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| Craig | Sep 2 2016, 11:20 PM Post #1 |
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Matches: Dai, Craig & Lita Promos: Dai (I think), Craig, Lita, Steve, Wight & Crys. Phew. I'm counting that as on time... just. Plagued by internet issues tonight so Kira vs. Nick was written pretty much on memory of the profiles so if there's a lot missing, that's why. Basically this week you were very lucky if Lita or Dai was writing your match, the ones I took... not so much. Everything's there, it's just not as polished as I would have liked and the Kira/Riot ending is very shoddy. Kris Hansel loses points for having the Wild Boys theme sung by somebody else other than Duran Duran. That's poor form. Heavy Blessed & Forsaken focus this week, I knew there was going to be, sort of like 'get it out of the way and chill out next week with some good build up'. The matches themselves that are now booked do look pretty good, not sure about the others yet. I keep going back and forth with one character central to three matches, so eventually the roulette wheel will stop and whatever it lands on is the answer. The new card needs a bit of work so that'll be a half hour, probably. For weeks I've had my heart set on one match closing next week's show because I thought it'd be fun to write and fun to rp for but a combination of things have taken that off the table, which has meant re-jigging. Thoughts? And please be kind! |
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| Minister Wighty | Sep 2 2016, 11:33 PM Post #2 |
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Good show, all around. I felt like my match in particular really could've gone either way, as well as a few others on the card. I was really interested to see how exactly things turned out and it was all very interesting stuff. Thanks to Adam for bringing it this week. I got sidelined by some bad news in my personal life, but I would've loved to go at it with you the whole week long. Thought about adding something at the end, but as much as I hate deadline bombing I decided to save the essence of it for a shorter promo. Good show, everyone. |
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| MrOtaku2399 | Sep 2 2016, 11:40 PM Post #3 |
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My matches were pretty good and yuki's match was well written imo and i liked how who ever wrote it used stuff from our promos in the match too.I liked the izumi and riot match and boy was that one screw over!No worries craig its all right if you had to rush it a bit or what ever.Blessed and Forsaken looks like it'll be fun and this week should be fun too. |
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| Dai | Sep 3 2016, 12:16 AM Post #4 |
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That was me. I felt that Crystal and Helena should, on the strength of their RPs come out looking strong, so that's what I went for, but I still tried to get Yuki something |
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| NickRiot | Sep 3 2016, 01:44 AM Post #5 |
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HOW DARE YOU RUN OFF OF MEMORY! No, seriously it's no big deal. Honestly I was amazed I even got an RP up for the simple fact that my wifes family has been staying with us this past week going into the holiday weekend. My time on the internet has been scarce at best. But either way, don't sweat it
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| MrOtaku2399 | Sep 3 2016, 02:27 AM Post #6 |
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thanks for pushing the "i dont want to touch her" and the "she has cooties" thing.That match and all the rest were pretty good this week! |
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| ratedgdr | Sep 3 2016, 02:42 AM Post #7 |
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How dare you suggest that Mnemic didn't do an amzing cover of "Wild Boys." |
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| cookingood | Sep 3 2016, 07:14 AM Post #8 |
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Really fun show. Lots of good setups for this week, as well as for Blessed and Forsaken. Seemed like every story advanced just a little bit. Loved all the "Welcome to FIW" matches... and the switcharoo that was pulled later on in the show. Segments were fantastic as well! Felt a bit like an ass for my RPs being posted late. Sorry for that everyone! |
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| Leucippides | Sep 3 2016, 10:23 AM Post #9 |
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Who iz dis Black Mage?
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Enjoyed the tag match. Will be honest, did have to read it over a couple times. Though it was most likely as I was in a rush the first time. I also liked the team dynamics from both sides, not just in the match but on the boards as well. It was fun having Crystal and Sakura meet up again, hopefully they can again soon. ![]() I did kind of cheat on my promo. I meant for it to be a character development piece for an RP but really wanted to get something up for the show so a few edits were made and presto!
