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Tuesday ReVolt Feedback
Topic Started: Dec 20 2016, 10:18 PM (222 Views)
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Matches: Craig & Rob
Promos: Mr. X, Crys, Lita, Bleak, Nate, Craig and... there's always one more.

Huge amount of promos, more than the matches which is unusual. Thanks to all for those.

Need to sort out that opening credits with the youtube html.

Couple of no-shows, Terry and Olivia have been in touch about theirs but very late in the day so it wasn't possible to move things around. That meant several matches were foregone conclusions, which isn't brilliant, but is what it is. Hopefully there's some good stuff in the matches. As always they were fun to write with little things happening from roleplays and other ideas.

The Grand Prix & Fury Road is next time, hopefully the card makes sense. Because of the numbers and my cut-my-nose-off-to-spite-my-face insistence that it be a traditional tournament with a one-on-one final, there are eliminators and that means saving the actual tournament brackets graphic (thanks Lits) for the show itself.

As I said last week, there is no requirement to roleplay for this show as it is pre-determined but of course the Christmas party will be happening. I'll certainly be taking several days off. We then come back to build for Hardcore Hangover, the first ReVolt of January.

When the GP is posted, I'll also get the 2016 FIW Awards categories out there for everybody to nominate their own work or matches. Following a two week turnaround, we'll then ask for ballots with picks for the winners with the intention of the results being published at Nensai Senjou.

The FIW Hall of Fame Class of 2016 will also be announced at the GP with inductions taking place at Hardcore Hangover. I have quite a good grasp on who should be put up for it (especially OOC) but if you have ideas and suggestions for characters, let me know.

As this will be the last feedback before Christmas just want to wish festive cheer to everybody.

Thoughts?
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First, I want to apologize for my lack of feedback on the last show. The matches were good, but for reasons why I couldn't roleplay right away I couldn't properly articulate my thoughts. Basically, something that should have only taken one day at work to resolve took nearly two weeks so...yeah, my mind was fairly preoccupied.

I did enjoy the tag match from this weeks show and am looking forward to the crucifix match come the new year. :) Hopefully good things follow suit. :)
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Nice show, a lot of drama with all the segments, I'm curious where Suzanne and Orion is gonna go.

Coulter Crew better be nice to Brittany, or the reanimated corpse of Cage is gonna wag his finger so bad.

Excited to see who will win Fury Road and the GP, one of my favorite times of the year.

Good show to the writers, noticed the matches were a wee bit short, if you guys need help writing matches I have no problem helping if it is needed.
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Wow, this was yet another great show. I could tell when I first skimmed through it before reading that it was pretty promo-heavy, but the promos that were included were all amazing. Overall with this show I love how the Coulter Crew is being portrayed and dipping their fingers in various matches. It gives ample opportunity for the people they piss off to get their comeuppance against the Crew and I can’t wait to see that happen. Lol.

I had tons of fun writing promos with Bleak and Lita for this show. Big props to Lita for masterminding the ones I was involved in with her. The opening promo was the first one we all worked on. The toughest part of that one was deciding who’d go next after the last person. Lol. But it was a lot of fun and I love the way it turned out.

The Alexander/Brittany was a lot of fun too. When Lita and I discussed the idea, we just said it’d be one where Alexander tries to intimidate Brittany and we had the starting point of her being on the phone. Everything from that point forward was just winging it and I couldn’t be happier with the way it turned out. I’m sure Nathaniel will have hell to pay from Johnny at some point, assuming he can keep Stephen Eversol back. Lol.

I’d mentioned last time that I liked how the Xenia character has been presented and I still feel the same way in this match. I like that her feud with April Lynn was pushed further with April trying to jump in and use her referee clearance to call the pinfall for Olivia. And Xenia still came away with the victory despite that interference, which shows how strong Xenia is. Great match to start things off.

The Alexander/Eversol promo was equally as fun as the Alexander/Brittany one, but for totally different reasons. I really like when I get to have Alexander play the mind games with people, even people in his own camp, obviously. He’s always quick to divert attention away from himself when it could potentially damage him. Lol. As Bleak can attest to, I kinda got carried away in the dialogue toward the end of the promo. Woops.

