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RATC XXVI Feedback; November 17th, 2015
Topic Started: Nov 17 2015, 05:17 PM (699 Views)
Lita Maivia
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Dai,Nov 18 2015
07:09 AM
Jo,Nov 18 2015
01:46 AM
but a face does a heel tactic to a face and will most likely never be questioned on it. And she'll be loved all the more for it.

The cheaper than necessary shot at the end of the match fits in with other things Sakura has said and done so far. I don't believe in doing things in such obviously black and white terms. I don't yet know exactly how I will acknowledge it, but I'm fine with Sakura's mask slipping a little now and again, and I thought it was a neat touch.

Also. Blink is a face like John Cena is a face. She says whatever she wants now with a "Is that OK to say?" concern as a means to protect her but it isn't always OK for her to say. In addition to that, Blink is just as hated by people as she is liked by others. She is far from a super babyface and therefore it is not outrageous to think that another face doesn't like her. This particular face just happens to be more vocal and physical about taking care of her issues.
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Jo
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That's fine. I was just wondering on the reasons behind it is all. :)
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Finally trying to get some feedback in after not posting any for a few weeks. Apologies, life has been hectic and then I was battling a cold so I didn't have much energy outside of writing and RPing to put my thoughts together for feedback.

The show was really good this week. One of the best RATCs in recent memory. As always great job to Lita and Sid who put together most of the show and anyone else who stepped up to write this week.

I really liked the Kim segments with both Nathaniel and Eversol and how different her interactions with each of them was. The Nathaniel match was great and I especially liked the spot of Kim passing out due to fear. Hilarious.

I'm disappointed I couldn't get the win for Eversol and it's been frustrating with him lately. I'm sort of at my wits end with what to do with him at the moment but don't want to give up just yet. Hopefully whatever feedback Sid gives can get him back on track. While the loss was frustrating, I really liked the booking in the match and him losing because of him worrying about Kim and the segue between the Nathaniel/Nemesis match to the FSC match was seamless. I couldn't even tell it was written by two different people. Great job to Lita on it she wrote Eversol perfectly.

As for Mercedes, I'm really happy that she retained her title. Not to mention she looked like an absolute beast with the barricade spot. Sid made her look really, really...strong. :P. I'm a little disappointed that we couldn't turn the heat up a little more on the Helena/Mercedes feud but if it does continue I hope that we can intensify it.

The Kellyn/Brittany match was really good too and I liked all of the brutal spots. Kellyn is an absolute monster and Nathan has been doing a great job with her so far. I know he was worried about her dialogue but I really like it.

I'm glad that T. and Jim were happy with the result of the Seven Minutes of Heaven match. I had a ton of fun writing it and finding new ways to show brutality against a woman. :P. I love that feud and will continue writing for it as long as I can. Hopefully some of my characters can work with theirs at some point soon.

I know I didn't give feedback on everything yet but I did read the whole show and thoroughly enjoyed it. Everyone did a great job this week. 2Sweeets all around.
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Very fun and exciting show this week. The Kim/Nemesis stuff is getting very interesting and I liked the Basilisk/Anastasia situation with PsyDrag trapping Cody and Lucas. Very intense stuff.

Huge breath of relief on the UIC match, I honestly didn't know if I could pull it off. I thought my first RP could carry me but then Kyle dropped a gem to respond and I am not gonna lie that I was scrambling to pull the second RP off. I honestly thought the Presidential Campaign RP would bomb as I felt I got off track from the theme midway so for everyone to say that was what did it I found a little surprising but I'll take it! :lol: Would say I had fun going against Kyle, but yeah that was a little scary too LOL.

Tag Title Match I expected to go the way it went and honestly it's definitely for the best. I was a little worried I wouldn't finish the RP in time, I had started it but then Kyle dropped on me so I had to hurry and respond and almost didn't get back to the 4R RP in time. Depicting Sorrow is definitely deserving of holding the titles so I'm happy with the result.
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Mad Dawg's Accomplishments

Dual Crown Champion
(2/12/16 - 9/24/16)

2X FIW Undisputed International Champion
(1/29/12 - 5/27/12)
(10/13/15 - 1/8/16)

Finisher of the Year 2011 - The Mauler
(Runner-Up) Feud of the Year 2011
(Runner-Up) Heel of the Year 2011
Storyline of the Month (Apr '11, June '11, Sept '11, Nov. '11, June '12)
Match of the Month (Feb. '12, June '12)

"Big Bad" Bobby Sanchez' Accomplishments

FIW Undisputed International Championship
(5/12/13 - 9/1/13)

2012 FIW Grand Prix Champion

Storyline of the Month (May '12)
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Just wanted to leave some quick feedback for the show this week. I'd intended to leave some yesterday, but I've been feeling kinda sick the last couple days, so trying to formulate words for something important like feedback was a difficult task.

Anyway, the show was awesome as usual. I definitely loved the way the Alexander/Nemesis match went. Even though I knew the result going into it, it was still a lot of fun to read and a lot of fun to RP for as well.

The segment between Kim and Nathaniel was just meant to be a quick interaction between them two, so it didn't really need much from Alexander. Kim pretty much said everything that needed to be said, so I just wanted to try and add a bit of comedy with Nathaniel's one-liner.

The Eversol/Nemesis segment adding to that whole storyline was awesome as well. You could definitely see the anger with Eversol and the worry that he had for Kim, going as far as screaming at Nemesis to leave her out of it. Awesome stuff there.

Speaking of Eversol/Nemesis, the Eversol/Kim segment was also really cool too. It's always funny to see the drastic difference in the interaction between Kim and Nathaniel and Kim and Stephen, but yet there always seems to still be that lingering question of whose side she's really on ever since the DC title match. I really like that angle to it.

Hopefully everybody enjoyed the tag match that I wrote. I had a lot of fun writing that match. I've always hesitated in writing multi-person matches because the idea of giving everybody equal face time has always been daunting to me, but I went ahead with it and I liked the way it turned out. Hopefully everyone else did as well.

The Brittany/Kellyn match was also awesome to read as well. I feel like that match might just be the start of the feud between the two of them. Or at least I hope it is and there's still more to come. It's always fun working with Lita and I like the complete polarization between Brittany and Kellyn.

The Seven Minutes in Heaven match was awesome and I was rooting for Anastasia to stick it out the full seven minutes the entire time I was reading it. Michael Anderson counting down the minutes seemed to be a great way to add drama to the whole thing as well. Awesome stuff with that.

Awesome to see Mercedes keep the Hellcat's title. The Hellcat's title match was a great match. I figured Mercedes might be walking away with the win, only because her title reign is still just starting, but it was a lot of fun to read that match.

Also cool to see Mad Dawg keep the UIC title as well. That match was also awesome and it was a nice, easy read. The aftermath with Neo attacking Mad Dawg and powerbombing him right into Keith's uppercut was a cool spot.

Definitely good stuff overall from everybody. Even if I didn't mention it here, I definitely read and enjoyed everything that everybody put into the show this week.
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