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| Cryo8D | Aug 27 2011, 03:18 Post #1 |
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Account Name: Cryo8D --Personal Information-- "Allow me to demonstrate - Euphoria!" Name: Shi Mu-Dan Age: 21 Gender: Male Height: 5'10" Weight: 155 lb. Affilation: neutral Appearance: Easily recognizable due to his physical association with a single color, he is most easily noticed by his dark blue eyes and hair of similar coloration; these contrast heavily against his rather pale skin. With relatively-neat hair and a slim body, he generally gives off a vibe of innocence and playfulness, almost like a young kitten. With that much being said, he is also noted for having long, slender fingers, the type that would be considered feminine if not for the fact that he has put them to great use. The single most noticeable physical trait would be his ears - like that of a cat, he possesses black triangular ears that are impossible for him to hide; he does not, however, possess a tail.
Picture: Picture --Personality & History-- Personality: "Just calm down and relax already - not like we're about to get attacked or anything, right?" Mu-Dan, or M.D. as he prefers to go by, can be easily described as one of the slowest and most laid-back person one would ever meet; so much so, in fact, that he had developed the moniker of "that lazy rhapsodizing bum" in his hometown, for good reason. Calm and steady, almost nothing can faze him, unless a life-and-death situation is involved. He is generally very happy when solitary, often found dozing off or playing on the keyboard, or even simply staring off into space daydreaming. Of course, this has adverse effects on his social life, but he cares not about it - as long as he's happy with what he's doing, nothing else matters to him. He comes off as eccentric to most people upon initial meetings, and that is reflected even in his attire; who else would want to wear a feathered tailcoat? Unknown to most people though, M.D. is actually a very sensitive person, who was born with a gift of empathy - he is very easily influenced by the moods of those around him, and can detect signs of negative emotions more easily than the average person; combined with his own personality, it means that he often tries doing whatever he can to cheer people up, essentially "bringing some light into their life", as he says. When with people he feels comfortable around, he often takes the role of the jolly idiot, naive and yet always optimistic, trying his best to ensure that he and his friends never lose hope in whatever challenge they are in. In this trait, he is assisted by his talent in music - his chosen instrument, the keyboard, he is proficient in, and he spends much of his time practicing it, refining his skill as well as developing new tunes; so proficient is he, that his music has recently begun to show signs of magic. In combat, M.D. utilizes the only thing he can - his music. Not one for direct, physical combat, he often chooses to instead take a supportive role, usually somewhere in the back of a team. Not confrontative at all, he is a poor fighter, and altogether entirely reliant on his music for virtually everything. Even in conflicts outside of combat, he is a passive person, willing to give way if it means maintaining the peace. Optimistic, though, he is quick to forgive and quicker to forget, and simply go back to that which he does best - playing the keyboard. History: "Sorry...it's a personal thing." Born the only child of an already-aging couple, Mu-Dan experienced a relatively normal childhood; living in a small and quiet town famous for its exotic market, he was able to experience the peace of a quiet upbringing along with the excitement of the exotic, as demonstrated by the many times he would go with his parents to simply see the various wares that merchants from worlds beyond had to sell. Ever since his earliest memories, he was already a laid-back person; he did all that was requested of him without complaint, and never bothered to partake in any dangerous ventures or the like, preferring to simply sit back, daydream, and simply do absolutely nothing for long stretches at a time. This waste of time worried his old parents, who were constantly wishing of him to gain a better future, and so they decided to give him a gift - his first keyboard. At first what they thought would be a mere toy ended up an obsession; once Mu-Dan pressed the keys for the first time, heard the first melodious notes rise from the instrument - he fell in love with it. Day in and day out, he brought the keyboard with him, playing it wherever he went no matter the situation. By now a schoolboy, this both gladdened and worried his parents, as reports of him slacking off in schooling simply to play his instrument combined with his exceeding talent at it were sent almost daily from school. By now aged, they were more like grandparents than parents, and simply couldn't imagine the pain that would follow had they taken the very keyboard they gifted away from their beloved offspring. Instead, they decided to compromise - for performing better at school, they would give him a better keyboard. Naturally, the child accepted, and by the end of his schooling years, he received a keyboard of his dreams - upon gaining it, he named it "Animus", signifying the importance of the instrument to him. By the