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Ketsugō shakkuru; Jiro's Box weapon
Topic Started: Jul 19 2011, 04:21 PM (255 Views)
Gentanin
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Box Name: Ketsugō shakkuru (Binding Shackles)
Box Looks: A purple cube that is about 2 inches total the top part of the cube has a hole in it, the purple box has designs although it which looks like chains.
Box Type: Weapon
Box Attribute: Cloud
Box Ability: This box weapon has a propagation ability a special trait of Cloud Flames meaning increase an replication. Using cloud flames the user is able to multiply the weapon or grow Kyoketsu-shogei from the original. Due to the propagation effect the user can multiply the Kyoketsu-shogei every 3 post, however Jiro can only multiply up to 4 Kyoketsu-shogei during that time. The Kyoketsu-shogei can only be multiplied to a max of 16.
Ability Description: The Kyoketsu-shogei was a knife attached to one end of a long cord made of women's or horse hair, or sometimes chain. On the other end of the cord was a ring. The knife could be used in close quarters or swung around by holding on to the ring. In this case the long cord is made out of steel chains, which Jiro refers to as "the hair of the Iron Maiden", and its blade made out of steel is referred to by Jiro as "The fury of the Iron Maiden." With that being said the chain is 10 feet long while the knife is 6 inches and it has a curved hook like blade coming out of the side, which is 2 inches. The end of a the chain has a 2 inch hoop ring on it that is covered in a Cloud flames.
Edited by Gentanin, Jul 19 2011, 04:42 PM.
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brenden96
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You kind of did it wrong bud~

With Box Looks, I meant how the BOX looks, not the inside or the weapon.
Box Ability is basically what you wrote in the Ability Description.
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brenden96
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Okay let's see~

First of all, the chains are quite long. How the fuck are you gonna carry around 10 meters of iron chains? The multiplication is also kind of.. Meh. Okay so 4 every 2 turns is a ordinary condition, but the total needs to be less. Else it's too overwhelming.
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Alright hows that.
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brenden96
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Allrighty let's take another look~

Looks fine to me. The chain is good length wise, the requirement/rule for your propagation is good and balanced. Accepted

Ability : Strong - Estimated Price: 13,000,000 Okane
Note: Due to it being a Strong ability, you are required to get a rank 4 ring. Mkay? Laterz.

This topic has been resolved and is therefore closed.
Edited by brenden96, Jul 19 2011, 04:48 PM.
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