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Topic Started: 28th August 2010 - 03:31 PM (261 Views)
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"Oh mother where are you?" The small life asked. Everything was pitch black and all he could feel was hard soil pressed to his skin. It felt like he was still within his mother's womb. But no, he couldn't feel his mother's warmth. He has been brought to the world. The world of nothingness and darkness. "Oh, mother." He thought. Slowly he opened his mouth, munching on the soil. Slowly the soil decreased, and light was brought upon his eyes. He could see the sky, he could see the world. But his mother is nowhere to be found.

"Oh mother where are you?" He asked again, then his life changed, suddenly captured by a human, brought to a lab facility, and there he was. Called a 'Larvitar' by the humans and trapped within a ball. He still looked for his mother, but he couldn't get out of the ball. He was let out once, only to eat and play with the other three. Which the humans called Bagon, Beldum, and Gible. He didn't know them, but he was placed among them. He didn't understand what the humans said to him, but until he found his mother, he will wait. He will wait for the chance. He will wait like how he waited down underground. Until he had the chance to escape, until he found a way to get out and go seek his mother.

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"Ciel, remember to choose wisely. This will be your first Pokemon. If you want to be a Co-ordinator, choose the perfect partner. Pick one with flashy appearance, or beautiful skin, or cool shape, stunning eyes, strong muscle, etc etc." Was all the girl could hear from her mother this morning. She had been lectured for almost half an hour now. Today she, Ciel Lytorine will embark on a journey to be a Co-ordinator. But it seemed like her journey started badly that she had to wait in this beautiful morning before going out. There it goes, her mother is a perfectionist that she didn't want her daughter to choose the wrong way.

"Oh, come on. Auntie, let Ciel go. She has been waiting for this, you know." Came a voice. That belonged to her cousin. Whom she looked up as a sister. Lisa. "Sis!" Ciel called. The other girl winked on her and then took Ciel's mother's hand to drag her to the kitchen. "Auntie, the soup is boiling, you better get that quick before it's too late." She warned. Ciel's mother got panicked and sprinted to the kitchen immediately after hearing that. Leaving the girls with some time to talk.

"Well, it's finally this day, huh?" Lisa commented as she patted Ciel's head. "I'm happy that my little sister is growing up." She said with a smirk on her face. "Oh, sis. I'm not a child anymore!" Ciel protested. Lisa just giggled. "Well, take this then." She said as she handed Ciel a doll of some sort. "...What's this?" The younger girl asked as she examined the small white teddy bear doll with angelic wings on its back. It wore a necklace with a pendant that has Lisa's name engraved on it. "It's... a good luck charm." Lisa said with sweet words. Then she suddenly looked sad.

"Listen, Ciel. Don't push yourself too hard, okay. The wild is dangerous without a Pokemon. So you must stick together with your Pokemon. Think of them as friends, partner, a family. Trust them, and love them. Don't give up, and... in any case you need help, you got my number. Call me whenever you're lost at anything." She blurted out before turning back. Ciel just stared at her. Speechless at Lisa's words. She's happy that her sister cared so much about her. But it's time to grow up.

"Don't worry sis, I'll make the world see me. I'll be a top Co-ordinator, and look stunning just the way you are, no. Even better than you!" She said before dashing out. Not taking another look back. Behind her, Lisa smiled at the ceilings. "Yeah, I'm sure you'll shine. Good luck, Ciel." She said, wishing the younger girl a good luck.

Reaching Professor Burrows' lab was easy. Since they lived not far from her laboratory, Ciel could reach the medium sized building easily. Not even in 10 minutes. She walked through the automatic glass door and greeted the scientists. "Hello. My name is Ciel Lytorine. I am officially able to become a trainer now. Well, I am a year late than other trainers, but It's never too late to become a trainer, right? Oh, also. I wanted to be a Co-ordinator. Although I don't think it's necessary to state it out." She babbled. Although, with her small presence and dim shadow, the scientists might not notice her being there.

