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Tuesday Night of TERROR Feedback; Good show, all.
Topic Started: Oct 23 2017, 02:48 AM (146 Views)
Minister Wighty
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Heeeeyyyy a good week! I love it.

Apologies for the lateness. Nir had some work stuff come up unexpectedly, but as usual a big 'ol thanks to him for writing the show. I know if I did it, it wouldn't be NEAR as a good.

Bio pics are updated, and color-coordinated to fonts, which are used in the bio as well. Don't know how long that will be the case, but it looks nice for now. I'm waiting a bit to make sure all the new signees RP though I have a good feeling about most of them. I'll be doing the restricted lists sometime this week. I might set them apart. I dunno. I don't feel our current list is efficient enough. Or maybe it's too hard to read, I dunno.

I actually have some feedback this week. Not necessarily about this week alone, but stuff I've seen. If I don't mention it specifically don't feel like I'm hating or don't love you or whatever. I just don't have anything specific to say.

Erik Erratik is probably the best character I've seen from Erisa. Good work. I think he still need some refinement? But I feel like that will come with time. Of course, I say that and she didn't show this week. :/

Fallen Goddesses are solid characters. I dig the Twitter interactions we had this week, those were super good. If you could write a little more, and put a little more character like that into your weekly RPs I think you'd see a lot more success. Like, the effort between the two RPs you did this week was great. Keep it up!

Special thanks to Dustin for being cool about me accidentally double-booking him when he requested to only have one of his characters booked per week. Hope the surprise was worth it!

Corbin and Cory could really benefit from splitting up their RPs. I'd rather read two three-page RPs than one six-page one. Not that those numbers are in any way accurate, but you get my drift. It helps refresh the palette and such. I think you guys do interesting stuff, and I think you'd be all the more effective if you just sorta spread it out more. Especially if that meant you could get more stuff in earlier in the week.

Sticky; I have little to say other than keep up the amazing work. I just wanted you to feel recognized. :)

Hallowe'en party thread will be posted shortly. If you've never been in one of our party threads, everyone is invited and it's a great place to interact in character with your friends. We did this a lot more back before Twitter, but some of them still deserve to be upheld for tradition's sake and posterity, if nothing else.

IF YOU HAVE A FRIEND WHO IS SIGNING UP FOR FIW YOU HAVE TO TELL ME BECAUSE WE HAVE ADMIN VERIFICATION ENABLED DUE TO TROLLS.

Twitter is a great way to do that. I've got about four people waiting for approval but I have no idea who they are.

A small note; if you send me a promo please code it. You know your characters' font colors a hell of a lot better than I do and a blob of uncoded promo doesn't look very good in the show. If you don't know the color codes for commentary or something that's fine. Just do your best with the obvious bold tags and such. A little effort is a LOT better than none at all.

Please leave feedback for the writers and roleplayers; they worked hard to bring you this show and they want to know what you liked and what they can do better in the future. If you have an issue with the result of your match, specifically please PM me personally and we'll discuss it. Remember; if you and the management are doing their jobs, you should win about 50% of the time. However 50/50 booking is one way to book a wrestling show, but it's not very good when it's the only way. We're all doing our best to tell stories, here. Putting over your opponent and telling a good story are more important than arbitrary points in a win/loss column.

Matches: Nir, in his infinite greatness.
Promos: Cory and Andrew, Nir, Wighty.
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Triadred
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Awesome show! Nir knocked it out of the park. I haven't got much feedback beyond that as I'm re situating myself here in FIW. Feels like I've been out of the game a little too long... or maybe I just missed role playing that much. Either way, despite the obvious rust on my role plays, it feels good to be back!
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Lita Maivia
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D'oh! I was going to offer to write Amazing/Travers, but I didn't remember the show date like I thought I did. Regardless, I hope Dustin had a good time with the surprise defense. Travers was one of the characters I always wanted Johnny to compete against so when I saw that he won the FSC I saw opportunity and jumped at the chance to get the match. I hope Travers can do something with a win over Amazing to start off his FSC reign and hopefully continue it for a long time. He's a great character and Dustin is a great handler.

It was a nice match, though it breaks my heart that Havok makes Hitchen talk trash about Johnny. *tear*
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MrOtaku2399
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Very enjoyable show this week. Fun and nice show all around. Nir continues to be the match writing god that he is and don't worry if your late a little bit, it's fine. Cool to see Johnny have "one more match" so to speak and cool to see Triadred back too. I really enjoyed going against Dr.Shrapnel this week too. SOmething about that RP got me going this week which was awesome. happy about that result too.

Oh and wighty is kira in the title match or is he a referee in it? i think i might of read that wrong and just wanna be sure with that. OH and lets kick even more ass next week guys! stay awesome.
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Dr. Shrapnel
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Like always another great show - Great to see Johnny Amazing respond to the open challenge. Loved reading the roleplays of Bloodbath and Gustav - honestly, if you think you're rusty now I'd be terrified to face you at your best. Personally, I would've loved to hear more from Havoc considering his recent takeover but I'm sure that'll be in the works from here on out.

Also, props to Otaku this week. When I joined the fed, Yuki was the character I wanted to face the most and you lived up to the hype. I'm genuinely looking forward to round two (Whenever that is).

Also, side note: The profiles look dope! 10/10 for the efforts put into it.
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MrOtaku2399
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Thank you for the kind words my good sir. I'm happy i could live up to your expectations,lol. When round two comes i'm sure it'll be even better!
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Dr. Shrapnel
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Of course it'll be better - Because I'mma win next time ;D
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and after that the rubber match will make Austin Vs Rock and Okada Vs Omega look like eva marie and lana fighting each other.
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Lita Maivia,Oct 25 2017
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D'oh! I was going to offer to write Amazing/Travers, but I didn't remember the show date like I thought I did. Regardless, I hope Dustin had a good time with the surprise defense. Travers was one of the characters I always wanted Johnny to compete against so when I saw that he won the FSC I saw opportunity and jumped at the chance to get the match. I hope Travers can do something with a win over Amazing to start off his FSC reign and hopefully continue it for a long time. He's a great character and Dustin is a great handler.

It was a nice match, though it breaks my heart that Havok makes Hitchen talk trash about Johnny. *tear*

I honestly didn't know who was the mystery opponent until I read the show. Had I known, I would have wrote a better rp for Ike. Thanks for the kind words. It's not easy rping on a phone. Especially having to code things
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