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[Approved]Kael Nyk
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Sinjin Aug 26 2011, 22:28 Post #1
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--Personal Information--

Name: Kael Nyk
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Height: 5’11”
Weight: 150 lbs.
Affilation: Chaotic Neutral

Appearance:
Kael has a long and slender figure. This often deceives onlookers of the fact that he actually has a toned body underneath his clothes. He is a natural brunette with topaz colored eyes. His eyes have feline like pupils, a trait he possesses after he was supposedly born through artificial insemination where some of the DNA was sculptured to fit the tastes of his parents’ aesthetic ideals. He keeps his hair in a complicated messy and spiky arrangement to fit his adventurous spirit and is rarely seen having a neatly combed hair. He is always seen with a smile or a childish grin, to which most observers would think that he is too carefree for his position. He carries a noble air about him, but can easily integrate and adapt with his surroundings. He is often seen slouching when he’s tired or dragging his foot in a manner that would show that he isn’t interested in a particular topic. However, when he plays his guitar or sings, he acts with profound passion that some would argue that he almost look like a completely different person.

  • Clothing:
    Kael usually wears a simple shirt, rugged jean and a pair of sneakers. Sometimes he combines a longsleeves shirt inside or a vest over the shirt. He likes to play around so as much as possible, he only clothes himself with fabric that are less constricting. This gives him the appearance of a laidback person and is often mistaken for someone younger than his actual age. However, when needed be, he can actually dress up in a more formal attire. His favorite would be a matching striped suit and pants or a plain darker shirt inside topped with light gold necktie. And sometimes he would like to be a trendsetter and mix up his formal attire with his casual one, appearing a little more sophisticated than usual, though not as rigid as some high class personality.
  • Accessories: He wears his golden engagement ring on his left ring finger – a precious item that he values more than his life at times.
  • Etc: Kael actually has a diagonal and jagged scar at the back, right under his right shoulder blade. It’s a scar he earned during the time he and his siblings escaped from a rival family’s assassination attempt.

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Kael Nyk

Kael 1
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Kael 2
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Kael and Ren
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--Personality & History--

Personality:
Kael has a vibrant and cheerful personality. He always laughs and smiles, sometimes to the irritancy of his sister when he would appear to carefree even at serious moments. Because of this, he often hides behind his smile and almost no one really knows what he thinks, other than his own sibling, who have known him long enough to know some of his mannerisms. But just as caring and overprotective he is of those he loves, he can also be dangerous and lethal when provoked. After surviving the assassination attempt on his and his family’s lives, he had grown to remember the pain and suffering he it had caused him and had long been seeking vengeance for those who wronged them. This have resulted in creating a demonic persona in him that would not hold back on any fight influenced by his rage and hate, almost to the point that it would leave him with the choice of kill or be killed.

There is more to his personality than just a simple person he seems to be. He loves music and has an insatiable thirst of perfecting his skill as a musician. He loves to sing both using his voice or his guitar. It is through his music that one can truly understand what feelings he has at the very moment. With regard to being a musician, he takes it seriously and treats his little band as his primary occupation. In fact, he has a tendency of disregarding the past so long as he could continue playing the music he loves with the people he cares about.

To complete him, Kael is quite the curious cat and a risk taker at that. He may as well gamble all nine lives that a cat has just to feed his curiosity once his interest is piqued. Because he has a wild card personality, it is rare for him to completely trust a stranger, but if he does, he would give his undying loyalty to such person. Furthermore, Kael is known for his stubbornness and persistence, and quite famed for being too stubborn to even die and giving Death, himself a headache – this is the case when he has survived multiple chances of dying already; first being the assassination attempt when he was a child, and the rest mostly from misunderstanding brawls or straight out fights.

