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| Craig | Feb 4 2017, 11:28 PM Post #1 |
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What a wonderful way to spend a weekend. Matches: Dai, Crys, Craig, Lita, Steve, Rob, Wight & Nate Promos: Lita, Craig, Tom, Bleak, Jade, Hayden, Rob - have I missed somebody? Others: Tom, Rob, Bob So the PPV is posted, a HUGE thank you to everybody who contributed in matches especially, promos too. The most difficult thing about this week has been knowing those matches are out there and not knowing if they’ll come in on time, I’m delighted that they were and I hit my own self-imposed deadline. If I’ve missed anything, do shout at me. As always results are difficult. If you didn’t win, don’t take it too hard. Of the matches that remained competitive due to no shows, none were whitewashes. Every match had different winners, especially the FIW Championship and there was 1 vote in Colin Stiles vs. Alastor Saintclaire. Thank you to anybody who sent in judging, they were especially helpful for Double Jeopardy. Thank you all who voted in the FIW Awards, the winners are featured in the PPV and the only one I left out was the writer of the year, which was me and didn’t feel right to shout about. Thank you also for character assessments. Those that haven’t returned them, I’ll still take them. I suppose those that haven’t either have nothing to communicate or things are so bad for them that they can’t bring themselves to write about it. Taking to Dai I did mention how ironic it was that Adam was able to RP for last week’s match determining who was in the main event but wasn’t able to for this one. Real shame but I know Adam does have some pretty serious real-world commitments. Some housekeeping; Wasabi didn’t RP for his first match on PreVolt and as such I’m not booking him until I get a PM. Olivia Areano has also stepped off the roster. Welcome to the new members of Badd Breed, Rob Garcia, Jade Justice and Joe Stanton. Blood Wolf doesn’t appear finished yet as an application. There also will be a couple of new jobbers added to the roster, a heel replacing Razorback and a tag team. New card will be up shortly, due to the roster changes I just want to make sure I’ve got everybody correct. |
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| Mjölnir | Feb 4 2017, 11:35 PM Post #2 |
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Don't really have a lot to say in depth. Just that it was an awesome show. A+ effort from everyone. I wanted to add, because I can't remember if I said it to everyone that took part, but a big thank you to everyone that added to the one hype segment. |
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| Willie | Feb 4 2017, 11:40 PM Post #3 |
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Terrific ending to my match. I just got called into work so I had to skim, but I loved the match, Steve, GREAT work, and I love how even it was and that it was once again a super-dirty finish. |
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| MrOtaku2399 | Feb 4 2017, 11:59 PM Post #4 |
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both cards were full of shock and awe and really did have the whole mania/kingdom kinda vibe. lots of great matches and many props to all of yall for kickin but this week and a half. from what i read and skimed through every match was something special and amazing work again guys congrats to all winners and champs this week. |
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| Dai | Feb 5 2017, 12:16 AM Post #5 |
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That was the first remotely full-sized match I've written in years, so go easy on me. I was aiming for stiffness and blood all round with a side order of PRIDE for Gus. (Technically, the H-Bomb wasafter Pride, but fuck it, Hendo counts;) Shaelin was a little harder to work into that, sorry. Rebel just did Rebel things. I was kinda happy with it when I sent it in, then I read everything else, and don't I feel silly now. Some damn fine matches on the card. Honestly, I think I was a lot more gutted at HH than I would have been if I lost this week. I mean, with the exception of the one that was "cut" (which I thought I quite cleverly saved,) I was pretty happy with how everything turned out, but Lita was tremendous; "About Respect" was about the best single promo on the boards this week, edging out Hayden's second, whose name eludes me. "Let's Talk" completely nailed the tone it was aiming for, too. How the hell does she put out so much good stuff for all her characters?! "America's Next Brick Shark" was amazing, too. Of course, there was a lot of good stuff up and down the RP board from everyone. Loved the variation on the Hart vs. Austin finish in the opener; as well as Sak giving up on wrestling to try and brawl with Helena; completely logical and really helped sell them as being two completely different motivating factors. Loved it. As always, a pleasure working with Wight. I'm sure he must be bored of my blabbering by now. Jeez, what a show. |
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| ratedgdr | Feb 5 2017, 12:28 AM Post #6 |
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And I'm right back to where I was a year ago. I've hit a wall again. Only this time it's going to be damn near impossible to rebound. Add to that the fact that I suddenly can't do a decent promo to save my life and I really have no idea what to do now. |
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| Digitalwheelin | Feb 5 2017, 12:42 AM Post #7 |
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I'm going to edit this post a little later tonight with complete feedback on all the matches. I just wanted to quickly say, the RPs for the match Alexander was involved in were absolutely incredible. Lita and Hayden both knocked it out of the park without a doubt. I can't really speak on my own RPs for obvious reasons. Lol. I think that's the most fun I've had with RPs in a long time. I loved the whole match and speaking purely as a fan, it's great to see Johnny retain, but it would have been just as awesome to see Dream take it in the finals. There's so much for me to use in RPs and everything just based on the match alone. Amazing job on the show from what I've read so far. More feedback to come. |
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| Lita Maivia | Feb 5 2017, 12:46 AM Post #8 |
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I appreciate those kind words, Dai. I really do. Even if you're clearly one of the only people who feel that way. Haha. |
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| Leucippides | Feb 5 2017, 02:54 AM Post #9 |
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Who iz dis Black Mage?
