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Burn me a new one!
Topic Started: Oct 1 2017, 09:32 AM (68 Views)
Dr. Shrapnel
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Hey you.

So I've just posted my first roleplay in probably five years. And while it's clear that I'm a little rusty, I'd love to get some feedback on what you guys thought. Dr. Shrapnel is a new character that I've been excited to bring to life in character, I'm curious to see what you think of him and Nursey as a duo.

I welcome all forms of critique so I completely welcome you to tear me a new one.

Thanks folks
xoxo
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MrOtaku2399
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It's very different then what most do around here. Kinda cool, also did i mention i love your character? think i have, but i love your pic base man! Looked good though from what i've read.
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Dr. Shrapnel
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Hey thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate the praise. I also love Dr. Shraps, he's a lot more interesting than my last character.

It'll take me a bit to adapt to everyone's style - but I'm excited to see how everyone works.
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MrOtaku2399
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Yeah, he reminds me allot of how Kira used to be. Minus the crazy doctor thing,lol. It should be interesting seeing how things go in the future for sure man!
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Minister Wighty
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Second person can be hella difficult to write in, but I think in general your stuff is really good. You cut off before anything too bad, you sell the characters well, and I really enjoyed it in general.
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