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Professor Burrows stared at you as you babbled, trying to look like she was listening. Of course, she was really thinking about the Cute boy called Miles that was moving to Monaco Burrows Soon (ooc: What? I fancy the Professor. Big Deal. I made her up :P). She shook her head out of the trance and heard you talk about wanting the Larvitar. "Ah Yes, Larvitar. Evolves into Pupitar, then Tyranitar." Professor Burrows said to you. "Interesting Choice." she then said as she reached for the Cherish ball on the left. It contained the Larvitar that Ciel wanted to take with her. Professor Burrows tiptoed over the Ciel graciously with the Cherish Ball in her hand, and gave it straight to Ciel. "Look after this Pokemon! It is Rare!" she told you as you gratefully took the Cherish Ball from her.

"Professor Burrows! Professor Burrows!" shouted a child as he barged through the Lab's doors. "What is it Samual? What Happened?" Professor Burrows Replied, stunned at the sudden outburst of drama from the child. "Grandma is surrounded by Geodude! Please Help!" Samual replied, running back to his Grandma. "Oh no!" Professor Burrows shouted out loud. She ran straight to the scene, leaving you behind. Maybe you should follow....

"Hey there strange lady, wanna form a tag team and take on those three geodude?" a tall stranger said to you as he took a pokeball from his belt and held it up to you. He ran after Samual and Professor Burrows before you could reply.


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[Lol, I haven't said anything about getting a Larvitar.]

"Huh? Oh!" She cried as the young lady in white handed her a red ball containing one Pokemon in it. It doesn't look very cool. And seemed to be the quiet one. Will she be able to be a great Co-ordinator with him? "But um- Professor? I haven't sa-" She was about to complain. She haven't even see the other Pokemon. But then again the Professor cut her by saying that the Larvitar will grow into a Tyranitar one day. And that Larvitar was rare.

She sighed and then smiled at the Pokemon within the ball. "Well, I am not a picky person. Let us do our best, Larvitar." She said to the larva Pokemon within the ball. The Pokemon stayed quiet. Didn't know who she was and what she was talking.

Then suddenly, a child barged in through the door. Crying out to the lady and shouted her name. The young boy explained the situation. Which seemed to be a dangerous one. The lady left in panic, leaving Ciel all alone with the Larvitar. "Oh, no... What should we do?" She said while looking at the Pokemon. Then again, the Larvitar didn't say anything. Keeping his quiet act all the time. Ciel stayed silent for a moment before running through the door. Following the lady and the boy. "I must help whenever I had the chance." She said to herself as she ran to the other two.

Once she was out, a somewhat tall stranger appeared before her. Holding a Pokeball and showed it up to Ciel. She wondered who he was. But it seemed like he's offering a help to defeat the Geodudes who attacked that boy's Grandmother. Upon receiving a help, Ciel couldn't say anything but yes. At this time, help is really necessary. "Of course, We could use as much help as possible." She replied as she took her Cherish ball that contained the Larvitar. This would be her first battle.

"Let's go, Larvitar!" She called as she released the Pokemon out from its ball. The Pokemon looked happy to be outside. Ciel was about to command him, however. It seemed like she didn't know what attacks Larvitar had. She received the Pokemon so suddenly after all. "Oh no. I haven't know anything about Larvitar yet. If I don't yell a command soon, he will only get hurt." She muttered to herself. Hoping to find a way to find out about Larvitar's move.

But the Pokemon ignored her. He saw the old lady getting attacked and quickly bursting to her direction. He took the brunt of the attack and defended the lady. Upon getting hit, he got mad and then attacked the Geodude back with its bite move. "...Bite, it knows bite." Ciel said to herself. Trying to remember. Then she shouted to the Professor. "Professor! What are Larvitar's attacks?!" She asked.

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You ran to after the Professor, shouting to know Larvitar's attacks. The tall stranger followed you. You started to pant finding it hard to keep up. Ahead, you could see the three Geodude surrounded the Boy's Grandma with the Professor and Little Boy trying to pull the geodude away. "If you wan't to know Larvitar's Attacks, take this Pokedex! You can keep it. Just scan the Pokeball and and it will show the attacks of your Larvitar." The stranger said to you, acting strangely calm in the middle of all the action. You took the Pokedex from his Hand and Smiled. "Erm, Thanks" you replied as you scanned your Pokeball. "Larvitar's Attacks are Bite, Leer and Sandstorm at this Point in time. The next Move that it will learn is Screech at level 10." the Pokedex said to you.

