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Topic Started: Jan 20 2017, 11:43 PM (307 Views)
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Matches: Craig, Lita, Steve & Rob
Promos: *deep breath* Craig, Lita, Steve, Bleak, Wight, Dai, Bob, Otaku and Crys. As always when there are wonderfully so many I may have forgotten somebody. Did Nate contribute to the Coulter Crew segments? Him and somebody else I've missed I expect.

Somebody said last week that Hardcore Hangover felt like a PPV and I think the same is true for this show. Thank you to Lita for booking the card as Kim, some fantastic matches. The writers will notice, I made a few late changes including Dai's NBE promo and the ending of Steve's main event. I may also change that purple text back to blue, I thought it made sense but I'm now not entirely happy.

Brilliant to have other writers on board, even if they often outshine my own efforts! Please anybody that can write for Nensai Senjou reply here or shoot me a PM. All help is welcome and as I said last week, the PreVolt is short results so no need to worry about the full written results we have the PPV's. All help is extremely appreciated and welcome.

Olivia Areano's handler did let me know about her no-show, Terry has not so I'm taking Cody McGinness off the cards until such time as he gets in touch. As I said to Olivia's handler this week, the foundation for the character is good and solid, we just want to see more of it. Roleplaying early in the cycle helps so much and getting involved in the joint threads can really open up avenues for a character.

Speaking of joint threads, I have been thinking about doing a press conference style one for Nensai Senjou. With Lita's table thread last week, might be overkill. Perhaps reply and let me know if it's warranted or not.

Got to highlight the brilliant Rising contenders participants this week. Alastor, Colin, Pike, Hansel all fantastic and very enjoyable. Tough call (as all matches were) but that one stood out as a really competitive match and prompted a switch in the Nensai Senjou card - more on that in a second.

Additional praise also for Levi Russel, it's always great to have new members to the community and there's a really good base for the character that has already received some great feedback from Dai particularly.

Surveys will be sent around tomorrow for everybody, I'll do that from my account.

In line with the dates for the FIW Awards 2016, voting is now open. The nominations are over at this thread in OOC.
Voting, for which full ballots only will be accepted, will happen from January 20th to February 3rd.
For the awards, send your full ballot over the FIW.com account.

The Nensai Senjou and PreVolt cards will be up shortly. I've not put them together fully because of some last minute changes, including a planned rematch between Alastor Saintclaire and Colin Stiles being deservedly moved to the PPV card.

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This was a fantastic show, absolutely a wonderful read. Every match was wonderfully written, the promos/segments were wonderfully written and this definitely felt like a big PPV type event.

I want to say congratulations to Stephen, you really brought it and I had a blast going up against you. I'm really looking forward to the next card and great job on results guys: keep up the amazing work.
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first I'd like to say this was a heck of a show! it feels like an nxt takeover special before one of wwes big 4. tons of cool stuff happened tonight and the albanian terror network(thats the right name right?) those dudes are turning into some tanks or something! im sorry im ditcging danuwa and for wasting everyones time with him. i hope to bring yuki back and write her better and more solid than last time. this new metamorphapis should be fun i hope for everyone. kiras matcg with the lords was pretty amazing too i mean he went through a freaking table! hes going to love that too. i was hoestly on the edge for that one because i wasnt sure id get a win with that match. thanks for swinging the votes our way this week. the main event was insane as well and full of sweet stuff! every match was awesome and cant wait till the ppv!
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I thought the purple was a neat touch.

One minor thing I'd like to point out: I totally get what the writer was going for with Sakura trying to grab the belt "out of habit," but after most of her matches since her return as a manger, Vi would hand her the belt. I guess it's not wrong, as such, but yeah. Chalk it down to a stressful night for Sakura.

Hey, Yuki's back. I think that's for the best. I'm not sure an efed is the best place to address some of Danu's issues. Also, more Hellcats is always good. As for the Superhero Luchadors in the spirit of El Santo, I AM, as they say, EXCITE.

I don't know whether the incident in Hikou's last twitter thread post is actually canon or Hikou blowing smoke, but it's certainly something that feels like it fits. The Shibuya Death Match is what you get when you let that idiot think his own matches up.

