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Just some friendly feedback
Topic Started: Jul 26 2017, 08:53 PM (79 Views)
depressedbear
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Hey guys. Obviously very new here, but my RP's been up for a few days and wanted to know what you guys thought of it. I haven't actively RP'd in about 3 years so I was hoping I didn't fall far off the horse. All criticism is welcome!
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MrOtaku2399
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It looks good to me dude. Some parts were funny too. The puke thing an dMcdonalds line. I think color would be a big help though, but htat's just me. Do you and you should be fine.
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Mjölnir
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It was pretty solid overall. Like Otaku said, I'd look into coding it a little more. Just make the text pop a touch. Besides that, it was well done.

While I did find the Henry shenanigans humorous in this instance and thought it helped convey what you were going for. I do hope he'll have better control of himself in the future between the puking & peeing. *laughs*
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