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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 2 2016, 10:38 PM (303 Views) | |
| Craig | Aug 2 2016, 10:38 PM Post #1 |
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It’s late (for me) so I’m getting this posted, I think there’s one promo to go in but Lita or Dai can edit it in. I’m absolutely committed to posting the show on time, we’re still in Tuesday as far as GMT is concerned. Promos: Craig, Marc, Matt, Steve, Lita, Dai, Other Steve (Bleak) Matches: Dai, Craig Do I need to add my own name in? Feels like a bit of an ego wank. Fun stuff this week, especially the engagement and interaction between characters. Classic after-PPV show feel with different storylines and characters intertwining. The Johnny promo in the main event probably needs a bit of moving, maybe some commentary added in around it. It looks weird, although it fits and is something I can see happening on a real show, might not translate well to writing. Disappointing couple of no-shows, I wonder if Will doesn’t have the time available for two characters or perhaps Mun missed his other character was booked? I’m not totally satisfied with the new card, I think it’s a bit quirky but does look fun to write and hopefully roleplay, I guess time will tell. I’ll post the second edition of Orion’s weekly segment tomorrow so that might give some insight into some of the matches. Do share your thoughts, tell me I’m going wrong or what you’re enjoying, Or not, you know… *nervous chuckle* |
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| MrOtaku2399 | Aug 2 2016, 11:02 PM Post #2 |
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I liked the way the matches flowed and worked in.Everything was good to me anyways.The hellcats match was good and the behind the scene thing between riot and izumi was pretty good. Im a little confused on the hellcats match im in this week but i think i can work some good ole thing in for yuki.The match with nick riot is cool and were moving on up in the cards! |
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| Dai | Aug 2 2016, 11:10 PM Post #3 |
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Anything in particular confusing you about the Hellcat match? |
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| Minister Wighty | Aug 2 2016, 11:16 PM Post #4 |
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Good, very creative show. Made some real hay out of a mess this asshole I know left you with. Amazing and encouraging to see Bleak making a return. |
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| MrOtaku2399 | Aug 2 2016, 11:19 PM Post #5 |
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the concept of the bikini match.I dont quite know or understand it that well unless its like the bikini contests in wwe. |
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| Lita Maivia | Aug 2 2016, 11:28 PM Post #6 |
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I'm fairly certain it's exactly what you think it is. Four girls in bikinis, prancing around the ring, except instead of the audience judging it looks like the General Manager is going to be the judge. Not entirely sure why there's a referee unless there's an expectation that the girls will try to fight one another. |
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| Craig | Aug 2 2016, 11:33 PM Post #7 |
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Or is it that Mark Fisher gets put into dangerous situations every week and it would make a nice change for him to be surrounded by four beautiful ladies at close quarters??!!?!? All that hard work he puts in, totally worth it. So missed a trick by not having a judging panel of Mark Fisher, Orion and the 'Sultan of Sleaze' Keith Williams. Sod it, I might do that anyway
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| Hayden | Aug 2 2016, 11:34 PM Post #8 |
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I'm quite bummed the story turned out to be "Gus is angered by Dream's antics" this week, since I thought we did rather well establishing a team in the promos. I did like Marilyn being included, as that gives me plenty of material to work with next week. |
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| MrOtaku2399 | Aug 2 2016, 11:34 PM Post #9 |
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ok,and at least we dont have an ld lady in there.That could get scary to have one of those mae young moments.This can be interesting than. |
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| Minister Wighty | Aug 2 2016, 11:42 PM Post #10 |
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It says something about me that I want to fill out an app for a geriatric Hellcat just to fuck with the bikini match, doesn't it? |
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| Hayden | Aug 2 2016, 11:44 PM Post #11 |
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OR SETSUKO KANEMOTO. GIVE ME SETSUKO KANEMOTO. |
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| ratedgdr | Aug 2 2016, 11:47 PM Post #12 |
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I am not exactly sure where that came from either. |
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| Craig | Aug 2 2016, 11:53 PM Post #13 |
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I hope I'm not wrong about this, I felt the interaction centred around one quote by Richlen and I'm on my phone typing this and it doesn't work well copying, I can never grab the right sentence, it was about getting the job done - which Dream's natural entertainment and antics sort of takes away from. It's the serious fighter and the comedian, having established that Dream would pick up the win it made sense to build the Ricky Morton spot for Richlen to come in and clean house for then Dream to take it. Misread that one, will contact you before I write next week's match to check how you'd like him written. My apologies. |
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| Lita Maivia | Aug 2 2016, 11:56 PM Post #14 |
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I totally wish we had Keith Williams back.
