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Good Bye; T, Family / Romance, Original Fiction
Topic Started: Oct 19 2012, 01:21 PM (268 Views)
Ajeng
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Author: Ajeng
Story Type: Original Fiction
Characters: Shiroyuki Kanato, Shiroyuki Fuuko, Kizami Misa (刻水) (akhirnya nemu nama belakang!!)
Genre : Family, Romance, Angst
Language: English

Warning : onesided!Incest

Good Bye
 
Kanato stared at the black tuxedo on the sofa and then to the rings on the table. He was supposed to wear the tuxedo immediately, since the the guests were coming, but he felt no urge to wear it. Today, his sister--and his love interest, Fuuko, would be walking down the aisle, but the one waiting in the end was not him. Of course not. He wasn't supposed to love her, anyway. Whenever he claimed he loved her, people would think he was kidding or he loved her in a brotherly way. Of course, he did love her as a sister, but his love for her as a woman was more. No one ever took him seriously, with his best friend, Kizami Misa, as an exception. Misa was the only one who knew about his true feelings toward Fuuko.

"Natto, still alive?" a knock along with a woman's voice called him from the other side of the door. There was only one person who called Kanato with that name.

"I'm still breathing right here, Misa," Kanato answered. The door was opened, and a very familiar figure stood there. Misa was wearing a white dress, contrast to Kanato's black tuxedo.

"And look at the best man, not getting ready," she frowned. Kanato let out a quiet bitter laugh, although the look on his face betrayed his laugh. Misa took a seat next to him, sighing, "You can let all of your grief out after the ceremony ends, okay."

The corner of Kanato's lips formed a small smile, "Thanks."

"Don't mention it," she replied, "and wear your damned tuxedo, the guests are coming."

"Oh, and I suppose the Maid of Honour should be accompanying the bride by now?" he shot back, which Misa replied with a light chuckle. She got up, smacking Kanato's head lightly, and went out of the room. When Misa was out of sight, Kanato wore the tuxedo, took the rings and walked out of the room. He really didn't want to do his role as a best man, but it was all for his sister's happiness. Fuuko was so delighted when her to-be-husband asked Kanato to be the best man. If Fuuko didn't show so much joy, Kanato would've refused.

Kanato stood near the groom, as his duty was to give him the rings when they were needed. After a while, the noisy guests were quiet. Kanato too realized, the music that was playing was changed. The guests were standing up, and Kanato could see that her sister and father were already walking toward the aisle. Kanato could feel a pain throbbing in his chest. Fuuko looked so happy. After a while, the bride reached the altar, where the groom was waiting. Vows were about to be exchanged when Kanato felt tears were filling his eyes.

After the wedding vows, the newly wedded couple kissed, and Kanato could see Fuuko's happy smile. His first and only love was gone. A tear fell down on his cheek.

***

The whole ceremony was over. The whole place was really quiet. There were only some people cleaning. Kanato was still there, leaning on the wall, watching the cleaners with an empty stare.

"Natto."

Kanato turned his head to find Misa next to him, "Hey."

"Wanna go out?" Kanato gave a small nod immediately. He knew, she was trying to cheer him up. And he appreciated that. They went to a small park near there, and sat on a bench.

"Natto--" before she finished speaking, a soft sob was heard. Misa saw her best friend was crying silently. She did nothing, because she knew him too well not to bother him when he was letting out his feelings. Not long after that, Kanato wiped his tears.

"I am pathetic, aren't I?" he asked, more like to himself, "to love someone I shouldn't love, hoping to be loved back," he sighed, "I'm so stupid."

"Well, you are stupid in general. But you aren't stupid for loving someone," Misa said, "it's not stupid to love someone, it never is. Even though you love someone that can never be yours," she silently stated, "what makes you stupid is forcing your way to get the one you love to love you back. You are allowed to fight for an affection, but you must know the limits."

Kanato was silent when he felt a hand on his, "Natto, you alway say people will get what's best for them. It applies to you too. Sooner or later, you'll realize, that this is the best for both you and Fuuko-san. Someday, you will meet someone you love, and who loves you. You will get what's best for you, just not now."

"Never thought you could be this wise, Mi-cha--"

"If you call me that I will make you cry blood."

Kanato chuckled, "sorry, sorry! But really, thank you, Misa," his lips formed a warm smile, "if you were not here, I don't know what's gonna happen. Maybe my corpse would be found tomorrow morning."

"That's not funny, idiot."

Kanato chuckled again, "I said that'd happen if you weren't here. You're here, aren't you? So that won't happen," after Kanato said that, Misa smacked his head gently.

"Natto, I'm going back. Are you coming?" Misa asked after a while.

Kanato shook his head, "Go ahead. I will catch up later," Misa only nodded. Misa then left him alone.

Kanato looked up at the sky, and another drop of tear fell on his cheek.

Good bye, my first love.

Berguling. Endingnya agak-agak watdefuq menurut saya pribadi.
Oke, salah satu scene yang mungkin terjadi di cerita aslinya. Biarpun saya pernah bilang Kanato ngeship Kou sama kakaknya, tapi himself goes first. Dia tentunya lebih ngutamain dirinya sendiri. Btw saya gak bilang groom di cerita ini Kou loh!

Yang belum tau, natto itu sejenis makanan di Jepang dari kedelai. Detailnya silahkan wikipedia.

Ngomong-ngomong, logika Misa tentang cinta (heaaak) itu logika saya sendiri haha.

Pendapat, kritik dan saran? C:
Edited by Ajeng, Oct 19 2012, 01:22 PM.
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Aaaaaaaahhhh. Ini penpik yang cocok buat penggalauan cinta pertama ;w;
Bahasa Inggris-nya oke banget ya... Nyaris gaada typo! Saluut

Lho, jadi yang nikah sama Fuuko itu bukan Kou? Kou nikah ama siapa dong? 8D
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Salut inggrisnya ga ada salah, baik di grammar maupun spelling.
Ceritanya menarik banget..

Ngomong-ngomong Ajeng udah lama ya nulis fanfic? Aku baru pertama kali :( dan bahasanya indonesia..

Not sure if aku bisa nulis sebagus fanfic ini..
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@Za : Cinta pertama yang merupakan cinta terlarang :') oke azlay banget bahasanya..
Saya gak bilang itu bukan Kou, tapi saya juga gak bilang itu Kou /dor entahlah, saya sendiri juga gak tau-_-

@Niko : Makasih! Udah dari SMP sih, tapi baru terjun kembali ke dunia fic akhir-akhir ini
Semangat Niko! Niko pasti bisa! :fly:
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Wuohohoho~ Natto, sungguh galau hidupmu *plakdungtak*

Hmm, homo ato incest kalo cuma sampai perasaan mah nggak apa-apa~ Intinya, saya suka fanfic ini! Kata-katanya Misa juga keren banget! Add to favourites!

Aiyaa, kalo Misa sudah muncul nanti, kali ini saya bikin Fei Ling mengidolakan dia, deh~ *dhuar* Ngomong-ngomong, saya merasakan hint Misa x Kanato di sini, deh...

Soal Kou, save it for later. Lama-lama pasti ketahuan dia bakal nikah sama siapa. XDD *dipotongpotongKou*
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@^ : Kata-kata Misa = kata-kata saya, berarti kata-kata saya keren? /dillempar

Entah kenapa, saya emang lagi demen fictional incest :')

Walah, serius? Jadi terharu~ Kanato x Misa memang canon kok :D

Yah, saya sendiri jujur masih bingung nantinya dia sama siapa...tergantung situasi dan kondisi juga(?)



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