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| Craig | Jan 10 2017, 10:29 PM Post #1 |
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Matches: Lita, Craig & Rob Promos: Craig, Lita, Bleak, Steve, Liger, Adam, Wight, Will, Nate. Quick reminder, the 2016 Awards are posted here. PM any suggestions for entries in the categories to the FIW.com account and that list will continually be updated. Deadline is January 20th. Thanks to Rob and Lita for matches, and to judges and those writing promos. The Hellcats match is fantastic, as always from Lita, and Rob is writing good lines that I steal from his actual match to move into commentary. I'll give some breathing space before commenting on the 2017 opener. Congratulations to the Hall of Fame class of 2016 inductees, including OOC nominations Wight and Dai. I’ll get something written up and posted in the Hall of Fame forum this week. Thank you for all the contributions be it current members or past members coming back to collect the accolade. Just a note to Will, I edited Nightmare's promo slightly with a reference to a match at Nensai Senjou, I'm sure Will won't mind! Next week is indeed KimVolt, all matches booked by Kim Coulter as part of the Orion/Crew storyline. We’ve got this show coming and then Nensai Senjou. A lot of the matches are booked well ahead in advance of Nensai Senjou so I will get a card up (and bump the current card so there's no confusion). Thanks to Lita for the April vs. Xenia programme, that’s been a real highlight for me and helped establish the character. Really glad to see a great output from Adam for Kris Hansel. All that potential that we’re excited about came to the fore. Fantastic stuff. Well done to Seph for the maturity shown in making his return, saw some good stuff there and Colin Stiles was a sleeper hit, it was a close split decision (as almost all matches were). On a side note, only Lita will spot that I made a slight tweak to the Rising contendership match we had booked and that is one I'm REALLY looking forward to. I’ve added a ‘PreVolt’ to the schedule to take place the night before Nensai Senjou, which I may or may not have discussed before. Because we’ve had problems previously with the size of PPV card meaning writing is a huge task and if anybody drops out, it causes a big problem, I’m adding a PreVolt for those not on the main PPV card, for which I’m happy for short results. That feeds into match writing. I don’t want to be that guy but with handlers operating multiple characters, the cards have increased and match writers have not, if anything the number has decreased. Since November and that includes Deadlock, we’ve only had myself, Lita, Rob and Dai once unless I’ve missed anybody. I’ll discuss this on the character assessment survey but please be aware the hope and dream of providing a consistent and timely show weighs heavily on my mind as more characters sign up and join the fun. Including Bob's two I think there could be as many as six new characters to join in the coming weeks, which is fantastic creatively speaking, but does create that additional writing. Any thoughts on Hardcore Hangover? |
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| Rob Storm | Jan 10 2017, 10:53 PM Post #2 |
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First I want to congratulate all the winners and the effort everyone put into the show. Thanks to Craig and Lita for writing the big matches for us. I write a lot of short ones as it is what I am capable of. With the exception of squashes I try and keep both opponents even until there is a victor. I hope I did Steve's new tag-team proud. He has done so much for me and I really, really tried to please him. I liked the idea of Dragon running off out of fear so the bigger Razorback could take the beating. I also liked the two of them playing "rock-paper-scissors" to see who would draw the short straw. My effort is to always make a good match for the participants. Hopefully the handlers were pleased as well. Kudos to the Hall of Fame members. They all deserve it. Excited to see the unrivaled talents of Adam and Seph back on display. Excellent wordsmiths and totally entertaining! The end to the Crystal/ Pike feud was brilliant and the match exceeded every expectation I had. Crystal has improved with every promo and every show. It has been an unreal pleasure to be involved in this long and engaging storyline. I guess that's about it. Big thanks to everyone again who made this event truly special. |
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| That Darn Seph | Jan 10 2017, 10:55 PM Post #3 |