You approached the Three Geodude, Ready to Battle. The Stranger Sent out his Pokemon. It was a Gible!
The Geodude were also ready to battle.

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Ciel's Larvitar and ???'s Gible
Level 5 and Level 7
Health: 100% and 100%
Status: Normal and Normal
Stat Changes: None and None

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Health: 100% and 100% and 100%
Status: Normal and Normal and Normal
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And there she finally know what her Larvitar could do. She thanked the stranger who gave her the Pokedex, the unique small device which looked like an encyclopedia. She never saw this machine before. But it sure helped her. She memorized the moves her Larvitar knew and then focused on the battle. She saw her Larvitar had already ran to attack one of the Geodude with his fang showed off. Ready to bite the Geodude. He seemed pretty angry with the rock Pokemon. Although Ciel has not stated any command to the Larvitar.

Just what made the Larvitar so angry that he wanted to crunch that Geodude off the boy's grandma?

Ciel couldn't think of any possible answers right now. She barely knew the Larvitar and yet she was already paired up with him for a battle. Well, it's time to show what she's made of. "Larvitar, don't bite the Geodude now!" She commanded. In instance, the Larvitar stopped running. He looked pretty confused. It felt like he had to follow her command. Which is probably caused by his low level. "Use your leer move, that way you can attack the Geodude more at ease!" She cried. She knew that the Larvitar might now know what she was talking about. Hopefully he understood what she said, but she and the Larvitar were not close enough for him to understand her.

That's why she pulled the skin around her eye to make it look like an angry Spearow's eyes. The Larvitar stared at her for a second with his cold emotion face. Then he looked back at the Geodudes. He positioned himself to look like a mad man and then snapped his eyes with the coldest emotion as ever. He used Leer. Much to Ciel's gladness. The Larvitar understood her, even though he looked unwilling a bit.

"That's right, that is called Leer!" She cried again, hoping for the Larvitar to remember the move's name.

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Larvitar used leer, sending the defense of all three geodude down! ??? noticed that they were vulnerable, and ordered Gible to use Dragon Rage! Due to the lowered defence of the Geodude, it did 50% damage, as it would normally do 40%. The first Geodude who was attacked with Dragon Rage pounced forawards and smashed into Ciel's Larvitar with tackle. Due to Larvitar's Rock type, it wasn't too effective at all. Next, the second Geodude jumped at ???'s Gible with tackle. Doing a small amount of damage. Gible quickly fought back with Dragon Rage, doing another 50% damage to the other Geodude. Hey! He used two moves. Maybe that's allowed... Suddenly, larvitar was pounced by the third and final Geodude using Tackle, doing a small amount of damage.

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The leer the Larvitar used seemed to affect all of the Geodudes while Ciel predicted only one got affected. The Larvitar still showed some anger. Perhaps he saw his mother's reminiscence in the old lady. He showed even angrier face once he got tackled by one of the Geodude. Probably the weakest among them. It's hard to differentiate the Geodudes, but since their mission is to defeat all of them, it won't be such a trouble. "Larvitar, are you alright?" She asked. The Larvitar got a little scratch on his chest after got tackled by the Geodude. But both Geodude and Larvitar are rock type, so the attack won't hurt much.

The stranger next to her commanded his Gible perfectly. The Gible also seemed to not bothering his command. As if they were perfect partners. How she wished she could do so with her Larvitar. The Gible attacked the Geodude with his Dragon Rage. It made quiet a damage to the Geodude which was now panting and gasped for breath. Another geodude, possibly stronger than the first one tackled Ciel's Larvitar, attacked him with another tackle. But that didn't do much damage due to their advantaging type and level. The Gible opened his mouth and launched a ball of energy. It was another Dragon Rage.

