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Amore allineare; A FF 11 story
Topic Started: Apr 3 2005, 07:49 PM (476 Views)
Kitty Corpse
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Ok...I don't own FF11 but I do own the plot line!! And it's AU

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It was a sunny day as I walked to my post. I cussed at the sun for being so bloody bright. I prefer the days when it rains. Why you ask? Well for one no bloody sun and second I always loved the rain. I remember when I was a little girl I use to jump out my window and dance in the rain and always the next day I would be sick. Heh heh those where the days.

Now I guard the gates, which suck when Lord Alucard* comes back from a journey because he’s always trying to get me in bed with him. He maybe good looking but he’s a womanizer and my mother always told me to stay away from womanizers not that I care or anything it’s just that I obey the rules my mother gave me before she died…must not cry. She also said that I must follow my heart. I know it sounds stupid but it’s helped me when I’ve had to make a chose like either becoming a barter maid or a guard.

My older sister, Marry Ann was a barter maid and she hated it because she got harassed all the time besides I like to fight monsters but I’ve only fought Earth worms so far and from what I’ve heard from the other guards that’s good. Yes! I’m here! I’m at my post. Ok now I’ll just have to relieve this guy.

“Halt! Who goes there?” The guardsmen asked as he heard my footsteps.

“Your relieve!” I said as I walked closer to the guard, he had short wild brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. Mmmmm chocolate. His brown leather amour made him look fatter then he really was. His weapon of chose an axe. Why do all the guys carry axes? (Digikel: Sorry if you use an axe and a woman. Sorry if you’re a guy and don’t use an axe.)

“Wow! I didn’t now that my relieve was a sexy babe. If I had known then I would of joined sooner!” The guard said as he looked up and down at me. I placed my hands on my hips annoyed.

“Well don’t get use to it because I’m only covering someone else’s shift until they get here.” I said annoyed. The guard just looked down has he mumbled sorry.

“What’s your name?” I asked feeling bad. I’m not one of those people who can stay mad for years. I can only withstand a minute or two before forgiving them. The only person I can stay mad at for years was Lord Alucard.

“The name’s Albert Quell. What’s your name?” Albert asked as he pulled an apple out of his pouch and started eating it.

“Raine Soleil.” I told him as I looked at the wall that he was leaning on. “You should be going. You should be tried from staying up all night.” I glanced over to Albert only to see him trying to think where he heard my name before.

“Have I met you before? Because Soleil sounds familiar.” Albert said as he got a good look at me not like he didn’t before.

“You might have known my sister Marry Ann Soleil before…she was burned.” I said as I looked at the ground holding back the tears. “You…should go…home.” I told Albert after I controlled my tears.

“O…k.” Albert picked up his axe and walked off waving to me. My sister was my best friend, she was there when thieves killed our father and she was there when our mother died of a broken heart. Now she’s in an urn on my mantel. She was burned because she fell in love with an Elvaan. I kept on telling her that it was too dangerous to be seeing him, but no she just had to see him. The Elvaan comes and visits me sometimes hoping to see his love sitting in her chair next to the fire. He has to learn that she won’t come back no matter how many times he wishes she would, I did after all.

“OPEN THE GATES!” A man screamed that the other side of the gates. No I won’t open these gates for you Lord Alucard, but I did anyways. A white stallion trotted in with a Hume on his back. The Hume aka Lord Alucard had long black shinny hair and silver-blue eyes that told you how he acted…perverted. When he saw me he did his trademark; the perverted grin. How I hate him. How I just want to pull this sword out and stab him with it but I cannot because I am just a guard and he is a ‘grand’ knight.

“Why hello Raine. You look lovely as ever.” He said to me as he slid off his horse poorly. I had to hold my breath other wise I would of started laughing like there was tomorrow.

“What are you doing here my little pumpkin? Don’t you work the night shift tonight?” My left eye twitched when he called me his ‘little pumpkin’. Happy thoughts, happy thoughts.

“I’m covering someone else’s shift and yes I do work the night shift tonight.” I told him with venom in my voice. Of course Lord Alucard is a very stupid man so he didn’t hear the venom in my voice.

“I can always make that person take your shift tonight. If you know what I mean.” The idiot said to me with a perverted grin.

“May I ask why?” He usual just asks ‘do you want to spend the night with me and have some fun!?!’ to me so I knew something was different.

“Because the King is having a ball tonight and I’d like you to come.” He placed his hands on my small craves and started moving them side-to-side. People that were walking by would of thought we were together. Again must think happy thoughts.