It looks like the start to a major rivalry with Richlen and Hikou here, possibly. The Ninja Blood Explosion: Complex have been making some big waves, as Chip Martin pointed out in this match. It’ll be cool to see what Gustav Richlen has to say about this match. The reversed chair spot was a great addition. I think it was a good way to finish the match and give Richlen something to “feed off of” as it were if there’s more coming between these two.

I like the storyline going on involving Crystal Blake and Jakob Pike. This promo was a good one to push that forward. Courtney’s excited nature in this promo together with Crystal’s reluctance worked really well. It kind of reminded me of a scene you’d see in a comedy TV show where one character is excited to bring this idea to their friend and in the end, the payoff is things go off the rails. Although that last bit didn’t happen in this promo, I liked the way it did end still showing Crystal’s reluctance and everything.

It sucks that Colin Stiles was taken out of the tag match involving Erik Holland and Black Tom. I think it would have been interesting to see how he fared in the match. Despite that, the match itself was a nice, short read and easy to visualize. I like that Jonathan and Chip both mentioned Holland looking over his shoulder for the Coulter Crew members. It shows they’re having an impact even in matches they’re not involved in.

The Brick Sharks promo was another good comedy one. I really like the dynamic between both characters and Harley’s childlike enthusiasm in the beginning of this promo was great to read. I like how either he didn’t get what Caleb was driving at with his emphasis on calling it down the middle or he chose to ignore it in general.

Part of me wondered if the Coulter Crew would get involved in the triple threat match involving Clay Krueger, but then another part of me figured “It’s the Coulter Crew of course they’ll get involved” and they didn’t disappoint. Lol. I really like the way the match flowed together and the Coulter Crew saving Clay in the end was a nice touch.

Nice, short promo involving Orion. Leave it to Toby Bostock to try and stir the pot and ask potentially loaded questions. Lol. The ominous sort of tone in Suzanne Schwartz’s statement at the end definitely intrigued me.

The intergender challenge match had an interesting twist to it with Freakshow turning his back on Jakob Pike. I like the way the Pike/Crystal Blake storyline was incorporated into this match as well. Overall the match was really well-written and I’m curious to see how Pike responds not only to Crystal Blake pinning and beating him, but also to Freakshow abandoning him.

The promo involving Kim Coulter and this unknown character was awesome. Great way to introduce a new character here and I’m definitely looking forward to seeing how things play out. For Kim to try and hide any shred of fear of…really anybody makes you wonder what they’re capable of. Lol.

I had an inkling of an idea that Harley’s feelings toward Jericho Cruz would come into play in the tag title match. The match was great and I liked the way the Sharks were portrayed, essentially as rookie referees, which they are. The hooded figure hitting the DDT on Paris was an interesting twist. Overall a great match to read.

The Eversol/Johnny promo was absolutely bad ass. It’s been great seeing how this storyline has played out so far and with Eversol outright accusing Johnny of filming him and Brittany in that hidden camera deal, it’ll be interesting to see how Johnny reacts. Bleak and Lita had mentioned that this promo took a violent turn, but I didn’t expect that. Lol. It was a lot of fun to read and I can’t wait to see what’s next.

The main event match was amazing. I love how it was basically non-stop action with everybody gunning for everybody else. I feel like the Coulter Crew/Johnny-Brittany-Sharks angle has turned into a real blood feud and it’s awesome. I’ve had a lot of fun contributing what I have into it so far and I’m eager to see where it goes. I’m sure with the Coulter Crew coming out the losing end in this match, they’ll be on the warpath in the coming weeks until they get the opportunity to avenge that loss.
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I am really enjoying myself here in FIW right now and the shows have all been amazing lately. I want to thank Craig for the support he's shown the Coulter Crew. Bleak and Nate are two of my favorite writers in FIW right now. The fun that their having shows in their work and that's always great to see. I miss my Adam being all over the board and hoping he'll be back to running this place with his killer RPs after Christmas.