Good show, as per. Definitely moved things forward for NS, which is the main thing. I feel like I got some momentum going, which is something I'm not sure I've had for a while for a number of reasons, most of them not related to anything going on here.
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Little bummed that Alastor didn't get the W, but the fact I get to cap the feud off at Nensai Senjou is splendid. I've enjoyed the exchanges the two characters have had, I enjoyed the differences that Father Pike and Kris Hansel brought, it made for an exciting match to read. Hope we can deliver for the big show!

Laughed at the Marcus Helix cameo, good stuff. ATN is looking beastly as they ran a rampage. I'm looking forward to see what else Steve brings with them monsters!

Loved the show, the pink was a nice touch.

The main event was glorious, loved how Nathaniel needed a water break and Clay bringing it to him was a great touch. Double O's announcements at the end created a jam packed NS event that I'm looking forward to!

Thanks to all the writers of this show for delivering a solid KIMvolt.
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I found myself liking the show as well. :) Colin and Alastor working against one another has been pretty fun for me so I'm not upset on Colin not winning. Though, if I had to say, I think it would have been better the other way around with Colin stopping Alastor given his views of wanting the shot. Other than that, it was a good match. Apologies for not putting in the best of efforts for Colin lately, he's still someone I'm trying to figure out properly myself. Hopefully the stride can be found. Also, I did do a promo for him. It's tucked in before the match and try as I might I couldn't make it any longer. lol

I thoroughly enjoyed the three team match. Lots of good spots for everyone to work with there. The match certainly had a menacing feel when first viewed, don't know if that transpired in Crystal's words or not lol, so for them to squeak out a victory was pretty exciting. Especially as it came in a way that builds up the division while leaving the title scene unscratched. Had a lot of fun working with Hayden as well and hopefully we can do some good things between Marilyn and Crystal in the future. :) I can't think of anything wrong from the match itself, so all I can say there is good job. :)
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One minor thing I'd like to point out: I totally get what the writer was going for with Sakura trying to grab the belt "out of habit," but after most of her matches since her return as a manger, Vi would hand her the belt. I guess it's not wrong, as such, but yeah. Chalk it down to a stressful night for Sakura.

My apologies, Lita did have a better suggestion that didn't make it onto the show.

I've forgotten to look at a theme song for the PPV so Lita will kindly add that in.

I've done two separate cards for PreVolt and Nensai Senjou, both of which contain two different deadlines and the Roleplay forum header reflects that. Basically if your character is booked on PreVolt, deadline is Wednesday to enable that show to go up on Friday. Anybody on Nensai Senjou, deadline for that is Thursday because it's down for Saturday, which allows extra time for the longer matches. Anybody confused (I barely understand it), let me know.

Thank you!
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Kinda expected to lose considering I couldn't fucking write this week. My brain completely failed me as far as ideas. Thank God I have something to work with this cycle because I know I can do better than the dumbfuckery I came up with this week.
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Great show once again by everyone involved. Looking forward to seeing what the PPV brings. Grats to Adam to winning the 4-way to get a crack at the Rising Championship. No matter the character he plays or the challenges he faces the guy will not be denied. Talent galore from day one. Looking forward to seeing Colin and Alastor lock horns again as well. Three amazing people along with the awesome Freakshow who make this all such a great dynamic.

Good luck to everyone else down the road. Going to be fun to watch all the creative members here go tooth and nail.
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I'm going to try a bit of proper feedback here, but first hats off to Craig for another superb show. People keep saying how these shows feel like PPV's and I really thing that boils down to how well Craig is booking things and how thoughtful he is of each and every character. Big thanks to the other writers and those who contributed promos.

Please....I beg....PLEEEEASSSEEE....give Craig a hand and help out writing for the PPV. I know we have many talented writers here and I really don't want to see Craig get burnt out. Helping out with a quick match for the weekly shows would also be a super kind gesture as well.

So anyway onto the feedback.....

- Los Templarios Mágicos have arrived and I am really looking forward to seeing more of this team. Lita said it in our super secret creative forum :P, the tag team division is making great strives to grow and it is exciting to see. It is nice to see some attention thrown that way. With the addition of Los Templarios Mágicos added to the already stacked division of teams, it really makes me nervous to handle one of those teams because I have some real stiff competition.

- Brittany's Hellcat celebration was a nice way to officially kick off the show. I haven't given my congratulations to Lita yet on this win with Brittany. She has been the perpetual underdog in the Hellcat division, so it is nice to see her finally hold the top prize. CONGRATS!