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I'm honestly stunned that Colin won against Alastor. I mean, I did believe it could go either way but still things to me were edging Alastor's way the more I thought about it. Still, it was a fun time and...I can't really say much about the match itself given that I wrote it. Um, good coding job? lol I've said this before but I'll post it up again; really enjoyed the triple threat from the preshow. For what was there I still found enough to work with so it's good there. Sucks there wasn't much to go by on Marilyn and Paris, but life does tend to happen.Congrats to all and hopefully everyone had as much fun as I did over the past couple weeks. Also, to save from double posting, finally got Crystal her own twitter. Yay! Not much there, used an older account. Still, it's something.
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| BanalityBob | Feb 5 2017, 04:14 AM Post #10 |
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This was an amazing couple weeks of hard work from everyone that led to an absolutely fantastic show. Promos are usually really well written because we have a fantastic group here, but everyone was on point this cycle. I don't get ratedgr and Lita's comments about doubting their work. I saw nothing that I thought of as less than great effort. Artists always doubt their own work, I guess. So, on to the show and stuffs. First off, I'm humbled and pleased over the good feedback I've gotten on Los Templarios Magicos and Freakshow. So excited to get to retain the Rising Championship even though Adam posted a killer promo, and kudos that it was worked into a fantastic match. There are so many pieces with the promo banter between Kris and Freakshow, Freakshow's momager, and Paris showing up, and it was all handled really well in a way that built match tension instead of gumming it up. The Pre-Volt was really cool build into the show and a great way to fit in the huge roster we have. Short results were cool to wet our appetites for the big show the next day, and even though a few of the matches were foregone conclusions due to no-shows, the ones that were contested were hotly contested. On to the main show. The Brittany vs Sakura match was super hype. The promos this cycle for both competitors were so good that I had no clue who would win and honestly wouldn't have cared if it went the other way. Both are champion material, and I look forward to Brittany's fight back to the top. All of the Joe Stanton promos got me pumped to have him here. As a newbie who really has no clue who he is, I'm still excited. The Second Chance Showdown was a really cool culmination of the bad blood between Colin and Alastor. It was a brutal match, and I'm looking forward to seeing the fallout in the Rising Division and seeing where both go from here. Dat Shibuya Death Match doe. I was tentatively excited for it, mostly because I'm a huge NBE:COMPLEX fan and this seems like the bullshit they live for. The commentators having no clue what to make of it and the whole “Your winners? By whatever… " ending cracked me up. Another note on the Rising Championship match. It was fantastic. Loved it. The commentary was great. The Tag Champs match was chaotic in a great way. All three teams are so good, and there is so much storyline leading up to it that was integrated that I tip my hat to Craig for writing it. I loved how the dirty fighting and Coulter/Badd Breed storylines converged in the Fighting Spirit match. The Crew confirmed they are awful heels again, and I look forward to what this is heating up into. The double jeopardy match was just a flat out amazing read through and through. I don't have much else to say. It was just flat out good. Great even. It's a shame that there weren't Helena promos leading into the Hellcat's finale, especially since it was so well written that it would have had me on the edge of my seat if I didn't already know the ending. Congrats to the champs, congrats to everyone who wrote a promo, and massive kudos to the writers and especially Craig. Absolute highlights of my week for reading are as follows (in no especial order): -Clering teh Roadblock (Alpha Wolves vs NBE was super fun to read the back and forth) -Hello (The Dream basically imposing himself into the conversation was just...I dunno, it made me root for him) -Fighting Evil By Moonlight (this felt like an asides scene from my favorite graphic novel series, Sandman but like in a way that takes away a lot of Gaiman's pretention and keeps his awesomeness) -Done (the thought that the Brick Sharks were breaking up did bad things to my heart. Just saying) I'm so proud to be part of this board with the writing talent and ability to throw a show like y'all do. Time to be a cheerleader for a minute, but you're all awesome so please don't get discouraged. Sure there could always have been a better promo, but the ones you all are turning out are really really good and if you're stuck, reach out with what you're stuck on. I'll be here if people wanna talk. Or make roleplays with. |
