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Friday ReVolt Feedback
Topic Started: Nov 4 2016, 09:06 PM (244 Views)
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Matches: Craig & Lita
Promos: Craig, Lita, Bleak, Otaku, Black Birds, Steve, Rob, Bob and… there’s always somebody.

I hope everybody had a blast in the Halloween party thread, there seems to be a lot that came out of it so that’s always fantastic.

Masses and masses of promos, which is great and adds so much. Couple of no-shows, I don’t know what’s happening with Jessica Brown and Mike Harrison, I intend to keep them on the Deadlock card and then do a ‘sweep’ after the PPV removing members of the roster if its necessary by that point. Pain was a disappointment because of the good stuff that has preceded this week. We welcomed Will back this week, which is fantastic, the last few times he’s been here he’s not been able to commit so I hope that he’s here with us going forward. If anybody needs a reduced schedule, do let me know. The 10/11day cycle does mean that people should need less breaks but if that’s the case we can always work around it.

Seemed to be an issue with the deadline, it may or may not have contained the wrong day/date combination. The deadline is also contained inside the card. For Friday shows, the deadline is always Wednesday 9pm EST. For Tuesday shows, the deadline is always Sunday 9pm EST. The exception is the Saturday PPV’s (as Deadlock is), the deadline is then Thursday to give everybody that extra day to rp and for the writers to use Saturday just finish everything off.

The way around any deadline issues to get something up fairly early in the cycle, I can’t tell you enough what that does for storyline and character development because there’s the opportunity for replies and confrontations.

Just a couple of notes on the Deadlock card, we have stuck with the Rising Championship as a concept but I have made a note to feature more ‘Champion’s Choice’ defences, which meets some of the suggestions. As I’ve mentioned previously this title is to slot in at the bottom of the card, as the Fighting Spirit Championship moves up in importance and stature.

The Winners Choice Battle Royal is a ‘shoot’ concept, the winner will get to name their match on the ReVolt following Deadlock. I’ll be in touch with all involved over the next few days just to ask for the match they would want, this is purely so that as I plan things, I’ve got an idea where things might change. It won’t form part of any judging.

Thank you to Lita as always for the graphics and for getting around the photobucket issues.

All writers welcome, it is a big card so any help is appreciated and there are two pre-show short results matches.

Thoughts?
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MrOtaku2399
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The card was good imo this week.I got a win over clay kruger?Holey CRAP!!!! i'm not arguing with results and im happy i got a win.I'm excited to be doing stuff with danuwaanalihi and i hope i can do some good stuff with him.With this could the admins please remove Yuki as well?I gave her a goodbye kind of thing explaining whats going on with her too but when she comes back she'll be very difrent and very fun!
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Really enjoyed the show this week. Great to see so many promos and out of ring interaction between everyone. Really enjoyed going back and reading the Halloween threads. Everyone seemed like they were having a blast and the writing was great as always.

So, as we roll into Deadlock, I really liked that everyone's characters are at a real physical and psychological limit. It seems that every character has something going on that is pushing them to a breaking point on one or both ends. There is a real feeling of danger and tension with the combatants going into the ppv. Perhaps the words I have used don't exactly fit but hopefully you all get what I mean. That's a testament to all of you here and I can't wait to see the repercussions of everything.

Thanks again to Craig and Lita for getting all the matches up. I need to start remembering to help out more with the abbreviated ones. Sometimes I am a bit too selfish and don't think of spending more time with the fed. I sincerely apologize for that and will try to help more often.

I am really enjoying being back here and running Father Pike. I want to thank Craig for the promo with me which was great on his end as usual. The running feud with Crystal is something I am enjoying so very much! The give and take, back and forth is a hoot and really energizes me. It's been something to ease me back into rping and I am overjoyed so far. I hope what we are doing is entertaining to others.

Stoked that Will is coming back! Always had a ball interacting with him on Slam! and I am very excited!

Once again congratulations on another great show and a tremendous build to the ppv. You are all excellent, super talented folks and I see the strength of the fed with all of us here together.

