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Together Forever
Topic Started: Jul 8 2005, 05:52 PM (171 Views)
khaingtime
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This is about a story I heard a long time ago; a love story. and i change most of the original story. However, the way I write maybe different from the way you guys write so, plz dont comment me harshly.

[size=7]Together Forever[/size]

A long time ago, on a mountainous peninsular, there are two villages. The villagers simply call their villages East and West village. There is a pagoda on the mountain next to East village, and around these villages are deep blue seas, palm trees on the shores, blue sky and shinning Sun above that land. It is a beautiful, beautiful peninsular, and almost everyday is peaceful and nice.
There is a young couple who plan to marry from those villages. The boy is from the East Village and the girl is form the West Village. They loved each other so much. On their engagement day, they go to the pagoda, pray for their lives, and take a vow that they’ll always be together even they died; no one or nothing can separate them.
Before they married, there is a draft to fight against the rebellion so, he had to join the Military, and he left his fiancé with her parents. During the time, they always wrote to each other. After one year, his fiancé suddenly stopped writing to him. He wondered that, too, however, he is coming home so, he didn’t take notice seriously. On his way home, he saw his fiancé standing by the shore, leaning against the palm tree and waving at him. So, he said to her,

“I’m going to my parents first, then, I’ll come back to you later. Wait for me!”

The girl nodded and he went home. He’s happy and thinking about their future, and their wedding.

At home, in the evening, after he met his family, when he told them he’s going to see her, their chattering die and they look so sad. Then, they told him to say at home this night and go to his fiancé tomorrow morning. But he said he had to because he told her that he’ll come right after he met his family. However, his family still didn’t want him to go and they told him that she wasn't there, so he said,

“What happened to you? It’s not like you. Besides, it’s not like you’re not gonna see me after that. and of course, she is there, i saw her before i came to you.”

And then, he left. But when he heard his family told him not to stay late and whatever happened to look upside down, *geez, ppl I’m not that young, and whats up with looking upside down or look normally*


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wakizashi
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Inspirational. Although I kinda find this plot rather repetetive of other stories I have read
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khaingtime
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thank u but i've not finished my story yet...
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wakizashi
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lol. I should try writing some time.....
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yeah, u should if ur not very busy...
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