Wait....what? Swerve...Kim Coulter and the Crew coming down and interrupting was a nice touch (especially the veiled mention of Frank :P).

So I'm not really clear on all the happenings of the Brittany/Eversol relationship, but Stephen stealing Brittany's moment to make is apology was a grade A dick move. But completely in a good way.

Danuwaanalhi vs. Cody McGinnis

Not really much to say here. We went into this knowing Otaku was pulling Danu and it wasn't really surprising to see a lackluster showing. It is disappointing to see a no show by Cody because I always felt that when he applied himself that Cody was a solid character.

-Short sweet Kira promo. Glad to see Otaku bringing back a character he is more comfortable with.

Albanian Terror Network Tag Team Challenge

This one was really fun to write. My initial plan I had pitched to Craig would be the ATN rolling over jobbers in their first few matches. Then Craig and Lita pitched an idea of me getting involved with the Lords of Salem/Brick Shark stuff. I was a bit apprehensive at first, that is until the idea of throwing all of those 'jobber' wins in to one night. Much discussion went about before the matches developed into what they were and in the end I'm happy with how it turned out with Kim trying to pull one over on Frank & ATN.

I had the idea early on that I wanted to do 'local' jobbers and then the more I thought about it I wanted to progress the difficulty for the team as the challenge continued. Then it struck me that the HOF was last week and that would probably mean that several of FIW's past talent would probably still be in town for the event. That is where Tommy Hale & Bonanza came in as former enhancement talent. Then Marcus Helix & Marc Malicious as former main roster talent with some success and then Craig offered up Dos Gatitos as the final team which I thought fit perfectly into what I was trying to achieve with this series of matches.

My only worry here was that I don't really have a full grasp of the short result style for the weekly show matches and I was worried that some of the matches might look out of format from the rest of the show being longer.

- What is this boob glue, Courtney speaks of? LOL I really haven't had much of a chance to follow Courtney and Crystal but this was a fun little segment. May just have to give a gander at more of their work from the past to get a better feel for them.

Hellcat Triple Threat Tag Team

Fun match with a good reasoning behind it heading into Nensai Senjou and Kim being the nasty bitch she is. Nice to see Crystal and Marilyn pick up the win, especially when one would think Brittany and Sakura would emerge victorious against the odds Kim put against them heading into the PPV. Sucks Olivia didn't get to RP here but at least we know she hasn't disappeared on us. Hope to see her back in RP action soon!

- Nice build to the main event by Johnny with this segment.

Levi Russel vs. Stephen J. Eversol

This match was a tough one to judge and I have to say that Levi definitely made a good first showing against the current Fighting Spirit champion and Grand Prix Tournament champion. But that underhanded prick, Eversol wins with a hand full of tights. *shakes fist* Damn you, Eversol! Welcome to FIW, Levi and look forward to seeing what more you have to offer.

- If Xenia is the reason we didn't get Tomoko on ReVolt this week then you better guarantee that she's made it on my list of people I really really dislike and want to squirt hot sauce in their eyes.

The Badd Breed vs. Nathaniel Alexander, Clay Krueger & Logan Krueger

Good build into the Eversol vs Holland match at Nensai Senjou. I really enjoyed Eversol's bit with Nightmare and the distraction of Holland that lead to the Crew winning the match.

Rebel vs Shaelin Marie Richlen

I wouldn't say anything that Sticky did for this match dumbfuckery. I actually liked his work and this one for me was a close judge. I really don't know much of either character but I liked what I saw in terms of RP's from both of them this week.

Kris Hansel vs. Colin Stiles vs. Alastor Saintclaire vs. Father Jakob Pike

This match by far was the hardest match of the night to judge. All four involved gave top notch work and as I told Craig while giving my thoughts, I changed the winner a couple times before finally deciding to stick with my final decision. I'm glad to see Colin and Alastor getting a second chance in this one and hope that Father Pike gets remembered for his efforts and gets another chance as well at some point.

- Nice little segue by the Sharks and Freakshow to the six way match. Can't say I've followed the happenings of all this too much. So I wasn't really sure why Harley didn't want to fight Jericho. I guess I better get myself up to speed on that real quick like heading into NS.

