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first one; bare with me...
Topic Started: Nov 1 2005, 07:38 PM (102 Views)
Zarabah
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poopsmith
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first attempt at a haiku... bare with me.

falling so slowly
please make the pain go away
it all seems hopeless.

that was'nt so bad. not very good tho. :S&R:
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Sage_Klien
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Zarabah
Nov 1 2005, 07:38 PM
first attempt at a haiku... bare with me.

falling so slowly
please make the pain go away
it all seems hopeless.

that was'nt so bad. not very good tho. :S&R:

never knew the true defention of a haiku..... :glassyblush:
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Zarabah
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its just a poem with 3 lines.
1st with 5
2ed with 7
3rd with 5 again.
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Sage_Klien
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Zarabah
Nov 1 2005, 09:03 PM
its just a poem with 3 lines.
1st with 5
2ed with 7
3rd with 5 again.

huh didn't know that. :StrongBad: :StrongBad:
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