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Man the show was full of action, jam packed with excitement and made for some interesting developments. Cool to see Mercedes back, sad that Oldroid just brushed her off until nect week. That Amazing/Nathaniel segment was intense, the seething hatred was palpable and you could feel the tangible energy as their showdown draws close. Congrats to Brittany who won the HC from a very game champ, Sakura has been a great champ and expect nothing less from Brit as Lita always knocks it out the park. My match was a nail biter and using Colin's finisher instead of Alastor's made me double check the results. I had a blast working this new character and thank Colin's handler for being a good sport while I developed my footing. |
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| Lita Maivia | Jan 10 2017, 11:13 PM Post #4 |
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I need a breather before feedback as well, but I do have feedback! I just wanted to pop in and say that there was a slight error on the card for anyone who already saw it. Brittany & Bisenshi Sakura are teaming up in a Hellcats Triple Threat Tag Match. Vi is facing Helena Handbasket. If Helena wins, she main-events Nensai Senjou against the Hellcats Champion. If Vi wins, Sakura main-events Nensai Senjou against the Hellcats Champion. "Loser" challenges for the Hellcats title in the opening match at Nensai Senjou. |
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| Minister Wighty | Jan 10 2017, 11:14 PM Post #5 |
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I have mixed feelings on the show, but most of them are OOC. I'm still deeply struggling with what to do with Jericho Cruz in the future (he's fine up to the PPV at the very least) and that's keeping me in a... less-than-satisfied mood when it comes to e-fedding in general. It's the kind of problem that only I can solve, as I slowly begin to understand while trying to work through this. I can't say as though I'm "having fun", though that's not the fault of anyone but myself. So, have patience with me for not being more glowing. It was a fantastic show. I was particularly heartened to read through the various hall of fame inductions. I hope the big fracas in the main event leads to really cool stuff for Erik Holland. If anyone could pull this kind of gimmick off, it's Will. As gutted as I am to see Sakura lose, at least she got a really great last defense. Kudos to Lita for that. Wish I had more to say, but it is what it is. |
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| Lita Maivia | Jan 11 2017, 03:25 AM Post #6 |
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Wow. I took a minute to gather my thoughts, but honestly I don't know if I'm going to be able to do any better even after waiting it out. I'm honestly so blown away and thrilled that Brittany won the Hellcats Championship. Dai scared the life out of me with every RP that he threw down. Wight and I had a talk where I said to him that Dai is the only person I've ever encountered who I've never read something and thought to myself "Wow, he wasn't feeling that". My stomach literally hurt today while waiting for the show to get posted and when I saw that it was posted, I thought I was going to throw up. I was so scared inching down the match to the final paragraph that was catered to the two finishes I wrote. Seeing the JFK and Dangerous Curves DDT literally made me almost collapse in exhaustion. Then I was suddenly pumped and thrilled, grinning like an idiot. Thank God nobody walked by and wondered what the hell I was doing on the computer acting like that. As I also told Wight, it makes me sad that I am partly responsible for how Dai must be feeling right now. I don't just sympathize with you, I EMPATHIZE with you because I have 100% been there at Summer of Sin. It is a sucky place to be in when you like the person that's the reason you lost something you wanted. At least, I hope Dai likes me. He's one of my all-time favorite people ever. He is Trent Lane. I don't expect a very long reign from Brittany, if I'm being perfectly honest. Helena and Sakura are both looming in the distance and that is a very scary future for anybody. But for Brittany as a character, it was all about just proving that she could do it and the fact that she did it - and over someone as straight-up legit as Sakura - is going to do so much for her as a character. Thank you Dai for everything; for making an incredible character that was absolutely a challenge to overcome, for being the incredible person that you are, and for hopefully not hating me too much right now. OKAY! Onto other things. I'll stop blabbering about my title win. Sor-ry! This show was absolutely off the charts for me. Not only did the aforementioned happen, but I got to write with so many amazing people. Having any role in the Mansons storyline that Steve is running is just so great. Steve is such a great writer and I love working with him. Thank you for finding room for