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| Yui | Aug 27 2011, 09:36 Post #1 |
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Account Name: Yui --Personal Information--
Name: Mio Nyk Age: 17 Gender: Female Height: 5 ft 3 inches Weight: 104 Ibs Affiliation: Chaotic Neutral Appearance: Mio is a fairly light-skinned girl with greyish-colored eyes and long dark natural straight hair extending far down her back. But from time to time she usually dyes it to a dark blue colour and wears clear blue contacts whenever she has her dark blue hair. She has a slender body and a reasonably large bust, her teeth are perfectly a lined and pure white so when she smiles her teeth are the most noticeable along with her dimples. Mio keeps herself clean and tidy especially her hair unlike her brother who keeps it complicated messy and in a spiky arrangement when she keeps it brushed,straight and clean. Shes all ways seen standing up tall never slouching and never tries to show if shes hungry or tired thinking it would be either embarrassing or rude. Clothing: Her standard attire consists of a pure short black dress, small little top hat, an black and teal coloured socks along with warm gloves that reach to her elbow, from time to time she changes the colour to something new. These clothes makes it seem like she going to a party or a formal occasion even tho they are naturally her clothes she wears nearly everyday. Mio always wears black high heels to make her seem taller and the odd thing is she can run in them, fight with them like its a normal pair of sport shoes. Accessories: She usually wears her clear white or teal coloured earnings along with a belt that she puts around her dress too make it seem more fashionable. Etc: She has a tattoo along her lower back side which has the name of her band she was in at school [K-On] Picture: K-ON - Band School Days Mio Nyk --Personality & History-- Personality: When Mio was little, she was timid, soft-spoken, thoughtful, polite and very shy, often using appropriate name suffixes. She is kind, a trait that Kael used to consider a flaw, and dislikes competing and fighting. Mio lacks self-confidence, but is very hard working. She is also incredibly empathetic. Generally, Mio opts to think carefully before acting, and when she does manage to muster enough self-confidence, she can be surprisingly competent. But then everything turned upside down for Mio when her parents and eldest brother got assassinated. Mio then looked at the word differently, now shes a girl who has a heart of steel and words that can stab like a knife. Mio is shown to have a short temper at times, and has hit people out of anger before on more than one occasion [ The victim is usually Kael ] but is usually relatively kind, cheerful, gentle, and positive. She has a very strong sense of being useful, and is often frustrated with herself for being a burden and not being helpful. One of her greatest regrets was being not being able to save the family she cherished. all she did was run away and cry. Mio typically projects a tough demeanor, even when facing great personal difficulty. She readily criticizes others for their faults, such as Kael's immaturity or being laid-back, though her habits are rarely any better. Mio truly loves her brother so at times she will show sympathy for him, but has rarely ever done so. History: Mio was born as the third child in the family having great influence over a certain city. She was born with something odd tho, she didn't really have a voice she had multiples ones, each different sounding and high or low pitched. She couldn't really control wait voice she wanted to use but as time flew she learned little by little to master her voices. Like any other little girl, Mio adored her mother and father and treated them like they were the most precious things in the world, sometimes she acted as if they were King and Queen. But it all happened when she was eight, when their family was conspired against by rival families having the same position in society. An assassination attempt was carried out. Luckily she and her brother barely escaped death. But unfortunately her parents and brother died while protected them, the mansion they once lived in were now burning in bright red flames. Mio was little at the time and didn't understand whiled that happen. Her and her brother decided to use their eldest brother’s name, Nyk, as part of their own, as one way of reminding them of what happened in the past. Traveling to another city, there Nyk would work hard so that he and his sister could continue studying and live a decent life. He worked in a small bar at a quieter part of the city. The bar had the atmosphere of happiness with musicians doing their thing and dancers showing off their moves on the dance floor. Mio entered school where she joined a music club which eventually became a band. This was the greatest moment in her life, she felt so