Sincerely, Rob.
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Awesome show, and I've gotta say sorry for No-Showing this show. My mind has honestly been somewhere else lately due to me starting college soon.
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BROTHER JAIME. I KNEW YOU'D COME.

So Eversol was the jerkface who stole Dream's title opportunity. Revenge shall be his.

Marilyn wins! Sorta! I'm fully surprised I made it to the semis, and I'll make sure I do well.

I'm slightly gutted that Dream's special entrance didn't make the cut, but it is what it is. Craiggers mentioned that it would look a little out of place given that ReVolt is done recap-style, so I imagine it wasn't included to keep the flow well. No hard feelings.

Caleb needs to say what's up to Marilyn. And remember her name. I imagine those will be the extra stakes should the finals be Marilyn vs. Helena. Or at least it should be.

I continue to be a fan of Crystal Blake.

Rin Takeda is bae and I want her here forever. Hikou is also awesome. No idea at Rebel is but I'm looking forward to the team.
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Hayden,Nov 4 2016
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I'm slightly gutted that Dream's special entrance didn't make the cut, but it is what it is. Craiggers mentioned that it would look a little out of place given that ReVolt is done recap-style, so I imagine it wasn't included to keep the flow well. No hard feelings.

Can always post it as bonus content on FIW.com
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Excellent show! I have to give Craig all kinds of props. He's really been producing some quality cards and storylines to make for some really awesome shows. I'm having so much fun in FIW right now and I want to thank him for shouldering all of the hard work of being fedhead so that this place can continue on. Also a big thanks to everyone who puts in the effort to roleplay, feedback, and write matches. The community in FIW feels so strong right now and I'm so happy to come here every day and see it thriving the way it is. Special thanks to Wight, Adam, Bleak, and Hayden as I've been working with the four of you a lot lately and your characters have provided some incredibly fun stories for me to be a part of.

It's great to have Will back. Here's hoping he's got the time to commit this time around. Glad to see Crystal still giving it a go. The character interacts well with others. Freakshow should use that as his theme music. Just saying. Fun to see Hikou back! He was a highlight in NGIW and I can't wait to see what he pulls here.

The Mad Dawg/Jack Manson Jr. feud has gotten damn hot in no time flat. I'm really enjoying the progression of this angle. Jack Jr. is such an asshole and it really does a fantastic job of putting Mad Dawg back in that face role that I really enjoy him in. I'm a big fan of storylines that span throughout a show and this one brings me back to the Attitude Era days where you couldn't just turn RAW off after you saw your favorite wrestler's match because you know they likely won't be on anymore. Jack Jr. and Mad Dawg are popping up all over the place. Their Falls Count Anywhere match is going to be epic.

Apologies to Rob because he contacted me a while ago asking for feedback on his character and I never responded. Honestly, the character was far too new for me to come up with anything to say other than "looks good so far, keep it up!" and that just sounded patronizing. After seeing him for a bit and now he's getting more involved with the rest of the roster, I am loving the character. Religious zealot are generally entertaining and it's been a while since I've seen one this good. Sort of reminds me of the RTC stuff from WWE that I absolutely LOVED watching. They were incredible heels and I can see Father Jakob Pike really transitioning into a strong heel if he keeps this pace up. Makes me want to do another Bikini Challenge just for him to interrupt.

Kris Hansel remains one of the standouts on the roster at the moment. He is just all around incredible from his appearance to his characterization. Adam nails an incredible balance of obnoxious diva and driven sociopath. He's all kinds of fun to watch. Paris is playing an incredible contradiction where she has this amazing babyface story but she's such a terrible person that you lose any sympathy she is actually gaining once she opens her mouth. The Suicide Blonds are just all-around fun. Not sure of their shelf-life as a team, but as singles competition is concerned... I actually sought a way to put Kris Hansel in the Rising Championship match when Cody needed an opponent. That's how good I think Kris is.

