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| Thoughts On White Attire; Err, I need help with a design. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 1 2011, 03:13 PM (488 Views) | |
| Chihaya | Aug 1 2011, 03:13 PM Post #1 |
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I need help with this design, and I would love honest opinions on it. I wanted her to have some type of suit, a white suit, to be honest, and I decided to add black straps and things of that nature, so, this appeared: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Chihaya, Aug 1 2011, 03:43 PM.
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| Luna | Aug 1 2011, 04:07 PM Post #2 |
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... wellll uh. When I saw her I was like CC IS THAT YOU? Spoiler: click to toggle ... yeah thats really all I can say right now.. |
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| Myon | Aug 1 2011, 04:23 PM Post #3 |
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I kind of second that 'IS THAT CC' remark. I think you may want to tweak the flared sleeves and pant legs or something. They just look really similar, I don't really know what to say. |
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| Chihaya | Aug 1 2011, 04:27 PM Post #4 |
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F-FF. Well, thank you for honesty, miss Luna. xD;; Honestly, when I began to draw her I intended for her to have a different hairstyle and outfit, but I wanted to keep it a bit simple, but not too overly complicated. The last thing I want is for people to associate her with Code Geass-- What would you reccomend for her, with her CC-ness? I don't want her to be mistaken for her [CC/C2], but I love the green hair, white suit, with traces of black, theme outfit, and I want to keep the suit she has. Aah, in short, what would you say to avoid further complications? |
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| Chihaya | Aug 1 2011, 04:29 PM Post #5 |
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I would like to keep the flared sleeves, but I wasn't happy with the pant-legs in truth. Originally I wanted her to have boots, and avoid skirts, seeing as how many characters have skirts/dresses and things of that sort. |
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| Myon | Aug 1 2011, 05:02 PM Post #6 |
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Do you still want to maintain the look of a straight jacket? As long as you alter the collar, and how the belts look I think it will look less CC-esque. Not sure what else to suggest. But those minor alterations could be a start. |
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| Chihaya | Aug 2 2011, 04:42 PM Post #7 |
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I have altered points onto her outfit and attempted for them to be less, as you pointed, CC-like. I will have to scan them for you and others[?] to see, and greatly encourage criticism and honesty on terms of the outfit. My art skills aren't the best, I apologize, but I want to show you them to see if it changes anything. ; u ; |
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| Asteriski | Aug 2 2011, 05:15 PM Post #8 |
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How about shorter hair? I think cutting it back to around shoulder-length would keep her from being mistaken so easily. |
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| Chihaya | Aug 3 2011, 01:18 PM Post #9 |
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A-Ano. I have a few designs that I've started and still debating about, so, it'll be a minute before I finalize anything. ;; I've taken some advice and tried to create some different things, and this surfaced: Spoiler: click to toggle Spoiler: click to toggle I don't want anyone to think that I just threw stuff onto her outfit; I want it to look like a legitimate/somewhat initial base from a straight jacket/suit. ;; |
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| Myon | Aug 3 2011, 11:32 PM Post #10 |
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Maybe if if you draw a plain front view, it will make placing the belts on the outfit easier. That way they won't seem as random to you and other people. Might I suggest belt right over the chest ( a little ways under the collarbone)? I think if you block out some of the white right over the bust, it will look less CC like. But you don't have to. I think the cut-outs are helping too. But if they're asymmetrical it might take away from the straitjacket image. |
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