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| Minister Wighty | Feb 5 2017, 04:33 AM Post #11 |
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What an incredible show. I haven't read a show this coherent since the oooooold days. The days of TigerDriver and Fearod. I'm serious; fucking obscenely good show. I apologized elsewhere, but I'll do it again here. I've been sick for most of the week, what few waking hours I've had have been strenuously roleplaying with Dai and occasionally wedging in some time to play Street Fighter V or Overwatch... I've barely even really eaten this last week. Which, I do feel about five or ten pounds lighter. That's dandy. I'm sure it won't last, but it's nice. Anyhow, I really didn't think my matches were as short as they ended up being in comparison to the others on PreVolt. My bad. I also wanted to help out more by taking the three-way tag match, but I wasn't sure how well I'd be after the ten hours of sleep I had following writing the PreVolt matches. Turns out, better than I thought. Sorry. I also need to step up my game around here. I walked away when I opened up Neon Generation and while I'm enjoying what's going on over here, a lot of the time I feel bad I'm not doing more here, when this fed does so much for me. I need to find a balance, so bear with me while I attempt to do that. Craig, I'd be happy to take a few matches off your hands this week. PM me with the details. Short results only, please. Now the show... The opener was INCREDIBLE. FUCKING INCREDIBLE. It was a main event. Period. Match of the year candidate already. I feel like it brought Brittany to a higher echelon of skill, and really cemented her legitimization, even though she didn't walk away with the victory. I hate that the matches had to happen in the order they did, because I feel like Brittany deserved that literal end-of-the-show main event spot. The Shibuya Death Match was ugly. Graphic, ECW... hell, CZW. It was brutal and angry, and it was fucking fantastic. I love how the commentary team just... couldn't. I loved every spot, and I thought the finish was great. Sticky brings out the fight in his opponents or steamrolls over them, one of the two. Glad to have not been mowed down. Watching Kim break down was amazing. The running storyline through the show really gave it a backbone. I liked how Michael Hayden, Nightmare, and Los Templarios were involved; it helps the consistency of the show and make it feel like a real thing, like how you'd see Michael P.S. Hayes or Sgt. Slaughter backstage at a WWE show, or specific mid-carders getting beat down backstage or whatever. I also liked the Dream/Amazing and Amazing/Blackwell promos. I'm glad Mercedes is back in some capacity. Bleak really does a great job at showcasing his diverse skillset with her. It's really easy for Eversol to get subsumed by Nathaniel Alexander, and characters like Mercedes and Vicky Veil in NGIW really let Bleak's writing shine. Tag-Team Championship match played out a little different than I thought it would, but I did love all of Bob's spots. There were a couple of places where the wording was just so perfect that I couldn't have written it better myself. So maybe it's for the best that I didn't. It sure as hell wouldn't have been this long. ATN looked strong, Sharks looked tenacious, and The Lords retained. Moving on to V-Day I face my toughest opponent yet... ... ME. I kid, I'm honestly surprised either of the other teams didn't take it here. Glad to see Eversol and Freakshow retain, and if The Dream didn't get to win, Johnny Amazing was the right guy to hold the belt at the end of the show. Phenomenal stuff, my fellows. Simply spectacular. My hats off to all of you. |
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| Dai | Feb 5 2017, 01:10 PM Post #12 |
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In addition to the matches, the hype packages throughout both shows were tremendous. Excellent work. Gutted that the Walking Man didn't get billed as an FIW and NGIW Tag Champion, but hey ho. That whole segment was excellent. Would have cut the narrative text out if I'd have known I'd be the only one. |
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| Lita Maivia | Feb 5 2017, 02:33 PM Post #13 |
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At least you were asked to participate. I have at least 5 characters off the top of my head to interact heavily with Joe Stanton and no invite. Feels like Regina George's pool party and I'm Janis Ian.