DeadlockeD series matches were fun to write. Lots going on with the individual stories and that was all kinds of fun. I particularly loved the Helena/Marilyn story with Helena so desperate to top Brittany with a submission win that she held on just a second too long and finally get disqualified by April. And it put Marilyn over some, which is great! Hayden did a fantastic job with Marilyn this week and I'm glad he was rewarded for it. This is the kind of success Hayden is able to accomplish with early efforts. You're amazing! Sad that Jericho Cruz murdered Trianna. I really liked her and especially loved writing her matches. Stoked that Brittany at least made it to first place in the tournament once. Was worried she wouldn't be able to do it. Lol.

Six-Man Tag was a certifiable sports entertainment mess and I love it. So much storyline contained into one match and I thought it went well. I liked that Harley and Jericho weren't able to fight one another. And Caleb not trusting that Jericho was trying to check on Harley was good stuff.

Main-event was Ahhhh-ma-Zing! Loved that so much emphasis was put on Stephen J. Eversol and the Dream. I'm a huge fan of both characters and I really feel like it was a great service to elevating the Fighting Spirit Championship up to its new level by having them as the closing moment on the go-home show. Really looking forward to the PPV match between them and I think their Vs screen is probably my favorite one I've done.


Just wanna shout-out to everyone who participated in the Halloween party threads! Was two threads overkill? Or did it help keep things clean and organized? I had a blast working with everyone I worked with. The Eversol/Brittany storyline is one of my favorites right now. Bleak and I haven't really gotten to work this closely together yet and it's been loads of fun, and especially with two characters that don't quite fit with one another. Harley and Jericho kind of blew my mind. I think Wight and I flirted with the idea of that going romantic when Jericho first showed up, but I wasn't sure if it would go beyond Harley just finding Jericho so awesome that he dreams about him in the same vein as he did Energio or something. So to have Jericho kiss Harley really threw me for a loop but in a great way! Anxious to see what else Wight and I can do with this story. I wish Johnny Amazing could have done more with Adam's NGIW characters. I like the backstory there. Caleb... Jesus Christ, Caleb! He got SO MUCH development at the Halloween party and NONE of it was planned. Helena/Caleb was so random but so great, I couldn't leave it the way it was. And FINALLY Marilyn/Caleb has started... kinda sorta. I really love that bad girl Helena is so upfront about wanting to spend time with Caleb and poor, sweet Marilyn is all shy about it to the point Caleb doesn't quite get it. But then he doesn't quite get what's going on with Helena either! It's so much fun! And I loved that Caleb was able to finally break when he saw Harley with Jericho. So much fun over Halloween. Thank you everyone involved!
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Actual feedback time. The show was very quality. Lots of unexpectedness, and the amount of promos was staggeringly impressive. Surprised to pick up the win and glad to see Zombie still being portrayed as an almost-mindless engine of destruction. I have mixed feelings about April being Sakura's challenger. On one hand, it only makes sense, booking-wise. In fact, the build for it was incredibly well-done and in hindsight you can see all the clues leading up to it. I'm also glad it wasn't Vi for a litany of reasons. On the other hand... it feels a bit less shocking than I think I wanted it to, and that took a lot of the wind out of the reveal.

Since commentary was confused, the reason Jericho stomped the shit out of Trianna was outlined here. The short version is that while Zombie is clearly under some kind of juju, Trianna isn't and her decision to follow Bob's orders and beat up Caleb and Harley made Jericho very angry, so he sought retribution. Sympathetic character does not equal nice guy, after all. I'm not too upset it didn't get mentioned in the show as I didn't specifically mention the reasoning to Craig, and I'm not surprised if that RP went forgotten because of the party. Just... for those curious; it wasn't just some random act of mischief.

As to why I'm dropping Trianna even though everyone seems to really like her, she's very very difficult for me to play. I'm aiming for something like a hip-hop version of Juri Han from Street Fighter and I can almost get that in, like, a party thread, but on her own I find myself just spinning my wheels. The "Darkness" RP I did with her took me several hours and a titanic amount of creative effort while listening to as much DMX as possible to get me in the right mindset, and Lita still capably breakdanced around me despite it. I had nothing else that week, and even if I did the effort I had to put out for her left me so drained I wouldn't have had the energy to go find it. I appreciate everyone who talks about how much they love the character. That means a lot to me that I'm being entertaining despite (or perhaps because of) my struggle to properly convey the person I want through her, but for a tertiary character in one hobby of many, it's just too much of a Sisyphean effort.

