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kind of failed concept for makoumori; tell me if you find anything else bad
Topic Started: Aug 9 2011, 04:31 PM (163 Views)
coolpopcorn
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Things I know I'm doing wrong

color scheme: cyan shoes was a bad choice o_o"
arms: yeah I know, they kinda look like noodles
shading: should have put more.
eyestyle: kinda plain still looking for a better one that's cute but creepy.
clothing fold: didn't put any! that's why you can't tell that the shirt covers most of the legs. no waist foldings and some other stuff lol.

if you find anything else bad please tell me. ^_^
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xRaix
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The wings are kinda square-ish. Maybe look up some pics on wing structure of bats (if that's the kind of wing you want) :P
Also, for that cute but creepy look you could try the yandere shading of the face where the top half is shaded in and the eyes are just cold.
Finally, a minor thing, unless you're forcing it, hands don't naturally extend fully.

I like the design though and the hair looks cool XD
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well he looks nice but i think you should make some of his features more detailed u know? but he looks lovely!
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First of all, if you want an overall idea of how to improve the drawing (and not the design itself) then I would start here.

This helped me quite a bit


Secondly, the design itself is ok, yeah Cyan shoes are weird e_e I'd say make em green or even red ouo;

Thirdly here is a nice wing tutorial (you don't have to follow it, it's more for wings like a bats that are also the arms, but it's an idea of what they should look like.)

And lastly, the headphone band on his head seems to disappear into the sides of his head. I know it's supposed to go under/behind his hair, just try to make more of a bangs/front line and a side line for the hair, to show depth. o3o

Oh, and uhm. All of these.
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