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| Lita Maivia | Feb 5 2017, 06:18 PM Post #14 |
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I'm so glad to see such great feedback for this show. I know Craig put a lot of work into building this up and a lot of work into producing a quality show. Big thank you to all of the writers for this and PreVolt. Taking that on really allowed Craig to focus on extra little touches that made this show stand out against the already incredible events recently put out. I am honored and thrilled to still be FIW Champion after this event. Everyone in Double Jeopardy knocked it out of the park. I loved how every character was different from each other. Despite Clay and Nathaniel both being in the Crew, they had very distinct personalities and mindsets going into this match; which was reflected in their roleplays. Johnny and the Dream were both playing a determined face role, but I feel like Hayden and I portrayed different versions. Dream felt overlooked while Johnny was being looked at but underestimated. It was a lot of fun to RP and the match unfolded fantastically. I really enjoyed the Johnny/Dream final. I actually expected a Johnny/Nathaniel one so that was a pleasant surprise. Hayden has really been doing great work with the Dream and I was happy to see that rewarded even though he didn't win the belt. I'd be lying if I said the Hellcats title result doesn't disappoint me. I worked hard to get Brittany there and have it yanked out from under her is incredibly disheartening. I reached out for some feedback on her, but it was honestly not helpful in the slightest. If anyone has anything helpful for Brittany moving forward or any ideas you'd like to help me work with her; I'd be grateful to have them. I'll work with anybody as long as the ideas are there and fit. Congrats to Dai on continuing to dominate with Sakura. I wish the very best of luck to whoever challenges her next because it won't be easy. You are in for the fight of your life. I did have fun writing the opening Hellcats title match. I wasn't sure at first when I started but I really got into after a while and I feel like it was one of the better matches I've written. I'm quite proud of what I've managed to produce from the Brittany/Sakura trilogy and despite losing more of them than winning; I look back on them fondly. The Tag Team title match was absolute chaos and I loved every minute of it. I really hate myself for doing the Brick Sharks the way I have. It hurts my heart to have them at odds, but everything has to change and evolve over time. I don't ever want to be the person who is writing the same character from a year ago. Johnny comes dangerously close, but I hope his evolution hasn't gone unnoticed. He's quite subtle, I suppose. EDIT: I forgot to say thank you for all the awards I picked up. Blown away by them. I don't think I won much of anything last year, so this was mind-blowing. Johnny cleaned up and even the Brick Sharks and Kim won some! You guys are so sweet! |
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| Steve | Feb 5 2017, 08:30 PM Post #15 |
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What a show that was! Solid show top to bottom. Thank you to everyone who wrote (pats self on back :P) and Craig for everything else he contributed. Lots a great promos on the show, thanks to all who took the time to write those. I really had a good time writing the FSC match and I hope it is enjoyed by all, especially those involved. I wasn't completely sure how to write Mercedes as a referee. As for the tag title match, I'm a bit let down I didn't win the tag titles. I really don't feel like a lot of effort was given all around for this match in terms of RP's. It just kinda felt blah to me. I'm grateful that a compromise was able to be made on the finish and in the end ATN were able to serve their purpose in the match while still remaining to look strong and also progressing stories into the following week(s). The long awaited return of Jack Manson Jr....or not. Ok so I'm going to address this again as I did with Lita in private and I'm going to do something I tried to stray away from in private. When Brittany originally won the Hellcat title I voted for her to win. When Brittany lost the Hellcats title I voted for Sakura to win. I didn't elaborate to Craig why I made my decision because quite frankly it just came down to personal preference. There is really nothing to feedback because both Lita and Dai are phenomenal writers. There is nothing that was done wrong that made me decide Sakura over Brittany. In the end it came down to me preferring Sakura's RP's better and it was just slightly better. Congrats to all the winners and condolences to all those who did not. Do not let your losses discourage you. We have such an amazingly talented group of writers here and judging some of these match ups are down to a coin toss (not literally). |
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| Hayden | Feb 5 2017, 09:42 PM Post #16 |