me in that and for not having Jack be done with Madison. Those two together is so great to me. I just love them. Of course, Bleak. Everybody knows I love Stephen J. Eversol and getting to further the storyline with him and Brittany was so great. Thank you to Bleak for writing TWO segments with me. Honestly, the one where Brittany lost has SO MUCH character development in it, but I'm still glad it wasn't the one that got used, for the obvious. Nathaniel/Johnny is so much fun to see continue every single week. Nate always has the best ideas when you comes to me with segment ideas and this one was no exception. I love seeing Nathaniel play an arrogant douche that refuses to accept when he's been punked out. It's so great. And I was glad to get the Brick Sharks in there at the end. Craig requested the Coulter Crew segment and I'm really glad that he did. I enjoyed having the whole Crew together and with Kim fielding all of the questions made them feel very much like a solidified unit that has all their stuff together; ready for all the questions with canned answers that made them look great. I loved writing with Wight this week. The Jericho/Harley RP was all kinds of fun. I enjoyed the indulgent nature of it and the progression it gave them as characters. Plus it set up for a fun RP with the Brick Sharks. The Silent Rage induction for me was just okay. I mean, I feel like Madison honored him well, but I contacted Ad on Facebook and didn't get a response. Also contacted Jim to have Jim O'Brien induct him but I still didn't get a response. I think those two would have done so much better. Finally... KAIN! Getting to write Grant Rice and Jaime Lee together again was a dream of mine that I never thought was going to come true. I was so ecstatic when Kain agreed to write something for Grant's induction and that he OKed Jaime introducing him. These two are one of my all-time favorite romances I've ever played in an e-fed. Also, Grant is one of my absolute favorite e-fed characters of all-time. I'm so glad he was inducted into the Hall of Fame. All of the Hall of Fame inductions were great and very deserved. Sad that Mo didn't do anything for Swytch. Would have loved to have Riley and Kennedy show up together. Honored to get some mentions. Thank you, guys! The Ninja Lords vs. Wolf Sharks was a good contest. I loved the Captain Fall rules without anyone knowing who the captains were. The swerve at the end with Caleb as the obvious captain but no clue which Lord was the captain was FANTASTIC! I really love how that all unfolded and it sucks that robed guy attacked Harley. WHY DID BOB LIKE THAT?! DOES HE HATE HARLEY?! Sad face. I'm super psyched for this week's Six-Man Tag. The Brick Sharks and Freakshow! Should be good TV, folks. ![]() Xenia vs. April was awesome. It had a lot to live up to with that Hellcats title match, eh? Hehe. Seriously, though, it was a great match and a great way to cap the feud off. I had a lot of fun doing this feud, building Xenia up as a character, and giving April "one more run" as it were. I had a good time with her but I gotta say I'm enjoying the attention she's received from the Dream. Anyone else notice that he's gotten SO MUCH CUTER under that mask? I've noticed. Swoon~! ![]() Main-event was off the hook! I loved all the chaos, I loved all the eliminations, and I love that Clay Krueger was the survivor! That was so great to see because I love Clay and don't feel like Craig quite gives himself any play. He deserves to have fun and play a character just as much as the next person and if people feel like he deserves the win then he should get it! Clay is great and fits so great in the Coulter Crew. The aftermath was absolutely brutal. Love those Coulter Crew muggings, even when they get interrupted! Literally, everything on the show was great! Thanks to everyone who pitched in. Sorry I didn't mention much beyond what I was involved in but I've said A LOT and I wanted to at least feedback the work people put in for me and my characters. Everybody was great this week. All the matches were incredible! Kris Hansel is still the best! Crystal has unleashed beast mode... well, rowdy puppy mode but she's getting there! Everybody rocks! |
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| Hayden | Jan 11 2017, 04:00 AM Post #7 |
