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ReVolt Feedback; Come on in, and FEED!
Topic Started: Apr 18 2016, 07:17 PM (305 Views)
Minister Wighty
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Thanks to Lita for the Brick Sharks/Cage Murdock match, the promo and commentary with Kim, and the co-promo with Bleak. Adam did the Black Tom joint at the top of the show, and I did all the other stuff.

Character Feedback:

Cat Meets Mouse - Seph and Dai
Introduction of the new characters. Comic book setting is different and fun, reminds me of Big Bang Theory. The key is to separate their personalities and Seph immediately does so. Victoria is the strong, sensible one. Mimi is excitable, immature and playful. Momo’s tough and… simple (in the nicest way possible). Good interaction with Sakura by Mimi, Victoria is consistent. Plenty to build on, which is the key with any new characters.

Fantastic introduction to the characters. Momo is more recognizable but she feels more real this go around. All of the characters got to shine this week and really show us who they are, and maybe even who they don't want us to know who they are. The only negative here is that I can see potential for these characters to slip into Steele Media territory. That's a careful line to walk.

Helena Handbasket
Similar stuff to last week but done equally as well. I like that Helena continues to roll on despite losses. That's one of the major reasons that Helena stands out as so dangerous because nothing slows her down. The insanity she's falling into melds all her various stories into one without disrupting the flow of the narrative. There could be a bit more content in there, but there's enough for now.

I absolutely love the energy Adam has here. I love the direction he's taking the character in, but I'm worried that he's going to take the character's stated intentions too far beyond the realm of believably and make the character into a caricature that I don't think she's intended to be.

Logan Krueger
Great story telling with references to his opponent, even putting her over in the process. There's very little to pick out on the negative side. Perhaps could use a bit more emphasis on the opponent, but this week it isn't really an issue as it matched the emphasis from the opponent. On a week where the opponent is more focused on him, it could prove to be his downfall but that's not this week.

I like where he's starting and I think the story he's telling could be very interesting, but I think I need more reasons to care about Logan Krueger specifically that aren't related to his family, that way I have more of a reason to care about his problems with his family.

Mercedes Blackwell
Truly brilliant piece this week from Mercedes. I really liked the continued building of tension between Sakura and Mercedes. These kinds of pieces make an eventual face off between two popular faces a believable confrontation and an anticipated confrontation. Great story building here. A seamless inclusion of the opponent, thanks in large part to Dai getting Sakura involved with the opponent. The only negative here is that the RP could have been sooner in the cycle.

Nathaniel Alexander
Short, sweet and to the point. Clearly did some homework on his opponents. Could have built Nathaniel up better...I guess. Not a whole lot I would say could have been done better.

XXX and TNT
Liked how XXX and TNT at least tried to do some teamy stuff although it could've used a resolution.

I got a bunch of other feedback from folks just sort of saying you guys did a great job this week. And in case it's just been too long since you've heard it; you are! I enjoyed a lot of the work that went into this week and it was actually REALLY hard to judge a few of those matches. I had to call in a LOT of outside help. Well, more than usual, anyhow.

Question: Should we have two different show names to differentiate between the Tuesday and Friday shows?

Thots?
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Lita Maivia
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I wouldn't recommend another show name.

We have a history of adding a second show and then something happens and we axe it anyway. I say just keep it ReVolt any time we're not on PPV.
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Lita Maivia,Apr 18 2016
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I wouldn't recommend another show name.

We have a history of adding a second show and then something happens and we axe it anyway. I say just keep it ReVolt any time we're not on PPV.

I second this :D Unless, if of course you want to change it to Friday Night Riot. Then, I'm okay :D
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If any day changes show name, it should be Tuesday because ReVolt was already airing on Fridays.

There was no joint with Bleak. He must've been busy because he never got back to me so I just re-worked the promo solo to get Johnny on the show and accomplish what I was hoping to accomplish.

All in all, good show this week. Again, I don't really have much specifics. I wrote my own match and had so much fun with it. Hopefully I didn't ruin any credibility for the tag titles with the way I portrayed it. I wanted to put Cage over huge who is one of the best upcoming stars right now.

