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FIW Weekly Double Shot Supershow Feedback; November 10th, 2015
Topic Started: Nov 10 2015, 01:07 PM (289 Views)
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Opening Segment: Lita & Nate & Sid

Hellcats Match: Sid

Sakura & Brittany Segment: Dai & Lita

Tag Match: Seph

Velocity vs. Riot: Bleak

Lucas, Cody, Anastasia & Psycho Dragon Segment: Jim, T & Doomed

Kellyn & Brittany Segment: Nate & Lita

ReVolt Main Event: Sid

Eight-Person Tag: Lita

Post-Match Segment with Ethan Adams: Lita with permission from Steve

Hardkore vs. Mungrel: Nate

Blink & Pet Segment: Jo

Hellcats Four-Way Match: Lita

Rougarou Promo: Jim

Fallout Main Event: Lita
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Minister Wighty
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I feel like < is the new Marauder Shields. That is to say, the end of the first ME is bugged.

Tag match was absolute chaos and a blast to read. Really liked Kim's opening promo and Pet is doing exactly what I said she should, whether Joe wrote it before or not, it helps give her a humanizing, grounding point. Good start.

New Roy Harlowe looks sick. Kind of a Speedball/Penance sort of situation, which I dig.

I really like the RAtC card and the way its formatted/conveyed. Extra context isn't always required but its nice for supercards.

Shows up earlier than usual. Got to read it AND feedback it on my lunch with time to spare. Tight.
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That Darn Seph
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Main event needs fixing, which is a shame because I was having a blast reading it.
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It's fixed.

Don't know what happened, it was fine earlier.
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Once again at a complete and utter loss on how Avila won. Baffling is what it is.

Also, thank you, Wight, for the feedback on the promo. :)

When I can I'll read the rest. Just the one match...

I didn't mind Blink losing so much, but...was it a tag match? If so, then didn't Sakura pin the illegal member of the "team"? Did she really win? Is the match still going on? What are those squiggly things you see every so often? And more importantly...

Party on,
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Follow Pet's Twitter if you don't mind...you know, Pet being Pet. Also, she tends to mention it a fair bit. (NSFW)
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It was a fatal four-way.
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Jo,Nov 10 2015
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I didn't mind Blink losing so much, but...was it a tag match? If so, then didn't Sakura pin the illegal member of the "team"? Did she really win? Is the match still going on?

You must not have read many recent four-ways here. Generally they use the anybody can tag in on anybody format. Makes them easier for us writers to handle and makes the matches more likely to get taken.

So, technically, Sakura and Blink were both "illegal" if you want to be super technical, but with Helena's head driven through the mat it's a wonder if she could remain legal and then was Sakura or Blink legal? You can't really tell for sure, so the referee just panicked and ended the match.

I went to look at the show and the ReVolt main-event is still screwed up. I moved the Rougarou promo and the Fallout main-event to its own post so the ReVolt main-event can go at the start of the Fallout post but... I don't have a copy of the ReVolt main-event to put it in.

This has happened before in one of the shows Steve was posting back when. The post was close to the 60000 character limit but not quite there and still it kept cutting the post off. So, like I said, I made room for it at the start of Fallout.
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Guess I just can't beat Wight with any of my characters. Shame, fun match though.
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I voted for you. :(
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Really great show. Fucking love the transformation Harlowe made into Sorrow. Really looking forward to seeing how Sorrow works out going forward. 4R/DS tag match was fun and enjoyed how it ended with both teams brawling up the ramp.

Tag main event was just non stop action and it's always fun seeing Mad Dawg take his shots at Kim. LOL'ed at the line from hip that Mad Dawg is trying to screw up Stephen's face so Kim would want him. I could totally see him screwing with her just for the hell of it too.

Thumbs up all around! :lol:
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That Darn Seph,Nov 10 2015
11:16 PM
Guess I just can't beat Wight with any of my characters. Shame, fun match though.

Don't take it too hard. It was one of the tougher calls this week. And, like I think I've said before most matches are really hard calls due to the skill level of everybody here. I tried to reflect that in the match, with both of them trying to have the other's number.

Unless someone no shows, then it's an easy cop out.
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I echo what Sid said. I think you and I are just on the same skill level, Seph, and for whatever reason the judges keep erring in my favor. This was a lot more even than times past, I'd say. You selling Havok with Cage's coulrophobia was classic shit. But even then, I had made my peace with losing Sunday night. Hell, after you posted that last RP I made my peace with it. You're definitely one of my toughest opponents.
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That was fun. Enjoyed the match. Liked the sneaky but totally legit finish.

Brittany has Kim's colour code in the scene with Sakura. I'm ashamed that I didn't notice it when we were writing it.

Neo is so much better as a heel. Similarly, I like Gus Richelin better now he's lost Shaelin and embraced the madness. (nb. There's a whole incarnation of NGIW that I've missed, so it may have happened earlier than this.)

Will try and get more specific stuff up later. Have read everything.
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I didn't mind Blink losing so much, but...was it a tag match? If so, then didn't Sakura pin the illegal member of the "team"? Did she really win? Is the match still going on?

You must not have read many recent four-ways here. Generally they use the anybody can tag in on anybody format. Makes them easier for us writers to handle and makes the matches more likely to get taken.

So, technically, Sakura and Blink were both "illegal" if you want to be super technical, but with Helena's head driven through the match it's a wonder if she could remain legal and then was Sakura or Blink legal? You can't really tell for sure, so the referee just panicked and ended the match.