Lords of Salem & Kira Izumi vs. Brick Sharks & Freakshow

A nice action packed match up before ATN hit the ring wrecking havoc on poor Caleb. Looking forward to the triple threat match at the PPV, but my competitive side is very nervous knowing the caliber of talent I'm facing in Wight and Lita.

- SPARKLE~!

Vi vs. Helena Handbasket

Nice match here by the Hellcats. Another area of FIW I really need to focus more attention on. Helena was savage at the end and a nice touch to have Sakura come down for the save and instinctively pick up the belt only for Brittany to snatch it away to create a bit more tension leading into the PPV.

Johnny Amazing vs Dream

I was a bit apprehensive going into this one as I really wasn't sure how to write Dream. I think because he wears a mask that I instinctively want to make him a high flier but that isn't how I read his wrestling style. I hope I did him justice in this match.

For some reason the only thing that really didn't click for me in this match was the commentary. I was really struggling to come up with anything for Chip and Hitchen that didn't feel forced.

I had a blast writing Nathaniel as the referee and hope that Nate feels I portrayed him correctly. The one thing I wish I had changed looking back on it was a bit more involvement through out the match by Eversol and Krueger who only felt as fodder to Nathaniel's antics.

The very last bit of the match and aftermath got a bit rushed with the kids begging for my attention and bed time rapidly approaching for my early morning get up for work. So sorry if that was all suckfest but I did my best to convey everything as well as I could.

Craig mentioned some changes but I really didn't notice anything at a skim but I did enjoy the closing segment by Orion Oldriod as he returned to reclaim his power of FIW.

- Did I mention the PPV graphics are fucking OUTSTANDING!?
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To answer Craig's question, I actually didn’t contribute to the Coulter Crew stuff. Nonetheless, everything involving the Crew was awesome and judging by the end result, it didn’t seem to need anything from me for Alexander.

Overall, this was a great show as usual. It definitely felt like another really big show, and I liked the added element of the Coulter Crew stacking the deck against everybody they’ve had issues with over the last several weeks.

The opening promo Los Templarios Mágicos was awesome. I loved the visual of a portal opening in the middle of the ring and a lone janitor being the only witness to it. The lampshading referring to it as “special effects” was great too. Lol.

The Eversol apology segment legitimately had me laughing out loud over the theatrics of it all. It definitely felt like a true heel promo like you’d see on TV when they’re being forced to humble themselves and even the word “humble” is nowhere in their vocabulary. The fact that Eversol’s music interrupted Brittany was a nice touch, too.

I’d noticed T had been MIA for quite a while as of late, which sucks because I’ve always been a big fan of the Cody McGinnis character since NGIW. Here’s hoping we see a resurgence for the character soon.

I remember Marc Malicious! Lol. The multiple matches for the ATN definitely helped push the fact that Kim has a huge axe to grind with Frank Manson. All of the matches were great and definitely put over just how strong the ATN are and made them look like unbeatable monsters. I can’t wait to see how Frank might retaliate, even though his monsters pretty much decimated their competition.

The triple threat tag team Hellcats match was another great match on this card. I liked the added emphasis that it was booked by Kim simply as a way to weaken both Brittany and Sakura as they head into Nensai Senjou. The callback to Hardcore Hangover and Sakura getting tossed into the ring post was a nice touch, not only for the callback itself, but it was a great hint to the tension between Sakura and Brittany.

Really good promo from Johnny Amazing, though not enough Nathaniel Alexander in it. :P Nah, in all seriousness, that promo was great. I think it set things up nicely for the main event of the night while also summing up the facts about what the Crew was trying to do in this event and overall. I know Nathaniel will have a lot to say about Johnny’s declaration of war at the end of that promo. Lol.

Not long ago, Lita had mentioned that a lot of the storyline elements her characters are involved in stem from Twitter exchanges. This time, I feel like that was true for the Stephen J. Eversol vs. Levi Russel match. I had an absolute blast in the Twitter exchanges between the all the Crew members and Levi. Everybody in the Crew absolutely swarmed poor Levi, but he held his own just like he did in their match. The writing was awesome and I think everybody came away with something to build from.

Awesome promo between Suzanne Schwartz and Xenia. The implication that she had something to do with Tomoko not being there was a nice, subtle way of putting over how imposing she actually is and making her look stronger considering Tomoko is literally a Hall of Fame legend in FIW. Really liked that promo.