I hope Seph and Adam are OK with what I did for the Tea Party/Iron Maiden feud that's brewing.

Happy to see Mercedes win. Sad to see Nathaniel lose.

Next week's show looks Ama-Zing! Terrified to go up against the Dawg, but excited too.
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I hate when there is little to no back and forth between opponents in RP's. I try my best to get my RP out early in the week to allow for that. It really sucks when your opponent(s) wait until the final days or minutes of the deadline to RP. *end of bitch*

Thanks to Wight for going with what I proposed for the aftermath. I think it works well into Xander's coward heel to blame someone else and attack someone while they are already down. I'm a bit disappointed in the loss but it is what it is. I understand someone has to lose. I'm just not sure if what I'm doing with Xander is working or hitting its mark with its audience. Any feedback apart from what was given above would be greatly appreciated.
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Eh, I'd have preferred if my results were switched. Be nice to give the Maiden Nation momentum and it honestly wouldn't have hurt Cage at all to lose to two people, let alone the Tag Team Champion. Feel it damages the titles more than builds Cage, and honestly with Cage's attitude as of late he sort of deserves some comeuppance before he develops an ego like Neo. Doesn't help I lost and all of my characters were trashed their first night booked but I guess I should be happy they're deemed important enough for such a thing.

But meh, guess Mimi isn't the star of the outfit. Best to keep focus on Victoria.

Well written matches, and I adore/thank Lita for writing what she did, Kudos to Wight for getting a show up on time(I think? I don't even know when Shows are posted now...Today? Tuesday the day now?)

We just had a second show. It was called Fallout. xD Steve made it. It didn't succeed and that was less than a year ago, we moved it to ReVolt, and then it slowly faded to obscurity.

You wanna bring something back bring back the Fan Signs at the beginning of the show.

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Fan signs for the win!
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Mercedes-Kicked butt, even though both Lebron and Kobe both suck sooo...I feel the win is deserved with the quality put out.

Brick Sharks-Honestly they were in top Brick Shark form and I'm scratching my head over how I won. I can't beat them with Darian as Sorrow, but Cage can beat them by himself?! What is this madness!?

Sakura-She has this raw innate ability to appear to be as cool as a cucumber who is also Prince Of Cats. Go figure. Had a blast working with Dai, and wish we got it up as soon as he suggested it, as I feel we could have blown it out of the water. It ended when it did because I thought Deadline was when it was, and with how I ended it there was no way of salvaging a continuance.
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I truly felt like my Sharks promo was the worst thing I've ever put out with them. I just couldn't seem to get my head into them this past week. I was a little bummed when the deadline was extended because I had exhausted anything I could come up with for them.

It's why my only other RP was BRITTANY putting over the Sharks/Cage match.

EDIT: Also... WHO ARE THE BLUE BLOODS?!
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A team from back in the day in WCW. Regal and Dave Taylor.
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08:19 PM
EDIT: Also... WHO ARE THE BLUE BLOODS?!

I was wondering the same thing. Lol. I meant to ask Wight about it just in case it was some sort of reference to Alexander and Eversol cause they were Blue Label Society. Just wanted to see if it was us booked so we don’t miss RP’ing.

Big thanks for the anonymous character feedback. I was a little worried the length of the RP I wrote wasn’t gonna be good enough for people’s liking. Good to know that wasn’t an issue. I still had a feeling I was gonna lose this match cause I noticed Nick’s second RP too late to post anything in response. I should have kept a better eye on the board so that I could have formulated a rebuttal, but it just didn’t happen. Next time, though, we’ll see what happens.

Really cool to see Mercedes get the win and I thought the RP Bleak posted up was really good. Also the promo from Lita for Johnny was good as well. I want one of those Amazing baseball caps! Where can I get one?!

It was cool seeing Kim out on commentary for Mercedes’ match. Kim still can’t admit she’s scared of Mercedes. Lol!

I also liked the bit with FIW’s new GM. I imagined him completely twitchy almost like a combination of Coach Buzzcut and Principal McVicker from Beavis and Butthead. Lol! The idea of Johnny vs Mad Dawg in a No DQ match sounds awesome and I can’t wait to see how that pans out.