Ironically, I hadn't originally planned on bringing in Rin and Rebel. I was trying to think of a female character to replace Trianna and smiled at some of the memories Rin brought, and the missed potential from Rebel never debuting in NGIW, and was amused by Kirito's costume choice being the same as Rin's old rep so I brought them along. Dai was the driving force behind pulling them together with Hikou, but I'm pretty excited about things going forward. We should have a lot of fun.
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All I can say is that it seemed like a good idea at the time.
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This isnt realated to anything but Dai is that Grimjow?
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Yeah. I used a combination of a photoshopped Kyo and Grimmjow to represent Hideto "hide" Kitazawa, who is probably my most beloved character. I even have a for reals hide Kitazawa T-shirt.
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My apologies again on just keeping to the party. I had intended on getting more done with Crystal but, again, given the massive amount of character developing done at the party I was at a loss. Didn't help that it wasn't just Crystal getting it. :P Again, not that it's a problem, I really do appreciate the help people have given me at said party. Even if certain responses I made were cutting it close to the end of my breaks at work. Be a lot easier if my store had wi fi... I mean even the buses are getting it here! Okay, mini rant over.

I still haven't formulated the "how" for her now, there's plenty of why's and what's but without the how I might as well just turn my next roleplay into a list. lol I'll figure it out. Although, in tooting my own horn, I really did enjoy writing/copying the "Who am I?" response during the party. I wanted to get as many different outside opinions on Crystal as possible there...including any typos. :P

As for the feedback, there isn't much but I can understand why. :) Crystal's involvement during Pike's match was interesting as well as the piece before. See how things go from there.

Potential match, eh? Will have to put on my thinking cap on this one. Don't be surprised if it takes me a while before getting back to you on it, Craig. :)
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I'm going to read the show later. Promise. I skimmed enough to know what happened with just my dudes, because I'm selfish like that. I liked how things went down. I thought it pushed stories forward and I personally think that should be the deciding factor for all matches, because that's what most of us are here to do; tell rad stories.

Man I loves me a party thread, and the Halloween party thread was stupid-awesome! So much going on and so much character interaction with even some party crashers getting in on the fun. I thought I was being original while writing the initial NGIW crashers post but then saw all the other crashers and was like... well damn. But hey, it's whatever. My ego took it on the chin and I had a good time despite people stealing my ideas before I thought of them. Harley and Caleb was the highlight of the thread for me. It was so unexpected by most, as it appears, and I think that was the funnest element to it. Allowing Helena to show a softer side felt refreshing. Now it's back to trash talk and murder eyes this week. Thanks for playing along, Lita. I wasn't sure what was going to happen when I first had Helena approach Caleb, but you were really great about it and we had some fun. +10 cool points.

Watch out, Wight. I might abandon you and become a Lita Maivia guy!

Kris Hansel getting all this praise is so unexpected, and I'm rolling in it like a pig in filth! Who doesn't love love? I'm hoping I can keep his momentum going even if that doesn't result in a tag team title reign. I'm thinking a singles run sooner rather than later. We'll see what I can cook up. I don't want to rush it and blow what could be a well-paced and entertaining story between he and Paris. Just keep heaping that love on me and I'll do my best to continue to earn it.
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Dai,Nov 5 2016
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Yeah. I used a combination of a photoshopped Kyo and Grimmjow to represent Hideto "hide" Kitazawa, who is probably my most beloved character. I even have a for reals hide Kitazawa T-shirt.

Cool i thought thats who it was just was never sure.And he had one cool final moment in the series at least too so thats good.
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I'd just like to add: I thought the two party threads paid off. Between the two, there were 8 pages, so it broke things up nicely.

Plus yeah, when it comes to Hikou and Rebel, we're totally just winging it. I just saw RinRin and thought "ZOMG, Hikou Time~!" Then it was "Shall we do a tag team with this nonsense?" Until a few days later it was "Yeah, let's do a tag team with this nonsense!" And suddenly we've got Ninja Blood Explosion. I AM EXCITE.
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