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Topic Started: Apr 11 2017, 11:02 PM (355 Views)
Craig
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Matches: Jes, Craig & Wight (Rob apologies)
Promos: Bleak, Craig, Lita, Nate, Crys... have I forgot anybody?

Bit of a cut-and-shut episode. I've been saving this one for a while (you'll see what I mean) to move the Alpha Wolves into the Crew battle so to accomplish it is very satisfying.

Rob sent his apologies, he was unable to write so you'll see which matches I've cobbled something together. I had Jes down for Rebel vs. Jade but that never arrived, not sure what happened there.

Bit of a brief feedback topic, what I expected to be a quick night has sort of gone a bit wrong.

Next week RATC, will post a longer feedback tomorrow. Let me know of any coding issues and I'll respond to PM's when I can in the morning. Will update title histories if somebody helpful doesn't come along first.

Any thoughts?
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JesTheBarber
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Hey sorry. I am in the middle of writting the match, my boss came in to my othr job today and I couldnt use my phone or tablet. IM writing it now.
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Hayden
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I'm just gonna pop in and apologize for no-showing this week. I kept trying to write a Dream promo, but nothing came to me. Maybe its burnout over last weekend or something, but I couldn't get anything out.
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MrOtaku2399
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i actually read the majority of the show for once. I tried to skim the rest of what i didn't read and i have to say this really feels like some sort of special or something. We had allot of good stuff this week! I'm happy to have won both of my matches too. I got confused a bit with the tag match with Yuki seeing kira in the match as well but than the end came and i think i understand that bit now. Happy to get things really starting with my trio now. I liked the segments i read as well. The thing with courtney and stilles is getting interesting. I like the staging Kira thing too. Who ever attacked holland and manson jr are smart for framing some one else. good show guys and next week should be awesome too.
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I'll be spending most of the RP period in the Kansas City area for my vacation but I'm going to haul my laptop down there with me. So I will try to get something (or somethings) out during then.
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I want to apologize to the handlers of the characters whose matches I was supposed to write. I also want to apologize to Craig and everyone that I let down. I am helping my roommate move this week and the internet here got disconnected. When I finally did GET the matches written and had internet access I accidently deleted them.

I let everyone down an I feel terrible. I try to be a man of my word and I am beyond sorry. I hope ya'll can forgive me. I promise it won't happen again.

Sincerely, Rob.
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ratedgdr,Apr 11 2017
07:34 PM
I'll be spending most of the RP period in the Kansas City area for my vacation but I'm going to haul my laptop down there with me. So I will try to get something (or somethings) out during then.

Stay safe on your vacation. There are crazy people out there! :palm:
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Rob Storm,Apr 11 2017
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I want to apologize to the handlers of the characters whose matches I was supposed to write. I also want to apologize to Craig and everyone that I let down. I am helping my roommate move this week and the internet here got disconnected. When I finally did GET the matches written and had internet access I accidently deleted them.

I let everyone down an I feel terrible. I try to be a man of my word and I am beyond sorry. I hope ya'll can forgive me. I promise it won't happen again.

Sincerely, Rob.

Don't worry man things like this happen at times to the best of us.
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I liked the twist with the Tag Titles. That was a fun thread to follow.

Good show overall. I have a lot on my mind at the moment so my feedback is a bit sparse. Craig, really, next time let me know if you need some last-minute help writing stuff. You don't need to carry this burden alone and I'm happy to help when and where I can. You can even DM me @MinisterWighty if you need my immediate attention; it sends me a notification on my phone.

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As Rebel is leaving after her match she reaches the stage alongside Hikou and Katriona comes bounding out of the entrance showing her energy. Rebel gets in her face for a moment before Hikou, seemingly sober, pulls her away and Katriona shakes it off to spring her way down to the ring for the upcoming Hellcats Showcase tag team match.


... what was this about?
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Just setting up their match next week.

Originally it was to be Jade vs. Crystal for the Hellcats title at RATC to follow up Jade's win over Sakura before Legend so that spot was in my notes for them as the announcement would have come earlier in the show. With Jade on absence, it seemed to make sense to keep that in but switch it and the bridge across both matches was Rebel vs. Katriona taking place. I did actually consider Rebel vs. Crystal next week but with the roleplays for Legend in mind the triple threat won out.