Note to anyone who isn't having fun, say something to Craig! And by that I don't complain about other people having fun and it not being entertaining to you. I mean if you want to do something you're not doing, tell Craig or you'll never get to do it. As awesome as he is, he can't read minds. Bleak, Nate, and I came up with our stuff together and we took it to Craig. He's given us a great opportunity to tell a story that's fun for us and I am having a blast.

Lots of Coulter Crew, Johnny, and Brittany on this show:

The Coulter Crew meeting was something that came about on accident. Honestly, a lot of the stuff that comes about for me anymore happens through Twitter. I have accounts for Johnny, Brittany, Kim, the Sharks, and April (plus old ones for Jaime Lee and Lucas Torres). The interaction I have on there (particularly with Bleak and Nate) have spawned into so much stuff on the board. Kim suggested that the three originals sit down to discuss the issues they're having. We tried to do it as an RP but just ran out of time, so it became an "EARLIER TODAY" show promo. Thanks for fitting it in, Craig!

Having Nathaniel intimidate Brittany was a lot of fun. I told Nate to really go for it and he went for it. Glad how this came out with Nathaniel getting pissed off and threatening Brittany. The sudden change in personality to go from angry to smug over pushing a woman half his size around is something I love about Nathaniel. He has zero redeeming qualities about him and that's just great to see in a character. Helps to really sell faces that oppose him.

I didn't get to see the Nathaniel/Eversol discussion beforehand but I really enjoyed it. I agree with Nate that he got a little character away with the dialogue but Nathaniel has a habit of being long winded. That's part of why people hate him. He won't shut up. Lol. I really liked seeing Eversol upset that Nathaniel put his hands on Brittany but you could see him really trying hard to keep his cool. To me, Eversol has some redeeming qualities that he keeps hidden deep under his Blue Label and might actually be ashamed of them. But that's what makes me gravitate towards him so much. He's a complex character that tries really hard to appear one-dimensional like all his friends.

The Johnny and Eversol confrontation was my favorite, only because it was a long time coming! At the VERY LAST MINUTE I got the idea that it should end with a fight. Just something about the flow of the promo felt like Eversol's temper needed to get the better of him. It's another thing I really love about the character. I love that he can be douchey with his frat boy humor in a promo and then in the next he's full of fire and rage. I have my theories on why, but it basically goes back to the complex character hiding behind one-dimension.

Main-event was organized chaos. I really loved working with Dai again this week. I feel like we haven't really been able to connect much lately with our characters all off doing different things. It was a lot of fun having Sakura try and help Brittany sort some stuff out this week and Sakura was actually the catalyst for the Brittany/Eversol relationship taking the turn that it did. Her words really hit home. Loved that Johnny took out both Crew boys with that flying star press. And Brittany being conflicted was perfect!

The Xenia/April feud has been a lot of fun and really allowed me to give April "one last run" so to speak. Craig has done a great job with everything in this angle and I feel like both characters have really been shining in this. It's helped to really give Xenia a presence that maybe she might not have been able to develop if she had just been thrown into the deep end of the Hellcats pool from day one.

Ninja Blood Explosion: Complex are interesting as all heck. I know a lot of Hikou as he was part of the Pirate Bay Spider Cav that was loads of fun and I really enjoyed working with the character, especially those Hikou/Suri RPs. Rebel I know less about but damn if her stuff isn't funny. Is it supposed to be funny? Because she's hilarious when she gets to going on about hitting with chairs. Glad that they got to use chairs this week and further a seemingly growing angle.

Really happy to see The Dream and Erik Holland pick up a victory this week. The Dream is an all-time favorite of mine and I love that he's finally getting some traction in FIW. Hayden deserves it! And Will has been killing it with Holland this time. So glad to have you back, Will!

The Brick Sharks segment was the first thing I thought of writing for the show. I originally intended to put Harley in a referee tank top. But then I thought sleeveless hoodie was better. When I couldn't find any on Google, I ran across the t-shirt I put him in because that's more Harley than anything. I'm really enjoying growing the Sharks apart veeeeeeeerrrryyy slowly with this whole different views on the Lords of Salem thing. Big thanks to Wight for working with me again. I love Jericho Cruz and it's so cool (and still surprising to me) that he gets along so well with Harley.