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I won't lie, this was not my week. I know Lita tried to get something with Johnny and Dream, but for whatever reason the motivation left me as soon as it started. I was at least able to do a fun promo with Hayden and April, not to mention the split between Hayden and Marilyn. I love that Hayden is on staff, as that opened up the possibility of splitting the Limitless crew, if him leaning more towards a by the rules staff member, this burgeoning story with Dream. Once again, thanks to Craig for giving me that chance, it's something I don't take lightly. I do have to remind myself that Hayden's role is a talent scout every now and then; part of me is ready to have him reprimand talent and keep things in order like he's the boss. No way am I ready for that. A huge congratulations to Lita for winning the Hellcats Title, as that's something she's been chasing at least since I got here back in the summer. My condolences to Dai, but I don't think Sakura's done anytime soon. More congratulations to Crystal for picking up the victory. I'll freely admit I wasnt too keen on the feud with Pike at first, but you two have done stellar work and drew me in. Kudos to Crystal and Rob for a fantastic story. KimVolt is gonna be interesting as hell. Eager to see the show already just for the shenanigans that come about. |
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| Minister Wighty | Jan 11 2017, 04:14 AM Post #8 |
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I spoke to 'Mo about receiving the HoF induction himself, but his sentiments were basically that he'd been away from the character for so long that he wouldn't do it justice. He asked that Tier be the one to induct him, and asked that he mention Riley was spending time with his family. I wouldve gone on longer, mentioned more specifics, etc., but I really didn't expect the length of some of those speeches to be what they were! It made this show feel like a PPV. |
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| Lita Maivia | Jan 11 2017, 04:27 AM Post #9 |
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That was the same fear that Kain had with Grant. He actually spent days mulling it over, and hours writing it. In the end, I'm glad he did it because it added so much to the show. Also, I'm glad that Tier was able to induct Swytch if Mo was unable to write him doing it himself. I still get chills when I think about that awesome segment you wrote where Swytch brought Tier back for a match with Kailey Lane and there was fire rising up on the stage with Tier, Swytch, and Kennedy walking through it. So awesome. |
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| Leucippides | Jan 11 2017, 04:32 AM Post #10 |
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Kinda on mixed ground right now. I enjoyed the show but thought my effort toward it was lacking. Colin in particular. Even as I was writing it I felt I was more writing his promos just so I could get promos of his up. I did feel he had something to say, just...his promos were like something big in a drain. It's swirling and swirling and when you think it's going down...it just sort of sits there staring back at you. Crystal, I felt, did a little better. Although if anyone found themselves confused near the end of her second one, you weren't alone. IMO, my most "there" writing was probably the phone sex job. Mainly as I had the most fun writing it. As I said, I enjoyed the matches. There wasn't really too much going into the Colin one. I don't mind short results, I'm just saying there's not too much to feedback with it. lol Sorry. Working with Alastor was fun though. ![]() The only gripe I did have, if I can call it that, with the Crucifixion match was Courtney's involvement given Crystal told her not to be at ringside for it. Since what she feared would happen kinda did happen. Not saying I was upset over Courtney's bits while out there, she was certainly part of the story, just...yeah. lol I did enjoy the action as it played out with both still looking strong in this feud ending affair. Bombs Away from the apron had to have hurt. It's a funny move and one she'll most likely never get rid of. The result, I felt, could have definitely gone either way and I wouldn't have been upset on a loss here.I will again say, I was lenient on starting this feud given fears over how it would be taken by the masses. But I'm glad it was well received though I'm more glad with how fun it was working through it with Rob. Definitely sad that it's over, but the ending certainly gives rise to potential hope of a return feud further down the road. Pike vs. Crystal 2: The Res-E-rection. Come on, you were thinking it too. lol |
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| Digitalwheelin | Jan 11 2017, 04:45 AM Post #11 |