It's one of those, if it goes somewhere and addd to next week's match, great, if not then no harm done as Rebel is a confrontational sort in my eyes anyway.
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Good stuff. Thanks for clearing that up!
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I'd like to apologize to Craig, and the handlers of Jade and Rebel. I usually write my promos and matches at one of my jobs, today my boss decided to come in and stay in and sit next to me and talk,, I thouhgt I could still get it done after 1. but then she asked me to stay until 2, then 3 and then I got home at 4. I am really sorry about this, I in no way did this on purpose. It wont happen again as I'll write them the night prior.

So again, Craig, I am sorry.
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Craig,Apr 11 2017
06:02 PM
Promos: Bleak, Craig, Lita, Nate, Crys... have I forgot anybody?

Just forgot to list me! But no worries on that front.

I'd also like to extend my own offer on picking up some last-minute matches if necessary. I don't think I've written a match in over a year and I've only written one or two ever, but I'd be open to giving it a shot. Whatever helps.

Been really exhausted, so I haven't gotten to read the whole show yet but what I have been able to read is great. I'll hopefully get back in this thread and leave some actual feedback.
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Sorry for the no show with Jack this week. I just haven't been feeling it lately. Sit down at the computer, have some general ideas, but nothing comes out.
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Steve,Apr 12 2017
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Sit down at the computer, have some general ideas, but nothing comes out.

Ditto for me on that with Nathaniel. I've been feeling like that for the past couple weeks, actually. I feel like the solo RP I put out was craptastic. The co-op RP I did with Bleak was a lot better, but Bleak definitely carried that one. I'm kind of considering creating a second character just to give myself an outlet with something fresh to work with. I'll keep Nathaniel, of course, but I figure a second character could give me something to run with when I hit a wall with Alexander. I already have an idea in mind for a gimmick, I just need a rep.

Feedback for the show to come soon. And this time I definitely won't forget to post like I did for ROAL. Lol.
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Digitalwheelin,Apr 12 2017
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I feel like the solo RP I put out was craptastic. The co-op RP I did with Bleak was a lot better, but Bleak definitely carried that one.

If it makes you feel any better, I thought the exact opposite. I've been high on Bleak's stuff lately but this week felt like kind of a drop for him, whereas this and last week for you were REALLY great.

Don't be so hard on yourself. :)
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Digitalwheelin,Apr 12 2017
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I feel like the solo RP I put out was craptastic. The co-op RP I did with Bleak was a lot better, but Bleak definitely carried that one.

If it makes you feel any better, I thought the exact opposite. I've been high on Bleak's stuff lately but this week felt like kind of a drop for him, whereas this and last week for you were REALLY great.

Don't be so hard on yourself. :)

That definitely does help, thanks for that.
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I was talking to some one earlier this week, and it seems since Mania every one has kinda lost their groove or been side tracked. I am going to TRY AND GET MY GROOVE BACK!!! WHOS WITH ME??!
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I kinda felt normal about last week. Was I normal last week? I don't know, sometimes it's hard following the flow of your own groove. Mostly I was writing for fun, especially on the second RP. Ah well.

That said, it didn't bother me on the end result of the tag. That match itself was entertaining and to see Crystal still having not perfected her jackhammer was a plus. Just glad it's a remembering point even if I've been neglecting mention of it in my roleplays. :P

Colin and Alastor's affair was good but just sort of ended, didn't it? Or was it just the way I read it? Still trying to find my way with him, but I'll get somewhere. :)

When I first brought in Colin I was a little iffy about integrating him in any way with Crystal or even just Courtney. But it's fun writing him with the latter so I hope people are enjoying it.

Overall, I've been having fun lately so thank you all in helping with that. :)
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Generally, good show--wasn't expecting Steve to no show but I guess he's kinda in a slump like I am right now. I think it'll turn around for both of us.

Question though: Craig, I sent you a brand new bio for Mr. Misery, including a new look and everything else, but it doesn't seem to have gotten to you. Is everything good with that or do I need to send it again?
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I did make it through, I'll update that at some point this week. Just saved the more commentator reaction for next week, when he's up against the person who in-part at least caused it.
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Got you, that makes perfect sense. Thanks for the clarification.
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is there a reason or something that happened for Bob to be in a cage in the Kira vs Freakshow match? or did i miss something?
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MrOtaku2399,Apr 13 2017
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is there a reason or something that happened for Bob to be in a cage in the Kira vs Freakshow match? or did i miss something?

Craig is a booking genius and this is pure-spun gold?
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Ok that seems pretty legit than.
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