Loved the Tag title match with the Sharks are refs! Sucked Adam no showed with the Blonds. I love Kris Hansel tons. Craig wrote the Sharks perfectly in this match and I really love that Harley got excited every time Cruz almost won. And Caleb stopping Harley when Cruz wasn't the legal man was great!

Shame about the no shows from T and Adam this week. Very sad. But at least Clay gets to keep his spot in Double Jeopardy and he can help Nathaniel Alexander out. Lol. Loved the Coulter Crew involvement in the match too!

Excited about Suzanne Schwartz showing up. She's so our Linda McMahon. You know stuff's gonna get serious when she gets involved.

I loved Freakshow walking out on Father Pike. Freakshow is such an intriguing character that I haven't quite figured out yet, but I look forward to seeing more of him. Bob writes him so well!

The Kim segment with mystery writer was so early in the cycle that I forgot about it until the show went up! It was incredible to be a part of and I can't wait to see this angle progress. It should be loads of fun!

A big thanks to Craig for writing the show himself (with help from Rob)! As I've said in the past, Tuesday shows are not ideal for me when it comes to writing. I'm thankful Rob pitches in to help!
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I wanna give feedback like that ^^ but it's hard for me to get invested in the other stories going on right now. Hell, I'm not that invested in my own stuff, either. The PPV was such a reset for me that I suddenly feel lost and am just not sure where to jump on. Every time I go to read someone else's stuff I feel lost and bored. Not that the writing is bad or whatever, I'm just so... I just missed enough that I'm having a very hard time wedging myself back in.

Anyhow, I'm really glad the show had so many promos. Frustrated my match went down the way it did, by which I mean a victory on a no-show. I know I didn't exactly RP my ass off, but... I mean... I didn't have to. :/ I wish I would've had to, y'know? I want my title defenses to be... DEFENSES, not so one-sided.

On the other hand, Vi and Rebel both had lots of fun this week and neither ones were booked. Cool to see Vi on the next card, and I'm glad Rebel got to chair a motherfucker.

Yes, she's supposed to be funny. I mean... not like she's doing comedy, she's just... that's just how she is. And that's funny.

If I could make a suggestion? Put a few lines of commentary BEFORE the match, selling the stories and character angles going into the contest. It helps us catch up to what we should know before reading the match, and also helps put over the characters on the show.
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I super dig all of the crazy storylines running around here. It's almost too much to even concentrate on (not a problem, btw). Like, just in this one ReVolt, we have:

-Tension between Alexander, Eversol, and Coulter
-Tension between Alexander and Brittany
-The Xenia vs. April feud heating up (very interested in this taking off)
-Tension between Alexander and Eversol again (can we put them in their Get Along Shirt?)
-Alpha Wolves angst vs. Ninja Blood Explosion crazy heating up (I'd love to see a Hikou vs. Gus feud with Shaelin and Rebel bringing more heat)
-Erik Holland coming for the Crew
-The Brick Sharks starting to show a rift between the two of them. Interested to see where this goes.
-Crew vs. Cody (and thus asserting dominance over the GM)
-Something crazy happening with the GM
-Something crazy happening with Negan visiting Kim
-Father Pike and Crystal Blake getting some teeth into their feud. Can't wait for the Crucifixion Match. I enjoy seeing Pike get crazier and Crystal finding herself, and I like how they get under each other's skin.
-Freakshow ditching Pike (excited to see what comes of this)
-The person the Lords of Salem signed making an appearance (is it Kira in a cape?)
-Johnny Amazing and Eversol having a neat little confrontation.

I also like watching Brittany kinda fall apart. It's the part of me that loves watching Desparate Housewives.

I've gotten the comment that people can't figure out Freakshow a few times. I'm really glad people are liking him, because I love playing him, but is the not being figured out a bad thing? What could I do to help that if it's causing a disconnect?
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Nobody understands Zombie Black and he's one belt away from a grand slam and a former Grand Prix winner.