History:
Kael was born as the second child to a family having great influence over a certain city. He was, unlike his other siblings, conceived through artificial insemination, as his parents were at one point, unable to produce another child after the eldest, thus creating a six-year gap between him and the eldest. During the operation, his DNA was tinkered with to create some striking features that his parents wanted out of aesthetic purpose. But aside from that, he grew up quite normally, having a sister born naturally after year he was born. And growing up as a young boy within his family’s love, Kael knew firsthand what it was to know filial love and paternal loyalty.

It was during when he was around twelve when their family was conspired against by rival families having the same position in society. An assassination attempt was carried out. Though he and his sister survived it when they escaped, he ended up getting a scar that would be the reminded of it. That night, he also lost his parents and the eldest brother who had protected him and his sister when they were escaping. The incident left their mansion burning. News about it only said that it was an act of rebellious uprising from the lower class, but he knew well that it was not the case and that certain rival families were in fact behind it. Thus, from an early age, he had built up his thirst for vengeance, planning that one day he would get even with those who betrayed his family. But until that day comes, he decided that he and his sister would live in low profile and as much as possible take on different names. This led to him and his sister using their eldest brother’s name, Nyk, as part of their own, as one way of reminding them of what happened in the past.

Traveling to another city, there Nyk would work hard so that he and his sister could continue studying and live a decent life. He worked in a small bar at a quieter part of the city. There, he would come to learn about music from the many musicians that would grace the bar with live performances. At the same time, he has taken a liking to the owner of the bar, Duke, who was a young entrepreneur at that moment. He would eventually become Kael and his sister’s guardian as they grow up.

Years passed and Kael would eventually take up center stage in the bar, performing with various bands, while continuing higher studies in school. It was in a certain state university of that city that he met the love of his life, Ren Ishikawa, a daughter of a businessman. Even as young as nineteen, he ended up proposing to her after a year of courting. It was to his delight when Ren accepted his proposal and they both promised to get married as soon as they finished college.

Unfortunately, that small city was one day a target of the Heartless. A swarm of them disturbed the peace and Ren was kidnapped in the process. Unable to protect the girl he loved, Kael vowed that he would become stronger to save her. From them on, he journeyed to find means of defeating the heartless, still hopeful of finding Ren. Along the way, he met a wandering sorcerer and persisted to learn more about the heartless. However, with such a vengeful heart, his request was at first denied. It was only when the curiosity got the better of Kael that he decided to steal one of the books of the sorcerer. There, he learned about the spirits that could be summoned for use, and was accidentally transported into the realm of the book. There, he met the giant spirit being called Behemoth. Days, no... months passed and Kael had to endure living inside that strange realm while in constant fear of being killed by the beast. Just when he thought it was useless to run away, he finally faced that beast, mustering up as much courage as he could. No wound so deep would make him falter and just before he would die, he woke up.

It was then that he found himself inside that traveling sorcerer's rented room. He had been saved by the old man and was told to forget about everything. However, exhibiting his stubbornness once more, he persisted to get hold of that spirit summon. A heated debate ensued but in the end, he learned from the sorcerer that he was not the one who saved him. At the very last second, the spirit summon had recognized Kael and was the reason why he had returned to the real world. And when the brunette asked how he would control the spirit, the old sorcerer was kind enough to help that small a part. And as the sorcerer continued to travel, Kael went back to the bar where he was greeted by his worried peers. He told them of what happened and his promise to rescue Ren one day. And ever since that day, he had been living day to day, thinking nothing but of her, training in his magic, and using music to tame the wild Behemoth.



--Equipment--

Equipment:
Equipment

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Shining Ray
This is Kael’s personal and customized guitar. When unused, it appears like a normal guitar case, even having some decal stickers posted on it. However, when activated, the entire case breaks into pieces before they realign to create the body of the guitar. The guitar also has touch-sensitive strings and has a unique design, a mixture of a violin and a classical guitar. Thus, it can be said that the guitar case itself is the guitar when not in used.

This is an ordinary D-rank equipment and thus is used as the medium for which Kael summons and commands using musical notes and direction.

