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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 19 2012, 01:21 PM (268 Views) | |
| Ajeng | Oct 19 2012, 01:21 PM Post #1 |
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nyeri leher ya pak.
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Author: Ajeng Story Type: Original Fiction Characters: Shiroyuki Kanato, Shiroyuki Fuuko, Kizami Misa (刻水) (akhirnya nemu nama belakang!!) Genre : Family, Romance, Angst Language: English Warning : onesided!Incest
Berguling. Endingnya agak-agak watdefuq menurut saya pribadi. Oke, salah satu scene yang mungkin terjadi di cerita aslinya. Biarpun saya pernah bilang Kanato ngeship Kou sama kakaknya, tapi himself goes first. Dia tentunya lebih ngutamain dirinya sendiri. Yang belum tau, natto itu sejenis makanan di Jepang dari kedelai. Detailnya silahkan wikipedia. Ngomong-ngomong, logika Misa tentang cinta (heaaak) itu logika saya sendiri haha. Pendapat, kritik dan saran? C: Edited by Ajeng, Oct 19 2012, 01:22 PM.
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| tungpangtungjes | Oct 19 2012, 02:32 PM Post #2 |
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yawda senyumin yes kk
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Aaaaaaaahhhh. Ini penpik yang cocok buat penggalauan cinta pertama ;w; Bahasa Inggris-nya oke banget ya... Nyaris gaada typo! Saluut Lho, jadi yang nikah sama Fuuko itu bukan Kou? Kou nikah ama siapa dong? 8D |
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| Ezio Auditore | Oct 19 2012, 02:37 PM Post #3 |
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Salut inggrisnya ga ada salah, baik di grammar maupun spelling. Ceritanya menarik banget.. Ngomong-ngomong Ajeng udah lama ya nulis fanfic? Aku baru pertama kali dan bahasanya indonesia.. Not sure if aku bisa nulis sebagus fanfic ini.. |
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| Ajeng | Oct 19 2012, 04:20 PM Post #4 |
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nyeri leher ya pak.
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@Za : Cinta pertama yang merupakan cinta terlarang :') oke azlay banget bahasanya.. Saya gak bilang itu bukan Kou, tapi saya juga gak bilang itu Kou /dor entahlah, saya sendiri juga gak tau-_- @Niko : Makasih! Udah dari SMP sih, tapi baru terjun kembali ke dunia fic akhir-akhir ini Semangat Niko! Niko pasti bisa!
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| Mocca-Marocchi | Oct 20 2012, 12:42 AM Post #5 |
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Art by @moa810 on twitter
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Wuohohoho~ Natto, sungguh galau hidupmu *plakdungtak* Hmm, homo ato incest kalo cuma sampai perasaan mah nggak apa-apa~ Intinya, saya suka fanfic ini! Kata-katanya Misa juga keren banget! Add to favourites! Aiyaa, kalo Misa sudah muncul nanti, kali ini saya bikin Fei Ling mengidolakan dia, deh~ *dhuar* Ngomong-ngomong, saya merasakan hint Misa x Kanato di sini, deh... Soal Kou, save it for later. Lama-lama pasti ketahuan dia bakal nikah sama siapa. XDD *dipotongpotongKou* |
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| Ajeng | Oct 20 2012, 04:11 AM Post #6 |
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nyeri leher ya pak.
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@^ : Kata-kata Misa = kata-kata saya, berarti kata-kata saya keren? /dillempar Entah kenapa, saya emang lagi demen fictional incest :') Walah, serius? Jadi terharu~ Kanato x Misa memang canon kok Yah, saya sendiri jujur masih bingung nantinya dia sama siapa...tergantung situasi dan kondisi juga(?) |
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