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| Lita Maivia | Aug 3 2016, 12:21 AM Post #15 |
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Added the promo from me and Dai into the show. Sorry. Dropped the ball on that. |
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| Dai | Aug 3 2016, 12:26 AM Post #16 |
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It's okay. I'm sure it was there all along, really. As for letting that referee on the judging panel for the bikini contest, I'm sure he could handle the responsibility on his own. |
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| Dai | Aug 3 2016, 10:10 AM Post #17 |
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Was just going to edit & bump my previous post, but I'm loathe to do that, because it doesn't affect the like/dislike status. In theory, I could put a universally acceptable post, liked by all, then edit it and viola; you're all Trump supporters; so as a point of principle, I don't do that. Anyhow, first thing: WHERE HAVE ALL THESE BLOODY COSPLAYERS COME FROM?! Nah, it's cool. Going to send some PMs regarding in character acknowledgements of the whole cosplay thing, so watch out for them. Show was great fun, as usual, although I'm finding it hard to relate Dee Dee's RPs to what it says in her profile to how she should be behaving in matches, so I'd be interested to see how I'm doing on that score. By comparison, thinking up bitchy stuff for Yuki to do is easy. |
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| It's Dee Dee | Aug 3 2016, 11:07 AM Post #18 |
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I don't write the matches? I have no idea.what you mean. |
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| Lita Maivia | Aug 3 2016, 11:11 AM Post #19 |
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Actual feedback time. I had so much fun working on the show opening segment. I really enjoy using Kim Coulter to help get storylines rolling or amp them up. I always enjoy having her work off of Mad Dawg. They're an interesting dynamic considering their first encounter he was a despicable heel and she was unexpectedly an innocent victim. Now it's totally not that landscape, but it's fun nonetheless. Jack Manson Jr. remains one of my favorites and the way Steve writes his childish outbursts is just so entertaining to read. And of course seeing Darian Gray claim that spot as top contender is just awesome to see. I have been a huge fan of Darian since he showed up and I'm excited to see how he does at the top. The short, but sweet segment between Sakura and Harley was a lot of fun to write. Even if I dropped the ball by falling asleep before it got written. Enjoying the Sharks/Gatito story that's unfolding. I kind of wish there had been some more back and forth between Harley and Energio in the RPs, but at least we got something in there at the end. Interested to see how things go heading into RATC. So pumped to have Stephen Eversol coming back. Sorry! That's Stephan J. Eversol to you! I feel like he has so much left to do and his exit was far too soon. So I'm thrilled to have him back in the mix. Plus Bleak is one of my favorite people. Glad to see Nick Riot and the Visual Keingdom feud really getting hotter each and every week. That Riot/Izumi match next show should be an incredible one and I can't wait to see the RPs that come out of Riot's actions towards Rayburn this week. The Richlen/Dream combo this week was a thing of beauty. I was asked for my opinion on whether or not I agreed with Dream picking up the fall and I'm gonna quote myself because I want to make sure both parties know how well they did.