Items:
Items

-picture of when Kael proposed to Ren during the Sakura Festival
-wireless headset
-guitar pick
-a pack Strawberry menthol flavored cigarettes
-a custom zippo lighter




--Statistics--

Stats - 40

  • Strength: 6
  • Accuracy: 4
  • Speed: 5
  • Stamina: 5
  • Magic: 20


Stats Earned: 0/0
Munney: 100,000

Rewards:
Revamp

Kael's First Mod Already





--Traits--

Trait Points: 0/5

Traits:


  • Fusion Spirit Summoner (Custom Trait) - 3 Trait Points
    Auto-casts “Fusion” Technique whenever a Fusion Spirit is being summoned. This allows the summoner to fuse with corresponding fusion spirit, wherein the souls combine and the summoner’s physical appearance transform into that of the fusion spirit’s. This transfers the ability and attributes of the fusion spirit to the summoner, giving him power similar to the fusion spirit, as well as boosted stats.

  • Summoner - 2 Trait Points
    This trait allows the user to summon creatures from another realm, these creatures have a wide range of magical power. *This allows the character to create one D Rank Summon to start off with and MUST start with a technique that allows them to summon.





--Techniques--

Technique Slots: 2/2
Technique Points: 0

Technique Name: Summon
Technique Level: 1
Technique Type: Magic (Summoning)
Technique Range: 0~20 meters
Technique Description: This allows the user to summon magical creatures from another world and use their power in battle.

Technique Name: Fusion
Technique Level: 1
Technique Type: Fusion Summon
Technique Range: self
Technique Description: This allows the user to fuse with the corresponding fusion spirit, gaining abilities and attributes, as well as the physical transformation that resembles the spirit’s. Fusion duration is similar to Summoning Duration. Cool Down is equivalent to regular summon CD + 2 posts. It requires Fusion Spirit.
Level Effects

Level 1-3
One Fusion Spirit can be fused with. Kael can only fuse a maximum of two times during the battle. The Summoner then gains stats equal to 1/4 of the Fusion Spirits stats.
Level 4
Two Fusion Spirits can be fused with. Kael can only fuse a maximum of two times during the battle. The Summoner then gains stats equal to 1/3 (rounded down) of the Fusion Spirit stats.
Level 5-6
Two Fusion Spirits can be fused with. Kael can only fuse a maximum of three times during the battle. The Summoner then gains stats equal to 1/3 (rounded down) of the Fusion Spirit stats.
Level 7-9
Three Fusion Spirits can be fused with. Kael can only fuse a maximum of three times during the battle. The Summoner then gains stats equal to 1/2 (rounded down) of the Fusion Spirit stats.
Level 10
Four Fusion Spirits can be fused with. Kael can only fuse a maximum of four times during the battle. The Summoner then gains stats equal to the Fusion Spirit stats.


Spirit Summons:
- Behimoth

Relationships

Friends:
Enemies:
Neutral:
Fiancee: Ren (NPC)
Husband/Wife:
Siblings: Mio Nyk
Pure Hate For: Shadows or anyone connected to Shadows

Edited by Snow, Sep 8 2011, 19:29.
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Sinjin Sep 1 2011, 16:10 Post #2
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ready for critics. please move from WIP section. thanks
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Snow Sep 1 2011, 16:40 Post #3
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- Munni Earned should be: Munny: 100,000

- Summoner Trait: Please remove the Technique Rank.

- Summoning Technique needs a range.
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Sinjin Sep 1 2011, 17:08 Post #4
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Snow Sep 1 2011, 17:12 Post #5
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- Munni Earned needs to be replaced with Munny.

- Also, Trait Points should be : 0/5
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Sinjin Sep 1 2011, 17:32 Post #6
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edited again
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Ravendark Sep 1 2011, 22:47 Post #7
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I dont see anything wrong so I would say that this guys ready for the 'ol 1/2 'er
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1/2 Approval~
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Approval 2/2

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This character application has been approved by the staff and has now been moved to the proper Character Archive.
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