I loved the Alexander/Krugers vs. Badd Breed match. Everybody in the match got in a good amount of offense, and the distraction from Eversol in the back against Nightmare was awesome. I think, overall, the way this match played out should give me a lot to work with for RP’s heading into Nensai Senjou.

Every time I read the name Rebel, it reminds me of the very first character I’d ever created in e-fedding by the same name. Except the Rebel that’s in FIW is leagues better than what I came up with. Ask Bleak, he was there, too. Lol. I like how the interactions between Rebel and Shaelin on FIW Twitter were incorporated into their strap match. Nice short match between these two, overall. Definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes.

The Rising No. 1 contendership match was awesome to read. I really liked the RP’s that went up for this match and I’m eager to see the Alastor/Colin stuff move forward. I’ve enjoyed seeing everything they’ve done, especially considering they’re both new characters for the respective handlers, which is not easy to get a grasp on early on. Great to see Kris Hansel get the victory in this match as well. That’s another one I’m looking forward to as well. Lol.

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Damn, even when he’s not around, Harley is talking trash about Alexander :P Lol. The Brick Sharks pre-match promo was awesome. Harley always cracks me up. The promo was a great way to set up Harley’s reluctance to fight Jericho in their tag match. There’s been a lot of ups and downs for the Brick Sharks as of late, and with this loss against the Lords and Kira, it’ll be interesting to see how that affects them.

The Helena/Vi match was a great read. When Brittany came to ringside, I expected her to maybe get involved in the match somehow, but seeing her in the aftermath was just as good. The foreshadowing early on in the night to the tension paid off really well in the aftermath to this match. It was awesome seeing Helena get the win in the match to cement herself in the main event for Nensai Senjou.

I absolutely loved the main event. Nathaniel as special guest referee was written flawlessly. Everything he did to avoid counting the pinfall for Johnny was gold, especially checking his watch and needing a water break in the middle of the match. Lol. The ring announcing from Stephen was just as hilarious as well. And even better, none of that took away from the match itself, which is great. I can’t wait to see how things go at Nensai Senjou and beyond for everybody involved in this match and in the aftermath as well. Speaking of the aftermath, Orion returning and announcing Mercedes Blackwell as the special referee for Holland/Eversol and announcing the beginning pairings for Double Jeopardy was great. Orion’s return adds another element to this whole storyline that I personally wasn’t expecting. Can’t wait to see how that goes.

Great show everybody! Really eager to see things progress further!
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This show got me hyped for a pay-per-view I wasn't really looking forward to. Kudos to the writers on that one, and to Craig for the booking.

Depending on what you wanted in terms of results for the Pre-Volt I might be able to take the whole thing off your hands. I know it's not much compared to a full PPV match, but it's what I can contribute these days. HMU. If that won't work, maybe we can figure something else out.

Freakshow and the Brick Sharks was a great promo, as was Hikou's pitch.

I had to laugh at "stricken from FIW Lore". Up until two years ago when I wiped our hard drive and forgot to back up our demotivators I still had that screenshot saved. Ah well.

I like how all three of the matches I was involved in shook out. Really great reads, really good attention to detail.

Wish I had more to say, but I don't.
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This show got me hyped for a pay-per-view I wasn't really looking forward to.

Are you saying that Kim Coulter is responsible for getting you excited? :lol: That's what I read!

There was so much great stuff that came out of this show, I'm really happy about it. Booking this card was hell. I'm not going to lie. I have not been a fed head in YEARS. I don't know how Craig books these cards all the time, fitting everybody in, and having them make sense. The struggle was real, but I'm glad I was able to get something together that Craig was able to produce into such a great show that people seem to have enjoyed.

- Los Templarios Magicos debut was beyond fantastical. They remind me a bit of my attempts at Super Sentia knock-offs. I really look forward to seeing where these characters go. Their debut is highly anticipated by me! And that Principe Alejandro is one major league hottie.