A new Hellcat! Woot! I'm anxious to see what this girl's got in store for the division. And I am so excited to see more Hellcats joining the roster. We need way more non-title stories in the division and I am all for competing in non-title stories, I just need people who will run them with me! I loved that Darian and Kim were wrote as such a great unit in Darian's match. I still believe those two characters were made to work together and I'm glad that Matt and I have been able to do so much with them together. Here's hoping she can help him to a Dual Crown title reign. Six-Hellcats action was awesome. Dai was the one who came to me with the idea of Brittany shaking off her 'tude and make the save this week and I was so happy to have it go that way. I didn't want her to become Kim Coulter 2.0 but I had to have a fall-out from her after the big title loss at Summer of Sin. Love Mad Dawg and Johnny Amazing working together. Had fun RPing with Marc instead of against him. With is much preferred. I enjoy the banter that Mad Dawg and Johnny have despite not being in the same promos together. It's fun. The post-match attack was great stuff and I'm loving how prominent the new Coulter Crew is becoming. Having Johnny ejected from the arena was a great idea from Craig that I was thrilled to help with. This growing rivalry between Johnny and Manson Jr. is so exciting. Last Man Standing was violently fantastic. So glad that Kim got that slap in on Logan Krueger to teach him a lesson. Maybe he'll think twice before being disrespectful to the Queen in the future. Lol. A great win for Jack Manson Jr. and I loved his commentary towards Johnny. He's such an asshole. In a non-show related note: I love the Oracle Weekly segments and not just because I get to look at Triple H in the banner at the top of each episode. |
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| Dai | Aug 3 2016, 11:15 AM Post #20 |
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I do write some of the matches, and I find it hard to link what it says in your RPs to how I think she'd behave in a match when it comes to writing them. For example, I think (but I'm not completely sure) that it's #2 who does most of the wrestling, but I don't quite know how she'd be different from #3, if it came to that; and I feel like I'm guessing at the temperament and styles, because no-where in the profile is the split personality thing mentioned. |
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| It's Dee Dee | Aug 3 2016, 11:25 AM Post #21 |
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Ok. I'll edit that when I get back from my vacation. |
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| Dai | Aug 3 2016, 11:33 AM Post #22 |
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Snazzy, ta. |
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| Steve | Aug 3 2016, 07:08 PM Post #23 |
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Opening Promo Very solid opening promo adding a very viable name to the Dual Crown picture. Matt with Darian is a very worthy contender and I’m interested to see where it goes from here. I was happy to play a part in this promo even if a very little part. I really liked that it showed unity amongst the Coulter Crew. I really need to change my entrance music…HAHA Sakura & Harley Fun little promo. I’m a big fan of Harley even if he did call Jack a pussy and takes all of his comments as Jack wanting to fornicate with him. Harley Torres vs. Energio Gatito Fun read. No slight on Mun here but because I’m a fan of Harley I would have like to see him pick up the victory here. Eversol Vignette Fuck yes! Happy to have The Other Steve back with Eversol. Leaves me to wonder if he’ll be back with the Coulter Crew strengthening the ranks even further. Nick Riot vs. Jordan Rayburn I really like where this feud is going. Should be interesting to see where it goes from here. Another solid match. I’m really digging how Craig is having Orion play a more active role. It’s something I wish I had more time to do with Jack. Gustav David Richlen & The Dream! vs. Mike Harrison & Priest Good match. It’s a shame that Mike Harrison got the shaft by no show. I echo Craig’s thoughts in his feedback. Does Will have the time to handle 3 characters? That is two shows now that one half of his characters no showed. On a side note, I’m really enjoying the interaction with Sticky on the FIW Twitter. It’s nice to have a connection with other characters even if it isn’t someone you are scheduled in a match against or even in a feud with. Xenia Vignette Interesting….The influx of Hellcats is great to see! Kira Izumi vs. Darian Gray Darian Gray is a force to be reckoned with. Which is why I chose to be on the same side as him! (not really) Anyone that faces off with him has their work cut out for them. Good to see Darian on the rise since losing the FSC (but never beaten for it) at SOS. HELLCATS SHOWCASE The Hellcats should be showcased a lot more. Again shame there was a no show in the match. Like Craig, I hope it was just an oversight by Mun. The Hellcat division is bulking up so hopefully we see a lot of competition from it. Mad Dawg & Johnny Amazing vs. McConnaigh Brothers McConnaigh boys looked good against the DC & IC champs. Even though they fell short of a victory it still is a good rub to have hung with two of the best in the promotion. Aftermath: Again I really like Orion’s appearances showing his has a firm control of his show. Last Man Standing Match I loved the brutality of this match. I’d really like to see Jack in more matches of this nature. Happy to pick up the win. I really liked the part with Jack taking Hitchen’s headset and goading Johnny. Also I’m happy to hear how many people thinking Jack is an asshole…I’m really trying hard to get as many of the characters to hate him as I can. ![]() |
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| Willie | Aug 4 2016, 12:35 AM Post #24 |
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Unfortunately, no, I don't have time for 3 characters. Do me a favor and shelf Priest for now. |
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(not really) Anyone that faces off with him has their work cut out for them. Good to see Darian on the rise since losing the FSC (but never beaten for it) at SOS. 
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