end of his schooling years, Mu-Dan was smart enough both academically and street-wise to assure his safety to his parents, and talented enough as a musician to ensure some form of income or another. With the full blessings of his parents he departed from his hometown, prepared to explore the world - and so he did, for a few months, before it happened. One night, staying at a small city, he was besieged by a group of heartless, a crowd of Shadows that seeked to destroy him and wreak havoc in the city he was in. Incapable of defending himself, he was saved when a mysterious swordsman leaped in between him and the heartless, cutting them down with physical prowess far more advanced than what he possessed; but alas, the sheer numbers of the Shadows was enough to kill him - only after he struck every one of that particular group down. Only Mu-Dan was there, and as he saw the warrior fall and not rise back up, he himself despaired for his uselessness, and vowed to be able to do the same to others as this man had done for him; to remind himself of the vow, after burying the man, he took his blade as a constant memory of the event, carrying it on his back always. --Equipment-- Equipment: Equipment Items: Items --Statistics-- Stats - 40
Stats Earned: 0/0 Munni Earned: 100,000/100,000 Rewards: --Traits-- Trait Points: 2/5 Traits:
--Techniques Technique Slots: 0/2 Technique Points: 0/0 Technique Name: Carol of Euphoria - "Enter the Eos!" Technique Level: 1 Technique Type: Magic / Ranged / Utility / Illusion Technique Range: (rank x 5) m. Technique Description: His signature technique, Mu-Dan plays a jubilant carol, which creates an illusionary magic sphere around him; the radius of the sphere is determined by technique range, and the sphere itself is highly visible; within the borders of the sphere, illusionary streams and arcs of bright colored light can be seen, almost as if there was an aurora contained within the field. This effect, of course, is only illusionary, and by itself has no effect other than the obvious distraction of colors and lights; as long as this skill is in effect, though, any other technique used throughout the duration of the sphere gains a passive effect for a certain duration. Using this technique itself requires one post of dedication - that is to say, the user cannot use any other technique for a single post. At this rank, the illusionary sphere lasts for two posts, with a three post cooldown. Technique Name: Anthem of Valor - "Prepare yourselves!" Technique Level: 1 Technique Type: Magic / Ranged / Offensive / Supportive Technique Range: (rank x 10) m. Technique Description: One of the few directly offensive techniques possessed, Mu-Dan plays a passionate song, designed to prepare his allies for combat and get their adrenaline pumping - when he plays, for each post he plays, a single colored stream of light fires out from his instrument towards a random opponent within range. The stream of light itself counts as a non-elemental magical projectile, and at this rank can push an opponent back upwards to a meter depending on weight, but cannot actually damage them yet. At this rank, this technique can last upwards to two posts, with a three post cooldown. If this technique is used while Carol of Euphoria is active, the spell gains a bonus effect - all allies within the range of Carol of Euphoria, as long as both techniques are active, will feel revitalized at the end of each post; this revitalization is only a mental/spiritual effect, and does not cure wounds. Edited by Cryo8D, Sep 2 2011, 01:26.
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| Snow | Aug 31 2011, 15:53 Post #2 |
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Everything looks good. Your custom magic has been priced at 3 Trait Points, so you have another 2 to spend if you wish. |
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| Cryo8D | Aug 31 2011, 15:57 Post #3 |
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o3o~ Edited, and ready. |
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| Snow | Aug 31 2011, 16:02 Post #4 |
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Approval - 1/2 |
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| Cryo8D | Sep 1 2011, 10:12 Post #5 |
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Edited; Added in free misc. Trait |
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| Ravendark | Sep 1 2011, 11:15 Post #6 |
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looks good to me, i see nothing wrong (then again i'm only a MIT so yeah) |
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| Snow | Sep 1 2011, 12:11 Post #7 |
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Free Misc Traits are no longer. They are currently under going a revamp. So please remove it. |
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| Cryo8D | Sep 1 2011, 14:42 Post #8 |
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Edited lol |
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| Ravendark | Sep 1 2011, 22:50 Post #9 |
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Everything looks good except.. - Under your custom trait there is a bulletin, please remove it |
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| Cryo8D | Sep 2 2011, 01:26 Post #10 |
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._.lll |
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