- The in-ring opener was a lot of fun to write. I apologized in advance to Craig for putting in the Brittany speech, but with such stiff competition at Nensai Senjou there was no way I could bank on getting an opportunity to do this again. Brittany was such an underdog for so long that I wanted her to do an in-ring thank you to her fans and getting the Crew to interrupt was too perfect. Eversol's apology was tons of fun to help Bleak with. I knew that the speech had to sound NOTHING like Eversol so I asked Bleak if he was OK with me preparing something for him to "recite". I think it came off fantastically and Bleak added so much with Eversol's boredom with the whole thing. It was so much fun. And the Clay/Eversol stuff that may have gone unnoticed by some, that made me chuckle.

- The Albanian Terror Network segment was cool to be a part of. I like this team, led by Frank. They are a great intimidating presence and Frank is full of character, so they compliment one another well. It also sort of paints Frank a bit like a coward that he surrounds himself with mindless muscle bots, and I like that a lot!

- I really liked the tension continuing to be showcased between Brittany and Sakura in the Hellcats Triangle Tag Match. I also agree with Leucippides' assessment that it was written nicely to uplift the division without harming the Hellcats title picture any. Very well done.

- I threw in that Johnny segment for a very important reason. Sometimes I forget that Johnny is the champ because I spent so long trying to get here. I hate when I feel like I'm not living up to the role so I wanted to give him a more serious approach to the main-event situation.

- Levi Russel vs. Stephen J. Eversol was a show stealer for him. From the RPs (and Twitter exchanges) leading up to it to the actual match, this was a great experience to witness and be a part of. Levi is already a favorite character of mine and I was so excited when he joined us through Twitter. I love that everyone gave him such constructive feedback that I feel will make this character even better moving forward. I love that he was such a force to be reckoned with in the match and that Eversol won it with a cheap pin. Really put over both characters in a great way. I absolutely loved it.

- Stephen J. Eversol antagonizing Nightmare to help his buddies win against a very formidable opposition was great! I love when the Crew gets to do things like this. And this one I didn't even know about!

- So glad that Kris Hansel is the new contender for the Rising title. I love Freakshow, but damn if it's not gonna be tough to choose between him and Kris Hansel. I have wanted to have Kris Hansel's babies since he's shown up. Just saying.

- Six-Man Tag was great. Loved all the chaos in it. A little bummed that Brick Show lost as I really loved everything that Beard and I were able to get up both separately and together. Still, it was a fun ride. The RPs provided a lot of progress in the Brick Sharks story and the match itself really rocked the tag division that I feel needed that shake-up. It had become a bit stagnant with the on-going Lords vs. Sharks but Harley won't fight angle. Albanian Terror Network are a solid team, backed by a solid roleplayer, and I'm excited to have them injected into this story.

- Helena vs. Vi was a great match to really cap things off on the go-home show to the PPV. Vi is a character that I really enjoy and I wish Wight had more of a competitive fire with her, but I understand completely why he doesn't. I'm sure it's even worse than how I was when Mercedes was champ and Brittany just had no desire to take it from her. I liked how all three Nensai Senjou-bound Hellcats were used in this post-match action to really set the stage for the double defense at the PPV. Here's hoping Brittany can John Cena her way through both of them and pick up two defenses in one night! Hehe.

- The main-event was incredible. Yes, a little long and a little wordy in places; but Steve's writing contributions are always appreciated and I dare say that he embraces Johnny's style more than anyone else. He's always shined at writing Johnny's matches and I am always happy with the stuff that he's been able to work in for Johnny. Nathaniel was absolutely hilarious and I could see him doing absolutely everything that was written with such a serious expression on his face. I did pitch a spot where Nathaniel misses a count because he's too busy testing the integrity of the shirt sleeve material against his muscles. I would have loved to see that, but it was all still good! The Dream is difficult to write at first, I can attest to that. I've become more accustom to him over time and now I don't know how I ever imagined him as a high flier but yes I did the same thing at first. Stephen J. Eversol's introductions were beyond hilarious. He's such an ass. Glad things broke down into chaos as I would have hated either Johnny or Dream having to lose going into Double Jeopardy. And the announcement of Mercedes being back is awesome! I love her. The pairings sound like they are going to be a lot of fun. I can't wait to see how Double Jeopardy shakes out!
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So, a little late on the feedback, but hey, feedback is feedback.

I'm super glad people are digging Los Templarios Magicos.

I like how Brittany connects with her fans and embodies what being a face is about. Eversol's "apology" was great too. I was wondering how that was going to be handled, and it was nice.