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Holy crap, this show was absolutely amazing! I loved every bit of it. The opening promo between Suzanne Schwartz and Kim Coulter was a great way to set up for KimVolt and to put over The Crew, especially Stephen J. Eversol. It’ll be interesting to see what kind of an apology Eversol has for Orion at KimVolt. Everyone knows the members of the Crew always have a way of twisting things around to fit them. Lol. The Hellcat’s Championship match was fantastic! It was awesome to see Brittany take the win on that one. Big congrats to Lita. Sakura was an incredible champion and Dai always knocked it out of the park with Sakura. Hell, she was champion for almost a full year. That says it all right there. Lol. I really enjoyed the RP’s that went up for this match, too. Both Dai and Lita rocked it, I think. Really eager to see Mercedes Blackwell back in FIW. I was always a big fan of Bleak’s work with that character, so it’ll be great to see her back in any capacity. Having her back in the Christmas Party thread was great, so it’ll be fun to see what Bleak can do with her in her new role if Orion hires her back. I really liked the RP’s for the Levi Russel/Danuwaanalhi match as well. I can’t remember if I’d mentioned this before, but Levi was a character that I immediately liked when I saw the application in the Sign-Up sheet. The interactions between he and Kim were great in the Christmas Party thread in the last cycle and his interactions with Alexander were equally as good. It really showed how much of a babyface Levi is for actually being respectful to someone like Alexander; a guy who clearly doesn’t deserve it. Lol. All the HOF stuff was awesome to see. I remember seeing every one of those characters who got inducted and I was always a big fan. They all definitely deserved a spot in the HOF. Great stuff from everyone who was involved with those speeches. The ATN made very quick work of their opponents in their match. I think that definitely worked to help make them look like a huge force in the tag team division, and hell, even individually. Lol. Frank Manson standing there and enjoying every minute of the carnage was a nice touch as well. I loved the promo between Brittany and Stephen Eversol. Bleak had mentioned he was doing 2 promos with Lita, only one of which would end up on the show. I’d be interested to see the one that didn’t make it, but regardless, the one that did make it was awesome and I can’t wait to see that story progress and see how both The Coulter Crew and Johnny and Friends will react to it. Dai nailed it before when he said Coultergues and Blankulets. Lol. I’m glad to see Seph back in FIW with Alastor Saintclaire. Love that name too. Lol. I really enjoyed all the RP’s for that match. I like the idea of Alastor being a mountain man and him comparing himself to people from the city. The whole gimmick is great and I can’t wait to see more from him as time goes on. Nice match between Kris Hansel and Logan Krueger. Clay’s interference mid-match was a nice touch and being that he’s with the Coulter Crew, having Suzanne come out and restart the match was equally as good. The start to the Freakshow promo legitimately made me laugh out loud. Lol. Freakshow is another new character I’m really enjoying seeing and I’m glad to see he came away with the Rising Title still in tow. The match itself, though short, was a good read and seeing the inclusion of the weapons was awesome. Really appreciate Lita’s words on the promo we wrote between Alexander/Kim and Alexander/Johnny. I wasn’t really feeling the work I put into the promo or my RP’s this cycle, but that could very well be a “own worst critic” situation. I’m not sure. As always, though, writing segments or RP’s with Lita is a ton of fun and this was definitely no exception. The Captain’s Fall stipulation to the Lords/Ninja Bloods vs. Sharks/Wolves match was a nice touch and I love the way it was put over with no one but the respective teams knowing who was the captain. The finish with Caleb going after Zombie instead of Jericho specifically because of Harley was a nice touch. Great to see Jericho get the win for his team. I think Jonathan Hitchen said it right in commentary when he said April Lynn vs. Xenia was a battle. It definitely was that and it was a lot of fun to read it. I think it was a great ending to this feud, which has been fun seeing play out. Both Lita and Craig are fantastic writers so seeing the stuff they’ve come up with together for this feud has been great. The promo with Jack, Madison and Frank Manson was fantastic. Frank is such a prick and I love it. Lol! He’d fit so well in the Crew and yet he had beef with them at the Christmas Party. What gives?! Lol. I’m definitely eager to see what more Frank may cook up in the coming days and weeks. Awesome match featuring Crystal Blake against Father Pike. When it was announced that it’d be a crucifixion match, it piqued my interest and it definitely paid off for me. I like the idea of a match that should be right up Father Pike’s alley is the one he ends up losing. Lol. The match was an amazing feud-ender just like with April/Xenia. I really enjoyed watching it progress to this ultimate end. I loved the way Kim took charge and responded for the entire Crew in the