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I want to start by saying congratulations not only to the winners, but to everyone involved both with PreVolt and Nensai Senjou. I think we found an early contender for next year's Show of The Year. I've spoken about Marilyn's showing before, but I want to again apologize to Leu. The deadline snuck up on me quickly, and combined with writer's block for the first week, I just wasn't able to get anything up for her. I look forward to seeing how you do in the Trial Series; I'll be rooting for you. As for Dream.... hoo boy. Let me start by saying I'm as amazed as Lita that Dream made it to the finals. Nate absolutely knocked it out of the park this cycle, and I was fully convinced that he would not only beat me, but win the title outright. Nate's done a hell of a job since his return and continues to blow me away with his promos. As for Dream, I mentioned before that it was more impoertant to develop the character than to win. That said, I was hoping against hope that somehow Dream would pull out the victory once it got down to him vs. Johnny. The promos had a definite sense of Dream fighting to not be overlooked, and making it to the final two did a lot to show that he does belong in the upper echelon. I've always had a bit of a fear that a character like Dream was a bit too silly to main event, so to get here was a huge accomplishment. Lita has done amazing work with Johnny, I just reeeeeeally want that belt. One day. One day. Lita really has done amazing work with all I her characters tho cycle, which is a testament to her as a writer. I was fully invested in the saga of the Brick Sharks, both this cycle and since they lost the tag titles, and to see them come close to breaking up had me feeling some type of way. To see them reunited and back on good terms brought me a lot of joy, and I can't wait to see where they go from here (maybe a Caleb-Marilyn thing, I don't know. Just throwing that out there). Happy to see Jack Jr. back, as I have been eagerly waiting do him to wage his war against the Crew. Speaking of which, The Crew is gathering more and more enemies, so I'm curious to see how they deal with them moving forward. |
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| Lita Maivia | Feb 5 2017, 10:38 PM Post #17 |
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I feel bad that Steve looks disappointed about Jack Manson Jr.'s return. I apologize for not mentioning it in my feedback. Sorry, sorry. A lot of selfish business up there. Eek! I was a huge fan of Jack Manson Jr. and I was devastated when Steve had to take time off with him. I still miss him as part of the Crew, but he's way too difficult to control. As evident by this event. The whole story of his return, I was skeptical of at first. I thought him attacking Eversol was gonna suck some of the wind out of the story come Double Jeopardy but I am woman enough to admit that I was dead wrong. As Wight pointed out, having the running story in the show made it BIGGER and BETTER than I could have imagined. Major kudos to Steve who organized almost every detail of this (with some great help from the genius Craig himself). Exceptional story telling and I feel like it did so much for Jack Jr. and the story of the Crew. So honored to have been involved. |
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| BleakInfinity | Feb 6 2017, 08:33 AM Post #18 |
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I'm barely getting around to this cause of a busy weekend so apologies for that. I'd first just like to say that in my judging I wrote the phrase, "This could go either way" for almost every single match on the card. There were so many that were just too hard to call and I went with what I felt made sense for the stories. Some went the way I voted and others didn't but I can't imagine how hard it must have been for Craig to ultimately make the decisions. I'd like to just give a big thank you to everyone that voted in the FIW awards. The fact that Eversol was voted "Heel of the year" was awesome. I'm glad my attempt to make just the worst piece of shit in the world didn't go unnoticed. Lol. That women's match. Wow. That's a perfect 3 for 3 in the Sakura-Brittany saga. All of their matches have such intensity to them that you don't want it to end and you wish like hell that they could both be champion. This match should've been the last match on the card. I absolutely loved the Joe Stanton segment with all of the quotes from the people that knew him well. I would've loved for Eversol to have said something too but the wrestlers that spoke on him were great. I'm super happy to have Nir in FIW and Joe fuckin' Stanton at that. I loved the promo where Kim was asked about Joe. The callback to NGIW was awesome. Wouldn't mind a Lioncock return at some point too. Hmmm. What's going on with Marilyn and Caleb? That promo and Marilyn's shyness was adorable as fuck. That Deathmatch was absolutely disgusting. In a good way. I kind of miss the violent matches from the ECC days of Slam and the ones we had in NGIW too, honestly. This deathmatch and then the promo we got from Rob Garcia makes me believe we may get them a little more often now. Of course if they happen every week they'll lose their novelty but I would like to see them a little more often than we get right now. The Brick Sharks story has been awesome to read. So much character development but it's breathed so much life into the tag team division. I hope to continue to see it growing. Steve did an outstanding job on FSC match. And to answer your question, you absolutely did capture