Overall awesome show and I’m definitely looking forward to the next one!
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Steve,Apr 19 2016
07:19 PM
I hate when there is little to no back and forth between opponents in RP's. I try my best to get my RP out early in the week to allow for that. It really sucks when your opponent(s) wait until the final days or minutes of the deadline to RP. *end of bitch*

Thanks to Wight for going with what I proposed for the aftermath. I think it works well into Xander's coward heel to blame someone else and attack someone while they are already down. I'm a bit disappointed in the loss but it is what it is. I understand someone has to lose. I'm just not sure if what I'm doing with Xander is working or hitting its mark with its audience. Any feedback apart from what was given above would be greatly appreciated.

Have a partner who tries harder.

I don't mean that as a slam against Joe, I get where he's coming from, but you weren't the one at fault there. Don't let the muggles get you down.

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Eh, I'd have preferred if my results were switched. Be nice to give the Maiden Nation momentum and it honestly wouldn't have hurt Cage at all to lose to two people, let alone the Tag Team Champion. Feel it damages the titles more than builds Cage, and honestly with Cage's attitude as of late he sort of deserves some comeuppance before he develops an ego like Neo. Doesn't help I lost and all of my characters were trashed their first night booked but I guess I should be happy they're deemed important enough for such a thing.


This was a tough call for me, I honestly preferred Mimi's stuff but it was suggested by the other people who weighed in that it made more sense for the impending storyline. Which I was also under the impression Lita cleared with you. I'm sorry to have ruffled feathers.

I also ALSO thought Cage was set to lose this storyline. It made booking sense. But whatever.

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EDIT: Also... WHO ARE THE BLUE BLOODS?!


Yes, Blue Label Society. Sorry. I was trying to find their team name and either overlooked it or it's not readily available so I just went with what I thought it was. I'll go fix it just now.

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Duh, of course. This is why I didn't have a stab at actual feedback at three in the morning.

As for the joint with Seph, I don't know how much better it would have been if it was up earlier, but if we did have it finished quicker, maybe it could have helped a back and forth between him and Steve. I thought it came off okay. Without a match, I didn't really have a lot to say (could've put Mercedes over a bit more, I guess,) but it achieved what I wanted to when I first pitched the idea and Ryan did a good job of introducing his characters. Maybe it could have gone on longer, but there's a tendency to drag that sort of thread out too long some times, so it was probably better to end it when we did.

Black Tom's entrance was ridiculous.

Also, those hats are pretty sweet. Good to see some segments on the show; should have tried to pitch something but I just had no ideas.
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I hate when there is little to no back and forth between opponents in RP's. I try my best to get my RP out early in the week to allow for that. It really sucks when your opponent(s) wait until the final days or minutes of the deadline to RP. *end of bitch*

Thanks to Wight for going with what I proposed for the aftermath. I think it works well into Xander's coward heel to blame someone else and attack someone while they are already down. I'm a bit disappointed in the loss but it is what it is. I understand someone has to lose. I'm just not sure if what I'm doing with Xander is working or hitting its mark with its audience. Any feedback apart from what was given above would be greatly appreciated.

Have a partner who tries harder.

I don't mean that as a slam against Joe, I get where he's coming from, but you weren't the one at fault there. Don't let the muggles get you down.

Yeah, you had the misfortune of being paired up with me just as my creativity went on a general downhill slide. I spent a large portion of the last week and change staring at a blank document with nothing coming to me. This will probably be the last we see of Tyler for a while, as I step away in hopes of recharging. Which is something I seem to say a lot...
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This was a tough call for me, I honestly preferred Mimi's stuff but it was suggested by the other people who weighed in that it made more sense for the impending storyline. Which I was also under the impression Lita cleared with you. I'm sorry to have ruffled feathers.

I also ALSO thought Cage was set to lose this storyline. It made booking sense. But whatever.

Yes, Blue Label Society. Sorry. I was trying to find their team name and either overlooked it or it's not readily available so I just went with what I thought it was. I'll go fix it just now.