interview with Anna. I like how this interview set up the Crew to look stronger, but at the same time set up opportunities for potential dissention in the ranks amongst the Crew. It’ll be interesting to see things progress from that interview and then main event. And with that… Every bit of the main event match with the Coulter Crew against Johnny, Dream, Marilyn and Erik Holland was bad ass. As I’d mentioned, I wasn’t very satisfied with the work I put into the RP’s for this match, but again, it could just be me. I think it was mostly because of my hesitation to not screw up any potential plans that may have been set in place. Lol. I’ll get back in the swing of things. Regardless, though, the match itself was amazing to read and I loved the way Alexander saved Kim from getting put through a table. It’ll be interesting for those two after that moment and after a few things I have planned for Alexander after the promo I mentioned earlier between them. Lol. Everybody had amazing input as far as RP’s go for this match; I really enjoyed reading all of them. Whoo. I think that’s everything. Lol. Overall thoughts; an absolutely unbelievable show and I can’t wait to see how KimVolt pans out coming out of this show. |
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| Minister Wighty | Jan 11 2017, 05:21 AM Post #12 |
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Mercedes was something else I wanted to spotlight on. I was glad she was on the show, loved how hard Bleak improved with her during Sid's tenure, and am looking forward to seeing her again hopefully. |
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| BleakInfinity | Jan 11 2017, 08:42 AM Post #13 |
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Well, that definitely felt more like a PPV than anything. It's basically like there were two PPVs in a row. But with no filler whatsoever. First of all a huge congrats to Lita! After seeing everything that the Brittany character has gone through since her debut it was really awesome to see her prove to everyone (and herself) that she could win a title. Then to be able to do it against Sakura and also be able to end her long title reign couldn't have been a better way for Brittany to win it all. The match itself was damn barn burner of a match. The way they just beat the holy hell out of one another was awesome. You could feel how badly Brittany wanted it but despite Sakura liking Brittany as a friend she wasn't just handing the title over to her. Lita did a great job, as always, writing that match. It was a ton of fun writing the promos for Brittany and Eversol. Both of them were so different but still fun as hell to write and allowed the story between the two to evolve just a little bit. I almost wish we could post the other one in some alternate universe. Lol. But I'm sure we can work our way to the same point as what was shown in the second promo. That Suzanne and Kim promo was awesome. I like the fact that the characters that serve as the staff have been mostly neutral and while Kim is this awful heel that Suzanne still respects her and isn't against her necessarily just cause heels can only get along with heels and faces with faces. It's sort of fed-wide at this point but I especially like that when it comes to the authority figures. It's such a breath of fresh air from the typical heel GM or face GM we see on TV all the time. Levi Russell is an awesome character. I'm glad to see him get a win in his first match and I'm happy that Eversol will be facing him this coming cycle. It should be fun. The hall of fame speeches are always awesome to read. I tend to like when characters break kayfabe and do it like an actual hall of fame speech we see in WWE while still maintaining a bit of their characters too. I enjoyed reading all of them. I had a feeling Clay would be interfering on behalf his son at some point. It was cool to see the match being restarted by Suzanne and then Kris Hansel getting the win. That match was so close to call that it was masterful to put both characters over. Freakshow is awesome. That promo was hilarious and I'm glad the character was able to retain the Rising title. Another great promo between Kim/Nathaniel. Kim is cold as ice. God damn. Lol. Even I feel bad for Nathaniel and really no one should feel bad for him ever. Haha. I was expecting Johnny and Nathaniel to come to blows like he and Eversol and Johnny did that one time. But Nathaniel was completely outmatched. And I loved Harley's poetic way of calling Nathaniel a douche bag. I really liked the ending to both Xenia and April and also Crystal and Pike. It was a neat way of closing out 2016 in a sense to end both feuds. I also really liked April and Xenia shaking hands after that absolute beating they gave each other. Hopefully it gives April more respect