It could be worse.
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I just wanna echo what Lita's already stated about twitter. I'd encourage everyone to get involved with it. It's been super fun as of late and really adds another layer to everything.

This week was so much fun. After Brittany and Eversol were outed all hell just broke loose and I felt as though I just had endless material to write about. It was a blast this past week with all of the different interactions that were related to the main event.

Alexander is a cold motherfucker. That was a great promo between he and Brittany and Nate plays just a perfect asshole. It goes from scumbag to dark as hell and you just wanna see him get his ass kicked for messing with someone as sweet as Brittany. Nicely done.

April and Xenia has picked up and build a good amount of heat as of late. I can't wait to see what happens in the near future.

The promo I did with Nate is was fun as well. They know one another so well and really know how to get under the other's skin. I try to make it where there's always a little throwback to the feud that they had that highlights just how competitive the both of them are. While at the same time they do get along for the most part unless Nathaniel does anything to Brittany is when Eversol tends to snap. When Brittany and Eversol were secretly filmed I had neglected to bring up just who it was or who it was that knew they were in the hallway together so I wanted Eversol to have that be the focus of these promos where he's basically accusing anyone that is against their relationship, which is basically everyone but he and Brittany.

I really like the Hikou character. Just in reading the bio I'm excited for what's to come from him. I'd love to see Richlen and Shaelin develop a long-term feud with Hikou and Rebel.

Crystal and Courtney always have cool promos. The speech about not being embracing who she is was really awesome. I liked it. It helps her as a face.


I hope Eric Holland's current iteration just continues to be more of what Will currently has going. It's really good and you can see how focused he is. He and Dream as a team is awesome. I'm glad when Dream wins.

The Sharks are always entertaining. I loved the promo between them that ended up setting up for the tension between them in the match. Two referees is bound to cause some chaos especially when one of them is involved with one of the competitors. I'd just like to say I hope we get to see Harley and Jericho at that Satanic party they talked about in their RP.

I loved seeing Eversol and Alexander getting involved in Clay's match. It's awesome that while Eversol has obviously got Brittany on the brain that he's not going to let it completely consume him and was able to still keep that edge to him. I also love any time that Eversol uses The Blue Thunder Bomb.

What's going to happen with Suzanne Schwartz? Why the fuck is Negan threatening Kim Coulter? Who the fuck is the man in the robe? Why does this remind me of the cliffhangers to Dragon Ball Z?

That promo between Eversol and Johnny was so much fun to write. Eversol going to check on Brittany just to be met with Johnny--who he already thinks had something to do with outing he and Brittany and just exploding into a fight was so awesome. We need more backstage brawls every now and then.

What an awesome main event that that was. Every competitor played their part and got some time to shine. I knew Eversol would be booked to show his trepidation in regard to Brittany and Craig absolutely delivered. Great show.
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Thank you for the kind responses on the promo. It was fun to write and figured there were enough elements to make the promo. I really do like the two as a pair and feel they're coming into their own.

Something I wanted to mention above; to me it was certainly a good thing in requesting Colin off the show. As I mentioned I barely had time to write for Crystal, couldn't see myself writing up anything for him in that time too. lol But hopefully something will come with him in the new year. :)
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I'm glad people enjoy what we're doing with Hikou and Rebel. As I recall, as well as his friendly (?) rivalry with Suri, he had a bit to do with the Blue Label boys back in NGIW. It's been a while since I had a character who says "fuck" a lot.

Sakura was a bit of fun, too. I didn't quite manage to steer the bit with Vi in the direction I originally envisioned and still strike the right tone; so we get an appearance from the One True Koji. (Just kidding, Hayden, it's a common name after all.) Happy with how everything turned out, and I'm glad something Sakura said played into the rest of it. That whole Coultergues and Blankulets thing is heating up nicely. Or should it be Amazingues? Johnny & Sak translate a lot easier to Benvolio and Mercutio resectively and Nate makes a pretty good Tybalt, no matter how much Sakura wants to be the Prince of Cats.

THE PURPLE HAZE IS HERE.

Gotta echo calls for MOAR ADAM.

Show was prompt and good. As always.
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