Sorry, just in the match settings here it states there's four-way and four-corners with four-corners being the tag in and four way being what was listed.
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Brittany has Kim's colour code in the scene with Sakura. I'm ashamed that I didn't notice it when we were writing it.

The funny thing is that I DID notice when we were writing and I said "Ah, I'll change it when I go to post the promo". Well, that didn't happen. Lol.
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More random thoughts. On phone, in work. Assume I liked it unless I say otherwise.

- I don't like the way Sakuya Kick looks with the hyphen. Might ditch it. The idea is that it's Yakuza backwards, but also spells Saku, so the name is staying.
- Mungrel vs. Jonny Hardkore was full-on Osaka Pro comedy silliness. Loved it.
- Kim in the opening promo was golden.
- Does Cleveland really suck that bad? This is possibly the most negative thing I have to say about the whole show.
- I can think of three bigger NFL officiating fuck ups without even trying, and on that scale, whether or not tags are necessary in a four way barely registers. Hell, I've reffed two junior rugby league matches and fucked up worse.
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I absolutely loved all of my matches, they were all very well written. Sid is becoming one of my favorite writers as I grow to appreciate his style more and more.

Enjoyed the 8 Man Tag, writing for it and being it in was great. Lita always knows how to give everyone the right amount of face time and she made Cage look like a beast and that makes me happy.

I'm so glad people are enjoying the Sorrow thing I'm trying out. It'll be fun, I'm looking forward to really cutting loose with the gimmick and seeing how far I can push it.

Thanks for all the compliments and kind words, I appreciate it. Wight is just my white whale, I'll never beat him unless Darian Gray is my tag team partner >.>
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Sorry for the delayed feedback yet again. I don't want it to seem like I'm just making excuses for the lateness, but suffice it to say it's been a long week. Lol. Anyway, I really liked the entire show from top to bottom; literally everything was awesome.

When it comes to the Hardkore/Mungrel match, it was supposed to be pure comedy, but still look relatively even despite the comedic element to it. Hopefully I was able to pull that off well. Thanks for the feedback on that, btw, Dai. Definitely appreciate that. So far I'd have to say that was the most fun I had writing a match, despite a few serious IRL things on my mind at the time.

I definitely liked the opening segment with Kim, Nathaniel and Nemesis. I think it added a lot going into the match at RATC. I didn't write the bits for Nathaniel in that segment, but nonetheless he was written perfectly as to what I would make him do in that situation, especially so close to RATC. So, that was awesome.

The Avila/Pet match was a nice short read. Chip said it right that Pet was definitely put through the ringer in that match. The Neo/Tier match was really cool too. The RP's that went into that match were really good, so it's cool to see that effort pay off in an equally good match.

I really liked the way the Kellyn/Brittany segment came out. I had mentioned to Lita that I wanted to have a segment where Kellyn got her comeuppance in a way from Brittany heading into their match at RATC. Kellyn interfering in Brittany's tag match was cool to see too as was the continuation in the back leading to Ethan Adams setting up the Falls Count Anywhere match at RATC. I know it's already late in the cycle, but hopefully I can put up some good RP's with Kellyn for this match.

Speaking of Brittany, I also liked the segment between her and Sakura early in the show. That was cool to see.

At first when I read the 4R/Depicting Sorrow match, the pinfalls close together seemed a bit off at first glance, but when I read it in full, they worked well. Good stuff with that match. As I've said before several times now, I'm a big fan of the Darian character.

Bleak did a really good job with the High Velocity/Nick Riot match. That was a really fun read.

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CM: It’s gotta be that Cleveland connection, only it’s making both men awful.

JH: What is your problem with Cleveland!?!

CM: Have you ever heard someone say, “I’m going to Cleveland on vacation.?”


LOL! That bit of commentary was awesome. Overall, a lot of fun to read that match.

That promo setting up the Basilisk vs Anastasia match for RATC was absolutely awesome. That whole feud has been a helluva lot of fun to see brewing and all the characters involved in it are added to the list of characters I'm a fan of. Lol. That whole thing was great. The Rougarou return bumper was also equally as awesome too. It really felt like something you'd see in a WWE show with a really big return coming soon. Definitely good stuff and it's gonna be cool seeing Rougarou back in the ring.

The Pet/Blink segment was really good.

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Pet: It's perfect! Mama doesn't know how anyone else kisses, so she kisses someone as sub par as you...wait.

Pet eyes Blink and comes in close. It almost seems as though she's ready to begin interrogating Mercedes' backup for the night when...she kisses her! It catches Blink off guard who squeaks and takes a step back against the wall leaving Pet standing there looking off toward the side. She shrugs and continues.

Pet: Yeah, someone as sub par as you and she'll come running for my kisses!


Ah, the logic of Pet. LOL! Good stuff there.

I agree the Hellcat fatal four-way was a great match. It gave everybody equal time to shine and overall it all flowed together really well. As much a fan as I am of all the characters involved in this one, it was cool seeing Sakura take the victory here upon her return to FIW.

The tag team main event was a helluva lot of fun to read. Kim interfering in the match preventing Richlen from hitting the moonsault was really cool, and I liked the way Johnny and Eversol were both portrayed in this match. Specifically the bit after that spot with Kim interfering and Johnny wanting nothing to do with winning in that way. Then the spot with Eversol letting his ego essentially get the best of him and wanting to pin Richlen only to get pinned himself. Awesome overall.
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