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| Craig | Sep 3 2016, 01:07 PM Post #10 |
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Couple of notes to pass on: - Blessed & Forsaken is now scheduled to take place on Saturday 24 September. A discussion with the writers highlighted Saturday as a better day for last minute matches, as a result the deadline will be Thursday instead of the usual Wednesday. The following ReVolt will be Tuesday as normal so the RP for that show reduces a day. - The B & F card has been updated with the matches announced and thank you as always to Lita for her fantastic graphics. - No show by Mike Harrison, which is his first and particularly disappointing as it was the one-on-one match he probably wanted! Josh Woodrum and Jessica Brown have been removed from the upcoming card, I make that three strikes now. If those characters are to be booked again, get in touch. - Strange RP for Olivia Areano, three words and two of dialogue is a very low effort despite being put up against an enhancement talent and the match itself reflects that. I think we were all looking forward to getting some insight into the new character, which will hopefully come this week. The matches with enhancement talent are a good opportunity to get some stuff out without the pressure of a response, now in a competitive environment we'll all look to see what the output is! - I've put the PPV theme as The Wanted and Behind Bars in reference to the steel cage main event, obviously Bon Jovi is the one you'd want but I have a feeling we've done that before with the hangman's/western theme to the posters. If you have a better suggestion, do let me know. - That Wild Boys cover is awful! What are you thinking? We give music to the world and this is what you do with it. Funny story, I heard a comedian talking about how he once gave Matt Lucas (of Little Britain fame) advice to continue with his degree instead of pursuing comedy, he also did the same thing to Simon Le Bon in college. - The results, particularly Riot vs. Izumi & Hansel vs. Cruz, were all extremely difficult and the majority featured split decisions. It's really tough to judge and I plead with all not to be dishearted with the results. - Lita is away for a portion of this RP window so the Sharks and Brittany are off the card. I've left Jack Manson Jr. on, purely because he is hidden in the six-man tag and there's the understanding that he may not be able to RP. I did alter the Johnny/Jack/Brittany promo slightly as I had already announced the six-pack challenge at that point. |
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| ratedgdr | Sep 3 2016, 02:31 PM Post #11 |
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.... Shit, I forgot Lita was out! |
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| Craig | Sep 3 2016, 02:46 PM Post #12 |
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I don't think it's all of it, just part. EDIT: I'd like to apologise for booking a repeat triple threat Hellcats match. I had it in my mind that we'd done it recently but I did check and couldn't find it, so I must have overlooked RATC. I'll add a stipulation to it... Hardcore rules! I'll just give you some insight to how the card changed in terms of Hellcats, originally it was a simple triple threat tag to hype up the six pack challenge with Brittany & Sakura vs. Yuki & Helena vs. Crystal & Marilyn. With the new developments with Helena rejoining the Crew, it was suggested not to have Yuki and Helena team up and it made more sense to do two triple threat matches - one being Yuki vs. Helena vs. Crystal, the other Brittany vs. Sakura vs. Marilyn but with Lita being away for some of this rp window (and Johnny booked) it made sense to remove her, which left Marilyn vs. Sakura and that was probably the least interesting one-on-one match due to the two face personalities hence we now have Helena vs. Sakura. The Hellcats booking continues to be my weakest area and I continue to work on it. |
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| Lita Maivia | Sep 4 2016, 04:45 AM Post #13 |
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Yes. Loving it.
You're very welcome. I like how they ended up coming out. I've always liked the wanted poster theme as it feels like it gives everyone their own individual poster without giving everyone their own individual poster. I hope people like them.
Finally! Finally I had an opponent too busy to RP! Seriously though, I'm bummed. I really loved his work in the Tag title match at RATC. I was looking forward to what we could do with Harrison and Amazing. I really liked how Olivia Areano won her match. I hope the handler hasn't abandoned us because I was anxious to see more of this character and I think she could be a lot of fun. Shame about Jessica Brown (and Josh Woodrum). But hey, victory for LHDGN. Mun put down a great RP for her this cycle. I love Energio to bits. I love both Kris Hansel and Jericho Cruz. I hate that they were booked against each other in their debut, resulting in one of them having to lose. I had a tough time judging this one because I really like both characters and I feel like both handlers did a fantastic job introducing us to these characters. I didn't give Craig much help with this one as I slightly teetered in the direction of Cruz but then suggested a roll-up from Hansel following Paris interference and setting up for a Cruz/Paris match next show and a Cruz/Hansel rematch at Blessed & Forsaken. But then I was told Suicide Blonds are going into a tag contenders match and potentially challenging for the belts at the PPV so that put the kibosh in that. This match really could have gone either way and I hope Adam doesn't lose any steam on the Blonds because they're awesome - especially Hansel! I love him. The Dream World Tour continues with a great victory. Shame about Josh Woodrum but the Dream is where it's at! Enjoyed what was there for Johnny's match. I appreciate all the work and effort that Craig puts in every show and it's understandable that it can't always be given at 100%. Thanks for what you were able to do. Johnny using Jack's finisher was something I didn't see coming. Good story building. I am having so much fun with the current incarnation of the Coulter Crew. Matt and Bleak have been fantastic in interacting with Kim and contacting me about doing things. I was glad that Craig came up with this switcheroo idea. As much as I love Eversol and Bleak, I always imagined it as Kim and Darian taking on Gus and Shaelin ever since the Kim/Shaelin story started. And I love that it came as a result of Eversol getting a match against the Dual Crown Champion and that Kim got to be alongside him for it. I really like this Mad Dawg/Darian Gray story that Craig has been crafting. Great Hellcats action. Yuki continues to have so much potential just itching to be let out. Crystal is a very fun and interesting character that gets better every week. Sakura remains the immovable force at the top of the division. However, Helena Handbasket is my favorite Hellcat right now. I've always loved her and I hope we continue to see more great stuff from him. I'm glad she's back with the Coulter Crew because I've always enjoyed the dynamic of Kim and Helena. They play so well together. Slightly confused by the Last Dance match. Did Kira win by DQ? I had a lot of fun writing the segment with Steve and just as much fun writing the match between Brittany and Jack. I feel like I may have given Brittany way more offense, but it felt like Jack would be taking her lightly and as the heel he would end up panicking when he realized the mistake he made. Still, I'm glad that Jack won the match because I love the character and the work Steve puts into him. He deserves to look strong going into this International title match and I hope Brittany is someone who can make him look strong. I really enjoyed being able to have no contact between Jack and Johnny this week to just let the tension and anger simmer for a moment. I loved writing the main-event tag. Having Kim avoid Shaelin at all costs was something I knew I wanted to be the general theme of this. When Shaelin finally gets her hands on Kim it's going to be long overdue and I am loving building to that. I just love writing Darian in the ring too. He's such a fantastic heel and these situations really help build him more in that regard. Gus and Shaelin are a great opposition for characters like Darian and Kim and I hope I conveyed that really well. They clash and compliment one another very well all at the same time. I hope Sticky doesn't mind Kim stealing Shaelin's wedding dress to further this feud. |
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| Mike Harrison | Sep 5 2016, 08:54 AM Post #14 |
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Apologies to my opponent and all involved for the no show. My internet connection has been down for a week, back on today, so much for a hassle free switchover service
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