"Wha? He can use two attacks at the same time! Perhaps..." Ciel muttered to herself and then looked at her Larvitar, who concentrated on the Geodude that attacked him. She gulped and then commanded her Larvitar. "Larvitar, use your bite at that Geodude!" She ordered while pointing at the weakest Geodude among all with her right hand. The Larvitar ran to that Geodude, he wanted to get his revenge for the Tackle after all. Finally he could attack. "Next aim for that one!" She commanded while directing the Larvitar to the strongest geodude with her finger again.

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Larvitar pounced forwards at the Geodude and used Bite, dealing heaving damage and causing the Geodude to back away in pain. It then pounced forwards at ???'s Gible, barging into it with a tackle. Suddenly, Gible flew forwards at the Second Strongest Geodude and used Dragon Rage, sending it to 1% hp from being knocked out. Next, Larvitar pounced forwards and used Bite on the strongest Geodude, doing 20% damage and causing it to Flinch! Finally, the Other geodude jumped into the air and hammered down on Larvitar with Rock Smash, doing alot of damage. To finish off the battle, Gible used Dragon rage on the Strongest Geodude! It was a Critical hit!

"Go Pokeball!" shouted ??? as he threw a Pokeball at the Nearest Geodude.

Wobble... Wobble... Wobble....
Ding!

"Yes! Another Pokemon to add to my Collection!" he said to himself, placing the Pokeball in his pocket. Then, he handed 5 Pokeballs to you. "Use these too catch your own Pokemon! That Geodude there is weak enough to be caught!" he then said to you.

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Level 5 and Level 7
Health: 40% and 84%
Status: Normal and Normal
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Status: Normal and Normal
Stat Changes: DEF -1 and DEF -1


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Larvitar managed to flung on one of the Geodude, the least powerful one and bit the rock Pokemon with all his might. The Poor rock Pokemon struggled from Larvitar's fangs and then ran to his friends to hide. Meanwhile, the tall stranger Ciel's with had commanded his Gible to attack the second strongest Gible and threw another ball of energy at the poor rock type. Leaving him almost knocked out.

Just as Ciel was awed by the tall stranger's powerful Gible, the strongest Geodude of all hammered her Larvitar down with his Rock Smash move, which is a fighting type move, a move that a normal Geodude shouldn't have learn at its level. "Larvitar!" She cried as she ran to his side. She quickly sat on the plains and held him firmly, the Pokemon is badly injured. How she wished to have some potions with her. "Are you alright?" She asked, panicking a bit.

The Larvitar struggled to keep his eyes open, then let go of her hold. He stood strongly in front of her and watched the Geodude who attacked him. Which was now being hit by Gible's dragon rage. It was almost knocked out, but the tall stranger managed to capture it with the Pokeball he had with him. The Pokeball hit the strongest geodude and captured it within. The ball fell to the ground and wiggled as the Geodude struggled to get out from the small minimizing machine.

The Larvitar looked angry at the Gible, probably because he couldn't get his revenge back to the Pokemon. Just as he placed his gaze on the Gible, the Pokeball sounded a small 'click' noise, informing the trainer that the Pokemon has been successfully caught. The tall stranger looked happy, as well with his Gible. He then walked to Ciel and handed her five balls of the same type. He told her to use that to capture the Geodude. She thanked him for the Pokeball and then gazed around the battlefield. Looking for the easiest Pokemon to be caught.

Then she found one

She aimed at the panting Geodude, one that laid on the ground almost unconscious. This must be the second strongest Geodude, the one attacked by the Gible not a while ago. "Okay, here goes nothing!" She said to herself while throwing the ball to the said Pokemon. The ball flew towards the Geodude's direction, and she prayed to herself that the ball would hit.

While she was focusing on capturing the Geodude, the Larvitar had found another target to unleash his anger. The weakest Geodude of all. The Pokemon looked tired, but the Larvitar just won't give a mercy. Probably because he attacked the old lady, but it could be because the Geodude had the same face with the one attacking him with the rock smash. He ran to the Geodude while bearing his fangs, and then attacked him with his Bite attack.

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Wobble... Wobble... Wobble...
Ding!

All Geodude's Died Fainted.
You Gained 620 Pokedollars
Larvitar Grew to Level 7

??? Told you his Name
His Name is Ryan

The Grandma Thanked You and Gave You a Sooth Bell.
Professor Burrows Thanked You Also.


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