For the record, I was not one of those people. I preferred Mercedes' work if I'm being honest but the storyline I cleared with Seph is not contingent on a win or loss here. I simply needed to know the result to know how to write the post-match action.

I'm not sure why you thought Cage was set to lose this storyline. I was pretty clear from the beginning that I wanted to put Cage over huge and set him into bigger and better things. And Seph's work with him leading up to and on the final match certainly warranted it. Besides, someone other than the Brick Sharks really deserve to give Cage his comeuppance more than they do.

When did Nathaniel and Stephen stop being the Coulter Crew?
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I was just trying to be clear. I can rename them the Coulter Crew and just list their names. I didn't realize it was a problem. I've been sleeping weird hours lately and dealing with unemployment and my wife being out of the state for the fourth week in a row now is just kind of leaving me scatterbrained.
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No, it's not really a big deal. Just seemed odd that you were hunting for their old name. I kind of prefer Blue Label Society to the Coulter Crew. That name was like fan-given and just started being used.
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Dai,Apr 20 2016
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Black Tom's entrance was ridiculous.

Black Tom is ridiculous. EDIT>>> And it's only going to get worse before it gets better.

It was nice to pick up the win this week. To comment on some of the feedback; I suppose the reason why my role play didn't pay a lot of mind to Logan Krueger was because there isn't a lot of heat between the two characters. I don't expect there's going to be anything going on in the future since Helena is now involved with Maiden Nation. I knew loose plans were being fleshed out and didn't want to get too heavy into something I knew wouldn't have gone all the way. Working with that logic, I decided instead to focus on what I've got going with Helena at the moment and give you fine folks more of what you said you liked last week.

I appreciate the feedback and I will certainly try to avoid turning Helena into a one dimensional crazy character. I think, though, given all the flavors of "abuse" she's tasted during her tour with FIW, I'd say she has some deep rooted issues that have been public enough to bear in mind when reading about what she's currently up to. A bona fide social outcast.
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Thank you to the anonymous sources of the feedback, the concerns listed are valid and not unlike my own thoughts.

Correct result I thought in my match. Most interested in the Hellcats angle after Mimi vs. Mercedes, thought that was well-written.
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Triadred,Apr 20 2016
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Dai,Apr 20 2016
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Black Tom's entrance was ridiculous.

Black Tom is ridiculous. EDIT>>> And it's only going to get worse before it gets better.

Excellent news.
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Me losing was never discussed xP Feathers not exactly ruffled, just my point of view on booking. I was having a majorly terrible day and I may have took out some of my passive aggression out here, I'm not mad at anyone. I understand things go the way they do, and I won a match over the Tag Team Champions, although I don't totally agree with it, I can still say I beat the Tag Team Champions xP

With Cage beating the Brick Sharks, it's just...o.o where does it go now? Harley starts cracking wise it's like, but he beat both you guys son, quit while you're ahead. I know Lita can make anything work, so I'm not too worried on that note.

I apologize if I came off unappreciative or like a snot nosed punk.
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Really enjoyed the show this week. Quite a few high points in this week to go off of. Always happy to see Suzanne making an appearance occasionally too. Glad we got the win, I know I wasn't too happy with my output this week and The Boy did a hell of a job so I was glad Sticky just put up some amazing work to cover for my 'blah' that I kept putting out.

Happy to work singles this week, I feel like this might be my first one-on-one match since Nensai Senjou so it'll be nice to take a break and just focus on one person for the week.

Quick side note, but Fallout was my bright clusterfuck idea cause I was getting the shows out between 1-2 days late. It was pretty much the whole reason for the name cause it was kind of like Part 2 of ReVolt since our roster had exploded when the NGIW guys came over and I knew I couldn't pull off a ten match show every week (but somehow thought I could pull two five match shows a week). Steve was the one who just made it actually work when he took over by putting both shows on one night. So yeah I'm kinda to blame for that boondoggle.

But yeah, I'd be okay with a second name just to avoid any chance of confusion on days. But i wouldn't go with Fallout since that's more like an "aftermath" type name and the opposite show isn't really in that vein.
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