Mercedes perfectly. That's what kept running through my head while reading it was that Mercedes was portrayed exactly as I would've liked. As for the match itself I liked just how even both Holland and Eversol were and then the brawl at the end with The Crew and Badd Breed that got Kim to use the mace. It's just what you'd expect with The Crew getting involved. I loved the Jack Jr. return. Steve shouldn't feel disappointed about his return. Him attacking Eversol and then Nathaniel later sets up his upcoming feud with The Crew perfectly. I can't wait to see it all play out. That's a perfect segue for...Dream and Johnny being the last two was refreshing. It's rare when you get a cool face vs face match where the fans are split on who they want to see win or maybe are even going back and forth on it. That was a great match. To anything I forgot I apologize. I'm trying to do all of this by memory and more than likely left something out but it wasn't on purpose. As others have stated, this was just such a great event with great RPs and everyone did a phenomenal job. Edit: Forgot to mention how sweet that new skin looks |
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| Digitalwheelin | Feb 6 2017, 08:46 AM Post #19 |
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Wow, that’s huge praise, thank you for that. Originally, I'd said I'd edit my previous post, but I didn't want the thanks to Hayden to go unnoticed, so I may as well add my feedback here. Holy. Crap. This show was one of the best I’ve read, hands down. I loved every bit of it. Everybody worked their asses off in RPs and the matches themselves were all bad ass. Props to absolutely everybody who had a hand in not only “working” for the show in RPs, but putting it together with writing the matches and whatnot. Everything was amazing. The opening bumper segment describing the semi-main and main event matches was a great way to start things off and it immediately amped up that “big show” feel right off the bat. That was awesome. I completely agree with Wight that the Brittany vs. Sakura match that opened the show was absolutely incredible and easily main-event caliber. It could have easily been the match that capped everything off perfectly. Right from the start, you got a sense of the urgency and the intensity with the title being on the line and both Brittany and Sakura trying to prove themselves. The entire match itself flowed really well and it was an easy, enjoyable read. The Helena/Sakura match that did cap off the show was equally as good as the opener. It’s crazy Sakura was able to capture the title again, but Dai’s RP’ing is always off the chart. All the RP’s for the opener and main event matches were amazing and I don’t envy the judges in the slightest. Lol. I’m glad Tom asked me to contribute to the testimonials promo for Joe Stanton. When he’d approached me about it, he said he just needed a short paragraph, but admittedly I was tempted to do a bit more just because I wasn’t sure what I did give would be enough. Lol. Good to see it fit perfectly with what everyone else did. Lol. I hated the FIW End of Year Awards because neither I nor Nathaniel Alexander won for any of it. -_- Lol, totally kidding, obviously. In all seriousness, congrats to everybody who won. Glad to see a majority of the ones I voted for actually win awards. The Alastor Saintclaire vs. Colin Stiles match was another fun one to read. The Big Bear Slam from the apron down to the floor was a great spot. Great to see Colin Stiles take the victory on that one, though a win for Alastor would have been just as good in my book. I really like both characters, so it’ll be interesting to see what direction they each go in coming out of this match. I liked the interaction between Marilyn Lee Cross and Caleb Claudel. Wight mentioned earlier how Bleak’s writing shines when he gets to write Mercedes and Vicky. I completely agree with that, but I’d also say that applies to Hayden with…well, pretty much all his characters. Lol. The interaction between The Sharks and Marilyn in the short promo was really funny. Good stuff. The fact that a match has to begin with a disclaimer from FIW regarding injury or damage to personal property belonging to fans pretty much says it all with the Shibuya Death Match. Lol. I don’t think “brutal” is sufficient to describe that match. It definitely came off like a CZW type match. I was never really a fan of CZW, but I did enjoy this match, though. Definitely looking forward to seeing where things go after that. Besides the hospital, obviously. Lol. I loved the mini promo between Eversol and Brittany. The imagery alone in that piece was more than enough to convey a lot of emotion and nothing needed to be said at all. Great job from Lita and Bleak on that one. Really good promo from Lita and Hayden again. Lol. This time with Michael Hayden and Kim. It was a good way to set up for the matches where Kim would be at ringside. Michael asking Kim to join him for drinks while coming off self-assured at the end was a nice touch too. After seeing that, Alexander already asked her about that over Twitter. Lol! The Rising title match was so much fun to write. I hope Bob and Adam both liked what I did with the characters. I tried to incorporate the story they had going in their RP’s as much as possible. I made