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February 14th; K+, Family/ Hurt/Comfort, Original Fiction
Topic Started: Oct 1 2012, 04:52 PM (305 Views)
Ajeng
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Author: Ajeng
Story Type: Original Fiction
Characters: Hieru Kou, Hieru Kazuto, Hieru Momoka & Others
Language: English

I own the characters and the plot, but not Valentine's Day lol

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If you repost this I will find you and slap you hard in the face :*


February 14th
 
Every year, on February 14th, the Hieru family would visit two tombs that were located on a hill.

Kou was first brought to the place by his parents when he was still 3. The young boy understood nothing about the place, and all he did was only admiring the beautiful scenery of snow falling on the well carved stones. Kou was also asked by his father, Hieru Kazuto, to pray in front of the stones, to wish the ones who had gone happiness. Kou didn't know what or who did his father mean, but he prayed anyway.

When Kou was 5, he visited the tombs again with his parents. Kazuto touched the gravestones, wiping the snow away. He muttered things Kou couldn't hear, but the little boy was surprised when a drop of tear fell off Kazuto's cheek.

"Dad, what's wrong? Did 'the people who have gone' hurt you?" Kou asked innocently. Kazuto wiped his tears and his lips formed a sad smile.

"On the contrary," was his only answer.

***

When Kou was 8, he had learned about Valentine's Day, which happened to be the same day as the 'visiting the tombs on hill' day. Kou asked his father once, "Dad, why do we not celebrate Valentine's Day like other people? Why does mom never give chocolate to you? Does she not love you?"

Kazuto only gave him a laugh and ruffled his hair, "Your mother doesn't need to give me chocolate to show her love for me. She together with me raises you until you're this big. It's enough," and the family continued their usual activity on Valentine's Day--visiting the tombs.

***

By the time Kou was 10, he began questioning whose tombs his family visited every year. The name's carvings weren't clear enough for him to read--the harsh weather mold the carvings. Every time he asked his parents, they would always tell him to wait until the next February 14th comes. The rebel in his self would always bother his parents to answer his question, but it never worked. That year also happened to be when Kou learned the truth.

Instead of going to visit the tombs, Kazuto brought his wife and son to an old house in Hokkaido. It was old, but not abandoned. An old couple was living there, taking care of the house. When they saw the Hieru family came, the old couple immediately greeted them with happy smiles on their faces. Kou learned their names to be Matsuzo Natsuki and Hana. The Hieru family were served with tea and such, but when Kazuto asked the key to the main room, the expressions on Matsuzo couple's faces changed. Their smiles were switched with serious expressions. Natsuki then handed Kazuto the key. The Hieru family excused themselves--Kou being very confused--and went to the said main room.

Kazuto opened an old wooden drawer inside the room and picked up an old photograph, then giving it to Kou. A happy couple, smiling, the husband was holding his wife close and the wife was holding a baby.

"Look at the back of the photograph," Momoka--Kou's mother, said. Kou did as what he was told.

Our family, February 13th 19xx.

The year showed a year after he was born.
"Who are these?" Kou asked his parents, "The man looks like you, Dad," when Kou said that, his mom broke into tears. Momoka hugged Kou tightly, leaving the boy still confused.

"Kou, the baby on that photograph is you," Kazuto explained, his voice shaking.

Kou widened his eyes, "But who are they then? It says here the name of this photograph--"

That was when Kou realized. His hands were shaking, and not just because of the cold temperature of winter.

"I'm sorry, Kou," Momoka apologized, still crying, "We never mean to lie to you, but--"

"It's okay."

Momoka and Kazuto looked at the boy, surprised at his early statement.

"It is okay, really. I mean, I might not have been born from your womb, Mom, but both you and Dad have raised me since I was that little, and you never complained about how I behave. I am truly grateful to have both of you a--as..m--my parents," the boy started sobbing. Kazuto hugged both his wife and his son, trying to be the manly man he usually was.