much mixtures of happiness,peace and comfort. Her life became all about music and she slowly began to forget about her painful past. But a few years later, the town was targeted by a group of Heartless, at that time Mio was at school performing in the afternoon. They all notice a bunch around the school, frightened by this they ran though a back door into the streets in town shouting for help. Suddenly a woman stood right before them, smiling, she then slowly started to fade into one of Mio's friend. The girl screamed in pain, after a few seconds she stood there lifeless with a guitar, then faced each one of the girls and ran ferociously at them bashing them with the guitar. But all they could do is stand there looking at the girl who was controlled, they knew it wasn't her fault, they saw the tears running down her face, so they stood there preparing to get hit by the guitar. None of them died but got fatal wounds, their friend walked off and disappeared and never to be seen again. Controlled Friend That very day the girls agreed to get stronger and find their friend and save her. Mio then felt the same when she was eight with the incident of the assassination. But from this event she grew stronger, tougher and more responsible. While shes was trying to seek power, a symbol or a magic circle looking thing appeared beneath her and sucked her in. Her eyes started to open slowly, adjusting to the light, Mio saw before her a rock that seemed to have writing on it. Confused to where she was and curious to whats on the rock, she slowly stumbled towards it. Mio eyes started to open fully and she had a shocked expression on her face while looking at the rock. On that rock was her mothers name carved into it. Mio with no hesitation started to yell for her name, calling out as loud as she has every done in her lifetime. No response, just silence was all that was there. Mio fell to her knees and started to tear up "Why are you so stupid Mio?" asked herself " Your mother is dead, shes been dead for a long time now" Mio tried to force a smile but she just couldn't, all of this negative energy was surrounding her and she couldn't escape it. A few seconds later she felt a warm light touch her soul and felt the presence of her mum. "Mum..It..Can.'t..B.e." she then slowly turned her head and right in-front of her eyes was her dear mother, the mother she lost years ago and every night wished for that fatal day to never of happened. She was about to say something but her mother interrupted her "Mio you've grown so much" she smiled, moving closer to her she moved her face directly in-front of Mio's and widen her eyes. "Don't be afraid, I'm going bestow to you a power that us females of our family had for generations, let this power guide you too the light" Mio's mothers eyes glowed in various colours each changing every second, it was too bright for Mio but she couldn't close her eyes, like it was getting forced to withstand the light. Then it was all over which seemed to have taken years to finish but only took a matter of seconds. Images started to flash in Mio's mind, images of females using magic, the magic all looked the same, using their eyes to creates magic circles or something, then she saw her own mother using it. Shocked by this Mio wanted to speak with her mother but saw flashes of her using it, only for a split second before it stopped. "Mother I have so much stuff I want to talk to you about, but how are you here right now" But all her mother did was smile and started to fade away "MUM!!!" Shouted Mio with watery eyes and a saddened expression. "Mio stay strong and remember I will always love you" her mother said before disappearing. Then Mio got transported back to town with her knees on the ground. Mio had a lifeless face lasting for a few seconds before turning into a smile, she held her hands in her chest and whispered " Thank you mum And what I wanted to say was welcome back". --Equipment-- Equipment: Equipment Items: Items --Statistics-- Stats - 40
Stats Earned: 0/0 Munny Earned: 100,000 Rewards: --Traits-- Trait Points: 5/5 Traits: Eternal Eyes Of Endless Symbols - 4 - Custom This rare magic focuses on using magic circles/symbols to fulfill the users wishes. They can be used offensively, defensively and to support or summon. The magic creates magic circles/symbols appear using the user’s eyes or their hands [mostly the eyes] the circles/symbols each have a role to fulfill such as attacking or defending etc. They are each different in appearance for example in sizes, shapes, the way they look. Mostly the magic circles/symbols take on an element attribute to help them be more tough and proficient. As the user gets stronger, the magic will also, gaining new abilities such as healing, illusions, summoning etc. Skilled Magic - 1 Trait Point The person is skilled in magic and for every 6 stat points they have in magic they gain 1 extra stat. This becomes capped when the character has 60 base stat points. --Techniques Technique Slots: 0/2 Technique Points: 0