Glad to see Otaku with a character he has a better handle on. I look forward to see what he does with Yuki.

The ATN vs all the jobbers match(es) was a struggle for me. The writing was cool, but it went on for a long, long time. Part of it may be that I have no history with the jobbers involved (I believe there may be jokes I missed) which lowered my investment a lot, and I understand the wanting to put them over, but it mostly seemed to be like two pit bulls mauling kittens, which is awkward to watch.

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Boob glue is either a spray or roll on adhesive that's commonly used to make precarious pieces of clothing stay in place. Generally, it lets you expose a lot of side or underboob and to stop trunks from rising up into a wedgie.

The Hellcats Showcase was great. I love that Marilyn and Crystal are teaming up, and loved that they were able to get a W over the champ, former champ, and Xenia without making any of those three intimidating forces look any weaker. This match really showed a lot of the strength in the Hellcats division, and I look forward to see what comes of it.

The Levi vs. Eversol match was great at both building the rookie Levi up and showing both Eversol's talent and Kim's desparation to put her people over. It did a lot for both wrestlers in the match and also the ongoing Crew storyline. They're strong, but they're fragile. I'd definitely be interested to see some feuding (Kim Coulter in a shark cage, anyone?).

I like Xenia's promos. She's a badass, and I like that she is presented as such. Honestly,not to restart the conversation since that's in the Character Assesment Survey, but I'd love to see her challenge for the Fighting Spirit or Rising Championships, because she'd be real competition to either champ.

The Alpha Wolves vs. NBE:COMPLEX match was super fun. This feud has led to some super funny moments, and I look forward to seeing them meet again at NSXI

This week of promos for the Rising Contendership was great. Good material put out by all, and I'm glad to see that Colin and Allastor are going to be in the main show as a result. I'm looking forward to a week of promos vs. Kris Hansel too, even though it might cost me a strap.

The promos I've written with Lita this week for Freakshow and the Brick Sharks were super fun to write. We vibed off of each other well, and weren't afraid to make it awkward. 10/10, would do again. Also, clearly Lita talks to Wight too much, because she calls me Beard. P.S. I have a beard IRL.

All the moving pieces in the six man tag match were awesomely handled. Props. It was a fun match, and the ATN rolling in at the end to wreck face honestly did more to put them over for me than their own match.

The mini Sakura promo made me smile. Good font color changes. ;)

Helena vs. Vi was great. It was a quality match, and I look forward to seeing what comes of all of it.

Oh, Hikou. Never change.

Johnny vs. The Dream was great on a number of counts, and had one minor flaw. It was super long. However, it was really well written, and did so much to highlight how great Johnny and Dream are as wrestlers. They were putting all their skills on show in friendly competition, kept their spirits high, and showed why they are some of the premier talents and faces in the fed. A+
The Crew bits made me laugh a lot, especially the water break. That was a definite highlight.

But yeah, great show. Props to Craig. You're a workhorse, dude. The minor complaints I have are really insignificant in the light of all you're accomplishing week to week. It takes so much to keep this place running the way you are. You are appreciated greatly.
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As much as I thought the ending to Breed/Crew was a little awkwardly written, I really enjoyed the match and understood why the finish was what it was. Really good setup going into the title match at NS, that was well done.

Los Templarios Magicos feels like my run with El Valiente all over again and I fucking love it. They are so entertaining.

WTF is a Shibuya Death Match?

The main event was also fun, albeit really long, but a HELL of an entertaining match and finish. Nensai Senjou is shaping up to be an absolutely spellbinding card.

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Equal measures Texas Death Match and drinking game, the Shibuya Death Match is what you get when Hikou Seikai is allowed to think for himself. There was an RP (with the name in the title) where he pitches it to Rebel, which was cribbed for the news post officially announcing it.
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Forgot to mention that I am down for a Press Conference RP. I have two of the champs in the fed and would love to take part.

Also, thanks to Steve for the feedback on the Vs Screens! Forgot to mention that as well.

Apologies for not properly representing Stephen J. Eversol in his image. It has been fixed.
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My VS screen got me pumped for the show. Oodles of kudos to Lita for that!
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i know this is late and an odd spot to put it but who's purple rope guy?
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That has yet to be revealed.
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ok thought i missed a new guy or something thank you for the help.
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THE PURPLE HAAAAAZE~!
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lol
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