backstage now. I have no idea what the hell Frank Manson is going to end up doing but all I know is I love the character so far. Every time I see anything written with him in it I'm completely intrigued. Kim speaking for the entire Crew was great. Especially cause it showed a ton of tension with what had just happened with Kim and Nathaniel and then the tension with Eversol when Kim is talking about how Nathaniel is the chosen one, so to speak. What an awesome main event. Just complete and utter chaos and seriously who the hell is Badd Breed? That's going to be fun finding out and I loved how Holland and Eversol eliminated each other at the same time, essentially. It was definitely cool to see Clay get the win since it shows how each member of The Crew is dangerous. |
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| Dai | Jan 11 2017, 06:10 PM Post #14 |
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A bit gutted, obviously, but can't complain. Congrats to Lita. Match was great, too. Show snazzy, too. Good work. |
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| Steve | Jan 11 2017, 06:30 PM Post #15 |
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I have to be honest I haven't followed much since taking my break. So with that I'm trying to ease back in and trying to pick up what is going on within the current shows. I echo the sentiments of everyone else in saying that this show really felt more like a PPV than a regular show. The ATN vs Jobbers match conveyed exactly what I was looking for and was superbly written by Rob. Huge thanks to all the writers and Craig for all his hard work week in and week out to get these shows up in a timely manner for all of us. Some real interesting stuff going on in FIW right now and I feel like the spotlight is being distributed fairly equally which I think attributes to the overall activity around here from the handlers. I'm still trying to grasp the manager aspect with Frank and running a duo of wrestlers who do not speak but I think it is starting to take form in my head of how I'm supposed to write them. As for Frank I'm having a ball with him and keep coming up with little bits a pieces to add to his story all the time. Some interesting stuff coming up on that forefront I'm looking forward to as well. I've always wanted to do a tag team and I'm glad to finally have something that has legs to stand on. |
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| BanalityBob | Jan 12 2017, 04:45 AM Post #16 |
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Well this is a touch late because of work and stuff, but here's feedback: I'm awaiting the payoff of the Coulter Crew takeover. It's obviously building, but I feel a little in the dark as to where. Not bad, not good, and there are cool moments. For example, I like all the characters involved. Kim, Stephen Eversol, Brittany, and the rest of the Crew and Good Guy alliance are all really awesome characters. I'm looking forward to Nensai Senjou and all that's being built towards and the culminations of some of these arcs. KimVolt is...interesting to say the least. I look forward to several of the matches and the rivalries that they fuel or help kick off. It's a very pointedly booked card which is interesting. Glad Freakshow was found worthy to retain the Rising title. *Insert Sally Field "You like me!" moment* I've enjoyed the warm reception I've gotten for the character and have several fun things on the oven for him too. I love the Crystal Blake vs Father Pike storyline resolving. This was a cool feud for me. Crystal is a very lovable character and I'm excited to see where she heads next. Pike is a wonderfully loathsome character, and I'm excited to see what his next moves are too. The flow of this match was cool too, and the writing was good with only one minor piece of constructive feedback: the words "the symbol" were used quite a lot. That made an otherwise really excellent piece of writing sound...weird. The Hellcat's Championships match was well written and kept me on the edge of my seat. Congrats to Brittney for beating Sakura. The writing from both Lita and Dai's promos was on point and made me really wonder who was going to win. Good competition both OOC and in the written match. Kris Hansel vs. Logan Krueger was a really fun match. I love that Suzanne Schwartz restarted it so that both characters got over. The tag Exhibition Match was great fun. Loved every minute of it. April VS. Xenia was cool too. Glad to see the monster that Xenia really is come out. |
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It's a funny move and one she'll most likely never get rid of. The result, I felt, could have definitely gone either way and I wouldn't have been upset on a loss here.

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