sure to set it up at the very beginning and try and show them one-upping each other, but ultimately ending up even so that everybody comes out looking strong. Hopefully you guys both have something to build from for your respective characters moving forward. I love how a majority of people on the roster are still so concerned that The Coulter Crew are going to interfere in their matches or somehow cause trouble for them. Lol. The promo between Mercedes and Johnny Amazing was one of many good examples of that. The banter between the two characters was great, too. I really like what Steve has been doing with the Albanian Terror Network and Frank Manson leading into the tag title match. Lita was right, the tag title match did turn into absolute chaos and it was awesome to read. Lol. Hitchen had it right; it’s as if the ATN don’t care about winning or losing, they just want to hurt people. The match was a perfect example of that. Great match and I liked the bits involving Harley and Jericho’s relationship and how Caleb feels about it. That was a nice touch. Yet another segment involving Kim. Lol. The interview with Toby was a great piece of character development for Kim and it actually gives me a few ideas for the storyline between her and Alexander. That was great, and it’ll be interesting to see how that all plays out. Like the main event, the Eversol/Holland match had a ton of amazing RP’s from both Will and Bleak. You guys absolutely rocked it and the war of words was nothing short of intense. I think the match itself carried over that intensity and the dirty finish that allowed Eversol to keep the title was perfect. The aftermath with Jack Manson Jr. appearing was completely unexpected and it was bad ass to see that play out. The promo that followed with Kim Coulter confronting Orion Oldriod was great. It definitely amped up the chaos in a way and showed just how easily Jack Jr. was able to throw a wrench into so many things. I totally agree that having that whole angle run through the entire show added to that “big show” feel. The frantic feeling that came through at the end of the match when Jack Jr. interfered definitely carried over into the following segment. And Kim Coulter ordering Orion to have someone protect Nathaniel at the end of that promo was a nice touch too. ![]() Great pre-match promo from Johnny and Dream before the main event. Given what Dream said in the “I’m Still Standing” promo, it’ll be interesting to see how that, the pre-match segment and the match itself all affect Dream moving forward. You definitely got a sense that the friendship between Dream and Johnny was strong, but with a second loss to Johnny and with everything Dream said in that aforementioned promo, you gotta wonder what’s going through his head after that. Wow, that main event was amazing! As I said earlier, all the RPs for the match were incredible. It was so much fun RP’ing for it. It’s always a lot of fun working with Lita either against her or along with her on various stories. Though, I much prefer working together rather than as opponents cause 9 times out of 10 she kills me in RPs. Lol! Working with Craig in the co-op RPs was tons of fun too. I love that both Clay Krueger and Nathaniel Alexander try and use the mind games on people, and there was no shortage of that in the co-op stuff between those two characters. In this particular match, Hayden brought fire, too. That RP “I’m Still Standing” was one of the best I’ve seen from Hayden for Dream. It brought out a completely different side of the character and added so much depth to him because people were overlooking him. I’d love to see where Hayden takes the character after having gotten to the final stage of the Double Jeopardy match. The Joe Stanton promo just before the main event match was great. I’m really glad to see Joe Stanton in FIW. I was a big fan of the character in NGIW and Tom’s RP’ing was always awesome, even as Lioncock. I’m excited to see what he can do in FIW and see what sort of stories we get to see Joe Stanton be a part of. |
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| BleakInfinity | Feb 6 2017, 09:17 AM Post #20 |
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| That Darn Seph | Feb 8 2017, 11:37 PM Post #21 |
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I apologize for late feedback, but its here! A great show from top to bottom, congrats to Dai on winning the HC back, poor Brittany, but with how well Bienshi's promos have been its no wonder. Kudos. Loved my match with Colin and big thanks to Leu for writing it. I thoroughly enjoyed the read and I'm not miffed at the lost, honestly believe Stiles put forth the better promos and deserved the W. Loved the main event and honestly was surprised at the result, I figured Nathaniel would have been duking it out till the end but alas it was not meant to be. Johnny is coming off as a great champion and that defense is a solid notch to further cement himself as a big time player. I'm looking forward to see this Joe Stanton in action, he sounds like a great wild card addition to the roster. Big thanks to all the writers of the show who we couldn't have pulled this show off without. When I get a laptop I promise to help taking matches as I so do miss writing them. |
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