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ReVolt Feedback; Yummy stuff.
Topic Started: Apr 29 2016, 08:13 PM (253 Views)
Minister Wighty
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Show by me. Johnny's part of the promo by Lita. Black Tom's entrance by Adam.

Mad Dawg
The Mad Dawg character is at something of a crossroads. Through no fault of his own he's badly lost momentum due to the departures of Mungrel & Neo. The natural follow up to Rise of a Legend would have been Neo. The path to go is to elevate people up in interactions with the character. He really has to go that way because without you end up with an elite champion far away from anybody else, which makes his title matches the least interesting on the card. I'm interested to see how this RP, which is a great opportunity to elevate Johnny Amazing is handled.

Starts off reviewing last week, which is good follow up and solid stuff. Puts himself over strong but earns a tip of my hat for doing the same for his opponents as individuals. Really good interpretation of the match for Johnny in terms of pros and cons. The part about his responsibility as Dual Crown Champion is brilliantly written. Those last three speech paragraphs really are as good as I've seen lately in terms of breaking something down in an explanation. Marc has written this RP effectively with the 'must elevate' mentality that I mentioned above.

Erik Holland
He hits 'entertainingly creepy' pretty well, but the team could've used more unity.

Black Tom
He's a really fun departure from a traditional wrestler and Adam is writing him well. However, because of how different he is it's often hard to tell how "focused" he is on his matches in a promo.

Shaelin Marie O'Hara
I liked the Shaelin effort, she felt almost like a completely different character from when we last saw her in NGIW. But in a good way. She sold her underdog story and the match really well.

I thought the Shaelin effort was FANTASTIC! Great direction for the character, great to see something different from the handler, and if there had been a second RP it might've been a much tougher decision. Can't wait to see where she goes from here!

Nick Riot
I feel like Nick's really hitting his stride here in FIW, but Steve's effort was just stronger this week. It bears mentioning because there's no reason to discourage what Nick is doing; it's great work, and the character finally seems to be settlign into his place in FIW very comfortably. Another RP of the same quality would've likely edged out the competition.

I need a petty, self-important heel who isn't involved in any storylines for something. First person to hit me up in a PM wins.

Thots?
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ratedgdr
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Not surprised by my FSC loss. I wrote that promo on my phone just off the top of my head, and not long after I posted it I realized that it fucking SUCKED. And then I couldn't think of anything to try to salvage that mess before deadline.
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Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I told Steve earlier in the week I was going through some stuff, but he definitely posted a great RP.
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Willie
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Been at work literally all day (pulling a 12 hr day) but I appreciate the feedback. Need to come up with a better way of staying in contact with Pain that isn't "send him a PM and pray".

Not too chuffed about losing though, it was kept close and I like that Kim was more or less the reason why.
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I really enjoyed the show. I had a lot of fun working on the promo with Wight this week. It's fun having Johnny and Zombie interact with one another. Blown away that Johnny beat Mad Dawg in the main-event. That's probably the biggest win I think Johnny's had in his career yet and I don't even know how to have him process that.

Torn about Brittany's match. Would have been cool to challenge for the Hellcats title again but I love Mercedes so much. I even wrote an RP with the character this week that was lots of fun. As a fan of the Hellcats division, I'm excited for Sakura vs. Mercedes. It's been a long time coming, that's for sure.
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Craig
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FSC title post updated.

I'm finding it harder and harder each week to pick a winner so I completely sympathise with the judges.

The Hellcats division looks really exciting and having seen the card for this week' ReVolt the tag division is about to pick up nicely. Cage is already the DC contender and the FSC has just been defended so the titles certainly appear to have a lot of competition.

The finish to Logan vs. Cage was something I suggested (I can practically feel the eye-rolling at Craig putting his character up for a loss), I felt that I could do more with the loss and Cage could do more with the win. The RP I've just posted had practically written itself, it flowed onto a page just as I as going to bed one night. If anybody is like me and doesn't go straight to sleep, it's a godsend to put a pad and pen next to you to get anything creative rattling around down. Although I have to say the best idea is still a pad and pen in the bathroom.
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That Darn Seph
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XP I honestly wouldn't have mind losing to Krueger, no shame in losing to a man of his caliber.

Good show, we'll written and a lot of exciting developments
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Welp, back to work.

Wighty, a PM may be inbound later.
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Mad Dawg
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Really good show all around this week. Liked the exchange between Zombie and Johnny. I have a feeling Amazing might get one over on Zombie this time around especially riding the victory from this week. On the match, enjoyed the match and Lita deserved the win big time. I got locked up on material after my first RP and when she put up that one with Quincy and Johnny, I knew it was golden. Interested to see what role Quincy's looking to play seeing as he has history with both Mad Dawg and Johnny.

Also thanks for everyone who provided feedback. Makes me feel good that my work was still pretty good despite the loss.
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Mad Dawg's Accomplishments

Dual Crown Champion
(2/12/16 - 9/24/16)

2X FIW Undisputed International Champion
(1/29/12 - 5/27/12)
(10/13/15 - 1/8/16)

Finisher of the Year 2011 - The Mauler
(Runner-Up) Feud of the Year 2011
(Runner-Up) Heel of the Year 2011
Storyline of the Month (Apr '11, June '11, Sept '11, Nov. '11, June '12)
Match of the Month (Feb. '12, June '12)

"Big Bad" Bobby Sanchez' Accomplishments

FIW Undisputed International Championship
(5/12/13 - 9/1/13)

2012 FIW Grand Prix Champion

Storyline of the Month (May '12)
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Pain
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I have failed...

Good show tho.
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Steve
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Good show. Really thought Nick was going to take the win with me having what I felt was an ass of a week.
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