"Thank you, for accepting us as your parents," Kazuto whispered.

***

For other people, February 14th might be the full-of-love Valentine's Day, but for Kou, it was the day his life turned upside down. A day before his parents' anniversary, they were killed in a terrible car accident. The 11 months-old Kou wasn't with them, because he had a fever and his foster parents--his foster dad turned out to be his father's younger brother--were taking care of him in the old house Kou visited years ago. That old house was where the whole Hieru family lived with their faithful servants, the Matsuzo couple. When Kou's parents passed away, Kazuto and Momoka brought Kou with them to move from Hokkaido, leaving the house in Matsuzo's couple care. The tombs they always visited were where Kou's parents were buried.

Now, a young black-haired man stood before the tombs, his hands in pockets. He was keeping a box of cigarettes in one pocket and a lighter in other. It was winter, and the snow was falling.

"Hey," the man said to no one in particular--or maybe, the tombs, "I came here to tell you something, Mom, Dad."

That man, Hieru Kou, adjusted his glasses and then touched the tombs, "I'm gonna be a doctor," he muttered, "I will save many people's lives. I will try my best not to let any children to experience what happened to me," Kou then chuckled at his own statement, "Wow, it sounds like I'm blaming you for what happened. But no, I'm not, okay? So don't misunderstand. What I meant is, I will try to save those whose lives are in danger."

He stroked the tombs gently, "I will make you proud, I promise," he said solemnly. Kou stepped back and sat on the ground, not giving a damn about how cold it was and lit his cigarette, "I hope this warms you a bit. It has been colder than last year, right?" he asked to no one in particular again. When the watch showed 6PM, Kou got up from the ground--actually shivering--and wiped the snow on the gravestones away.

"See you next year."

Haha aduh apaan sih saya -_-
Oke, ini back-story-nya Kou. Di sini emang saya cuma fokusin ke keluarganya aja, kalo si Fuuko sama Kanato belum saya munculin. Mungkin kalo saya niat nulis bakal saya bikin cerita yang melibatkan mereka.

Pendapat, kritik dan saran? C:
Edited by Ajeng, Oct 1 2012, 04:53 PM.
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Tersentuh banget baca cerita ini. Apalagi pas Kou mengutarakan keinginannya menajdi doketr =")

Em, karena saya bukan author khusus fanfic berbahasa inggris, saya gatau mau bilang apa. Tapi, ini story-linenya bagus! Hohoho~!
Munculkan Fuuko! /jeder

KOUUUU. I'm begin to like you =p /dihajar
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jatuh cinta atau cinta jatuh?"


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@Za : Seriusan tersentuh? O__O padahal jujur, ini plot-nya agak-agak gak jelas gimanaa gitu

Soal Fuuko, saya masih mikir soal plot yang cocok buat kemunculan dia sama Kanato sekalian lol

Makasih btw :3
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Lhah, saya baru tau ada cerita ini...

Wah, sedih nian background familynya Kou... Reminds me of The Arisatos... Ceritanya asli menyentuh banget (^▿^ʃƪ) Nice work!
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@Mocca : Makasih review-nya! /berasa ffn
Beneran tersentuh ya? Serius, saya mikirnya ini kurang sesuatu yang menyentuh, entah dari gaya bahasa saya apa gimana..tapu syukur-syukur deh kalo ada yang merasa tersentuh~
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Wow... Ini fanfic yang sangat bagus...
Kayak ada jiwa dan perasaannya..
Saya harus belajar banyak dari Ajeng-san..
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@Niko : Makasih! Seriusan, saya gak nyangka sampe segitunya fic saya yang ini...saran saya sih kalo mau nulis fic, banyakin baca fic yang sesuai genre yang mau Anda tulis, biar kerasa feel-nya gitu
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astaga... saya beneran tersentuh + mau nangis bacanya
beneran ini fanfic sangat.. luar biasa QnQ
beneran gak disangka.. latar belakang keluarga kou sungguh mengharukan
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