <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cc3300; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE ROUGAROU</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Rougarou" Silas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'6"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>296 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>The Bayou</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Led Zeppelin - 'When The Levee Breaks'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Methodical Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Sword of Damocles </option> <option> - Chokeslam </option> <option> - Bayou Leg Sweep </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Swamp Drop Brainbuster</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 1x Fighting Spirit Champion</option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Roleplay of the Year (Family Reunion)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Segment of the Year (The Rougarou Cometh)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Mr. GEIST/Deacon DEATH)</option> <option> - 2014 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> - 2014 1st Runner Up, FIW Newcomer of the Year</option> <option> - 2014 & 2015 FIW Manager of the Year (Butch Babineaux)</option> <option> </option> <option> Now do you believe in The Rougarou? </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: cadetblue; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">#SWAGOLITION</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>"The Condemned" Lucas Bergeron</option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'4½"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>235 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Kandiyohi, Minnesota</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Black Sabbath - 'Hole in the Sky'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Athletic - Strong Style - Brawler</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Exploder Suplex </option> <option> - Powerbomb </option> <option> - German Suplex </option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - The Manhattan Project</option> <option> - Honey Island Swamp Lock </option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - n/a </option> <option>Other Cool Stuff:</option> <option> - 2015 FIW ReVolt Match of the Year (vs. Nemesis, 6/6/15)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Feud of the Year (vs. Nemesis)</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Babyface of the Year</option> <option> - 2015 FIW Duo of the Year (w/ The Rougarou)</option> <option> </option> <option> Just Give The Lunatic A Chance... </option> </select></center> <center><select style="font-family: Tahoma; font-size: 8pt; background-color: 14b8ff; font-weight: bold; color:black"> <option style="color:black">THE MAN IN BLACK</option> <option> Name: </option> <option>Jim O'Brien </option> <option>Height:</option> <option>6'7"</option> <option>Weight:</option> <option>290 lbs.</option> <option>Hometown:</option> <option>Grant's Lick, Kentucky</option> <option>Entrance Music:</option> <option>Motörhead - 'Line in the Sand'</option> <option>Wrestling Style:</option> <option>Strong Style Powerhouse</option> <option>Signature Moves:</option> <option> - Belly-to-Belly Suplex</option> <option> - Saito Suplex </option> <option> - Jackknife Powerbomb </option> <option> - Hells Bells-plex</option> <option>Finishing Moves:</option> <option> - Hells Bells</option> <option> - F-Bomb</option> <option>Title History:</option> <option> - 2x Fighting Spirit Champion </option> <option> - 1x co-holder of the FIW Tag Team Championships of the World (w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 1x Ultimate Endurance Champion</option> <option> - 1x Spirit Of Honour Champion</option> <option> - 3x Dual Crown Champion</option> <option> Other Cool Stuff: </option> <option> - 2015 FIW Hall of Fame inductee</option> <option> - 2004 TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2004 Feud Of The Year (w/ Silent Rage)</option> <option> - 2004 Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Genocide) <option> - 2005 1st Runner-Up, TNT Superstar Of The Year</option> <option> - 2005 Co-Match Of The Year participant (vs. Silent Rage @ FIW Anarchy In The UK)</option> <option> - 2008 & 2012 Lady Luck Tournament Champion </option> <option> - 2008 Grand Prix Tournament Champion</option> <option> - 2008 Match of the Year participant (vs. Liam Mortell vs. Kiyoshi Nakahata @ FIW Summer of Sin) </option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW Feud of the Year participant (vs. Ash Koopa)</option> <option> - 2008 1st Runner-Up, FIW (Face/Heel/Tweener) Turn of the Year</option> <option> - 2009 ReVolt Match Of The Year participant (vs. Ethan Adams @ ReVolt Against The Champions X)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Tag Team Of The Year (The O'Brien Clan, w/ Jorge O'Brien)</option> <option> - 2009 FIW Duo Of The Year (w/ Kendra O'Brien)</option> <option> - April 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - April 2012 Storyline of the Month ("Dirty Deeds...")</option> <option> - May 2012 Superstar of the Month</option> <option> - May 2012 Match of the Month participant (vs. Damien Holburn @ FIW Deadlock)</option> <option> - July 2012 Co-Match of the Month participant (vs. Mad Dawg @ FIW ReVolt (07/01/12)</option> <option> </option> <option> So yeah, Jim was awesome. :-D </option> </select></center> | |
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| BleakInfinity | Sep 11 2015, 04:15 PM Post #17 |
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I mainly wrote that line to have Chip make fun of Mad Dawg for his fantasy football selections in his RP. I don't know much about the Steelers at all and had no idea Le'Veon Bell's draft stock had risen as much as it did. He was being taken number one overall in some leagues so their line must be decent. It was mainly a way for Chip to make fun of Mad Dawg even when most of what he was saying was BS. Though, I do stand by the line about taking Andrew Luck over Aaron Rodgers being just crazy :P. |
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| That Darn Seph | Sep 11 2015, 05:58 PM Post #18 |
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Cage was driving the hummer and Ramsi fired the Chyna Bazooka. >_> I thought the Shredder entrance was cooler, it had Foot Soldiers! |
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Lucas needs a win dammit! I can't even recall the last time he won. SPOOKY SCARY SKELETONS.
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" because when I was developing the character, that's what I had pegged for his entrance. Then one week on ReVolt I read The Black Avenger (aka Mad Dawg) using it and I just groaned. Oh well. Maybe in another fed someday. But anyway, liked the hard hitting action, Commentary had a couple funny lines ("Don't call me Michael in a southern accent" or something like that, but I do take issue with the line about how bad the Steelers offensive line is - it has improved by leaps and bounds since Mike Munchak became the offensive line coach. And even though they lost last night, DeAngelo Williams got some huge holes opened up for him. But at least there wasn't anything about how old the Steelers are, God that would've made me punch a hole in my monitor, I got so sick of people saying that).
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