“Why is our lord having a ball?” I really wanted to know because the king never has balls just feasts. Yes my king is a fat king.

“Because an Elvaan has become a knight for our lord and I’d like you to come and met him!” So what is he trying to tell me that I ‘like’ Elvaans because of my sister? That’s it I’m not going! But…God darn it here it comes again. That feeling where I can’t do anything until I say yes.

“Ok. I’ll see you there!” I knew that this was a mistake but I really wanted to go to a ball even if I had to dance with the bozo over here.

“I’ll make sure that the person who’s shift you’re taking takes yours!” The idiot said as he got back on his Stallion looking mighty stupid. As he trotted off I started laughing so hard that I had tears coming out of my eyes. I didn’t hear the trot sound of a mare come because I was laughing so hard.

“Is everything ok ma’am? You look like you’re crying.” Holy cow this guy’s voice is sooo sexy and soothing. I nodded my head and wiped the tears away before meeting two deep jade green eyes that I lost myself in until the guy started waving his hand in front of my eyes.

“Are you sure you’re ok?” He asked again as slid off of his mare perfectly. He was an Elvaan I could tell by his ears, they were long about what one, two feet long!?! He had a deep tan and grayish-white hair, he was tall too. My head only went to his chest, which I didn’t care just as long as I can look in to those green eyes. I just knew that my face was red as he raised an eyebrow at me.

“I’m sorry. My name is Raine Soleil and yes I’m ok. I was just laughing at something before you came along. Thank you for worrying though.” I said as I fought the blush so it’d go away. I lost miserly and he saw it too.

“The sun is very bright don’t you agree Ms. Soleil?” When he said my name I just melted right there.

“Y-yes i-it is.” Great I stuttered. Now he’s gonna think that I’m stupid.

“My name is Darien Duo it’s nice to meet you Ms. Soleil.” I realized he doesn’t know that I am a worthless guard as must nobles have called me when they pass by, others just say perverted things to me which if I was a noble myself I would of slapped them but I’m not.

“Please I do not deserve respect. I am just a guard who’s not doing her job right now!” I said with a weak smile and laugh that turned into a sigh.

“Everyone deserves respect Ms. Soleil. That is how I was brought up.” I remembered my sister and let a single tear drop. Crap now he’s gonna think I’m weak which I’m not!

“Is everything ok Ms. Soleil?” Oh my god he cares!!! Holy crap I said the words I swore I’d never say!!!!

“Yes I just remembered my older sister Marry Ann, who was burned because she loved an Elvaan.” I looked up at his face only to see his handsome face looked scared.

“Oh…well I must be going Ms. Soleil. I hope to see you tonight at the ball that is in my honor. I hope to be able to dance with you.” He gave me a weak smile and then picked my hand up and kissed it before getting onto his golden mare.

“See you tonight Ms. Soleil.” He said before he sent his mare to a trot.

“Wow! He was hot!” I muttered as I waited for this shift to be over.

Three hours later

YES!!!! I’m free!! Now I just have to change into something nice if I have anything…

At my home

“No…no…no…no…” I was looking through my sister’s clothing that her lover gave her before she died. Man almost all her dresses are cut very low. No ALL her dresses are low cut. Darn it I don’t have a dress! Oh wait I do but it was my mother’s…but I won’t get to see Darien again and he was so nice to me. Ok here comes the part where I follow my heart! See didn’t I tell you that it really works! My heart says…


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I hope ya'll like it and I'm gonna post it on E-fiction...
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Kitty Corpse
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T_T can someone plz give me a review?? >_>
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um...so its first person ^^;; im not very used to it but its goooooood -^^-
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yeah...I decided to do something different when I frist wrote this last year....>.<
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last year? oh..that not long agao...^^;;
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yeah..but I wrote it last year around this time...>.<
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oh....damn! so its being a year long....wow...^^;; took u long enough to post it.
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I know....I had forgoten about it a long time ago and then remembered about it >.<
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lolz...so u got memory losses as well....HA! its not just me ^^
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:unsure: I don't have memeory losses...I don't think I do though.... :unsure:
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..... <_< dont be too sure ^^;;
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Are you here to give me some good feedback on my story??? *Ninja sword comes out*
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Hey kitty this is Anna and I just wanted to say that this is really good!Please update soon!P.S.I loved the part where you wanted to know why the king was having a ball cuz he always has feasts yes my king is a fat king.LMAO!:lol:
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