Technique Name: Drowning Symbol Of The Depths Technique Level: 1 Technique Type: Defensive/Supportive Technique Range: 10m Technique Description: Mio looks to where shes wants to place the symbol and focuses there. The Drowning Symbol Of The Depths will appear in one eye and then the Symbol will instantly appear to where she was focusing on. The Symbol is circled shaped and is 1m in diameter. The Symbol is made of magic water so fire based spells will be weakened. It is usually placed in-front of someone but can be placed beneath so they can make the foe fall into the Drowning Symbol Of The Depths, its 10m deep so you better watch out if you can't swim. - Duration 2 Post - Cooldown 2 Post - Drowning Symbol Of The Depths
Technique Name: Ying Yang Dark Fire Technique Level: 1 Technique Type: Offensive Technique Range: 10m Technique Description: Mio uses one hand to form a magic circle that's 10cm in diameter. It will then shoot towards where ever she wants it to, she can control the magic circle but it has to be 10m in radius of her. The circles are the element fire so nature based moves or anything that can burn easily will weakened if made contact with the magic circles. Mio is able to do this three times. The magic is like tennis balls on fire [ Note that the tech is weak so the fire can only give minor burns and the symbols are quite slow ] [ When using this, both of her eyes will have the magic circle in it, indicating that shes using Ying Yang Fire, the symbol will disappear from her eyes when she finishes the tech ] - Duration 2 Posts - Cooldown 2 Posts - Ying Yang Dark Fire Edited by Yui, Sep 2 2011, 07:04.
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| Yui | Aug 28 2011, 10:49 Post #2 |
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DONE [: !!! Approve me :DDD |
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| Ravendark | Aug 28 2011, 14:26 Post #3 |
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the problem with this tech isow things, one you should put how damage it does (since your just making it the tech should be weak), and secondly it also needs a cool down and duration; for your tech i would say that it would be: a one post duration which is how long you can shoot the fireballs from until you run out, and a two post cool down until you can use it again.
same thing, it needs a cool down and a duration of how long the symbol is active. For this i would say: duration of 2, and acoldown of ..eh i want to say three but i think that two would be better suited. for now just take care of those, i might be missing some but i'm to tired to see clearly right now so once you fix those i'll get back to you. |
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| Yui | Aug 30 2011, 10:44 Post #4 |
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Finished the needed editing - Thumbs Up - [: !!! |
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| Ravendark | Aug 30 2011, 11:51 Post #5 |
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NOTICE: The base stat limit has been raised to 40, i don't even know where you got 35 to begin with but, eh say la vi, this means that you have five more SP to add so make sure you do that next. |
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| Yui | Aug 30 2011, 17:05 Post #6 |
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Corrected the mistakes I hope >< FINISHED !! [: - Thumbs Up - |
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| Ravendark | Aug 30 2011, 22:03 Post #7 |
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Not yet but almost! -Magic stat: when you apply the skilled trait you need to use the format like this.. Magic: 10 (9+1). Or just however you reached ten, put the total next to the stat then the math on the right of it, the equation is base magic + skilled trait equals new magic. -OR- If you haven't applied it already it should look like this: Magic: 11 (10+1) Edited by Ravendark, Aug 31 2011, 06:40.
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| Snow | Aug 31 2011, 12:47 Post #8 |
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- Trait Points should be 5/5. - Technique Slots should be 0/2. |
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| Yui | Aug 31 2011, 14:58 Post #9 |
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Ok I re-edit all the things I needed to - I think I'm all good now ^^ |
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| Snow | Aug 31 2011, 15:42 Post #10 |
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I actually missed this before; Please replace Munni Earned: 1,000 with Munny: 100,000 - Drowning Symbol of the Depths has a bit too much range at level 1. I suggest reducing to 10m. - The image is also a bit big, you can resive it using the [size] tag. |
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